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* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him to sleep with a prostitute (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time; he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
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* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him a prostitute to sleep with a prostitute him (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time; he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
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* Rocky and Rusty have an argument, later that night she comes home with a date but Rocky has a bad headache caused by his condition. With barely any hesitation she kicks her date out and drops everything to comfort her son.
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* Rocky and Rusty have an argument, argument; later that night night, she comes home with a date date, but Rocky has a bad headache caused by his condition. With barely any hesitation hesitation, she kicks her date out and drops everything to comfort her son.
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* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him to sleep with a prostitute (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, while they don't sleep together, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time, he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer, and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
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* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him to sleep with a prostitute (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, while they don't sleep together, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time, time; he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer, photographer and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
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Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
* Rocky and Rusty have an argument, later that night she comes home with a date but Rocky is a bad headache caused by his condition. With barely any hesitation she kicks her date out and drops everything to comfort her son.
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* Rocky and Rusty have an argument, later that night she comes home with a date but Rocky is has a bad headache caused by his condition. With barely any hesitation she kicks her date out and drops everything to comfort her son.
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* On the first day of school, Rocky's classmates happily greet a pretty female student but don't even look at Rocky when he's introduced. Once he cracks a joke to break the ice, they warm up to him almost right away.
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* On the first day of school, Rocky's classmates happily greet a pretty female student but don't even look at Rocky when he's introduced. Once he cracks a joke to break the ice, they warm up to him almost right away.away.
* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him to sleep with a prostitute (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, while they don't sleep together, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time, he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer, and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
* After Rusty, in a misguided attempt to help Rocky, pays for him to sleep with a prostitute (the two just talk through the night, and after the prostitute gets over the initial shock, while they don't sleep together, she and Rocky get along), Rocky storms out of the house the next morning. He goes to visit Gar, and bitterly asks why Gar keeps coming back to Rusty even though she always drives him crazy. Gar tells the story of when he went out with Rusty for the first time, he took her and Rocky to get their picture taken by a professional photographer, and tells Rocky he never saw any woman that was as pretty as Rusty was when she was looking at Rocky getting his picture taken.
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** Speaking despite his strong stutter to tell Rocky he's proud of him at his graduation.
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** Speaking despite his strong stutter to tell Telling Rocky he's proud of him at his graduation.graduation, also revealing the reason he doesn't speak is because he has a strong stutter.
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** Using his scary appearance to frighten off some kids mocking Rocky on his first day at school.
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** Using his scary intimidating appearance to frighten off some kids mocking Rocky on his first day at school.
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* Rocky and Rusty have an argument, later that night she comes home with a date but Rocky is a bad headache caused by his condition. With barely any hesitation she kicks her date out and drops everything to comfort her son.
* Bulldozer looks like a BadassBiker but he gets a few heartwarming moments:
** Using his scary appearance to frighten off some kids mocking Rocky on his first day at school.
** Sneaking a puppy into Rocky's bedroom after Rusty wouldn't let him get a dog.
** Speaking despite his strong stutter to tell Rocky he's proud of him at his graduation.
* On the first day of school, Rocky's classmates happily greet a pretty female student but don't even look at Rocky when he's introduced. Once he cracks a joke to break the ice, they warm up to him almost right away.
* Bulldozer looks like a BadassBiker but he gets a few heartwarming moments:
** Using his scary appearance to frighten off some kids mocking Rocky on his first day at school.
** Sneaking a puppy into Rocky's bedroom after Rusty wouldn't let him get a dog.
** Speaking despite his strong stutter to tell Rocky he's proud of him at his graduation.
* On the first day of school, Rocky's classmates happily greet a pretty female student but don't even look at Rocky when he's introduced. Once he cracks a joke to break the ice, they warm up to him almost right away.
