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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]] that the universe they inhabit seems to revolve around (most often found in fan works).
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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]] that the universe they inhabit seems to revolve around (most often found in fan works).FanWorks).
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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]] most often found in fan works.
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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]] most that the universe they inhabit seems to revolve around (most often found in fan works.works).
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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]].
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An implausibly flawless character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]].author]] most often found in fan works.
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shortening.
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An implausibly flawless character, especially one that is an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in for the author]].
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An implausibly flawless character, especially one that is character and/or an [[WishFulfillment idealized stand-in stand-in]] for the [[AuthorAvatar author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character especially one that is an [[WishFulfillment idealized version of the author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character flawless character, especially one that is an [[WishFulfillment idealized version of stand-in for the author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character especially one that is an [[WishFullfillment idealized version of the author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character especially one that is an [[WishFullfillment [[WishFulfillment idealized version of the author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character.
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character.character especially one that is an [[WishFullfillment idealized version of the author]].
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character, in a story whose ending you have a 90% chance of correctly guessing.
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character, in a story whose ending you have a 90% chance of correctly guessing.character.
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character, in a story that you have a 90% chance of correctly guessing the ending of.
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character, in a story that whose ending you have a 90% chance of correctly guessing the ending of.guessing.
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Thought of something that makes a Mary Sue one, and something we can all agree on
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character.
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An implausibly flawless/competent idealized character.character, in a story that you have a 90% chance of correctly guessing the ending of.
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Character that is too flawless to live.
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Character that is too flawless to live.
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An implausibly perfect/competent idealized character.
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An implausibly perfect/competent flawless/competent idealized character.
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She's unbelieveably, ''utopically'' perfect.
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She's unbelieveably ''utopically'' perfect.
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She's unbelieveably unbelieveably, ''utopically'' perfect.
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Implausibly idealized character.
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent character.
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent idealized character.
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Let\'s keep it short.
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A character that is ''so'' good/perfect/competent/beautiful/etc. that this character breaks the audience's WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief and/or nullifies the dramatic tension of the story (since there's no plausible way they could fail).
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Previous laconic definition referred to EscapistCharacter. Problem is that EscapistCharacter is by definition a MarySue; they just happen to be a MarySue that [[AudienceSurrogate the audience identifies with]]. Ergo, previous definition was a tautology.
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Contrived and/or obnoxious EscapistCharacter.
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Contrived EscapistCharacter.
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Contrived and/or obnoxious EscapistCharacter.
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We don't need an "alternatively". Keep it brief and simple.
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent character. [[hottip:*: Alternatively: Laconic/EscapistCharacter [[Laconic/XMeetsY meets]] Laconic/AuthorAvatar.]]
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent character. [[hottip:*: Alternatively: Laconic/EscapistCharacter [[Laconic/XMeetsY meets]] Laconic/AuthorAvatar.]]
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D'oh.
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-->[-Visit the beautiful, perfect, flawless, super-cool, scene-stealing, unabridged version [[MarySue HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the beautiful, perfect, flawless, super-cool, scene-stealing, unabridged version [[MarySue HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent character. [[hottip:*: Alternatively: EscapistCharacter [[XMeetsY meets]] AuthorAvatar.]]
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Implausibly cool/competent/prominent character. [[hottip:*: Alternatively: EscapistCharacter [[XMeetsY Laconic/EscapistCharacter [[Laconic/XMeetsY meets]] AuthorAvatar.Laconic/AuthorAvatar.]]
