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Changed line(s) 2,6 (click to see context) from:
--->'''Johnny:''' "What's your real name, Baby?"
--->'''Baby:''' "Frances. For the first woman in the Cabinet."
--->'''Johnny:''' "Frances. That's a real grown up name."
* Jake helping Penny without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up.
* Lisa and Baby reconciles after Johnny left.
--->'''Baby:''' "Frances. For the first woman in the Cabinet."
--->'''Johnny:''' "Frances. That's a real grown up name."
* Jake helping Penny without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up.
* Lisa and Baby reconciles after Johnny left.
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--->'''Baby:'''
'''Baby:''' "Frances. For the first woman in the Cabinet.
--->'''Johnny:'''
'''Johnny:''' "Frances. That's a real grown up name."
* Jake helping Penny without judgement. He even checks in on her for a
* Lisa and Baby
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* Also during the ending, Dr. Jake can be seen hugging Penny, his impromptu patient all healed up and grateful to him for likely saving her life.
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* Also during the ending, Dr. Jake Houseman and Penny can be briefly seen hugging Penny, his impromptu patient all healed up talking and grateful to him for likely saving her life.kissing on the cheek.
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* During the ending Neil can be seen cheerfully dancing with Mrs. Houseman. He may be stuck up and a bit of a jerk, but he doesn't seem to harbor any hard feelings over Baby being with Johnny.
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* During the ending Neil can be seen cheerfully dancing with Mrs. Houseman. He may be stuck up and a bit of a jerk, but he doesn't seem to harbor any hard feelings over Baby being with Johnny.Johnny.
* Also during the ending, Dr. Jake can be seen hugging Penny, his impromptu patient all healed up and grateful to him for likely saving her life.
* Also during the ending, Dr. Jake can be seen hugging Penny, his impromptu patient all healed up and grateful to him for likely saving her life.
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* Lisa and Baby reconciling after Johnny leaves.
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* Lisa and Baby reconciling reconciles after Johnny leaves.left.
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
* Jake helping Lisa without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up.
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* Jake helping Lisa Penny without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up.
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
* Jake helping Lisa without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up
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* Jake helping Lisa without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow upup.
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* Jake helping Lisa without judgement. He even checks in on her for a follow up
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* Lisa excitedly watching Johnny and Baby dance.
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* Lisa and Baby reconciled after Johnny left.
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* Lisa and Baby reconciled reconciling after Johnny left.leaves.
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* This little exchange between Johnny and Baby:
--->'''Johnny:''' "What's your real name, Baby?"
--->'''Baby:''' "Frances. For the first woman in the Cabinet."
--->'''Johnny:''' "Frances. That's a real grown up name."
* Lisa and Baby reconciled after Johnny left.
* Jake admitting to Johnny that he was wrong and reconciling with Baby is on there as well.
* During the ending Neil can be seen cheerfully dancing with Mrs. Houseman. He may be stuck up and a bit of a jerk, but he doesn't seem to harbor any hard feelings over Baby being with Johnny.
--->'''Johnny:''' "What's your real name, Baby?"
--->'''Baby:''' "Frances. For the first woman in the Cabinet."
--->'''Johnny:''' "Frances. That's a real grown up name."
* Lisa and Baby reconciled after Johnny left.
* Jake admitting to Johnny that he was wrong and reconciling with Baby is on there as well.
* During the ending Neil can be seen cheerfully dancing with Mrs. Houseman. He may be stuck up and a bit of a jerk, but he doesn't seem to harbor any hard feelings over Baby being with Johnny.
