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misuse of renamed trope (Mundane Made Awesome), and I think I have the grammar fixed enough to not make people want to gouge out their eyes. :P
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--> [[spoiler:[=JazzSong=] buried her nose into [=StarGleams=] warm fur. "We've gone to far!" we've been through too much together for it all to end here now! [=GleameStar=]… I LOVE YOU!" [=LakePool=] and [=RedDSpalsh=] exchanged a [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome lesbian glance]], than began to quietly pad toards ther ding savoir. "DON'T TOUCH HER" [=JazStar=] spat, tears flowing like waterfalls down her checks. Then more quietly, she whispered, "Don't...…]]
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--> [[spoiler:[=JazzSong=] buried her nose into [=StarGleams=] warm fur. "We've gone to far!" we've been through too much together for it all to end here now! [=GleameStar=]… I LOVE YOU!" [=LakePool=] and [=RedDSpalsh=] exchanged a [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome lesbian glance]], glance, than began to quietly pad toards ther towards their ding savoir. "DON'T TOUCH HER" [=JazStar=] spat, tears flowing like waterfalls down her checks. Then more quietly, she whispered, "Don't...…]]
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Changed line(s) 2 (click to see context) from:
--> [[spoiler:[=JazzSong=] buried her nose into [=StarGleams=] warm fur. "We've gone to far!" we've been through too much together for it all to end here now! [=GleameStar=]… I LOVE YOU!" [=LakePool=] and [=RedDSpalsh=] exchanged a lesbian glance, than began to quietly pad toards ther ding savoir. "DON'T TOUCH HER" [=JazStar=] spat, tears flowing like waterfalls down her checks. Then more quietly, she whispered, "Don't...…]]
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--> [[spoiler:[=JazzSong=] buried her nose into [=StarGleams=] warm fur. "We've gone to far!" we've been through too much together for it all to end here now! [=GleameStar=]… I LOVE YOU!" [=LakePool=] and [=RedDSpalsh=] exchanged a [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome lesbian glance, glance]], than began to quietly pad toards ther ding savoir. "DON'T TOUCH HER" [=JazStar=] spat, tears flowing like waterfalls down her checks. Then more quietly, she whispered, "Don't...…]]
