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A devious, insolent and self-assured character with an unjustly overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A devious, insolent insolent, slimy and self-assured character with an unjustly overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.magnificence.
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Out of context, just using "devious", "delusional" and "unjustly overinflated ego" could make the character in question sound Affably Evil, which isn't the case for 99% of those types of antagonists.
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A devious character with an unjustly overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A devious devious, insolent and self-assured character with an unjustly overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A devious character with an unjustly-overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A devious character with an unjustly-overinflated unjustly overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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-->[-Petulant [[YouFool fools]]. They'll never find my brilliantly-hidden unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]].-]
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-->[-Petulant [[YouFool fools]]. They'll never find my brilliantly-hidden brilliantly hidden unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]].-]
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I tried to make part of the page come off as more smug. Also, I think it’s kinda a stretch to say that all Smug Snakes are slimeballs.
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A {{slimeball}} with an unjustly-overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A {{slimeball}} devious character with an unjustly-overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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-->[-Petulant fools. They'll never find the unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]].-]
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-->[-Petulant fools. [[YouFool fools]]. They'll never find the my brilliantly-hidden unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]].-]
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A megalomaniac bastard.
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A megalomaniac bastard.{{slimeball}} with an unjustly-overinflated ego and delusions of grandeur.
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A slimeball with delusions of magnificence.
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A slimeball with delusions of magnificence.megalomaniac bastard.
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An arrogant character's ginormous ego usually ends up being their ultimate downfall.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]].-]
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An arrogant character's ginormous ego proves to be his ultimate downfall.
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An arrogant character's ginormous ego proves to be his usually ends up being their ultimate downfall.
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"Ultimate", not "ultimately"
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An arrogant character's ginormous ego proves to be their ultimately downfall.
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An arrogant character's ginormous ego proves to be their ultimately his ultimate downfall.
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An arrogant character whose ego ultimately proves to be their downfall.
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An arrogant character whose character's ginormous ego ultimately proves to be their downfall. ultimately downfall.
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An arrogant character whose ego ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant character whose ego ultimately proves to be his/her their downfall.
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who\'s/whose grammar
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An arrogant character who's ego ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant character who's whose ego ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, loathsome character whose skills are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, loathsome arrogant character whose skills are overshadowed by an oversized who's ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, unlikable character whose skills are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, unlikable loathsome character whose skills are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, unlikable character whose skills (if any) are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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An arrogant, unlikable character whose skills (if any) are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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Arrogant, unlikable characters whose skills (if any) are overshadowed by an oversized ego that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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Arrogant, unlikable character of varying degrees of competence whose own talents are overshadowed by an oversized ego which ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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Arrogant, unlikable character of varying degrees of competence characters whose own talents skills (if any) are overshadowed by an oversized ego which that ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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Arrogant, unlikable manipulator whose overconfidence is his downfall.
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Arrogant, unlikable manipulator character of varying degrees of competence whose overconfidence is his downfall.own talents are overshadowed by an oversized ego which ultimately proves to be his/her downfall.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[SmugSnake HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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Arrogant, unlikable manipulator.
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Arrogant, unlikable manipulator.manipulator whose overconfidence is his downfall.
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A [[{{Jerkass}} bastard]] with [[SmallNameBigEgo delusions]] of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A [[{{Jerkass}} bastard]] with [[TedBaxter delusions]] of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A [[{{Jerkass}} bastard]] with [[TedBaxter [[SmallNameBigEgo delusions]] of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A [[TedBaxter bastard]] with delusions of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A [[TedBaxter [[{{Jerkass}} bastard]] with delusions [[TedBaxter delusions]] of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A bastard with delusions of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A bastard [[TedBaxter bastard]] with delusions of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A bastard without the [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A bastard without the with delusions of [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A villain whose ego ultimately gets the better of them.
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A villain whose ego ultimately gets bastard without the better of them.[[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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I don\'t like Laconics that require you to read other tropes to understand them.
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A bastard without the [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].
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A bastard without villain whose ego ultimately gets the [[MagnificentBastard magnificence]].better of them.
