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* Zeb rushes to get Night Shade out of Ponyville but is stopped when Flurry Heart, Pumpkin Cake and Spike run onto the train platform. Spike threatens to report Zeb to Twilight Sparkle if he doesn't let Night Shade have a final word with Flurry and Pumpkin.
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* Zeb rushes to get Night Shade out of Ponyville but is stopped when Flurry Heart, Pumpkin Cake and Spike run onto the train platform. Spike threatens to report Zeb to Twilight Sparkle if he doesn't let Night Shade have a final word with Flurry and Pumpkin.Pumpkin.
!!Go North, Young Dragon
* The premise itself is one with Spike traveling to his homeland and reuniting with his birth family.
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!!Go North, Young Dragon
* The premise itself is one with Spike traveling to his homeland and reuniting with his birth family.
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!!Fillie Jean!
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!!Fillie Jean!Jean
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-->'''Stormy:''' Best day ever...
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-->'''Stormy:''' Best day ever...ever...
!!Fillie Jean!
* Zeb rushes to get Night Shade out of Ponyville but is stopped when Flurry Heart, Pumpkin Cake and Spike run onto the train platform. Spike threatens to report Zeb to Twilight Sparkle if he doesn't let Night Shade have a final word with Flurry and Pumpkin.
!!Fillie Jean!
* Zeb rushes to get Night Shade out of Ponyville but is stopped when Flurry Heart, Pumpkin Cake and Spike run onto the train platform. Spike threatens to report Zeb to Twilight Sparkle if he doesn't let Night Shade have a final word with Flurry and Pumpkin.
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* After learning of what happen to Anatankha in the past, with her being mocked by all the other sphinxes because of her loss against Somnambula, Flurry Heart and her friends, with some help from her have a HeelFaceTurn, officially reforming their first villain after several failed attempts in previous stories.
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* After learning of what happen to Anatankha in the past, with her being mocked by all the other sphinxes because of her loss against Somnambula, Flurry Heart and her friends, with some help from her have a HeelFaceTurn, officially reforming their first villain after several failed attempts in previous stories.
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!!Let My Ponies Go!
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!!Let My Ponies Go!Go!
* [[PrecociousCrush Stormy's crush on Somnambula]], while also a big source of comedy in the story, is also very sweet and is essentially the equivalent of Spike having a crush on Rarity in canon. Also, Somnambula is never shown to be annoyed by the young colt's attraction to her, taking it all in stride and managing to bond with him on their adventure.
* After learning of what happen to Anatankha in the past, with her being mocked by all the other sphinxes because of her loss against Somnambula, Flurry Heart and her friends, with some help from her have a HeelFaceTurn, officially reforming their first villain after several failed attempts in previous stories.
* When everyone is preparing to go back home at the end of their trip, Stormy is upset because he lost his souvenir, a hat styled like Somnambula's old headdress, during the adventure in the temple. So, Somnambula gives him her own new headdress as a gift, for being so brave during their adventure. As Stormy is screaming his thanks to Somnambula, hugging her tightly and saying he's never taking it off, Somnambula gives him a friendly kiss on the cheek, [[PostKissCatatonia putting him in a love-dazed shock]].
-->'''Stormy:''' Best day ever...
* [[PrecociousCrush Stormy's crush on Somnambula]], while also a big source of comedy in the story, is also very sweet and is essentially the equivalent of Spike having a crush on Rarity in canon. Also, Somnambula is never shown to be annoyed by the young colt's attraction to her, taking it all in stride and managing to bond with him on their adventure.
* After learning of what happen to Anatankha in the past, with her being mocked by all the other sphinxes because of her loss against Somnambula, Flurry Heart and her friends, with some help from her have a HeelFaceTurn, officially reforming their first villain after several failed attempts in previous stories.
* When everyone is preparing to go back home at the end of their trip, Stormy is upset because he lost his souvenir, a hat styled like Somnambula's old headdress, during the adventure in the temple. So, Somnambula gives him her own new headdress as a gift, for being so brave during their adventure. As Stormy is screaming his thanks to Somnambula, hugging her tightly and saying he's never taking it off, Somnambula gives him a friendly kiss on the cheek, [[PostKissCatatonia putting him in a love-dazed shock]].
-->'''Stormy:''' Best day ever...
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* Despite all the trouble Cozy caused, Twilight and everyone else all wish to help her after hearing about her past.
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!!Villains Anonymous
* Tirek's small moment of being at peace among the wildlife in the forest, showing he has a soft spot for nature.
* Tirek's small moment of being at peace among the wildlife in the forest, showing he has a soft spot for nature.
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* Annie speaks with Flurry Heart and the others and admits while things didn't go according to plan she appreciates the fact they were trying to cheer her up. Watching from afar Applejack and Tex hug each other while the former holds on to a photo of her family and thanks Granny Smith for everything she's done.
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* Annie speaks with Flurry Heart and the others and admits while things didn't go according to plan she appreciates the fact they were trying to cheer her up. Watching from afar Applejack and Tex hug each other while the former holds on to a photo of her family and thanks Granny Smith for everything she's done.done.
!!Dreams of Alicornication
* Though also doubling as a funny moment, Fluttershy giving a BearHug to Discord after seeing him as a colt due to how cute he is.
!!They Can't Stay Encased in Stone Forever
!!Let My Ponies Go!
!!Dreams of Alicornication
* Though also doubling as a funny moment, Fluttershy giving a BearHug to Discord after seeing him as a colt due to how cute he is.
!!They Can't Stay Encased in Stone Forever
!!Let My Ponies Go!
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* When Flurry Heart reunites with Spike she tackles him into a big hug.
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-->'''Spirit of Harmony''': Well done, my little pony.
-->'''Twilight Sparkle''': Thank you.
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* Flurry Heart shows Stormy her friendship journal to tell him about the time Rainbow Dash had to decide between representing Ponyville and the Wonderbolts during the Equestria Games. She goes on to explain Rainbow Dash chose Ponyville because she wanted to be loyal to her friends and if she hadn't she wouldn't receive the key necessary to defeat Tirek. When Stormy asks what this has to do with his mother quitting the Wonderbolts, Flurry says she did because she loves her children and Rainbow Dash adds if she hadn't done so she would not be able to spend time with her kids. Hearing this makes Storm Streak understand Rainbow's decision to quit the Wonderbolts.
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* Flurry Heart shows Stormy her friendship journal to tell him about the time Rainbow Dash had to decide between representing Ponyville and the Wonderbolts during the Equestria Games. She goes on to explain Rainbow Dash chose Ponyville because she wanted to be loyal to her friends and if she hadn't she wouldn't receive the key necessary to defeat Tirek. When Stormy asks what this has to do with his mother quitting the Wonderbolts, Flurry says she did because she loves her children and Rainbow Dash adds if she hadn't done so she would not be able to spend time with her kids. Hearing this makes Storm Streak understand Rainbow's decision to quit the Wonderbolts.
Wonderbolts, and he gives a heartfelt apology to Spitfire.
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* There is a cute moment at the end of chapter one where Stormy allows his siblings to bounce on Spike's belly.
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* There is a cute moment at the end of chapter one Chapter 1 where Stormy allows his siblings to bounce on Spike's belly.belly.
* Flurry, Stormy, Flashy and Spike playing with Stormy's Power Ponies toys at the beginning of Chapter 2.
* Flurry, Stormy, Flashy and Spike playing with Stormy's Power Ponies toys at the beginning of Chapter 2.
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* Both Queen Cadance and King Shining Armor congratulate Flurry Heart for discovering the elements and they allow her to stay in Ponyville for the whole summer.
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* Carrot Cake telling Cheese about how he proposed to his wife, making Cheese realize a marriage proposal doesn't need to be a grand romantic gesture for it to matter.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that come afterwards.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that come afterwards.
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* Carrot Cake telling Cheese Sandwich about how he proposed to his wife, making Cheese realize a marriage proposal doesn't need to be a grand romantic gesture for it to matter.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that comeafterwards.afterwards.
!!Calming of the Storm
* There is a cute moment at the end of chapter one where Stormy allows his siblings to bounce on Spike's belly.
* Flurry Heart shows Stormy her friendship journal to tell him about the time Rainbow Dash had to decide between representing Ponyville and the Wonderbolts during the Equestria Games. She goes on to explain Rainbow Dash chose Ponyville because she wanted to be loyal to her friends and if she hadn't she wouldn't receive the key necessary to defeat Tirek. When Stormy asks what this has to do with his mother quitting the Wonderbolts, Flurry says she did because she loves her children and Rainbow Dash adds if she hadn't done so she would not be able to spend time with her kids. Hearing this makes Storm Streak understand Rainbow's decision to quit the Wonderbolts.
!!Apple Family Memories
* Applejack and Tex helping their children come to terms with Granny Smith's death.
* Annie speaks with Flurry Heart and the others and admits while things didn't go according to plan she appreciates the fact they were trying to cheer her up. Watching from afar Applejack and Tex hug each other while the former holds on to a photo of her family and thanks Granny Smith for everything she's done.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that come
!!Calming of the Storm
* There is a cute moment at the end of chapter one where Stormy allows his siblings to bounce on Spike's belly.
* Flurry Heart shows Stormy her friendship journal to tell him about the time Rainbow Dash had to decide between representing Ponyville and the Wonderbolts during the Equestria Games. She goes on to explain Rainbow Dash chose Ponyville because she wanted to be loyal to her friends and if she hadn't she wouldn't receive the key necessary to defeat Tirek. When Stormy asks what this has to do with his mother quitting the Wonderbolts, Flurry says she did because she loves her children and Rainbow Dash adds if she hadn't done so she would not be able to spend time with her kids. Hearing this makes Storm Streak understand Rainbow's decision to quit the Wonderbolts.
!!Apple Family Memories
* Applejack and Tex helping their children come to terms with Granny Smith's death.
* Annie speaks with Flurry Heart and the others and admits while things didn't go according to plan she appreciates the fact they were trying to cheer her up. Watching from afar Applejack and Tex hug each other while the former holds on to a photo of her family and thanks Granny Smith for everything she's done.
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!!Elements Assemble!
* Flurry Heart feels sorry for what happened to Cozy Glow and wishes to help her and the rest of the trio.
* Both Queen Cadance and King Shining Armor congratulate Flurry Heart for discovering the elements and they allow her to stay in Ponyville for the whole summer.
!!Cheesy as Pie
* Carrot Cake telling Cheese about how he proposed to his wife, making Cheese realize a marriage proposal doesn't need to be a grand romantic gesture for it to matter.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that come afterwards.
* Flurry Heart feels sorry for what happened to Cozy Glow and wishes to help her and the rest of the trio.
* Both Queen Cadance and King Shining Armor congratulate Flurry Heart for discovering the elements and they allow her to stay in Ponyville for the whole summer.
!!Cheesy as Pie
* Carrot Cake telling Cheese about how he proposed to his wife, making Cheese realize a marriage proposal doesn't need to be a grand romantic gesture for it to matter.
* Cheese Sandwich proposing to Pinkie Pie and the TearsOfJoy that come afterwards.
