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* Gertie's face when she sees [[spoiler: her dad made it back in time for the school performance]]
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* Gertie's face when she sees [[spoiler: her dad made it back in time for the school performance]]performance.
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* A few days later after the heated argument, both Ollie and Gertie apologize for their hurtful words.
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* A few days later after the heated argument, both Ollie and Gertie apologize to each other for their hurtful words.words: Gertie's YouShouldHaveDiedInstead words and Ollie's WhamLine.
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* A few days later after the heated argument, both Ollie and Gertie apologize for their hurtful words.
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* Ollie placing a photo of Gertrude in baby Gertie's mobile.
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* Ollie promising to be a better dad to baby Gertie
* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-up whores".
* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-up whores".
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* Ollie promising to be a better dad to baby Gertie
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* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-upwhores".whores".
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* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-up
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* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-up whores".
* It's oddly heartwarming to see Ollie comfort a sobbing, pregnant Gertrude (who's upset that she'll be "fat" among a bunch of beautiful women at a business party), by saying that the women will be "coked-up whores".
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* Gertie's face when she sees [[spoiler: her dad made it back in time for the school performance]]
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* Gertie's face when she sees [[spoiler: her dad made it back in time for the school performance]]performance]]
* Ollie promising to be a better dad to baby Gertie
* Ollie promising to be a better dad to baby Gertie
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* Gertie's face when she sees [[spoiler: her dad made it back in time for the school performance]]
