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I tried tweaking this, partially via using details from the main version. I also fixed a couple grammar mistakes.
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An important character has green eyes and red hair that is meant to make them stand out.
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-->[-With your long, flowing auburn hair and hazel eyes, visit unabridged version [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead HERE]]-]
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-->[-With your long, flowing auburn hair and hazel eyes, visit the unabridged version [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead HERE]]-]
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An important character has green eyes and red hair that is meant to make them stand out.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead HERE]]-]
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