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* With the reveal of Dani and Hannah, it turns out there were tons of students at school who were impressed with Chloe's choice to fight Ash despite it being so one-sided, and were more than willing to support and reach out to her. The only reason they didn't have any success was because Chloe refused out of fear of Sara picking on her for not tolerating the bullying and because they genuinely believed that she was gating help from the teachers.
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* With the reveal of Dani Daiki and Hannah, it turns out there were tons of students at school who were impressed with Chloe's choice to fight Ash despite it being so one-sided, and were more than willing to support and reach out to her. The only reason they didn't have any success was because Chloe refused out of fear of Sara picking on her for not tolerating the bullying and because they genuinely believed that she was gating seeking help from the teachers.
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* When Chloe calls Goh and begins detailing wanting to kill herself, Goh quickly shuts her up by declaring he would've flown back/teleported in a heartbeat to stop her.
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* When Chloe calls Goh and begins detailing wanting to kill herself, Goh quickly shuts her up by declaring he would've flown back/teleported in a heartbeat to stop her.her.
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* With the reveal of Dani and Hannah, it turns out there were tons of students at school who were impressed with Chloe's choice to fight Ash despite it being so one-sided, and were more than willing to support and reach out to her. The only reason they didn't have any success was because Chloe refused out of fear of Sara picking on her for not tolerating the bullying and because they genuinely believed that she was gating help from the teachers.
* When Chloe calls Goh and begins detailing wanting to kill herself, Goh quickly shuts her up by declaring he would've flown back/teleported in a heartbeat to stop her.
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* Gloria's Brutal Honesty session to Goh. Unlike Trip's however, Gloria not only help him realize his mistakes, but she breaks his rose-colored glasses to let him see she's not all picture-perfect daughter of a Pokemon Professor at all. And when he had his MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Gloria wastes no time [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapping him out of his funk]] and assures him that she and Victor are there to help him as well encouraging him to take action to [[TheAtoner repent his sins]].
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* Gloria's Brutal Honesty session to Goh. Unlike Trip's however, Gloria not only help him realize his mistakes, but she breaks his rose-colored glasses to let him see she's not all picture-perfect daughter of a Pokemon Professor at all. And when he had his MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Gloria wastes no time [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapping him out of his funk]] funk and assures him that she and Victor are there to help him as well encouraging him to take action to [[TheAtoner repent his sins]].
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* Despite everything she did, Sara is still given comfort and the chance to make things right for herself in the end, with her mother arrested and a chance at a new life.
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* Chloe owning up to her responsibility for staying quiet and blaming everyone around her for not seeing the opportunities all around her.
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* Chloe owning up to her responsibility for staying quiet and blaming everyone around her for not seeing the opportunities all around her.
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* Mairin plans to board the train herself with Chespie and rescue Alain and Sycamore, only being stopped by Victor assuring her that she can be more help on this side of the train.
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* THe Mirage Pokemon being freed from Yung's control and becoming allies.
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* Chloe has a vision of returning to the lab, and the very first thing she does is hug Yamper.
* THe Mirage Pokemon being freed from Yung's control and becoming allies.
* The dinner scene with the groups, with several badly-needed assurances of YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre.
* THe Mirage Pokemon being freed from Yung's control and becoming allies.
* The dinner scene with the groups, with several badly-needed assurances of YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre.
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!!Lost in Japan (Remix)
* Goh chewing out Chloe for not explaining herself sooner and putting the blame on him is sad, but after Chloe finally opens up that she's always been afraid of having to conform herself just to get everyone to love her and the two are out their problems, they decide to have a fresh start, ensuring that the horrors and trauma of the original ''Blossoming Trail'' never appear and thus saves Goh from entering the Train.
** Parker is happy to hear from his sister again and hopes to hear all of her stories when she returns.
** Upon feeling like having all of the adventures on the Train makes her selfish, Goh reassures Chloe states that it's fine and she needs a little self-care after everything.
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!!Lost in Japan (Remix)
* Goh chewing out Chloe for not explaining herself sooner and putting the blame on him is sad, but after Chloe finally opens up that she's always been afraid of having to conform herself just to get everyone to love her and the two are out their problems, they decide to have a fresh start, ensuring that the horrors and trauma of the original ''Blossoming Trail'' never appear and thus saves Goh from entering the Train.
** Parker is happy to hear from his sister again and hopes to hear all of her stories when she returns.
** Upon feeling like having all of the adventures on the Train makes her selfish, Goh reassures Chloe states that it's fine and she needs a little self-care after everything.
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* After the hell that was his nightmare therapy, Yuri gets to relax by hugging Porings which he finds adorable.
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* Yuri saving his future denizen partners from being stuck in the darkness. He could've just gone for the plush bunny (Tobe) but felt pity for the data spider too (Netto). Both of them reward this kindness by joining him.
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* Trip decides to leave the Institute after realizing he can't do anything more. He gives his farewell to Ash and promises to find himself so that he can truly gain Ash's heart for himself, giving him a kiss on the cheek before leaving with a hopeful outlook.
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* Yuri saving his future denizen partners from being stuck in the darkness. He could've just gone for the plush bunny (Tobe) but felt pity for the data spider too (Netto). Both of them reward this kindness by joining him.
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* Trip decides to leave the Institute after realizing he can't do anything more. He gives his farewell to Ash and promises to find himself so that he can truly gain Ash's heart for himself, giving him a kiss on the cheek before leaving with a hopeful outlook.
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The flower representing the story means "hope", meaning there will be a lot of hopeful changes to this familiar, yet spiteful story.
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!!Autonomy
* Just Gloria's EstablishingCharacterMoment is this. Not only she's willing to listen to Goh's plights after his former friend shuts him out, but she gives him an InUniverseCatharsis in a form of a Smash game.
!!Codec
* Sycamore slowly admiring his dreams of riding in a Gundam mecha coming true.
* Gloria's Brutal Honesty session to Goh. Unlike Trip's however, Gloria not only help him realize his mistakes, but she breaks his rose-colored glasses to let him see she's not all picture-perfect daughter of a Pokemon Professor at all. And when he had his MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Gloria wastes no time [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapping him out of his funk]] and assures him that she and Victor are there to help him as well encouraging him to take action to [[TheAtoner repent his sins]].
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!!Autonomy
* Just Gloria's EstablishingCharacterMoment is this. Not only she's willing to listen to Goh's plights after his former friend shuts him out, but she gives him an InUniverseCatharsis in a form of a Smash game.
!!Codec
* Sycamore slowly admiring his dreams of riding in a Gundam mecha coming true.
* Gloria's Brutal Honesty session to Goh. Unlike Trip's however, Gloria not only help him realize his mistakes, but she breaks his rose-colored glasses to let him see she's not all picture-perfect daughter of a Pokemon Professor at all. And when he had his MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Gloria wastes no time [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapping him out of his funk]] and assures him that she and Victor are there to help him as well encouraging him to take action to [[TheAtoner repent his sins]].
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