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A character's death, or specifically, how they die, is a Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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A character's death, or specifically, how they die, is a Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome.[[Laconic/MomentOfAwesome stands out as completely awesome]].
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A character performs a Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome, then immediately dies.
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A character performs character's death, or specifically, how they die, is a Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome, then immediately dies.Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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A character's Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome is also their death.
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A character's Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome is also their death.character performs a Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome, then immediately dies.
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Character dies doing something [[Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome amazing]].
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Character dies doing something [[Laconic/AwesomeMoments amazing]].
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Character dies doing something [[Laconic/AwesomeMoments [[Laconic/CrowningMomentOfAwesome amazing]].
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-->[-Click [[DyingMomentOfAwesome HERE]] to go out in a blaze of glory-]
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-->[-Click [[DyingMomentOfAwesome HERE]] to go out in a blaze of glory-]glory!-]
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Character dies doing something [[Laconic/AwesomeMoment amazing]].
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Character dies doing something [[Laconic/AwesomeMoment [[Laconic/AwesomeMoments amazing]].
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Character dies doing something amazing.
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Character dies doing something amazing.[[Laconic/AwesomeMoment amazing]].
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If you're gonna die, why not do it in ''STYLE!''
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-->[-Click [[DyingMomentOfAwesome HERE]] to go out in a blaze of glory-]
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-->[-Click [[DyingMomentOfAwesome HERE]] to go out in a blaze of glory-]glory-]
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