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Per Example Indentation In Trope Lists, a single bullet at anything other than first level is never correct. Also fixing punctuation.
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*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Frank's pocket watch and it's revealed that they fully restored his cafe.
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* Fay's relationship with Carlos. Even though she thinks she's her son Bobby and he's antagonistic toward the tenants, the fact that she's nice to him and treats him with kindness likely went a long way toward his HeelFaceTurn and saving her life.
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* Fay's Faye's relationship with Carlos. Even though she thinks she's her son Bobby and he's antagonistic toward the tenants, the fact that she's nice to him and treats him with kindness likely went a long way toward his HeelFaceTurn and saving her life.
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** The other Fix-Its reaction when they find out the little one is alive after all. Flotsam and Jetsam jump and chirp which their baby sibling copies in an adorable way.
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** The other Fix-Its Fix-Its' reaction when they find out the little one is alive after all. Flotsam and Jetsam jump and chirp which their baby sibling copies in an adorable way.
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* Fay's relationship with Carlos. Even though she things she's her son Bobby, the fact that she's nice to him and treats him with kindness likely went a long way toward his HeelFaceTurn and saving her life.
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* Fay's relationship with Carlos. Even though she things thinks she's her son Bobby, Bobby and he's antagonistic toward the tenants, the fact that she's nice to him and treats him with kindness likely went a long way toward his HeelFaceTurn and saving her life.
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* Fay's relationship with Carlos. Even though she things she's her son Bobby, the fact that she's nice to him and treats him with kindness likely went a long way toward his HeelFaceTurn and saving her life.
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* The very end of the film, where thousands of fixits descend from the sky to repair the destroyed apartment building.
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* The very end of the film, where thousands of fixits Fix-Its descend from the sky to repair the destroyed apartment building.
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* And everyone's reactions to seeing the fully repaired and restored building.
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** Frank's photo of their first day of business that was ruined during Carlos' rampage
** A vase that got smashed
** A vase that got smashed
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** Frank's photo of their first day of business that was ruined during Carlos' rampage
when Carlos and his goons trash the cafe.
** A vase that gotsmashedsmashed by Frank out of frustration and despair.
** A vase that got
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** Mason's door.
** Marisa's statue.
** Marisa's statue.
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** Mason's door.
door that Carlos' goons has smashed out.
** Marisa'sstatue.statue that they broke.
** Marisa's
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*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Frank's pocket watch and fully restore his cafe.
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*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Frank's pocket watch and it's revealed that they fully restore restored his cafe.
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* Their initial contact with everyone in the building. Their first acts are to repair various personal items as well as establishing that their intentions are not hostile:
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* Their The Fix-Its' initial contact with everyone in the building. Their first acts are to repair various personal items as well as items; firmly establishing that their intentions are not hostile:
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** Riley's photo of their first day of business
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** Riley's Frank's photo of their first day of businessbusiness that was ruined during Carlos' rampage
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** Harry's glass jar. Not only that, but the tiles that were in the jar are arranged as a mosaic of one of the Fix-Its.
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** Harry's glass jar. Not only that, but the tiles that were in the jar are restored and arranged as a mosaic of one of the Fix-Its.
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** Marisa's statute.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Riley's watch and fully restore his cafe.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Riley's watch and fully restore his cafe.
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** Marisa's statute.
statue.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repairRiley's Frank's pocket watch and fully restore his cafe.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair
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* Their initial contact with everyone in the building. Their first acts are to repair various personal items:
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* Their initial contact with everyone in the building. Their first acts are to repair various personal items:items as well as establishing that their intentions are not hostile:
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* Their initial contact with everyone in the building. Their first acts are to repair various personal items:
** Riley's photo of their first day of business
** A vase that got smashed
** Harry's glass jar. Not only that, but the tiles that were in the jar are arranged as a mosaic of one of the Fix-Its.
** Mason's door.
** Marisa's statute.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Riley's watch and fully restore his cafe.
** Riley's photo of their first day of business
** A vase that got smashed
** Harry's glass jar. Not only that, but the tiles that were in the jar are arranged as a mosaic of one of the Fix-Its.
** Mason's door.
** Marisa's statute.
*** Then, after Faye properly introduces them, they repair Riley's watch and fully restore his cafe.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest Fix-It. The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest Fix-It. The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:to life]] to life should be mentioned.mentioned.
** The other Fix-Its reaction when they find out the little one is alive after all. Flotsam and Jetsam jump and chirp which their baby sibling copies in an adorable way.
** The other Fix-Its reaction when they find out the little one is alive after all. Flotsam and Jetsam jump and chirp which their baby sibling copies in an adorable way.
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as a stillbirth, (he?) technically wasn't alive at all prior to this
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest Fix-It. The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest Fix-It. The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to [[spoiler:to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Faye Riley's relationship with the "Little Guys" as she calls them.
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* Faye Riley's relationship with the "Little Guys" "[[AffectionateNickname Little Guys]]", as she calls them.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest "little Guy". The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest "little Guy".Fix-It. The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest "little Guy'". The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong connection with the smallest "little Guy'".Guy". The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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Please learn how to use apostrophes properly. When used with nouns, they\'re for possessives only. Never for plurals unless they\'re also possessives. Also, that\'s not how to spell \"connection\".
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* Faye Riley's relationship with the "Little Guy's" as she calls them.
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* Faye Riley's relationship with the "Little Guy's" Guys" as she calls them.
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* Harry's strong conecction with the smallest "little Guy'". The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* Harry's strong conecction connection with the smallest "little Guy'". The fact that he worked so hard to bring the little guy [[spoiler:back to life]] should be mentioned.
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* The final scene of the film shows a time elapsed shot of the Manhattan skyline as Mr. Lacey's building materialize into view one by one, and then the camera pans all the way down to show the fully restored Riley's building still proudly standing between them.
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* The final scene of the film shows a time elapsed shot of the Manhattan skyline as Mr. Lacey's building skyscrapers materialize into view one by one, and then the camera pans all the way down to show the fully restored Riley's building still proudly standing between them.
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* After the Fix-Its give birth, Frank promises that he and the other tenants will do everything in their power to protect them.
