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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: The Reincarnated Pina is one to "Canon Heroines" who are revealed to be a BitchInSheepsClothing underneath their kind mask" or their body is inhabited by a {{Jerkass}} reincarnator in similar genre's of stories. In most of these stories, the "Heroine" usually gets to have some upper hand through some level of protagonist plot armor as the canonical protagonist against the ones the readers are following. While this starts out to be the case early in the story, it is eventually revealed that the reincarnated Pina only managed to succeed through using cheat items to get her way and when Remilia cuts her source off, the reincarnated Pina can't actually win over the rest of the kingdom inhabitants as easily as she used to and ultimately lacked the charisma that the ''original'' Pina would have had as a sociopath with NoSocialSkills and didn't bother to work with what skills and abilities she currently had after her reincarnation. Just because one is reincarnated into the canon "heroine" of the story, doesn't mean that you'd get the benefits and skills that the canon protagonist would have had on the get go.
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: The Reincarnated Pina is one to "Canon Heroines" who are revealed to be a BitchInSheepsClothing underneath their kind mask" or their body is inhabited by a {{Jerkass}} reincarnator in similar genre's of stories. In most of these stories, the "Heroine" usually gets to have some upper hand through some level of protagonist plot armor as the canonical protagonist against the ones the readers are following. While this starts out to be the case early in the story, it is eventually revealed that the reincarnated Pina only managed to succeed through using cheat items to get her way and when Remilia cuts her source off, the reincarnated Pina can't actually win over the rest of the kingdom inhabitants as easily as she used to and ultimately lacked the charisma that the ''original'' Pina would have had as due to being a sociopath with NoSocialSkills and didn't bother to work with what skills and abilities she currently had after her reincarnation. Just because one is reincarnated into the canon "heroine" of the story, doesn't mean that you'd get the benefits and skills that the canon protagonist would have had on the get go.
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: The Reincarnated Pina is one to "Canon Heroines" who are revealed to be a BitchInSheepsClothing underneath their kind mask" or their body is inhabited by a reincarnator with a jerkass personality in similar genre's of stories. In most of these stories, the "Heroine" usually gets to have some upper hand through some level of protagonist plot armor as the canonical protagonist against the ones the readers are following. While this starts out to be the case early in the story, it is eventually revealed that the reincarnated Pina only managed to succeed through using cheat items to get her way and when Remilia cuts her source off, the reincarnated Pina can't actually win over the rest of the kingdom inhabitants as easily as she used to and ultimately lacked the charisma that the ''real'' Pina would have had as a sociopath with NoSocialSkills and didn't bother to work with what skills and abilities she currently had. Just because one is reincarnated into the canon "heroine" of the story, doesn't mean that you'd get the benefits and skills that the canon protagonist would have had.
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: The Reincarnated Pina is one to "Canon Heroines" who are revealed to be a BitchInSheepsClothing underneath their kind mask" or their body is inhabited by a {{Jerkass}} reincarnator with a jerkass personality in similar genre's of stories. In most of these stories, the "Heroine" usually gets to have some upper hand through some level of protagonist plot armor as the canonical protagonist against the ones the readers are following. While this starts out to be the case early in the story, it is eventually revealed that the reincarnated Pina only managed to succeed through using cheat items to get her way and when Remilia cuts her source off, the reincarnated Pina can't actually win over the rest of the kingdom inhabitants as easily as she used to and ultimately lacked the charisma that the ''real'' ''original'' Pina would have had as a sociopath with NoSocialSkills and didn't bother to work with what skills and abilities she currently had. had after her reincarnation. Just because one is reincarnated into the canon "heroine" of the story, doesn't mean that you'd get the benefits and skills that the canon protagonist would have had.had on the get go.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Jim, though he is LockedOutOfTheLoop regarding the full chronology of Remilia's condemnation and Willard's part in it, he followed and helped Willard out of faith in the old Willard before the reincarnated Pina brainwashed him. A small dream the real Remilia concocted help snap him out of it as he realized that the brother he used to admire and trust is gone the moment he condemned the woman he used to love whole-heartedly for another, prompting him to leave the kingdom.]]
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* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Jim, though he is LockedOutOfTheLoop regarding the full chronology of Remilia's condemnation and Willard's part in it, he followed and helped Willard out of faith in the old Willard before the reincarnated Pina brainwashed him. A small dream the real Remilia concocted help snap him out of it as he realized that the brother he used to admire and trust is gone the moment he condemned the woman he used to love whole-heartedly with his whole heart for another, prompting him to leave the kingdom.kingdom and leave Willard to fix his own mess.]]
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* TheSociopath: The reincarnated Pina is a textbook example of one. Unlike most depictions of the trope though, Pina is neither charming nor cunning. She has NoSocialSkills and refuses to learn them, and instead constantly tries using canned lines and scenarios from the game, even when it's obvious they won't work. She ultimately has to resort to drugs, bribes and sexual favors to get her way. Once she loses access to her drugs however, it quickly becomes obvious to everyone, even those she's already influenced, how vile a person she is. [[spoiler: Even in her past life as Rina, she spent it bullying and lying to others to get her way until she was finally caught in college, at which point she became a hikikomori and died of heat stroke because she refused to leave her room after the AC unit broke.]]
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* TheSociopath: The reincarnated Pina is a textbook example of one. Unlike most depictions of the trope though, Pina she is neither charming nor cunning. She has NoSocialSkills and refuses to learn them, and instead constantly tries using canned lines and scenarios from the game, even when it's obvious they won't work. She ultimately has to resort to drugs, bribes and sexual favors to get her way. Once she loses access to her drugs however, it quickly becomes obvious to everyone, even those she's already influenced, how vile a person she is. [[spoiler: Even in her past life as Rina, she spent it bullying and lying to others to get her way until she was finally caught in college, at which point she became a hikikomori and died of heat stroke because she refused to leave her room after the AC unit broke.]]
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: The Reincarnated Pina is one to "Canon Heroines" who are revealed to be a BitchInSheepsClothing underneath their kind mask" or their body is inhabited by a reincarnator with a jerkass personality in similar genre's of stories. In most of these stories, the "Heroine" usually gets to have some upper hand through some level of protagonist plot armor as the canonical protagonist against the ones the readers are following. While this starts out to be the case early in the story, it is eventually revealed that the reincarnated Pina only managed to succeed through using cheat items to get her way and when Remilia cuts her source off, the reincarnated Pina can't actually win over the rest of the kingdom inhabitants as easily as she used to and ultimately lacked the charisma that the ''real'' Pina would have had as a sociopath with NoSocialSkills and didn't bother to work with what skills and abilities she currently had. Just because one is reincarnated into the canon "heroine" of the story, doesn't mean that you'd get the benefits and skills that the canon protagonist would have had.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: DownplayedTrope, beyond the facial features, Williard and his two brothers, Elhasha and Jim, had black hair instead of blonde.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: DownplayedTrope, beyond the facial features, Williard and his Williard's two brothers, Elhasha and Jim, had black hair instead of blonde.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Sophia due to having been away at the time of the condemnation was not affected by Pina's brainwashing and therefore was able to see the situation for what it was. In dismay and disgust over what happened to Emi, especially after investigating, she allows herself to get kicked out of her family and resigns as a knight to support Emi instead rather than a kingdom that would condemn someone like her.
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** Sophia due to having been away at the time of the condemnation was not affected by Pina's brainwashing and therefore was able to see the situation for what it was. In dismay and disgust over what happened to Emi, especially after investigating, she allows herself to get kicked out of her family and resigns as a knight to support Emi instead rather than a kingdom that would condemn someone likeher.her.
** Jim, the second Prince and Willard's brother, [[spoiler:after seeing how callously his brother treated Emi! Remilia in favor of the reincarnated Pina after her condemnation and not being convinced of Emi! Remilia being evil due to Pina's brainwashing, on top of how he is overworked to handle the reincarnated Pina's poor spending, he chose to leave the Palace on his own accord and refuses to put up with his brother anymore. Granted, however, the real Remilia had been helped convince him to snap out of his long broken faith of his brother.]]
* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Jim, though he is LockedOutOfTheLoop regarding the full chronology of Remilia's condemnation and Willard's part in it, he followed and helped Willard out of faith in the old Willard before the reincarnated Pina brainwashed him. A small dream the real Remilia concocted help snap him out of it as he realized that the brother he used to admire and trust is gone the moment he condemned the woman he used to love whole-heartedly for another, prompting him to leave the kingdom.]]
** Sophia due to having been away at the time of the condemnation was not affected by Pina's brainwashing and therefore was able to see the situation for what it was. In dismay and disgust over what happened to Emi, especially after investigating, she allows herself to get kicked out of her family and resigns as a knight to support Emi instead rather than a kingdom that would condemn someone like
** Jim, the second Prince and Willard's brother, [[spoiler:after seeing how callously his brother treated Emi! Remilia in favor of the reincarnated Pina after her condemnation and not being convinced of Emi! Remilia being evil due to Pina's brainwashing, on top of how he is overworked to handle the reincarnated Pina's poor spending, he chose to leave the Palace on his own accord and refuses to put up with his brother anymore. Granted, however, the real Remilia had been helped convince him to snap out of his long broken faith of his brother.]]
* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Jim, though he is LockedOutOfTheLoop regarding the full chronology of Remilia's condemnation and Willard's part in it, he followed and helped Willard out of faith in the old Willard before the reincarnated Pina brainwashed him. A small dream the real Remilia concocted help snap him out of it as he realized that the brother he used to admire and trust is gone the moment he condemned the woman he used to love whole-heartedly for another, prompting him to leave the kingdom.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: DownplayedTrope, beyond the facial features, Williard and his two brothers, Elhasha and Jim, had black hair instead of blonde.
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* JerkassGods: [[spoiler:The Lord of the Heavens is directly responsible for the bad state of the world. He kidnapped the Goddess of Purification, preventing her from healing her father and stopping the miasma from spreading, and killed any deity who objected to him, all because the goddess refused to marry him]].
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* PowerDegeneration: [[spoiler:When a god directly uses their powers on the mortal plane, they start to become fatigued and build up a sediment in their bodies. Most gods decided to stop interfering directly and returned to the heavens, but [[TopGod The Creator]] had used built up so much sediment he could not return, forcing to remain as his body deteriorated and began releasing massive amounts of miasma. He had made plans for this eventually, but they were derailed by the Lord of the Heavens]].
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* AnimalMotif: Remlia has a spider motif, representing her slowly and carefully building up her revenge against those involved with Emi's downfall, much like a spider weaving a grand, intricate web. Appropriately, one of her first acts after the condemnation is to send out an army of spiders to spy on everyone in order to keep apprised of events.
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* AnimalMotif: Remlia Remilia has a spider motif, representing her slowly and carefully building up her revenge against those involved with Emi's downfall, much like a spider weaving a grand, intricate web. Appropriately, one of her first acts after the condemnation is to send out an army of spiders to spy on everyone in order to keep apprised of events. Remilia also had crows as her familiars in the original "Star Maiden" game, representing Remilia's grudge of having been wronged like a crow remembering who had done it wrong. However, the current Remilia changed that to have spiders instead as spiders can stealthily gather information for her better than a crow would.
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* AnimalMotif: Remlia has a spider motif, representing her slowly and carefully building up her revenge against those involved with Emi's downfall, much like a spider weaving a grand, intricate web.
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* AnimalMotif: Remlia has a spider motif, representing her slowly and carefully building up her revenge against those involved with Emi's downfall, much like a spider weaving a grand, intricate web. Appropriately, one of her first acts after the condemnation is to send out an army of spiders to spy on everyone in order to keep apprised of events.
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* AnimalMotif: Remlia has a spider motif, representing her slowly and carefully building up her revenge against those involved with Emi's downfall, much like a spider weaving a grand, intricate web.
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* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler:While initially borrowing and using Emi's AllLovingHeroine Remilia act to win over Anhel, chapter 15 of the manga adaptation shows that Remilia had genuinely come to love Anhel.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler:While initially borrowing and using Emi's AllLovingHeroine Remilia act to play the part of the hero in her quest for revenge, Remilia comes to appreciate the [[GoodFeelsGood feeling of doing good deeds]]. This is best exemplified in her bid to win over Anhel, chapter Anhel. Chapter 15 of the manga adaptation shows that despite spending so much time manipulating him, Remilia had started to genuinely come to love Anhel.him for his earnestness.]]
* GoodCannotComprehendEvil: Emi doesn't understand why Pina is framing her. However, unlike many examples of the trope, this just serves to make Emi uncomfortable. She starts avoiding Pina wherever possible, which only makes painting her as a bully easier in the long run.
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* LastGirlWins: Gender inverted example. [[spoiler:Anhel, the secret target of the original game, falls in love with Remilia through her efforts to save his country and people, and is who Remilia ultimately marries, favoring him for falling in love with the Remilia that Emi had worked so hard for.]]
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* LastGirlWins: Gender inverted example. [[spoiler:Anhel, the secret target of the original game, falls in love with Remilia through her efforts to save his country and people, and people. He is who Remilia ultimately marries, favoring him for falling in love with the Remilia that Emi had worked so hard for.for, and showing a sincere effort to help prove her innocence.]]
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* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the Katakana used, Angel's name is often translated as Angel or Anhel in fan-translations.
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* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the Katakana used, used for his name(アンヘル), Angel's name is often translated as Angel or Anhel in fan-translations.just as Anhel.
