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* Rafe having a NotSoDifferent bonding moment with Gordon. [[spoiler:Who comes down to the mines to kill himself because he's an [[TomatoInTheMirror Indogene sleeper agent]]. And he manages to convince him to not go though with it.]]
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* Rafe having a NotSoDifferent [[CommonalityConnection bonding moment moment]] with Gordon. [[spoiler:Who comes down to the mines to kill himself because he's an [[TomatoInTheMirror Indogene sleeper agent]]. And he manages to convince him to not go though with it.]]
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* Doc Yewll [[spoiler:not removing the memory device from herself, so the illusion of Lev won't vanish.]]
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* Doc Yewll [[spoiler:not removing the memory EGO device from herself, so the illusion of Lev won't vanish.]]
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* Even though they are both cosplaying as Castithans at the Janus Club, Viceroy Berto Mercado's line to Christie about humanity can be seen as such.
--> '''Mercado:''' It's in our nature to want to be other than we are. It's what makes humanity great. We are creatures of incredible curiosity. We envy the flight of birds, and we build wings. Born earthbound, we reach for the stars.
--> '''Mercado:''' It's in our nature to want to be other than we are. It's what makes humanity great. We are creatures of incredible curiosity. We envy the flight of birds, and we build wings. Born earthbound, we reach for the stars.
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* Pottinger rounds up the Tarrs and reveals their role in Kenya's death, then gives Amanda a gun. Datak immediately takes credit for the murder to cover for Stahma.
--> "Taking a bullet is easier than living with the knowledge that I've lost you."
--> "Taking a bullet is easier than living with the knowledge that I've lost you."
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** The ambassador's second husband asks Rynn for a lift to the next town. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny She does not look terribly pleased with her new travelling companion's chattiness]], but she takes him with her anyway.
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** The ambassador's second husband asks Rynn for a lift to the next town. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments She does not look terribly pleased with her new travelling companion's chattiness]], but she takes him with her anyway.
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* Irisa bonding with Alak's son Luke and entertaining the child so Alak isn't distracted.
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[[AC: "Upon The March We Fittest Die"]]
* [[spoiler: Nolan and Yewll]] showing off their character growth by sacrificing whatever chance of livelihood they have left [[spoiler: to take the Omec ship away from Earth and try to redeem its sleeping inhabitants.]]
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-->'''Nolan:''' When I came back, I prayed that you were behind that desk, because I knew, I ''knew'', that if you were in charge, Defiance had a pulse.
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-->'''Nolan:''' When I came back, I prayed that you were behind that desk, because I knew, I ''knew'', that if you were in charge, Defiance had a pulse.pulse.
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[[AC: "The Awakening"]]
* Nolan snapping Amanda out of her HeroicBSOD with a passionate pep talk, reminding her that she's the one who holds everything together, and that he has faith in her.
-->'''Nolan:''' When I came back, I prayed that you were behind that desk, because I knew, I ''knew'', that if you were in charge, Defiance had a pulse.
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* Vice-Chancellor Silora Voske genuinely desires peace and she even manages to be cordial with T'evgin.
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* Vice-Chancellor Silora Voske genuinely desires peace and she even manages to be cordial with T'evgin. And she brings coffee, which Amanda appreciates immensely.
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* Amanda's reveal that, despite what he'd just done, Nolan still has enough friends in Defiance that [[spoiler: she was able to raise enough money for Nolan and Irisa to escape and disappear.]]
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* T'evgin and Datak share a brief moment [[spoiler: after Kinzie becomes a threat again]]:
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* T'evgin and Datak share a brief moment [[spoiler: after Kinzie becomes a threat again]]:
-->'''T'evgin:''' You must protect Stahma.
-->'''Datak:''' To the death.
-->'''T'evgin:''' You must protect Stahma.
-->'''Datak:''' To the death.
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* Vice-Chancellor Silora Voske genuinely desires peace and she even manages to be cordial with T'evgin.
* Vice-Chancellor Silora Voske genuinely desires peace and she even manages to be cordial with T'evgin.
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[[AC:"My Name Is Datak Tarr and I Have Come to Kill You"]]
* T'evgin implying that he has given up his original goal of [[spoiler: awakening the other Omec and conquering the world]], due to having lived among the population and seeing their honorable qualities.
* The flashbacks of Datak's childhood are [[AbusiveParents pretty]] [[FreudianExcuse horrible]], until the final one. [[spoiler: For all his father put him through, he was allowed to go alone on the mass Votan exodus, even though he got two seats. When Datak tries to insist that his father join him and survive, his father simply smiles, tells him that he is proud of him, and gives him his prized blade.]]
* [[spoiler: After being freed from the shaming rack and told about his SuicideMission to take out Rahm Tak's army]], Datak goes to Yewll's hospital and sees [[spoiler: Alak recovering from Bebe's gunshot. He was hesitant before, but [[PapaWolf that's all it takes]] for the formerly self-serving criminal to accept the mission that will almost certainly kill him.]]
** And [[spoiler: even though he does not end up giving his life, he still shows how willing he is to sacrifice for Defiance by [[AnArmAndALeg chopping off his good arm]] with his blade to lower Rahm Tak's guard until the stasis net explosion.]]
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* Alak describing his father as a flawed but honorable man to Luke, [[spoiler:having brought Luke to the shaming rack so Datak could see him one last time before his death]].
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[[AC:"The Beauty of Our Weapons"]]
* Nolan defending Irisa in front of the town and in doing so, making a RousingSpeech that motivates the town militia.
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* Despite the fact that [[spoiler:Alak sold him and Stahma out as spies]], Datak shows he genuinely cares for [[spoiler:Alak. He insists on letting Luke stay with Alak even though Stahma argues otherwise, saying a son should be with his father, and is distressed when Nolan threatens to kill Alak to get him to talk (it was an act the two cooked up)]].
* Datak suggesting he and Stahma could live a simple life as fishermen. For someone so concerned with wealth and power, it's sweet that he'd give it up as long as he was with her.
* And yet another Datak moment. [[spoiler:When it's clear he won't be able to rendezvous with Stahma since Nolan is a step ahead, he gives himself up so Stahma can get away]].
* Finally, in a shared moment between Datak and Nolan, [[spoiler:Nolan makes a simple meal for Datak while he's in prison. While Nolan doesn't approve of what Datak did, he at least understands why.]]
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* Seeing Amanda and Deidre's interactions prior to [[spoiler: Deidre's murder.]] We see that Amanda acted as a subsitute maternal figure to the troubled girl.
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* Also a Tearjerker given the circumstances, but Datak proves how much he's come to respect Rafe, [[spoiler: stating that he deserved better than being gunned down like a dog, and telling Stahma that the [=McCawleys=] were "our humans".]]
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[[AC:"The World We Seize"/"The Last Unicorns"]]
* Also a Tearjerker given the circumstances, but Datak proves how much he's come to respect Rafe, [[spoiler: stating that he deserved better than being gunned down like a dog, and telling Stahma that the [=McCawleys=] were "our humans".]]
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* [[spoiler: Faced with almost certain doom,]] Nolan holds his adopted daughter close to him, and tell her he loves her. Despite everything that's happened, everything they've both done to each other, he loves her to his last breath.
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** And before that, when they first wake up in the silo Datak's first action when he realizes Stahma's there is to ask if she's alright. Keep in mind the last time they were together, he was yelling at her and insulting her.
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* Datak and Stahma reconciling, with Datak making it clear that despite everything, he ''does'' love her, and can't imagine living without her.
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* Unsure of her identity , possibly dying and on the run. [[spoiler: The Kenya\Indogene spy who has no memory of who she was or her past life.]] Is shown on a land coach headed to a new City. Like a good like charm and held in her hands is [[spoiler: a picture of Amanda and Kenya took together. Showing that even if the memories are not hers. The love, the warmth associated with the memories are something she draws comfort from.]]
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* Unsure of her identity , identity, possibly dying dying, and on the run. run, [[spoiler: The the Kenya\Indogene spy who has no memory of who she was or her past life.]] Is life]] is shown on a land coach headed to a new City. Like a good like charm and held San Francisco. Held in her hands like a good luck charm is [[spoiler: a picture of Amanda and Kenya took together. Showing together, showing that even if the memories are not hers. The love, hers, the love and warmth associated with the memories are something she draws comfort from.]]
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* Nolan and Tommy repairing their friendship when they work together to rescue Irisa. Nolan sorta , kinda apologizes to Tommy for giving him the cold shoulder and taking his job . He also admints that he respects Tommy , and would be honored to have him back as his Deputy. Tommy looks genuinely touched by Nolans praise.
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* Nolan and Tommy repairing their friendship when they work together to rescue Irisa. Nolan sorta , kinda sorta, kinda, apologizes to Tommy for giving him the cold shoulder and taking his job . job. He also admints that he respects Tommy , Tommy, and would be honored to have him back as his Deputy. Tommy looks genuinely touched by Nolans Nolan's praise.
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* Unsure of her identity , possibly dying and on the run. [[spoiler: The Kenya\Indogene spy who has no memory of who she was or her past life.]] Is shown on a land coach headed to a new City. Like a good like charm and held in her hands is [[spoiler: a picture of Amanda and Kenya took together. Showing that even if the memories are not hers. The love, the warmth associated with the memories are something she draws comfort from.]
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* Unsure of her identity , possibly dying and on the run. [[spoiler: The Kenya\Indogene spy who has no memory of who she was or her past life.]] Is shown on a land coach headed to a new City. Like a good like charm and held in her hands is [[spoiler: a picture of Amanda and Kenya took together. Showing that even if the memories are not hers. The love, the warmth associated with the memories are something she draws comfort from.]
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* Nolan and Tommy repairing their friendship when they work together to rescue Irisa. Nolan sorta , kinda apologizes to Tommy for giving him the cold shoulder and taking his job . He also admints that he respects Tommy , and that Tommy is good for Defiance and Irisa. Nolan also says that he would be honored to have Tommy back as his Deputy.
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* Nolan and Tommy repairing their friendship when they work together to rescue Irisa. Nolan sorta , kinda apologizes to Tommy for giving him the cold shoulder and taking his job . He also admints that he respects Tommy , and that Tommy is good for Defiance and Irisa. Nolan also says that he would be honored to have Tommy him back as his Deputy.
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[[AC:"Doll Parts"]]
* Seeing Amanda and Deidre's interactions prior to [[spoiler: Deidre's murder.]] We see that Amanda acted as a subsitute maternal figure to the troubled girl.
* Nolan and Tommy repairing their friendship when they work together to rescue Irisa. Nolan sorta , kinda apologizes to Tommy for giving him the cold shoulder and taking his job . He also admints that he respects Tommy , and that Tommy is good for Defiance and Irisa. Nolan also says that he would be honored to have Tommy back as his Deputy.
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* When Tennety tries to be petty and order Amanda around, Pottinger doesn't let it stand and quickly puts Tennety in her place. Tennety was forced to keep to petty insults after that, all of which Amanda could easily turn on her.
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* Christie and Alak's relationship. Considering his parents' manipulative social-climbing natures, the fact that he is so open and honest and genuinely in love with this human girl is remarkable, and seeing how happy they are together the audience can't help but smile.
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* Christie and Alak's relationship. Considering his parents' manipulative social-climbing natures, social-clinatures, the fact that he is so open and honest and genuinely in love with this human girl is remarkable, and seeing how happy they are together the audience can't help but smile.
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* Amanda [[spoiler:comforts Kenya just as she did when they were kids.]]
