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This seems to involve a guy being "perverted" towards a gal and I didn't see anything stating everybody else (unless this meant the audience) mentioned on the main page. I also tried revising this overall.
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You weren't being pervy and everyone else knows you weren't. So why'd you still get pummeled?
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[UnprovokedPervertPayback HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[UnprovokedPervertPayback HERE]].-]HERE]] and '''quit staring at my ass before I clock you!'''-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[UnprovokedPervertPayback HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[UnprovokedPervertPayback HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
