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'''[[http://castleterribel.blogspot.com/2010/01/prolouge-part-1.html The story]]''' of [[SupervillainLair Castle Terribel]] and [[EvilOverlord all]] [[EvilMinions the people]] [[QuirkyMiniBossSquad who live there.]] Chief among them [[BigBad Mansemat Cthonique]], [[HappilyMarried his wife]] [[BlackMagicianGirl Viviane du Lac]], [[SiblingYinYang his brother and sister]] [[EvilSorcerer Nisrioch]] and [[DarkChick Morgaine Cthonique]], [[CreepyChild his daughter]] [[AmbiguousInnocence Malina]], and [[EmoTeen his moody stepdaughter, Elaine du Lac]]. Despite being a Dark Lord of the Lands of Night who is raising a huge army to one day spread terror and vengeance in the Lands of Light, Mansemat is [[PunchClockVillain a fairly nice guy]] who [[PetTheDog really loves his family]] and [[NiceToTheWaiter tries to do well by people]].
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'''[[http://castleterribel.blogspot.com/2010/01/prolouge-part-1.html The story]]''' of [[SupervillainLair Castle Terribel]] and [[EvilOverlord all]] [[EvilMinions the people]] [[QuirkyMiniBossSquad who live there.]] Chief among them [[BigBad Mansemat Cthonique]], [[HappilyMarried his wife]] [[BlackMagicianGirl Viviane du Lac]], [[SiblingYinYang his brother and sister]] [[EvilSorcerer Nisrioch]] and [[DarkChick Morgaine Cthonique]], Cthonique, [[CreepyChild his daughter]] [[AmbiguousInnocence Malina]], and [[EmoTeen his moody stepdaughter, Elaine du Lac]]. Despite being a Dark Lord of the Lands of Night who is raising a huge army to one day spread terror and vengeance in the Lands of Light, Mansemat is [[PunchClockVillain a fairly nice guy]] who [[PetTheDog really loves his family]] and [[NiceToTheWaiter tries to do well by people]].
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* FantasyAxisOfEvil: The Nightfolk. Savage--Ogre/Kizaks/Ghouls, Eldritch--Demons, Humanoids--Most Erls, Fallen--Devs, Crafty--Goblins.
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: Mansemat's ex-wife Falerina seems to think she was this to him. The truth is [[PsychoExGirlfriend just]] [[CuteAndPsycho a]] [[AxeCrazy bit]] [[DomesticAbuse different]]...
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: Mansemat's ex-wife Falerina seems to think she was this to him. The truth is [[PsychoExGirlfriend just]] [[CuteAndPsycho a]] [[AxeCrazy bit]] [[DomesticAbuse just a bit different]]...
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: Mansemat's ex-wife Falerina seems to think she was this to him. The truth is [[PsychoExGirlfriend just]] [[CuteAndPsycho a]] [[AxeCrazy bit]] [[DomesticAbuser different]]...
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: Mansemat's ex-wife Falerina seems to think she was this to him. The truth is [[PsychoExGirlfriend just]] [[CuteAndPsycho a]] [[AxeCrazy bit]] [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse different]]...
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* WingedHumanoid: Again the Devs.
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* WingedHumanoid: Again the Devs.
Devs.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: what some soldiers from the Land of Light are becoming. ANd the war is barely begun.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: what What some soldiers from the Land of Light are becoming. ANd And the war is barely begun.
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* LegacyOfService: the Fidele's have served the house Cthonique loyally for generations.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: what some soldiers from the Land of Light are becoming. ANd the war is barely begun.
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* DecadeDissonance: The Lands of Light are a dark ages feudal society, while the Lands of Nights are more of a renaissance style society. The Lands of Light used to be the more advanced society wich allowed them to conquer parts of the Lands of Night and after they lost those lands stay stuck to those methods and traditions. Wich changed from a vibrant and powerfull set of methods to a crushing liability.
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* DissonantSerenity:[[spoiler:One of the things that makes prince Amfortas so creepy]]
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* HornedHumanoid: the Devs.
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* HornedHumanoid: the The Devs.
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* WingedHumanoid: again Again the Devs.
