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There can be only one Laconic. Do not add "OR" with a second Laconic The added laconic is also generalizing and marginalizing various aspects (and it's not meant to be a take on Christianity either), read the game's work and YMMV's page for info.
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DaddyIssues, The Real Sports Story! With special guest: Christian Guilt Complex!
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StarCrossedLovers embark on a pilgrimage to bring an end to the spiral of death that plagues their worlds and attempt to surpass their famous fathers by uncovering the corrupt religion and the SpaceWhale[[note]][[spoiler:and the SinisterMinister who lives inside it]][[/note]] that have been causing it.
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StarCrossedLovers embark on a pilgrimage to bring an end to the spiral of death that plagues their worlds and attempt to surpass their famous fathers by uncovering the corrupt religion CorruptChurch and the SpaceWhale[[note]][[spoiler:and the SinisterMinister who lives inside it]][[/note]] that have been causing it.
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StarCrossedLovers embark on a pilgrimage to bring an end to the spiral of death that plagues their worlds and attempt to surpass celebrity dads their famous fathers by killing a SpaceWhale uncovering the corrupt religion and the SpaceWhale[[note]][[spoiler:and the SinisterMinister who lives inside it]][[/note]] that have been causing it.
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Athlete with daddy issues gets teleported to another world to save it from a giant cetacean.
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Star-crossed children
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Whales are not crustaceans.
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