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* AccidentalDiscovery: Several technological breakthroughs in the series occur through serendipity, showing how innovation can be unplanned and unexpected. This reflects the series' emphasis on the benefits of free experimentation and exploration.
* AlienSky: The lunar landscape, with Earth prominently visible in the sky, is a constant reminder of the distance between the colonists and their home planet, reinforcing the theme of isolation and independence.
* CanineCompanion: The uplifted dogs in the series aren't just pets but are intelligent beings who play a crucial role in the narrative, showcasing themes of friendship, loyalty, and the moral implications of bioengineering.
* EarthThatUsedToBeBetter: Earth is depicted as having declined into economic stagnation and authoritarianism, contrasting with the dynamic and innovative lunar society and highlighting the consequences of different political and economic systems.
* HumansAreFlawed: The series portrays humans, both on Earth and the moon, as complex and morally ambiguous, avoiding simplistic portrayals of good versus evil. This is highlighted by the presence of the intelligent dogs *and* the superintelligent AI.
* NoOSHACompliance: The lunar colony's lax approach to safety regulations, in contrast to Earth's overbearing rules, showcases the trade-offs between freedom and security.
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* UnderdogsNeverLose: Despite being technologically and numerically outmatched by Earth, the lunar colonists, through their resourcefulness and determination, often manage to outwit or overcome challenges posed by Earth's forces.
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* BlackMarket: Smuggling operations between Earth and the Moon, like those conducted by Darcy Grau in her ship the ''Wookkiee,'' illustrate the demand for goods restricted by Earth’s government and the need for resources on the growing lunar colony.
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* WhenAllYouHaveIsAHammer: The colonists' ability to creatively use their limited resources in a variety of situations, such as repurposing mining equipment for defense, exemplifies their ingenuity and adaptability. Also, application of high-caliber firepower is good for solving many problems.
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* CaffeineFailure: Mike Martin's reliance on coffee to fuel his work marathons becomes a running joke, as if the fate of the moon colony hinges on the steady supply of his favorite beans.
* FishOutOfWater: Hugh, with his naïve Earth upbringing, reacts to lunar life like a cat at a dog show - completely out of his element but too curious to leave.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Earth’s forces, while nominally better equipped, continually underestimate the moon colonists, who have a particular level of grit due to surviving the harsh moon conditions, as well as a serious motivation to defend their home.
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* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad: The U.S. military has quotas for so-called "alternately-abled soldiers" wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
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* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad: PoliticalOvercorrectness: The U.S. military has quotas for so-called "alternately-abled soldiers" wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
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The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three "special" techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other object) is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Almost entirely averted: The first ideological speech is made midway through the second volume by Selina Hargraves, a young woman from Earth. She doesn't agree with the Aristillans' libertarianism but condemns Earth's extreme coercive measures (such as aggressive war and torture of prisoners).
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* MacGyvering: Robert is locked in his habitat on the moon, far from the main lunar city, and his spacesuit doesn't contain enough oxygen to get him there on foot. Luckily, his hab has a workshop with plentiful tools and materials, and he is resourceful and more than a little desperate. MacGuyvering ensues.
* {{Prospector}}: Robert is a very technologically advanced version, but the basic premise and the risks are pretty much identical to the 1849 job description.
* YouCanBarelyStand: [[spoiler:Robert completes his journey to Aristillus in the nick of time, but can't even move a step further. He manages to sling a hammer at the claim jumper before collapsing.]]
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* {{EMP}}: Doug's foresight to include an EMP mortar in his kit bag saves the whole plan.
* GovernmentConspiracy: The existence of the uplifted dogs is kept secret from the public and even the soldiers assigned to guard the laboratory.
* IGaveMyWord: John feels obligated to rescue Gamma because of a spur-of-the-moment promise he made to one of the young dogs.
* TimeForPlanB: Since the original escape plan is FUBAR, John has to improvise and go with their backup while government forces are closing in.
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* EnergyWeapon: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites so Gamma can't spot the incoming invasion force and to prevent the lunar forces from communicating.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Toyed with. John constantly wonders if Gamma is working towards an imminent 'hard takeoff,' even as Gamma tries to assure him that it has reached the limit of its intelligence. In fact, Gamma worries more about this trope than any other character, as it [[spoiler: pre-emptively destroys any instances of itself that slip beyond its control so as to avoid a power struggle later.]]
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* ArtificialIntelligence: Gamma, who was rescued from destruction by John and brought to the Aristillus colony. Able to wax philosophical but also very reluctant to reveal too much to its 'friends,' Gamma drives much of the plot of the first two books.
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* {{Democracy is Bad}}: Given the situation on earth, this is an implicit theme of the novel, often explicitly stated by Mike or Max. The U.S. still holds elections, and politicians still worry about these elections, but the deep dysfunction of the U.S. Government and earth in general is a direct result of democratically elected policies.
* DogsAreDumb: Explicitly inverted, as the dogs in this story have been purposefully uplifted to grant them sentience, the ability to speak, and heightened all-around intelligence. In fact, they are by all indications ''far'' smarter on average than humans, and very aware of this fact.
* DramatisPersonae: Each book has one, and thankfully so as there are dozens of characters making regular entrances and exits, so the handy reference helps remind us who is who.
* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Technically all of Aristillus counts, as it has few aboveground buildings, the entire city is made from tunnels cleared by tunnel boring machines, which was easier than building on the surface. To the earth forces, it has all the appearances of a supervillain lair.
* HeroesLoveDogs: The dogs hide on Aristillus because the earth Government sought to destroy them, and still does, and their entire species was rescued by one heroic human, John, and his team. John is extremely protective of the dogs as a result, and the dogs are (mostly) extremely respectful towards John.
* ImmigrantPatriotism: In spades, as ''every'' citizen of Aristillus is an immigrant, and almost all of them have good reasons for being there and, by the same token, good reasons to keep the U.N. Peacekeepers out.
* LibertariansInSpace: Taken to an extreme heretofore unseen.
* MacGyvering: Most of the main protagonists are extremely good at problem solving on the fly with limited materials.
** In book 1, The dogs need to check on some satellites in lunar orbit, but don't have a telescope. That's alright! They make one using cameras from their spacesuits and some coding to interpolate the image.
* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of the executives of various earth companies as part of the process of nationalizing all industries. We have an idea of what they were like but the process is never actually explained.
* {{Oppressive States of America}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically, tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property.
* {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}}: Blue considers his own species to be this.
--> '''Blue:''' He had to admit the truth: his entire species was a band of misfits - Max always ranting about genocide and fighting back, Duncan playing RPG's when he should be paying attention, and Rex was hacking anything and everything from cameras to -well- piss bags.
* {{Settling the Frontier}}: The Moon Colony represents the next step in human expansion, even if most people on earth ''don't even know it exists.'' By the time of the novels, the colony is self-sustaining and isn't far from turning into an economic power in its own right, but is explicitly stated to lack advanced fabrication capacity and other accoutrements of a developed city/nation. The concept of settling a frontier is given much philosophical examination in the second book.
* {{Sliding Scale of Libertarianism and Authoritarianism}}: Aristillus is about as far up the Libertarian Scale as you can imagine. The Earth occupies the opposite extreme, although it wears a friendly face.
* {{Stealth in Space}}:
** The ''Wookkiee'' and other space-faring container ships have specialized coatings to avoid detection via radar. This is apparently very effective.
** At multiple points during the story a ship or ships sneaks up on the lunar surface with little-to-no warning.
* UpliftedAnimal: The dogs in this story were granted sentience and intelligence by a government agency, resulting in a whole species that can talk, program computers, and work to understand their own place in the universe.
* VastBureaucracy: Implied to exist on earth and the U.S. government in particular, numerous agencies are mentioned by name, especially the Bureau of Sustainable Research, which prevents any innovation that might disrupt the planned economy. Many times in the story it is implied that to get anything useful done on Earth you must contend with miles and miles of red tape. Those mentioned by name include: The Internet Control Bureau.
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* DogsAreDumb: Explicitly inverted, as the dogs in this story have been purposefully uplifted to grant them sentience, the ability to speak, and heightened all-around intelligence. In fact, they are by all indications ''far'' smarter on average than humans, and very aware of this fact.
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* {{Almost out of Oxygen}}:
** Befalls John and the dogs when they lose contact with the colony and are too far from anywhere they could walk to before they run out of Carbon Dioxide scrubbers.
** Tudel and his Troops also face this fate when the ''Wookkiee'' begans to launch into space while they are stuck on its open-air deck.
* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a ''bigger'' storm is coming.
* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, a magical mushroom forest, a dusty southwestern trailer, or a hardwood forest. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style. To top ''that'' all off, their game is then connected to an existing MMORPG so they can interact with other players and they gain a significant following. Not bad considering dogs don't have thumbs.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed Wookkiee, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
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* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, a magical mushroom forest, a dusty southwestern trailer, or a hardwood forest. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style.
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* TheCassandra: Mike Martin, who constantly foretells of invasion and subjugation by earth forces, which generally prompts eyerolls from his friends, who think he's either exaggerating or going completely mental.
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** Leroy Fournier fits this stereotype to a T. He sees nothing wrong with employing dirty tactics, blackmail, and sabotage to beat his rival, Mike Martin, and worst of all he's ''petty'' about it, believing he's just claiming the success to which he's entitled.
** Note that from the perspective of the U.S. Government, ''every single CEO'' on aristillus is corrupt, dodging taxes and 'stealing' productive capacity. And this is ''after'' earth imprisoned many executives and nationalized their companies.
* EmergencyAuthority: Gamma mentions that an ''Emergency Powers Act'' was passed sometime ago in the U.S. after Baltimore was nuked by the Sudan Alliance. Given what else we see in the novel, it is unlikely that this act was ever repealed or expired.
* {{Failed a Spot Check}}: Multiple times during the battle on the ''Wookkiee.'' First a PK [[NoPeripheralVision fails to spot Iosif]] who is hovering above him in the room. Then Iosif fails to spot the PK Sergeant with a grenade launcher, the grenadier then fails to spot Luka, who takes him out with a wrench, and then Luka misses the last PK, who ends his rampage.
** Note that from the perspective of the U.S. Government, ''every single CEO'' on aristillus is corrupt, dodging taxes and 'stealing' productive capacity. And this is ''after'' earth imprisoned many executives and nationalized their companies.
* EmergencyAuthority: Gamma mentions that an ''Emergency Powers Act'' was passed sometime ago in the U.S. after Baltimore was nuked by the Sudan Alliance. Given what else we see in the novel, it is unlikely that this act was ever repealed or expired.
* {{Failed a Spot Check}}: Multiple times during the battle on the ''Wookkiee.'' First a PK [[NoPeripheralVision fails to spot Iosif]] who is hovering above him in the room. Then Iosif fails to spot the PK Sergeant with a grenade launcher, the grenadier then fails to spot Luka, who takes him out with a wrench, and then Luka misses the last PK, who ends his rampage.
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* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of the ''Wookkiee.''
* GroinAttack: Captain Kear indulges in one after he overpowers PK Captain Tudel, as vengeance for Tudel breaking his nose. Justified in that if Kear broke Tudel's nose he might asphyxiate in his own blood due to the microgravity.
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* HonestCorporateExecutive: Mike Martin, to the extent that it hurts his interests when someone takes advantage of him or he can't effectively fight back against dirty tactics. Indeed, his direct approach makes it difficult for him to pull off the political manuevering necessary to prepare Aristillus for war. Thank God for Javier!
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* {{Howl of Sorrow}}: The dogs engage in a very literal howl of sorrow when [[spoiler:Rex is killed by Tudel.]]
* {{If My Calculations are Correct}}: Darcy and Wasseem work on figuring out whether they can land the off-course ''Wookkiee'' safely on the moon and, ''if their calculations are correct,'' conclude that they can, barely.
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* MyInstinctsAreShowing: Toyed with constantly with the dogs, as their enhanced intellect is often at odds with their canine proclivities
** Rex programs an application that not only simulates the sound of urine splashing when peeing in a spacesuit, it geotags the location so that it can be 'marked' as territory.
* NaiveNewcomer: Hugh Haig, and to a lesser extent his companions. Hugh is young and inexperienced, but is especially out of his element in the unregulated and unrestrained capitalistic colony that is Aristillus.
* {{No Gravity for You}}: Captain Kear and couple of the ''Wookkiee'' crew take advantage of the ship's transition to microgravity to get the jump on PK soldiers who have captured the ship, and have not trained for zero-g manuevers.
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* PetTheDog: Used literally when Darcy [[spoiler: rescues John and the dogs from eventual death by asphyxiation. Duncan and Rex enjoy affectionate scratches.]]
* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad: Earth has some ''interesting'' policies in place.
** The U.S. military has quotas for so-called 'alternately-abled soldiers' wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
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* {{Shout Out}}: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress'' and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions, then snipes a reference to ''Starship Troopers'' from Max while debating the merit of violences as a means to an end.
* SoleSurvivor: U.S. Army Captain Frank Tudel, who is the only member of his whole unit to survive the (otherwise successful) attempt to capture a Lunar ship with an AG drive. Although the deaths of his soldiers were largely his fault, he only mourns the loss of his career. Yet he is ''rewarded'' by his superiors because of the unique intelligence he now possesses, and his continued incompetence helps save the Lunar colony.
* {{Pretext for War}}:
** Very early in the story the U.S. President Themba Johnson lays out various causes for invading the expat colony: tax evasion, theft of productive assets, and most importantly gaining support to win the next election.
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** After the Colonist's open defiance of the UN forces, the case for invading is, from the earth government's perspective, made stronger.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Mike Martin and Mark Soldner. Mark (a devout Mormon) wants to enforce morality and a family-friendly society, even if that means creating a government. Mike is utterly opposed to even entertaining the 'suggestion' of a government. Both men work together to fight the war against earth, even while fighting over the personal issues.
* WavingSignsAround: A boardroom group meeting is interrupted by the unexpected arrival of protestors with masks, cameras, banners and rocks.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Mike Martin and Mark Soldner. Mark (a devout Mormon) wants to enforce morality and a family-friendly society, even if that means creating a government. Mike is utterly opposed to even entertaining the 'suggestion' of a government. Both men work together to fight the war against earth, even while fighting over the personal issues.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork:Mike Martin and Mark Soldner. Mark (a Mark, a devout Mormon) Mormon, wants to enforce morality and a family-friendly society, even if that means creating a government. Mike is utterly opposed to even entertaining the 'suggestion' "suggestion" of a government. Both men work together to fight the war against earth, Earth, even while fighting over the personal issues.
issues.
* WavingSignsAround: A boardroom group meeting is interrupted by the unexpected arrival ofprotestors protesters with masks, cameras, banners and rocks.
rocks.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork:
* WavingSignsAround: A boardroom group meeting is interrupted by the unexpected arrival of
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* BadassGrandpa: Samir Akthr Abyd, who takes on a horde of PK troops by his lonesome. Based on real-life Badass Grandpa [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samuel_Whittemore Samuel Whittemore]]
* GoingNative: Captain Matthew Dewitt. Originally tasked with infiltrating the colony to aid the invasion, he starts to befriend the locals and eventually comes to prefer their way of life, or perhaps their standard of living.
* ShellGame: [[spoiler: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.]]
* BadassGrandpa: Samir Akthr Abyd, who takes on a horde of PK troops by his lonesome. Based on real-life Badass Grandpa [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samuel_Whittemore Samuel Whittemore]]
* GoingNative: Captain Matthew Dewitt. Originally tasked with infiltrating the colony to aid the invasion, he starts to befriend the locals and eventually comes to prefer their way of life, or perhaps their standard of living.
* ShellGame: [[spoiler: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.]]
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* BadassGrandpa: Samir Akthr Abyd, who takes on a horde of PK troops by his lonesome. Based on real-life Badass Grandpa [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samuel_Whittemore Samuel Whittemore]]
* GoingNative: Captain Matthew
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* VastBureaucracy: Implied to exist on earth and the U.S. government in particular, numerous agencies are mentioned by name, especially the Bureau of Sustainable Research, which prevents any innovation that might disrupt the planned economy. Many times in the story it is implied that to get anything useful done on Earth you must contend with miles and miles of red tape.
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* VastBureaucracy: Implied to exist on earth and the U.S. government in particular, numerous agencies are mentioned by name, especially the Bureau of Sustainable Research, which prevents any innovation that might disrupt the planned economy. Many times in the story it is implied that to get anything useful done on Earth you must contend with miles and miles of red tape.
tape. Those mentioned by name include: The Internet Control Bureau.
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* InformationWantstoBeFree: Mike releases open-source designs for the AG drive as well as a ship that a civilian could possibly make at home. Justified in that the earth forces are inevitably going to reverse-engineer the tech soon and the colony needs a glut of immigrants to increase its chances at survival.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Mike Martin and Mark Soldner. Mark (a devout Mormon) wants to enforce morality and a family-friendly society, even if that means creating a government. Mike is utterly opposed to even entertaining the 'suggestion' of a government. Both men work together to fight the war against earth, even while fighting over the personal issues.
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The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau, who pilots [[CoolShip the Wookkiee]], as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as the colony continues to grow. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer John as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
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The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau, who pilots [[CoolShip the Wookkiee]], ''Wookkiee'']], as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as the colony continues to grow. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer John as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
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** The Wookkiee and other space-faring container ships have specialized coatings to avoid detection via radar. This is apparently very effective.
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** Tudel and his Troops also face this fate when the Wookkiee begans to launch into space while they are stuck on its open-air deck.
* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a **bigger** storm is coming.
* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a **bigger** storm is coming.
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** Tudel and his Troops also face this fate when the Wookkiee ''Wookkiee'' begans to launch into space while they are stuck on its open-air deck.
* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a**bigger** ''bigger'' storm is coming.
* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a
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* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question it is usually truthful, but also words its answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he might want to keep secret. John doesn't buy it, but there's not much he can do.
* FrickinLaserBeams: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites so he can't spot the incoming invasion force and to prevent the lunar forces from communication.
* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of the Wookkiee
* FrickinLaserBeams: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites so he can't spot the incoming invasion force and to prevent the lunar forces from communication.
* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of the Wookkiee
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* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question it is usually truthful, but also words its answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he it might want to keep secret. John doesn't buy it, but there's not much he can do.
* FrickinLaserBeams: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites sohe Gamma can't spot the incoming invasion force and to prevent the lunar forces from communication.
communicating.
* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of theWookkiee
''Wookkiee.''
* FrickinLaserBeams: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites so
* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of the
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* {{If My Calculations are Correct}}: Darcy and Wasseem work on figuring out whether they can land the off-course Wookkiee safely on the moon and, ''if their calculations are correct,'' conclude that they can, barely.
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* {{If My Calculations are Correct}}: Darcy and Wasseem work on figuring out whether they can land the off-course Wookkiee ''Wookkiee'' safely on the moon and, ''if their calculations are correct,'' conclude that they can, barely.
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* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging in introspection.
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailing mike with reputational damage. The out-of-context footage makes it appear that the two are agreeing to fraudulently alter some drilling records, which is ironically exatly what ''Leroy'' did.
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailing mike with reputational damage. The out-of-context footage makes it appear that the two are agreeing to fraudulently alter some drilling records, which is ironically exatly what ''Leroy'' did.
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* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey or gin while engaging in introspection.
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailingmike Mike with reputational damage. The out-of-context footage makes it appear that the two are agreeing to fraudulently alter some drilling records, which is ironically exatly exactly what ''Leroy'' did.
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailing
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* NuclearOption: Ordered and initiated by the U.S. government when the USAF/UNAF ship Paul-Henri Spaak crashes after losing a philosophical then military confrontation with one of Gamma's facilities. The ship is 'scuttled' via nuclear blast with the intention of preventing the expats from seizing cryptography hardware, but whether the action was actually *justified* is somewhat left as an exercise for the reader.
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* NuclearOption: Ordered and initiated by the U.S. government when the USAF/UNAF ship Paul-Henri Spaak crashes after losing a philosophical then military confrontation with one of Gamma's facilities. The ship is 'scuttled' via nuclear blast with the intention of preventing the expats from seizing cryptography hardware, but whether the action was actually *justified* ''justified'' is somewhat left as an exercise for the reader.
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* {{Shout Out}}: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress''and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions, then snipes a reference to ''Starship Troopers'' from Max while debating the merit of violences as a means to an end.
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* {{Shout Out}}: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress''and Mistress'' and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions, then snipes a reference to ''Starship Troopers'' from Max while debating the merit of violences as a means to an end.
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* ShellGame: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.
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* ShellGame: [[spoiler: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.
invade.]]
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* Shoutout: {{Shout Out}}: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress''and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions, then snipes a reference to ''Starship Troopers'' from Max while debating the merit of violences as a means to an end.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I. Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]?" Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies (and likely prison sentences for each CEO), and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I. Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]?" Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies (and likely prison sentences for each CEO), and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
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* BenevolentAI: Gamma's actions during the story are all beneficial to the Lunar Colony, but his real intentions and goals are not revealed.
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* BenevolentAI: Gamma's actions during the story are all beneficial to the Lunar Colony, but his its real intentions and goals are not revealed.
* EmergencyAuthority: Gamma mentions that an ''Emergency Powers Act'' was passed sometime ago in the U.S. after Baltimore was nuked by the Sudan Alliance. Given what else we see in the novel, it is unlikely that this act was ever repealed or expired.
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* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question he is usually truthful, but also words his answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he might want to keep secret.
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* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question he it is usually truthful, but also words his its answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he might want to keep secret.
secret. John doesn't buy it, but there's not much he can do.
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* ImpededCommunication: Earth forces destroy communications satellites in orbit around the moon, cutting Gamma off from it's other sites, cutting John and the dogs off from Aristillus, and the City off from the rest of the Moon. For Aristillus this is inconvenient, for John and the dogs its life-threatening, for Gamma this literally ''splits his mind into pieces.''
* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging in introspection.
* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging in introspection.
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* ImpededCommunication: Earth forces destroy communications satellites in orbit around the moon, cutting Gamma off from it's other sites, cutting John and the dogs off from Aristillus, and the City off from the rest of the Moon. For Aristillus this is inconvenient, for John and the dogs its life-threatening, for Gamma this literally ''splits his its mind into pieces.''
* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging inintrospection.
introspection.
* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging in
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* Shoutout: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress'' and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions.
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* Shoutout: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress'' and Mistress''and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions.
revolutions, then snipes a reference to ''Starship Troopers'' from Max while debating the merit of violences as a means to an end.
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The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer John as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
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The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau Grau, who pilots [[CoolShip the Wookkiee]], as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing.continues to grow. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer John as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
* CrapsackWorld: While we don't get much view of the conditions on Earth until the second book, all indications point to this applying. Decades long recession, rolling brownouts, California suffering from an earthquake that has left the ''entire state without power,'' and major conflicts ongoing in various places around the globe. This serves as a large motivation for many people to immigrate to Aristillus.
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* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically, tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
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* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically, tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
property.
* {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}}: Blue considers his own species to be this.
--> '''Blue:''' He had to admit the truth: his entire species was a band of misfits - Max always ranting about genocide and fighting back, Duncan playing RPG's when he should be paying attention, and Rex was hacking anything and everything from cameras to -well- piss bags.
* {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}}: Blue considers his own species to be this.
--> '''Blue:''' He had to admit the truth: his entire species was a band of misfits - Max always ranting about genocide and fighting back, Duncan playing RPG's when he should be paying attention, and Rex was hacking anything and everything from cameras to -well- piss bags.
* {{Sliding Scale of Libertarianism and Authoritarianism}}: Aristillus is about as far up the Libertarian Scale as you can imagine. The Earth occupies the opposite extreme, although it wears a friendly face.
* VastBureaucracy: Implied to exist on earth and the U.S. government in particular, numerous agencies are mentioned by name, especially the Bureau of Sustainable Research, which prevents any innovation that might disrupt the planned economy. Many times in the story it is implied that to get anything useful done on Earth you must contend with miles and miles of red tape.
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* {{Almost out of Oxygen}}: Befalls John and the dogs when they lose contact with the colony and are too far from anywhere they could walk to before they run out of CO2 scrubbers.
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* {{Almost out of Oxygen}}: Oxygen}}:
** Befalls John and the dogs when they lose contact with the colony and are too far from anywhere they could walk to before they run out ofCO2 Carbon Dioxide scrubbers.
** Tudel and his Troops also face this fate when the Wookkiee begans to launch into space while they are stuck on its open-air deck.
** Befalls John and the dogs when they lose contact with the colony and are too far from anywhere they could walk to before they run out of
** Tudel and his Troops also face this fate when the Wookkiee begans to launch into space while they are stuck on its open-air deck.
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* TheCassandra: Mike Martin, who constantly foretells of invasion and subjugation by earth forces, which generally prompts eyerolls from his friend, who think he's either exagerrating or going completely mental.
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* BoomHeadshot:
** During the hostage standoff between Mike and PK forces, [[spoiler: members of Mike's militia are executed via headshot when Mike attempts to call their bluff.]]
** Tudel [[spoiler: finishes Rex off this way, after landing a few shots center of mass.]]
** John encounters a landing party of PK troops and pulls off a few long-distance headshots while engaging them.
* TheCassandra: Mike Martin, who constantly foretells of invasion and subjugation by earth forces, which generally prompts eyerolls from hisfriend, friends, who think he's either exagerrating exaggerating or going completely mental.
mental.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Tudel breaks Captain Kear's fingers one by one solely for the purpose of revenge.
** During the hostage standoff between Mike and PK forces, [[spoiler: members of Mike's militia are executed via headshot when Mike attempts to call their bluff.]]
** Tudel [[spoiler: finishes Rex off this way, after landing a few shots center of mass.]]
** John encounters a landing party of PK troops and pulls off a few long-distance headshots while engaging them.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Tudel breaks Captain Kear's fingers one by one solely for the purpose of revenge.
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* {{Failed a Spot Check}}: Multiple times during the battle on the ''Wookkiee.'' First a PK fails to spot Iosif who is hovering above him in the room. Then Iosif fails to spot the PK Sergeant with a grenade launcher, the grenadier then fails to spot Luka, who takes him out with a wrench, and then Luka misses the last PK, who ends his rampage.
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* {{Failed a Spot Check}}: Multiple times during the battle on the ''Wookkiee.'' First a PK [[NoPeripheralVision fails to spot Iosif Iosif]] who is hovering above him in the room. Then Iosif fails to spot the PK Sergeant with a grenade launcher, the grenadier then fails to spot Luka, who takes him out with a wrench, and then Luka misses the last PK, who ends his rampage.
rampage.
* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question he is usually truthful, but also words his answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he might want to keep secret.
* FalseReassurance: When Gamma answers a question he is usually truthful, but also words his answer specifically so as to avoid divulging information he might want to keep secret.
* GrenadeLauncher: Deployed briefly by the Peacekeeper troops during their seizure of the Wookkiee
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--> '''Captain Kear''': Monopoly of Force my ass. Fuck you, you statist asshole.
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* HostageSituation: The US/UN ship *** lands on the moon and captures members of Mike Martin's militia to use as hostages and human shields.
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* HostageSituation: The US/UN RTFM, an AG-drive cargo ship *** seized by UN/US forces, lands on the moon with sixty troops and captures members of Mike Martin's militia to use as hostages and human shields.
shields to demand a recharge so they can return to earth.
* {{Howl of Sorrow}}: The dogs engage in a very literal howl of sorrow when [[spoiler:Rex is killed by Tudel.]]
* {{If My Calculations are Correct}}: Darcy and Wasseem work on figuring out whether they can land the off-course Wookkiee safely on the moon and, ''if their calculations are correct,'' conclude that they can, barely.
* {{Howl of Sorrow}}: The dogs engage in a very literal howl of sorrow when [[spoiler:Rex is killed by Tudel.]]
* {{If My Calculations are Correct}}: Darcy and Wasseem work on figuring out whether they can land the off-course Wookkiee safely on the moon and, ''if their calculations are correct,'' conclude that they can, barely.
* LuxuriousLiquor: Both Mike Martin and Leroy Fournier (each quite wealthy) have interludes that involve drinking whiskey while engaging in introspection.
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* {{No Gravity for You}}: The captain and couple of the crew take advantage of the ship's transition to microgravity to get the jump on PK soldiers who have captured the ship, who have not trained for zero-g manuevers.
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* {{No Gravity for You}}: The captain Captain Kear and couple of the ''Wookkiee'' crew take advantage of the ship's transition to microgravity to get the jump on PK soldiers who have captured the ship, who and have not trained for zero-g manuevers.
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** The U.S. military evidentally has quotas for so-called 'alternately-abled soldiers' wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
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** The U.S. military evidentally has quotas for so-called 'alternately-abled soldiers' wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
* Shoutout: Gamma directly references ''The Moon is a Harsh Mistress'' and its 2019 movie when talking about sci-fi models of succesful revolutions.
* WavingSignsAround: A boardroom group meeting is interrupted by the unexpected arrival of protestors with masks, cameras, banners and rocks.
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* BadassGrandpa:
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BadassGrandpa: Samir Akthr Abyd, who takes on a horde of PK troops by his lonesome. Based on real-life Badass Grandpa [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samuel_Whittemore Samuel Whittemore]]
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** The Wookkie and other space-faring container ships have specialized coatings to avoid detection via radar. This is apparently very effective.
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* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, or hardwood forests. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style. To top ''that'' all off, their game is then connected to an existing MMORPG so they can interact with other players and they gain a significant following. Not bad considering dogs don't have thumbs.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed Wookkie, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed Wookkie, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
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* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, a magical mushroom forest, a dusty southwestern trailer, or a hardwood forests.forest. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style. To top ''that'' all off, their game is then connected to an existing MMORPG so they can interact with other players and they gain a significant following. Not bad considering dogs don't have thumbs.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmedWookkie, Wookkiee, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed
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* GroinAttack: Captain Kear indulges in one after he overpowers PK Captain Tudel, as vengeance for Tudel breaking his nose. Justified in that if Kear broke Tudel's nose he might asphyxiate in his own blood due to the microgravity.
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*{{No Gravity for You}}: The captain and couple of the crew take advantage of the ship's transition to microgravity to get the jump on PK soldiers who have captured the ship, who have not trained for zero-g manuevers.
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* {{Democracy is Bad}}: Given the situation on earth, this is an implicit theme of the novel, often explicitly stated by Mike or Max. The U.S. still holds elections, and politicians still worry about these elections, but the deep dysfunction of the U.S. Government and earth in general is a direct result of democratically elected policies.
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* {{Almost out of Oxygen}}: Befalls John and the dogs when they lose contact with the colony and are too far from anywhere they could walk to before they run out of CO2 scrubbers.
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* ColorblindConfusion: John sometimes forgets the dogs don't have the same acuity for colors as he does.
--> '''Blue''': Maybe we'll be able to engineer trichromatic photoreceptors for the next generation.
--> '''Blue''': Maybe we'll be able to engineer trichromatic photoreceptors for the next generation.
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* MyInstinctsAreShowing: Toyed with constantly with the dogs, as their enhanced intellect is often at odds with their canine proclivities
** Rex programs an application that not only simulates the sound of urine splashing when peeing in a spacesuit, it geotags the location so that it can be 'marked' as territory.
** Rex programs an application that not only simulates the sound of urine splashing when peeing in a spacesuit, it geotags the location so that it can be 'marked' as territory.
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* PetTheDog: Used literally when Darcy [[spoiler: rescues John and the dogs from eventual death by asphyxiation. Duncan and Rex enjoy affectionate scratches.]]
* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad: Earth has some ''interesting'' policies in place.
** The U.S. military evidentally has quotas for so-called 'alternately-abled soldiers' wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad: Earth has some ''interesting'' policies in place.
** The U.S. military evidentally has quotas for so-called 'alternately-abled soldiers' wherein disabled soldiers, even those in wheelchairs, are included in military combat operations, along with all the accommodations this requires.
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-->'''President Themba Johnson''': These people think they can take advantage of the schools and roads and everything that our society provides, then just leave without paying their fair share? ''That,'' general, is the point of all this.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies (and likely prison sentences for each CEO), and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I I. Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? rifle]]?" Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies (and likely prison sentences for each CEO), and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Toyed with. John constantly wonders if Gamma is working towards an imminent 'hard takeoff,' even as Gamma tries to assure him that it has reached the limit of its intelligence. In fact, Gamma worries more about this trope than any other character, as he [[spoiler: pre-emptively destroys any instances of himself that slip beyond his control so as to avoid a power struggle later.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Toyed with. John constantly wonders if Gamma is working towards an imminent 'hard takeoff,' even as Gamma tries to assure him that it has reached the limit of its intelligence. In fact, Gamma worries more about this trope than any other character, as he it [[spoiler: pre-emptively destroys any instances of himself itself that slip beyond his its control so as to avoid a power struggle later.]]
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* ImmigrantPatriotism: In spades, as *every* citizen of Aristillus is an immigrant, and almost all of them have good reasons for being there and, by the same token, good reasons to keep the U.N. Peacekeepers out.
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* DogsAreDumb: Explicitly inverted, as the dogs in this story have been purposefully uplifted to grant them sentience, the ability to speak, and heightened all-around intelligence. In fact, they are by all indications ''far'' smarter on average than humans, and very aware of this fact.
* DramatisPersonae: Each book has one, and thankfully so as there are dozens of characters making regular entrances and exits, so the handy reference helps remind us who is who.
* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Technically all of Aristillus counts, as it has few aboveground buildings, the entire city is made from tunnels cleared by tunnel boring machines, which was easier than building on the surface. To the earth forces, it has all the appearances of a supervillain lair.
* HeroesLoveDogs: The dogs hide on Aristillus because the earth Government sought to destroy them, and still does, and their entire species was rescued by one heroic human, John, and his team. John is extremely protective of the dogs as a result, and the dogs are (mostly) extremely respectful towards John.
* ImmigrantPatriotism: In spades, as*every* ''every'' citizen of Aristillus is an immigrant, and almost all of them have good reasons for being there and, by the same token, good reasons to keep the U.N. Peacekeepers out.
* DramatisPersonae: Each book has one, and thankfully so as there are dozens of characters making regular entrances and exits, so the handy reference helps remind us who is who.
* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Technically all of Aristillus counts, as it has few aboveground buildings, the entire city is made from tunnels cleared by tunnel boring machines, which was easier than building on the surface. To the earth forces, it has all the appearances of a supervillain lair.
* HeroesLoveDogs: The dogs hide on Aristillus because the earth Government sought to destroy them, and still does, and their entire species was rescued by one heroic human, John, and his team. John is extremely protective of the dogs as a result, and the dogs are (mostly) extremely respectful towards John.
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* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of the CEOs of various earth companies as part of the process of nationalizing all industries. We have an idea of what they were like but the process is never actually explained.
* {{Oppressive States ofAmerica}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
* StealthinSpace:
* {{Oppressive States ofAmerica}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
* StealthinSpace:
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* MacGyvering: Most of the main protagonists are extremely good at problem solving on the fly with limited materials.
** In book 1, The dogs need to check on some satellites in lunar orbit, but don't have a telescope. That's alright! They make one using cameras from their spacesuits and some coding to interpolate the image.
* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of theCEOs executives of various earth companies as part of the process of nationalizing all industries. We have an idea of what they were like but the process is never actually explained.
* {{Oppressive StatesofAmerica}}: of America}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or,technically technically, tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
*StealthinSpace: {{Settling the Frontier}}: The Moon Colony represents the next step in human expansion, even if most people on earth ''don't even know it exists.'' By the time of the novels, the colony is self-sustaining and isn't far from turning into an economic power in its own right, but is explicitly stated to lack advanced fabrication capacity and other accoutrements of a developed city/nation. The concept of settling a frontier is given much philosophical examination in the second book.
* {{Stealth in Space}}:
** In book 1, The dogs need to check on some satellites in lunar orbit, but don't have a telescope. That's alright! They make one using cameras from their spacesuits and some coding to interpolate the image.
* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of the
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* UpliftedAnimal: The dogs in this story were granted sentience and intelligence by a government agency, resulting in a whole species that can talk, program computers, and work to understand their own place in the universe.
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* AStormIsComing: This is Mike's constant refrain for about the first act of the book, where he tells anyone who listens that they're at best a few years out from an invasion by earth. It consumes his thinking, and when the first waves come earlier than expected, it is Mike's preparations that save the day. Through the second act, his message remains mostly unchanged, except that he now believes a **bigger** storm is coming.
* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, or hardwood forests. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style. To top ''that'' all off, their game is then connected to an existing MMORPG so they can interact with other players and they gain a significant following. Not bad considering dogs don't have thumbs.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed Wookkie, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
* TheCassandra: Mike Martin, who constantly foretells of invasion and subjugation by earth forces, which generally prompts eyerolls from his friend, who think he's either exagerrating or going completely mental.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive:
** Leroy Fournier fits this stereotype to a T. He sees nothing wrong with employing dirty tactics, blackmail, and sabotage to beat his rival, Mike Martin, and worst of all he's ''petty'' about it, believing he's just claiming the success to which he's entitled.
** Note that from the perspective of the U.S. Government, ''every single CEO'' on aristillus is corrupt, dodging taxes and 'stealing' productive capacity. And this is ''after'' earth imprisoned many executives and nationalized their companies.
* AugmentedReality: The Dogs code an augmented reality overlay for their spacesuits to spice up the barren terrain on their trek across the lunar surface, so they can pretend to be hiking through African desert, snowy mountains, or hardwood forests. Later they add in AI monsters which can be battled and 'killed' for experience points, RPG style. To top ''that'' all off, their game is then connected to an existing MMORPG so they can interact with other players and they gain a significant following. Not bad considering dogs don't have thumbs.
* {{Blinded by the Light}}: When US/UN Peacekeeper forces board the unarmed Wookkie, the crew catches them in the act by turning on the Klieg lights, causing a couple of the soldiers to freeze. The crew unconvincingly demands a surrender, but without any other weapons their only option is to attempt a launch.
* TheCassandra: Mike Martin, who constantly foretells of invasion and subjugation by earth forces, which generally prompts eyerolls from his friend, who think he's either exagerrating or going completely mental.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive:
** Leroy Fournier fits this stereotype to a T. He sees nothing wrong with employing dirty tactics, blackmail, and sabotage to beat his rival, Mike Martin, and worst of all he's ''petty'' about it, believing he's just claiming the success to which he's entitled.
** Note that from the perspective of the U.S. Government, ''every single CEO'' on aristillus is corrupt, dodging taxes and 'stealing' productive capacity. And this is ''after'' earth imprisoned many executives and nationalized their companies.
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* HonestCorporateExecutive: Mike Martin, to the extent that it hurts his interests when someone takes advantage of him or he can't effectively fight back against dirty tactics. Indeed, his direct approach makes it difficult for him to pull off the political manuevering necessary to prepare Aristillus for war. Thank God for Javier!
* HostageSituation: The US/UN ship **** lands on the moon and captures members of Mike Martin's militia to use as hostages and human shields.
* ImpededCommunication: Earth forces destroy communications satellites in orbit around the moon, cutting Gamma off from it's other sites, cutting John and the dogs off from Aristillus, and the City off from the rest of the Moon. For Aristillus this is inconvenient, for John and the dogs its life-threatening, for Gamma this literally ''splits his mind into pieces.''
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailing mike with reputational damage. The out-of-context footage makes it appear that the two are agreeing to fraudulently alter some drilling records, which is ironically exatly what ''Leroy'' did.
* HostageSituation: The US/UN ship **** lands on the moon and captures members of Mike Martin's militia to use as hostages and human shields.
* ImpededCommunication: Earth forces destroy communications satellites in orbit around the moon, cutting Gamma off from it's other sites, cutting John and the dogs off from Aristillus, and the City off from the rest of the Moon. For Aristillus this is inconvenient, for John and the dogs its life-threatening, for Gamma this literally ''splits his mind into pieces.''
* ManipulativeEditing: Leroy uses some footage of Mike and his old friend Kevin Bultman to make an attempt at blackmailing mike with reputational damage. The out-of-context footage makes it appear that the two are agreeing to fraudulently alter some drilling records, which is ironically exatly what ''Leroy'' did.
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* SoleSurvivor: U.S. Army Captain Frank Tudel, who is the only member of his whole unit to survive the (otherwise successful) attempt to capture a Lunar ship with an AG drive. Although the deaths of his soldiers were largely his fault, he only mourns the loss of his career. Yet he is ''rewarded'' by his superiors because of the unique intelligence he now possesses, and his continued incompetence helps save the Lunar colony.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies and likely prison sentences, and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire political/military threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer *** as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other object is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire political/military threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer *** as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other object is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies and (and likely prison sentences, sentences for each CEO), and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau as they try to navigate through the increasingly direpolitical/military threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer *** John as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or otherobject object) is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend Darcy Grau as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other
* AIIsACrapshoot: Toyed with. John constantly wonders if Gamma is working towards an imminent 'hard takeoff,' even as Gamma tries to assure him that it has reached the limit of its intelligence. In fact, Gamma worries more about this trope than any other character, as he [[spoiler: pre-emptively destroys any instances of himself that slip beyond his control so as to avoid a power struggle later.]]
* ArtificialGravity: Not as such, although the AG drive can make a mockery of the very concept of gravity.
* AuthorAppeal: Radical libertarianism, arguably taken even further than Heinlein in The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, since this time around the moon colony wasn't founded by the government as a penal colony but was built from the ground up, John Galt style, by a handful of driven and competent entrepreneurs using only the sweat of their own brow and the wealthy they rightfully earned.
* ArtificialIntelligence: Gamma, who was rescued from destruction by John and brought to the Aristillus colony. Able to wax philosophical but also very reluctant to reveal too much to its 'friends,' Gamma drives much of the plot of the first two books.
* BanonAI: Earth's explicit policy, as enforced by the Bureau for Sustainable Research.
* BenevolentAI: Gamma's actions during the story are all beneficial to the Lunar Colony, but his real intentions and goals are not revealed.
* {{BFG}}: The Gargoyle Rifle. Firing a round twice the diameter and eight times the mass of a .50 BMG, this gun is designed to fully take advantage of the moon's lower gravity and lack of atmosphere, making it essentially a man-portable cannon. Comes in handy on many occasions.
* CasualInterplanetaryTravel: Thanks to the AG drive, it is explicitly stated that there are regular smuggling runs from the moon to earth and back, all using jury-rigged container ships. In the second book, an open-source design for a vessel capable of traveling from earth to the moon is distributed, which can be built by civilians with the proper tools.
* ImmigrantPatriotism: In spades, as *every* citizen of Aristillus is an immigrant, and almost all of them have good reasons for being there and, by the same token, good reasons to keep the U.N. Peacekeepers out.
* LibertariansInSpace: Taken to an extreme heretofore unseen.
* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of the CEOs of various earth companies as part of the process of nationalizing all industries. We have an idea of what they were like but the process is never actually explained.
* {{Oppressive States ofAmerica}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
* StealthinSpace:
** The Wookkie and other space-faring container ships have specialized coatings to avoid detection via radar. This is apparently very effective.
** At multiple points during the story a ship or ships sneaks up on the lunar surface with little-to-no warning.
* ArtificialGravity: Not as such, although the AG drive can make a mockery of the very concept of gravity.
* AuthorAppeal: Radical libertarianism, arguably taken even further than Heinlein in The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, since this time around the moon colony wasn't founded by the government as a penal colony but was built from the ground up, John Galt style, by a handful of driven and competent entrepreneurs using only the sweat of their own brow and the wealthy they rightfully earned.
* ArtificialIntelligence: Gamma, who was rescued from destruction by John and brought to the Aristillus colony. Able to wax philosophical but also very reluctant to reveal too much to its 'friends,' Gamma drives much of the plot of the first two books.
* BanonAI: Earth's explicit policy, as enforced by the Bureau for Sustainable Research.
* BenevolentAI: Gamma's actions during the story are all beneficial to the Lunar Colony, but his real intentions and goals are not revealed.
* {{BFG}}: The Gargoyle Rifle. Firing a round twice the diameter and eight times the mass of a .50 BMG, this gun is designed to fully take advantage of the moon's lower gravity and lack of atmosphere, making it essentially a man-portable cannon. Comes in handy on many occasions.
* CasualInterplanetaryTravel: Thanks to the AG drive, it is explicitly stated that there are regular smuggling runs from the moon to earth and back, all using jury-rigged container ships. In the second book, an open-source design for a vessel capable of traveling from earth to the moon is distributed, which can be built by civilians with the proper tools.
* ImmigrantPatriotism: In spades, as *every* citizen of Aristillus is an immigrant, and almost all of them have good reasons for being there and, by the same token, good reasons to keep the U.N. Peacekeepers out.
* LibertariansInSpace: Taken to an extreme heretofore unseen.
* NoodleIncident: The CEO trials, which are repeatedly referenced and is explained as the earth Government's arrest and trial of the CEOs of various earth companies as part of the process of nationalizing all industries. We have an idea of what they were like but the process is never actually explained.
* {{Oppressive States ofAmerica}}: America remains nominally a democracy but has succumbed to one-party rule for decades and the economy is now fully nationalized, all economic ills now scapegoated on a handful of rebellious territories.
* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Aristillus is this explicitly, with every single inch of land (or, technically tunnel) held by one private entity or another, and the whole colony works on the principles of private property
* StealthinSpace:
** The Wookkie and other space-faring container ships have specialized coatings to avoid detection via radar. This is apparently very effective.
** At multiple points during the story a ship or ships sneaks up on the lunar surface with little-to-no warning.
* FrickinLaserBeams: Earth uses ground-based lasers to fry Gamma's satellites so he can't spot the incoming invasion force and to prevent the lunar forces from communication.
* TheMole: Captain Matthew Dewitt is given the task of infiltrating the colony for the purpose of gathering intel and acting as a saboteur in preparation of a full-scale invasion. By all appearances, he succeeds.
* NaiveNewcomer: Hugh Haig, and to a lesser extent his companions. Hugh is young and inexperienced, but is especially out of his element in the unregulated and unrestrained capitalistic colony that is Aristillus.
* NuclearOption: Ordered and initiated by the U.S. government when the USAF/UNAF ship Paul-Henri Spaak crashes after losing a philosophical then military confrontation with one of Gamma's facilities. The ship is 'scuttled' via nuclear blast with the intention of preventing the expats from seizing cryptography hardware, but whether the action was actually *justified* is somewhat left as an exercise for the reader.
* PyrrhicVictory: Driving off the first UN invasion force and rescuing a handful of hostages seems like an unambiguous win, except that Aristillus is completely unprepared for the full-scale war that will inevitably follow, and now the UN forces have the AG drive which will enable them to send an overwhelming force the next time.
-->'''Mike Martin''': The war was starting way too soon. He'd won a battle- no, not even. A skirmish. A fistfight. He'd won nothing.
* {{Pretext for War}}:
** Very early in the story the U.S. President Themba Johnson lays out various causes for invading the expat colony: tax evasion, theft of productive assets, and most importantly gaining support to win the next election.
** During the first UN invasion, a PK captain justifies holding prisoners by calling them smugglers and terrorist combatants in possession of illegal weaponry.
** After the Colonist's open defiance of the UN forces, the case for invading is, from the earth government's perspective, made stronger.
* TheMole: Captain Matthew Dewitt is given the task of infiltrating the colony for the purpose of gathering intel and acting as a saboteur in preparation of a full-scale invasion. By all appearances, he succeeds.
* NaiveNewcomer: Hugh Haig, and to a lesser extent his companions. Hugh is young and inexperienced, but is especially out of his element in the unregulated and unrestrained capitalistic colony that is Aristillus.
* NuclearOption: Ordered and initiated by the U.S. government when the USAF/UNAF ship Paul-Henri Spaak crashes after losing a philosophical then military confrontation with one of Gamma's facilities. The ship is 'scuttled' via nuclear blast with the intention of preventing the expats from seizing cryptography hardware, but whether the action was actually *justified* is somewhat left as an exercise for the reader.
* PyrrhicVictory: Driving off the first UN invasion force and rescuing a handful of hostages seems like an unambiguous win, except that Aristillus is completely unprepared for the full-scale war that will inevitably follow, and now the UN forces have the AG drive which will enable them to send an overwhelming force the next time.
-->'''Mike Martin''': The war was starting way too soon. He'd won a battle- no, not even. A skirmish. A fistfight. He'd won nothing.
* {{Pretext for War}}:
** Very early in the story the U.S. President Themba Johnson lays out various causes for invading the expat colony: tax evasion, theft of productive assets, and most importantly gaining support to win the next election.
** During the first UN invasion, a PK captain justifies holding prisoners by calling them smugglers and terrorist combatants in possession of illegal weaponry.
** After the Colonist's open defiance of the UN forces, the case for invading is, from the earth government's perspective, made stronger.
* BadassGrandpa:
* GoingNative: Captain Matthew Dewitt. Originally tasked with infiltrating the colony to aid the invasion, he starts to befriend the locals and eventually comes to prefer their way of life, or perhaps their standard of living.
* ShellGame: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.
* GoingNative: Captain Matthew Dewitt. Originally tasked with infiltrating the colony to aid the invasion, he starts to befriend the locals and eventually comes to prefer their way of life, or perhaps their standard of living.
* ShellGame: Darren Hollins pulls off a very smooth operation to remove all the gold from the colony prior to the U.N. invasion, without anyone knowing it was gone. Important since seizing the gold was a large factor in the decision to invade.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies and likely prison sentences, and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire political/military threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer *** as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other object is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
The series so far includes the following novels:
* ''The Powers of the Earth'' (2017)
* ''Causes of Separation'' (2018)
both of which won the Prometheus Award in their respective years.
There are more Novels in progress:
* ''Right and Duty''
* ''Absolute Tyranny''
The short stories ''Staking a Claim'' and ''The Team'' take place shortly before the events of the novels and serve explain the backstories of certain main characters.
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''The Aristillus Series'' is a (mostly) hard Science Fiction series of novels by author Travis J.I Corcoran, taking much inspiration from Robert Heinlein's *"The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" but asking, among other things, "what if every moon colonist had an [[{{BFG}} anti-materiel rifle]]? Set in and around the year 2064 at the start of the series, it portrays earth as a stagnant economic power in the midst of a decades-long depression thanks to the iron-fisted/velvet-gloved global government that has complete control over the planet's productive capacity. Rather than a prison colony where malcontents are exiled, the moon colony was founded by the CEO of an earth corporation and the scientist who invented the AG drive escaping the nationalization of earth companies and likely prison sentences, and the lunar 'culture' reflects their entrepreneurial spirit. The colony, located in the Aristillus crater, has become economically independent and is drawing more and more settlers, which is causing the Earth powers to finally sit up and take notice.
The series largely focuses on the Founder of Aristillus and CEO of a tunneling company Mike Martin, and his immediate associates including girlfriend as they try to navigate through the increasingly dire political/military threat posed by the earth's military forces, even as they try and keep the colony growing. The Book also follows a quartet of dogs and their friend/rescuer *** as they undertake an expedition to circumnavigate the moon on foot, which quickly becomes a dangerous endeavor as the conflict with earth heats up.
The technology featured in the series is mostly [[MohsScaleOfSciFiHardness accurate to real life]] but for three 'special' techs: an anti-gravity drive, talking dogs with genius level intellect, and a pre-singularity AGI. As Corcoran takes consistency and realism seriously, anytime a ship (or other object is entering or leaving orbit you can bet that he's done the math and made sure it would work in real life, so expect absolutely minimal handwaving of any implications of the technology at play here.
The series so far includes the following novels:
* ''The Powers of the Earth'' (2017)
* ''Causes of Separation'' (2018)
both of which won the Prometheus Award in their respective years.
There are more Novels in progress:
* ''Right and Duty''
* ''Absolute Tyranny''
The short stories ''Staking a Claim'' and ''The Team'' take place shortly before the events of the novels and serve explain the backstories of certain main characters.
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[[folder: The Powers of the Earth]]
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[[folder: Causes of Separation]]
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[[folder: The Team]]
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[[folder:Staking a Claim]]
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