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* Finn acting as a true Domo to the people of Terra Vapos. Yes, the kid's egotistical and selfish but when the time calls for it, he's a bonafide hero through and through.
* Whenever we see Finn and Junko's friendship shine through such as in "Tranquility Now" when Finn, after accidentally losing his best buddy's prized knuckle-busters, he clearly braved some dangerous odds offscreen to get them back.
* Whenever we see Finn and Junko's friendship shine through such as in "Tranquility Now" when Finn, after accidentally losing his best buddy's prized knuckle-busters, he clearly braved some dangerous odds offscreen to get them back.
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* The Storm Hawks standing together as a team in defiance of the Sky Council's ruling at the end of "Age of Heroes", and the fact that [[HonoraryTrueCompanion Starling]] is standing right there with them.
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* The Storm Hawks standing together as a team in defiance of the Sky Council's ruling at the end of "Age of Heroes", and the fact that [[HonoraryTrueCompanion Starling]] is standing right there with them. The head of the council does, however, support them in secret.
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* Starling gets included in the head count.
-->'''Aerrow:''' We'll be gone before Ravess even knows she was hit by the [[TitleDrop Storm Hawks Seven]].\\
-->'''Aerrow:''' We'll be gone before Ravess even knows she was hit by the [[TitleDrop Storm Hawks Seven]].\\
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* "Storm Hawks Seven":
** Starling gets included in the head count.
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** Starling gets included in the head count.
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*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[HoldingHands with their hands clasped together.]] ]]
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*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[HoldingHands with their hands clasped together.]] ]]]]
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* The Storm Hawks standing together as a team in defiance of the Sky Council's ruling at the end of "Age of Heroes", and the fact that Starling [[HonoraryTrueCompanion Starling]] is standing right there with them.
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-->'''Finn:''' "So, I was wondering... Since you're a girl and all... Do you wanna braid each other's hair, or something?"
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-->'''Finn:''' "So, So, I was wondering... Since you're a girl and all... Do you wanna braid each other's hair, or something?"something?
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--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: "If we gotta go down, at least we're going down together."]]
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--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: "If If we gotta go down, at least we're going down together."]]]]
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--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: "If we gotta go down, at least we're going down together."]]
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-->"So, I was wondering... Since you're a girl and all... Do you wanna braid each other's hair, or something?"
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* Any time when Aerrow shows concern for Piper, or does something thoughtful for her--whether you see it as a case of platonic friendship or [[ImpliedLoveInterest subtle hints of something more]], these two have quite a few moments together. Notable examples include:
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* Any time when Aerrow shows concern for Piper, or does something thoughtful for her--whether her -- whether you see it as a case of platonic friendship or [[ImpliedLoveInterest subtle hints of something more]], these two have quite a few moments together. Notable examples include:
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--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: If we're going down, at least we're going together.]]
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--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: If we're going "If we gotta go down, at least we're going together.]]"]]
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* The Storm Hawks standing together as a team in defiance of the Sky Council's ruling at the end of "Age of Heroes", and the fact that Starling is standing right there with them.
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** Starling's reaction is what sells it. She stays there a moment, absorbing what he just said, before looking up with a grin and following them.
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** Starling's reaction is what really sells it.the moment. She stays there a moment, absorbing what he just said, before looking up with a grin and following them.
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** In "Best Friends Forever", the team is caught in a storm and everyone but Piper makes it back to the Condor safely. Aerrow insists on waiting a little longer before closing the ship hatch, and even tries venturing out to look for her, only to get blown back inside.
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*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[ShipTease with their hands clasped together.]] ]]
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*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[ShipTease [[HoldingHands with their hands clasped together.]] ]]
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* The ending of "Five Days". Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.
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* The ending of "Five Days". Days".
** In short: Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve theMending Nil Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.Cyclonis.
** In more detail: Aerrow and Piper worry what she will use the Nil Crystal for; Aerrow says he hopes they never find out, and Cyclonis' ominous theme plays as it switches to her returning to her room. Then, it goes quiet as she stands over the broken crystal, looking at it with genuine heartbreak. Carefully, tenderly, she begins to repair the crystal, a NostalgicMusicBox playing as the pieces come together. Then, it's fixed, and she looks upon the image with fond eyes, smiling warmly, looking at her young self and then her grandmother, then softly closes her eyes.
** In short: Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the
** In more detail: Aerrow and Piper worry what she will use the Nil Crystal for; Aerrow says he hopes they never find out, and Cyclonis' ominous theme plays as it switches to her returning to her room. Then, it goes quiet as she stands over the broken crystal, looking at it with genuine heartbreak. Carefully, tenderly, she begins to repair the crystal, a NostalgicMusicBox playing as the pieces come together. Then, it's fixed, and she looks upon the image with fond eyes, smiling warmly, looking at her young self and then her grandmother, then softly closes her eyes.
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-->"So, I was thinking... since wondering... Since you're a girl and all... did Do you want to wanna braid each other's hair, or something?"
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** Piper embracing Aerrow in a [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Hug]] when he manages to land his sabotaged Skimmer safely in "Second Chances."
** Aerrow assuring Piper he trusts her and her abilities despite her miscalculating the path he was supposed to go to destroy the Exopod in the Exosphere, which could have effectively cost his life in the process.
** Aerrow assuring Piper he trusts her and her abilities despite her miscalculating the path he was supposed to go to destroy the Exopod in the Exosphere, which could have effectively cost his life in the process.
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** Piper embracing Aerrow in a [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Hug]] when he manages to land his sabotaged Skimmer safely escape from a falling carrier ship in "Second Chances."
** Aerrow assuring Piper he trusts her and her abilities despite her miscalculating the path he was supposed to go to destroy the Exopod in the Exosphere, which could have effectively cost his life in theprocess.process in "Stratosphere".
** After Piper's [[spoiler: breather is taken by Domiwick and the Condor is sinking in the lake of Terra Aquanos, Aerrow gives her his breather so her safety would be guaranteed]] in "Dark Waters".
*** Piper's reaction when [[spoiler: Aerrow comes back alive on top of a giant whale monster in a Little Mermaid fashion just adds bonus points]].
** Aerrow assuring Piper he trusts her and her abilities despite her miscalculating the path he was supposed to go to destroy the Exopod in the Exosphere, which could have effectively cost his life in the
** After Piper's [[spoiler: breather is taken by Domiwick and the Condor is sinking in the lake of Terra Aquanos, Aerrow gives her his breather so her safety would be guaranteed]] in "Dark Waters".
*** Piper's reaction when [[spoiler: Aerrow comes back alive on top of a giant whale monster in a Little Mermaid fashion just adds bonus points]].
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* The ending of "Five Days".
** To elaborate, Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.
** To elaborate, Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.
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* Starling gets included in the head count.
-->'''Aerrow:''' We'll be gone before Ravess even knows she was hit by the [[TitleDrop Storm Hawks Seven]].\\
'''Starling:''' Um, there are only six of you.\\
'''Aerrow:''' ''[smiles]'' Not today.
** Starling's reaction is what sells it. She stays there a moment, absorbing what he just said, before looking up with a grin and following them.
** The fact that they prepared a room for her, complete with personal touches.
* The ending of "FiveDays".
** To elaborate,Days". Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.
-->'''Aerrow:''' We'll be gone before Ravess even knows she was hit by the [[TitleDrop Storm Hawks Seven]].\\
'''Starling:''' Um, there are only six of you.\\
'''Aerrow:''' ''[smiles]'' Not today.
** Starling's reaction is what sells it. She stays there a moment, absorbing what he just said, before looking up with a grin and following them.
** The fact that they prepared a room for her, complete with personal touches.
* The ending of "Five
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* The end of "Absolute Power", where Starling puts the retrieved shield of her squadron under their memorial flag, then stands there a moment smiling before flying off.
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** To elaborate, Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.
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** To elaborate, Master Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cyclonis.Cyclonis.
* Any time when Aerrow shows concern for Piper, or does something thoughtful for her--whether you see it as a case of platonic friendship or [[ImpliedLoveInterest subtle hints of something more]], these two have quite a few moments together. Notable examples include:
** In "Storm Warning," when Piper pulls a TenMinuteRetirement out of frustration with her less-disciplined teammates, Aerrow's the first to get worried about her, and [[spoiler: probably would have taken off looking for her if the Cyclonians hadn't attacked.]]
** In "The Forbidden City," Aerrow saving a rare crystal that he found in the inner keep of the Forbidden City for Piper after the treasure chamber collapses.
** Piper embracing Aerrow in a [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Hug]] when he manages to land his sabotaged Skimmer safely in "Second Chances."
** When Piper's [[spoiler: [[SuperEmpowering Binding magic]] ]] is revealed to have a downside in "Cyclonia Rising, part 1", Aerrow tries to convince her not to use it, even though it [[spoiler: turns him into a superhuman warrior]].
** The most implicit moment, however, comes in "Cyclonia Rising, part 2." [[spoiler: Both Aerrow and Piper are hanging from a precarious ledge, with Cyclonis and Dark Ace moving in for the kill. Piper, weakened by her inexperienced use of the Binding, whispers an apology to Aerrow before starting to fall. But Aerrow grabs her at the last second, and tells her gently:]]
--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: If we're going down, at least we're going together.]]
*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[ShipTease with their hands clasped together.]] ]]
* Any time when Aerrow shows concern for Piper, or does something thoughtful for her--whether you see it as a case of platonic friendship or [[ImpliedLoveInterest subtle hints of something more]], these two have quite a few moments together. Notable examples include:
** In "Storm Warning," when Piper pulls a TenMinuteRetirement out of frustration with her less-disciplined teammates, Aerrow's the first to get worried about her, and [[spoiler: probably would have taken off looking for her if the Cyclonians hadn't attacked.]]
** In "The Forbidden City," Aerrow saving a rare crystal that he found in the inner keep of the Forbidden City for Piper after the treasure chamber collapses.
** Piper embracing Aerrow in a [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Hug]] when he manages to land his sabotaged Skimmer safely in "Second Chances."
** When Piper's [[spoiler: [[SuperEmpowering Binding magic]] ]] is revealed to have a downside in "Cyclonia Rising, part 1", Aerrow tries to convince her not to use it, even though it [[spoiler: turns him into a superhuman warrior]].
** The most implicit moment, however, comes in "Cyclonia Rising, part 2." [[spoiler: Both Aerrow and Piper are hanging from a precarious ledge, with Cyclonis and Dark Ace moving in for the kill. Piper, weakened by her inexperienced use of the Binding, whispers an apology to Aerrow before starting to fall. But Aerrow grabs her at the last second, and tells her gently:]]
--->'''Aerrow:''' [[spoiler: If we're going down, at least we're going together.]]
*** [[spoiler: For bonus points, when their HeroicSecondWind kicks in, they both rise into the air [[ShipTease with their hands clasped together.]] ]]
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** To elaborate, Master Cycloness went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cycloness and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cycloness.
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** To elaborate, Master Cycloness Cyclonis went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cycloness young!Cyclonis and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cycloness.Cyclonis.
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* The ending of "Five Days".Days".
**To elaborate, Master Cycloness went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cycloness and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cycloness.
**To elaborate, Master Cycloness went through all the trouble of raiding the Condor, on her own, to retrieve the Mending Crystal, in order to fix another crystal that projected an image of a young!Cycloness and her Grandmother, the previous Master Cycloness.
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* The ending of "Five Days".
-->"So, I was thinking... since you're a girl and all... did you want to braid each other's hair, or something?"
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