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** Megan and crew finally recognize that their little spike [[spoiler: has become king of the dragons.]]
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** Megan and crew finally recognize that their little spike Spike [[spoiler: has become king of the dragons.]]
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* Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'm so…happy!"
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* Any of Megan's reunions with people from the old days.
** Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'mso…happy!"so…happy!"
** Megan's graceful greeting to the princess ponies.
** Megan and crew finally recognize that their little spike [[spoiler: has become king of the dragons.]]
** Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler:entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
** Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'm
** Megan's graceful greeting to the princess ponies.
** Megan and crew finally recognize that their little spike [[spoiler: has become king of the dragons.]]
** Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler:entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
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* Luna and Celestia have fond memories of watching ''Mr. Roger's Neighborhood'' as fillies.
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* Thanks to the presence of the richards family, everyone got a happier ending to the Grand Galloping Gala. AJ got her endorsement, Rainbow got some fun bonding time with Spike, Fluttershy got a date with Big Mac (preventing her meltdown), Pinkie got to play with the kids, Twilight got some fun time with Celestia and Luna, and the princesses got a way to connect with their people. True, Rarity still went away disappointed with Blueblood, but for much more adult reasons. All in all, things went far better overall than the old universe.
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* Thanks to the presence of the richards Richards family, everyone got a happier ending to the Grand Galloping Gala. AJ got her endorsement, Rainbow got some fun bonding time with Spike, Fluttershy got a date with Big Mac (preventing her meltdown), Pinkie got to play with the kids, Twilight got some fun time with Celestia and Luna, and the princesses got a way to connect with their people. True, Rarity still went away disappointed with Blueblood, but for much more adult reasons. All in all, things went far better overall than the old universe.
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* Luna and Celestia both assure Megan that even though the dangers are past, she is still welcome to help in Equestria however she sees fit.
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* Thanks to the presence of the richards family, everyone got a happier ending to the Grand Galloping Gala. AJ got her endorsement, Rainbow got some fun bonding time with Spike, Fluttershy got a date with Big Mac (preventing her meltdown), Pinkie got to play with the kids, Twilight got some fun time with Celestia and Luna, and the princesses got a way to connect with their people. True, Rarity still went away disappointed with Blueblood, but for much more adult reasons. All in all, things went far better overall than the old universe.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[Series/DoctorWho A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane. They also find Ace, Captain Jack Harkness, and most importantly, [[spoiler: Susan Foremann, AKA, the Doctor's Granddaughter]].
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[Series/DoctorWho A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane. They also find Ace, Captain Jack Harkness, and most importantly, [[spoiler: Susan Foremann, Foreman, AKA, the Doctor's Granddaughter]].
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[Series/DoctorWho A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane. They also find Ace, Captain Jack Harkness, and most importantly, [[spoiler: Susan Foremann, AKA, the Doctor's Granddaughter]].
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* Scootaloo invites Danielle and Michelle to join the CMC.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their old friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for almost 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor, the original Twilight.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their old friends (like Surprise and Surprise, Heart Throb), Throb, etc.), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for almost 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor, the original Twilight.Twilight, thanking her for all that she's done for Equestria.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[Series/DoctorWho A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.Jane.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for almost 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their old friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for almost 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor ancestor, the original Twilight.
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** The next time Applejack and Megan talk, Megan assures her that the first Applejack would be proud to call her family.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? {{DoctorWho: A certain blue box.}} All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? {{DoctorWho: [[Series/DoctorWho A certain blue box.}} ]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[DoctorWho: A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
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* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[DoctorWho: {{DoctorWho: A certain blue box.]] }} All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
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** Celestia promising Applejack she'll bring the tape to the next Apple family reunion.
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** Celestia promising Applejack she'll bring the tape to the next Apple family reunion.reunion.
* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[DoctorWho: A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
* In a side story, Dinky and Sparkler have convinced the CMC to help them find a few friends of their father using his time machine. What time machine? [[DoctorWho: A certain blue box.]] All because he's missing friends like the Brigadier and Sarah Jane.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for almost 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
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** Another one is a young Luna comforting Blueblood I over [[spoiler: Princess Platinum being permanently frozen]].
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
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** Another one is a young Luna comforting Blueblood I over [[spoiler: Princess [[spoiler:Princess Platinum being permanently frozen]].
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day[[spoiler: entering [[spoiler:entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
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* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.Twilight.
* The video of Megan and her friends at the original Applejack's birthday party. The Apple siblings view it, and are moved to tears.
** Celestia promising Applejack she'll bring the tape to the next Apple family reunion.
* The video of Megan and her friends at the original Applejack's birthday party. The Apple siblings view it, and are moved to tears.
** Celestia promising Applejack she'll bring the tape to the next Apple family reunion.
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* Big Mac and Fluttershy's picnic, and them agreeing to have another one.
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* Big Mac and Fluttershy's picnic, and them agreeing to have another one.one.
* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
* Megan, Danny, and Molly seeing the statues of their friends (like Surprise and Heart Throb), thanking them for everything and misses them. Which doubles as a TearJerker, since they only wish they could tell them in person (or pony) and they've been dead for 1,500 years. Even Twilight Sparkle spoke to the statue of her ancestor Twilight.
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* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadence, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.
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* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadence, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.friends.
** Her reaction to finding out they're getting married, once the humor wears off.
* Megan's flashback to the original Grand Galloping Gala, which was little more than a "glorified picnic" between her, Danny, Molly, and their friends.
* Big Mac and Fluttershy's picnic, and them agreeing to have another one.
** Her reaction to finding out they're getting married, once the humor wears off.
* Megan's flashback to the original Grand Galloping Gala, which was little more than a "glorified picnic" between her, Danny, Molly, and their friends.
* Big Mac and Fluttershy's picnic, and them agreeing to have another one.
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* Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'm so..happy!"
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* Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'm so..happy!"so…happy!"
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* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadance, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.
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* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadance, Cadence, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.
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--> ''"Auntie!"''''"Auntie!"''
* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadance, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.
* Twilight's reunion with Shining Armor and Cadance, and her joy at getting to introduce them to her friends.
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* Megan and Crew finally reunited with Luna and Celestia. To quote directly from Celestia, "I'm so..happy!"
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* The flashback to Cadance's "birth"; specifically how it was the Heart's reaction to Celestia's loneliness following Luna's banishment.
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* The flashback to Cadance's "birth"; specifically how it was the Heart's reaction to Celestia's loneliness following Luna's banishment.banishment.
--> ''"Auntie!"''
--> ''"Auntie!"''
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* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
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* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]]]
* Morning Glory's family [[spoiler: after her discording is reversed]] thanking Trixie for her kindness towards Morning Glory earlier.
* The flashback to Cadance's "birth"; specifically how it was the Heart's reaction to Celestia's loneliness following Luna's banishment.
* Morning Glory's family [[spoiler: after her discording is reversed]] thanking Trixie for her kindness towards Morning Glory earlier.
* The flashback to Cadance's "birth"; specifically how it was the Heart's reaction to Celestia's loneliness following Luna's banishment.
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** Another one is a young Luna comforting Blueblood I over [[spoiler: Princess Platinum being permanently frozen]].
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* Even though Blueblood has been shown to be a self-important jerkass in the show, his blushing while Megan hugs his neck is all kinds of adorable.
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* Even though Blueblood has been shown to be a self-important jerkass [[PrinceCharmless self-important]] {{Jerkass}} in the show, his blushing while Megan hugs his neck is all kinds of adorable.
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* A big general one: Anybody who has seen the original ''MyLittlePony'' cartoon knows the horrors the ponies had to deal with. Megan decided that enough was enough, and poured her heart and soul into founding Equestria, so that her friends would know peace.
* Plenty of the flashback moments. One good one would be Rosedust agreeing to join the Equestrian Alliance, after Megan has helped deliver Morning Glory's son Blazing Day.
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
* Plenty of the flashback moments. One good one would be Rosedust agreeing to join the Equestrian Alliance, after Megan has helped deliver Morning Glory's son Blazing Day.
* Megan, Sparkling Dawn, and Blazing Day [[spoiler: entering Morning Glory's mind with Twilight Sparkle's help to break her discording, and Morning Glory catching up with her family afterwards.]]
