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'''Uncle:''' ''(TearsOfJoy that Zammis is alive)'' I am?
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'''Uncle:''' ''(TearsOfJoy that Zammis is alive)'' I am?Do I?
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* The final scene has Willis bring Zammis before the Holy Council of Dracon, singing the line of Jeriba so that Zammis can join Drac society. The film mentions that when Zammis did the same for it's child, Willis was added to the line.
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* The final scene has Willis bring Zammis before the Holy Council of Dracon, singing the line of Jeriba so that Zammis can join Drac society. The film mentions that when Zammis did the same for it's their child, Willis was added to the line.
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-->'''Zammis:''' ''(barely alive)'' Uncle... you're so ugly!\\
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-->'''Zammis:''' ''(barely alive)'' Uncle... you're so ugly!\\you look terrible!\\
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-->'''Zammis:''' "I have never seen a Drac, only my face in the water. ''*starts to cry*'' I wish I not a Drac... I wish I had your face. I wish I had five fingers..."
-->'''Davidge:''' "Oh, Zammis, listen to me; now, as Dracs go, you are a great-looking kid; you are a ''great''-looking kid! It's just you've... you've never seen your own kind. Now, someday you're gonna go home, and you're gonna forget all about this godawful planet and all about me."
-->'''Zammis:''' "I will never forget you, Uncle."
-->'''Davidge:''' "Oh, Zammis, listen to me; now, as Dracs go, you are a great-looking kid; you are a ''great''-looking kid! It's just you've... you've never seen your own kind. Now, someday you're gonna go home, and you're gonna forget all about this godawful planet and all about me."
-->'''Zammis:''' "I will never forget you, Uncle."
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-->'''Zammis:''' "I I have never seen a Drac, only my face in the water. ''*starts to cry*'' I wish I not a Drac... I wish I had your face. I wish I had five fingers..."
fingers...
-->'''Davidge:'''"Oh, Oh, Zammis, listen to me; now, as Dracs go, you are a great-looking kid; you are a ''great''-looking kid! It's just you've... you've never seen your own kind. Now, someday you're gonna go home, and you're gonna forget all about this godawful planet and all about me."
me.
-->'''Zammis:'''"I I will never forget you, Uncle."Uncle.
* Later:
-->'''Zammis:''' ''(barely alive)'' Uncle... you're so ugly!\\
'''Uncle:''' ''(TearsOfJoy that Zammis is alive)'' I am?
-->'''Davidge:'''
-->'''Zammis:'''
* Later:
-->'''Zammis:''' ''(barely alive)'' Uncle... you're so ugly!\\
'''Uncle:''' ''(TearsOfJoy that Zammis is alive)'' I am?
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you!"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode now you're a judge of character]]."''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Yeah, well maybe you forgot what you said about Mickey Mouse!"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' *shamed* ''"...That was wrong. I... did not mean it."''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you!"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode now you're a judge of character]]."''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Yeah, well maybe you forgot what you said about Mickey Mouse!"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' *shamed* ''"...That was wrong. I... did not mean it."''
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Oh, Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
it!?
-->'''Jeriba:'''''"Not Not too good for humans, but too good for you!"''
''you''!
-->'''Davidge:'''''"Oh, Oh, [[SarcasmMode now you're a judge of character]]."''
character]].
-->'''Jeriba:'''''"Do Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
Shizumaat?
-->'''Davidge:'''''"Yeah, Yeah, well maybe you forgot what you said about Mickey Mouse!"''
Mouse!
-->'''Jeriba:'''*shamed* ''"...''(shamed)'' ...That was wrong. I... did not mean it."''
-->'''Jeriba:'''
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-->'''Davidge:'''
-->'''Jeriba:'''
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* Davidge doing his best to cheer up Zammis, who is ashamed that he does not look "normal" like his Uncle.
-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just... you've never seen your own kind before."
-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just... you've never seen your own kind before."
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* Davidge doing his best to cheer up Zammis, who Seeing that Zammis is ashamed that he does not doesn't look "normal" like his Uncle.
-->"Hey, hey, now as farUncle is [[TearJerker genuinely heartbreaking]], but Davidge doing his best to cheer the little fella up quickly turns it a very sweet moment:
-->'''Zammis:''' "I have never seen a Drac, only my face in the water. ''*starts to cry*'' I wish I not a Drac... I wish I had your face. I wish I had five fingers..."
-->'''Davidge:''' "Oh, Zammis, listen to me; now, as Dracs go, you areone good-looking kid. I mean, a great-looking kid; you are a ''great''-looking kid! You've just... It's just you've... you've never seen your own kind before.kind. Now, someday you're gonna go home, and you're gonna forget all about this godawful planet and all about me."
-->'''Zammis:''' "I will never forget you, Uncle."
-->"Hey, hey, now as far
-->'''Zammis:''' "I have never seen a Drac, only my face in the water. ''*starts to cry*'' I wish I not a Drac... I wish I had your face. I wish I had five fingers..."
-->'''Davidge:''' "Oh, Zammis, listen to me; now, as Dracs go, you are
-->'''Zammis:''' "I will never forget you, Uncle."
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shismar is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shismar Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shismar?"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shismar?"''Shizumaat?"''
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** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shismar, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
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** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shismar, Shizumaat, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode you're a judge of character]]."''
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode now you're a judge of character]]."''
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--> ''[[FireForgedFriends Brothers because they dared to be]].''
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--> ''[[FireForgedFriends Brothers because they dared to be]].''''
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* The final scene has Willis bring Zammis before the Holy Council of Dracon, singing the line of Jeriba so that Zammis can join Drac society. The film mentions that when Zammis did the same for it's child, Willis was added to the line.
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--> ''[[ThePowerOfFriendship Brothers because they dared to be]].''
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--> ''[[ThePowerOfFriendship ''[[FireForgedFriends Brothers because they dared to be]].''
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-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just never seen your own kind before."
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-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just just... you've never seen your own kind before."
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* Davidge doing his best to cheer up Zammis, who is ashamed that he does not look "normal" like his Uncle.
-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just never seen your own kind before."
-->"Hey, hey, now as far as Dracs go, you are one good-looking kid. I mean, a ''great''-looking kid! You've just never seen your own kind before."
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
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-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shizumaat Shismar is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''Shismar?"''
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** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shizumaat, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
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** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shizumaat, Shismar, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
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* The fact that, when Jeri is attacked by a monster, Davidge doesn't hesitate a second to grab a handful of hot coals with his bare hands and save Jeri's life.
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* The fact that, when Jeri is attacked by a monster, the Pit Fiend out for revenge, Davidge doesn't hesitate a second to grab a handful of hot coals with his bare hands and save fry the inside of its mouth a ''second'' time, saving Jeri's life.
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--> ''Brothers because they dared to be.''
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--> ''Brothers ''[[ThePowerOfFriendship Brothers because they dared to be.be]].''
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** Also, when the elder Drac in the slave camp says in an enlightened tone, "Ah, ''you'' are 'Uncle'!"
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** Also, when the elder Drac in the slave camp says in an enlightened tone, "Ah, ''you'' are 'Uncle'!"'Uncle'!"
* The tagline itself:
--> ''[[FantasticRacism Enemies because they were taught to be]].''
--> ''[[EnemyMine Allies because they had to be]].''
--> ''Brothers because they dared to be.''
* The tagline itself:
--> ''[[FantasticRacism Enemies because they were taught to be]].''
--> ''[[EnemyMine Allies because they had to be]].''
--> ''Brothers because they dared to be.''
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* Could also classify as a Tearjerker: Jeri's song to Davidge as they reminisce about their families. Jeri sings in his native language, recounting the lineage he comes from, including their accomplishments and names. As the song goes on, Jeri begins to cry. He misses his family and his home. All Davidge can do is watch in astonishment.
*The fact that, when Jeri is attacked by a monster, Davidge doesn't hesitate a second to grab a handful of hot coals with his bare hands and save Jeri's life.
*The fact that, when Jeri is attacked by a monster, Davidge doesn't hesitate a second to grab a handful of hot coals with his bare hands and save Jeri's life.
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you!
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you! you!"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''""''Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
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-->'''Jeriba:''' ''""''Do ''"Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle".
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* Ignoring that Jerry never found out who Mickey Mouse really was, it's still heartwarming when Davidge calls him[[AmbiguousGender (?)]] out on an argument they had earlier:
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you!
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode you're a judge of character]]."''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''""''Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Yeah, well maybe you forgot what you said about Mickey Mouse!"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' *shamed* ''"...That was wrong. I... did not mean it."''
** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shizumaat, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge findsZamis, Zammis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle".
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, Shizumaat is too good for us humans, is that it!?"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''"Not too good for humans, but too good for you!
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Oh, [[SarcasmMode you're a judge of character]]."''
-->'''Jeriba:''' ''""''Do you not remember what you said about Shizumaat?"''
-->'''Davidge:''' ''"Yeah, well maybe you forgot what you said about Mickey Mouse!"''
-->'''Jeriba:''' *shamed* ''"...That was wrong. I... did not mean it."''
** And after Davidge apologizes for insulting Shizumaat, Jerry gives him the holy book to keep.
* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.soul.
** Also, when the elder Drac in the slave camp says in an enlightened tone, "Ah, ''you'' are 'Uncle'!"
** Also, when the elder Drac in the slave camp says in an enlightened tone, "Ah, ''you'' are 'Uncle'!"
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the [[TearJerker accompanying Tear Jerker page]], page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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