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Less redundant phrasing.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...Nothing will hurt you there.-]
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Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...-]
-->[-Visit unabridged version [[HappyPlace HERE]]. It is a happy place...-]
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Imaginary space where everything is well.
to:
Imaginary space inside your head where everything is well.
