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-->'''Walter:''' ''[Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head]'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
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-->'''Walter:''' ''[Immediately (''Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head]'' head)'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys boy's room. When he can't find Danny Danny, he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Just before Walter lowers Danny down in the dumbwaiter to the basement [[spoiler: so Danny can sneak past the Zorgons and retrieve the game.]]
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* Just before Walter lowers Danny down in the dumbwaiter to the basement [[spoiler: so so, Danny can sneak past the Zorgons and retrieve the game.]]
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace. Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace. Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms harm's way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in thebricked up bricked-up fireplace. Not only that, but Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the
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* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace.
** Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
** Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
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* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace.
**fireplace. Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]]]
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace.
** Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
* When the meteor shower starts falling on the house, Walter shows his first sign of trying to protect Danny by yelling for his brother to join him for cover in the bricked up fireplace.
** Not only that, Danny also makes sure to grab their hamster's cage and bring it in with him; then both brothers press their hands over the top of the cage as if to try and shield their pet from harm.
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-->'''Walter:''' ''(Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head)'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
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-->'''Walter:''' ''(Immediately ''[Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head)'' head]'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a [[AdultFear panic]] and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a [[AdultFear panic]] panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Even from the beginning, the Astronaut showed himself to be in Danny's corner when he arrives and demands who spun him.
-->'''Walter:''' ''(Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head)'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
'''Astronaut:''' [[WhatTheHellHero Don't be so quick to sell out your brother]]; he's the only one you've got.
-->'''Walter:''' ''(Immediately gesturing to Danny with his head)'' [[TheStoolPigeon He did.]]\\
'''Astronaut:''' [[WhatTheHellHero Don't be so quick to sell out your brother]]; he's the only one you've got.
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house.
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house.house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
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* It happens so fast that many won't catch it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]house.
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic [[AdultFear panic]] and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes wishes, the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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-->'''Walter:''' Nothings gonna happen to you, okay?\\
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-->'''Walter:''' Nothings Nothing's gonna happen to you, okay?\\
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'''Astronaut:''' Yeah, it worked, congratulations! We're stuck in space now forever!
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'''Astronaut:''' Yeah, it worked, congratulations! We're stuck in space now forever! forever!\\
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--> '''Walter''': The card worked...
--> '''Astronaut''': Yeah it worked, congratulations were stuck in space now forever!
--> '''Danny''': Leave him alone.
--> '''Astronaut''': Yeah it worked, congratulations were stuck in space now forever!
--> '''Danny''': Leave him alone.
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--> '''Astronaut''': Yeah
'''Astronaut:''' Yeah, it worked,
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--> '''Walter''': Nothings gonna happen to yeh, okay?
--> '''Danny''': Yeah.
--> '''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
--> '''Danny''': Yeah.
--> '''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
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--> '''Danny''': Yeah.
--> '''Walter''':
'''Danny:''' Yeah.\\
'''Walter:''' Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I
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** Adding on to this, [[spoiler:just the happiness the astronaut has when able to have his brother back.]]
* It happens so fast that many wont catch it. But just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
* It happens so fast that many wont catch it. But just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
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** Adding on to this, [[spoiler:just the happiness the astronaut has when able to have he gets his brother back.]]
* It happens so fast that manywont won't catch it. But it, but just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
* It happens so fast that many
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** Adding on to this, [[spoiler:just the happiness the astronaut has when able to have his brother back.]]
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--> ''''Walter''': Nothings gonna happen to yeh, okay?
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--> ''''Walter''': '''Walter''': Nothings gonna happen to yeh, okay?
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--> ''''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
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--> ''''Walter''': '''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
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--> ''''Walter''': The card worked...
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--> ''''Walter''': '''Walter''': The card worked...
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter along. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter along.alone. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
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* Just before Walter lowers Danny down in the dumbwaiter to the basement [[spoiler: so Danny can sneak past the Zorgons and retrieve the game.]]
--> ''''Walter''': Nothings gonna happen to yeh, okay?
--> '''Danny''': Yeah.
--> ''''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
--> ''''Walter''': Nothings gonna happen to yeh, okay?
--> '''Danny''': Yeah.
--> ''''Walter''': Cause I'm your brother, and that's what being a brother means. I may not let anything ever happen to you.
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* Once Walter obtains a card that grants his wishes the "shooting star" card. The astronaut goes into a panic and looks for Danny in the boys room. When he can't find Danny he starts to snap at Walter. Only for Danny to come out from under his bed and demand that the man leave Walter along. This is heartwarming because moments before Danny hid under his bed because the two boys had just been fighting (again).
--> ''''Walter''': The card worked...
--> '''Astronaut''': Yeah it worked, congratulations were stuck in space now forever!
--> '''Danny''': Leave him alone.
--> ''''Walter''': The card worked...
--> '''Astronaut''': Yeah it worked, congratulations were stuck in space now forever!
--> '''Danny''': Leave him alone.
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* [[spoiler:"I wish the astronaut had his brother back."]]
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* [[spoiler:"I wish the astronaut had his brother back."]]"]]
* It happens so fast that many wont catch it. But just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
* It happens so fast that many wont catch it. But just as [[spoiler: the Zathura black hole starts eating up the house, Lisa is the first sucked up. She's the first simply because she grabbed Walter and put herself in harms way making certain he didn't get sucked in.]]
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[[spoiler:"I wish the astronaut had his brother back."]]
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* [[spoiler:"I wish the astronaut had his brother back."]]
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[[spoiler:"Give the astronaut his brother back."]]
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