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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. With that in mind, it was really kind of Chandresh to invite Barris to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners (even if it was mainly to get Barris' help designing the circus.) The book states that Barris enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. With that in mind, it was really kind of Chandresh to invite Barris to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners (even if it was mainly to get Barris' help designing the circus.) The book states that Barris enjoyed it the event so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. With that in mind, it was really kind of Chandresh to invite Barris to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. With that in mind, it was really kind of Chandresh to invite Barris to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. Dinners (even if it was mainly to get Barris' help designing the circus.) The book states that Barris enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. With that in mind, it was really kind of Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to invite Barris to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoted it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoted enjoyed it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* When [[spoiler:Marcus and Celia find each other, after they end up in an alternate plane of existence.]]
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* When [[spoiler:Marcus and Celia find each other, after they end up in an alternate plane of existence.]]]]
* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoted it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Mr. Barris, the architect, is introduced as a timid and introverted man who rarely gets invited to parties. Chandresh really [[ThrowTheDogABone threw him a bone]] by inviting him to one of his opulent Midnight Dinners. The book states that Barris enjoted it so much that he decided to get out and meet people more often.
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* Poppet and Bailey's interactions in general are very sweet.
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* Poppet and Bailey's interactions in general are very sweet.sweet.
* When Bailey is trying to catch up with the circus and is taken in by a group of revers. They don't know him, but they welcome him into the group of TrueCompanions.
* When [[spoiler:Marcus and Celia find each other, after they end up in an alternate plane of existence.]]
* When Bailey is trying to catch up with the circus and is taken in by a group of revers. They don't know him, but they welcome him into the group of TrueCompanions.
* When [[spoiler:Marcus and Celia find each other, after they end up in an alternate plane of existence.]]
