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-->'''Aunt Debra:''' Knock that little bitch, bust him open!
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--> "''I know.'' Let's work."
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting to box again through Atom. Max gets in on it by seeing a glimpse of what his father was in his prime.
* During the part of the match where [[spoiler:Charlie is forced to control Atom via its shadow function due to its damage denying vocal commands]], Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on Charlie's movements as if Charlie himself was in the ring.]]
* During the part of the match where [[spoiler:Charlie is forced to control Atom via its shadow function due to its damage denying vocal commands]], Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on Charlie's movements as if Charlie himself was in the ring.]]
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's Zeus' ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting to box again through Atom. Max gets in on it by seeing a glimpse of what his father was in his prime.
* During the part of the match where[[spoiler:Charlie Charlie is forced to control Atom via its shadow function due to its damage denying vocal commands]], commands, Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on Charlie's movements as if Charlie himself was in the ring.]]
* During the part of the match where
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* During the part of the match where [[spoiler:Charlie is using Atom's Shadowing feature to control his movements]], Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on his father fighting like it was him in the ring.]]
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* During the part of the match where [[spoiler:Charlie is using Atom's Shadowing feature forced to control his movements]], Atom via its shadow function due to its damage denying vocal commands]], Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on his father fighting like it Charlie's movements as if Charlie himself was him in the ring.]]
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-->'''Max:''' People's Champion?...Sounds pretty good to me.
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-->'''Max:''' People's Champion?... Sounds pretty good to me.
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* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "''I know.'' Let's work."
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* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? reply?
--> "''I know.'' Let's work."
--> "''I know.'' Let's work."
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-->'''Aunt Debra:''' Knock that little bitch, bust him open!
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* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion."
* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"
* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"
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* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion."
Champion", and Max giving his opinion on this.
-->'''Max:''' People's Champion?...Sounds pretty good to me.
* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply?"Charlie. ''I "''I know.''"'' Let's work."
-->'''Max:''' People's Champion?...Sounds pretty good to me.
* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply?
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* During the part of the match where [[spoiler:Charlie is using Atom's Shadowing feature to control his movements]], Max doesn't focus on the ring. [[spoiler: He's focusing on his father fighting like it was him in the ring.]]
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting box again through Atom. Max gets in on it by seeing a glimpse of what his father was in his prime.
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting to box again through Atom. Max gets in on it by seeing a glimpse of what his father was in his prime.prime.
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting box again through Atom.
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* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting box again through Atom. Max gets in on it by seeing a glimpse of what his father was in his prime.
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* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.
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* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, a [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments funny moment]], as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.
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* Charlie hugging Max after he almost falls down the dump slide.
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* Charlie hugging Max after he almost falls down the dump slide.slide.
* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting box again through Atom.
* Charlie when he's in the middle of whooping Zeus's ass. You can tell the guy's having the time of his life and loving every minute of getting box again through Atom.
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* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"
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* An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"''"
* Charlie hugging Max after he almost falls down the dump slide.
* Charlie hugging Max after he almost falls down the dump slide.
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* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion."
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* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion.""
*An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"
*An early one- Charlie pleads with Max not to go for a double or nothing round with Metro, saying he really needs every tiny bit of money he can get. Max's reply? "Charlie. ''I know.''"
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** Turns into a CMOF when a subsequent cut to their reaction during a time when Atom had the upper hand shows Aunt Debra cursing like a sailor at Zeus.
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* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.
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* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.street.
* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion."
* Atom being given the title of "The People's Champion."
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* The IronicEcho of "Your secret's safe with me."
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* The IronicEcho of "Your secret's safe with me.""
* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.
* Max going out for a run with Atom in the evening. Doubles as CrowningMomentOfFunny, as Atom (Technically Max, as Atom's in Shadow Mode during the scene) accidentally causes minor damage on the street.
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* Seeing not only Bailey showing up at the live match, but also Aunt Debra and Uncle Marvin to cheer Charlie, Max, and Atom on.
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* Seeing not only Bailey showing up at the live match, but also Aunt Debra and Uncle Marvin to cheer Charlie, Max, and Atom on.on.
* The IronicEcho of "Your secret's safe with me."
* The IronicEcho of "Your secret's safe with me."
