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* In general, Lucy's quiet care and support for all of the inmates is rather touching, and she really enjoys trying to heal her patients.
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* In general, Lucy's quiet care and support for all of the inmates is rather touching, and she really enjoys trying to heal her patients.patients.
* Tommy confesses to murder, with unknown veracity, to force Ray to leave Alcatraz. [[spoiler:Placing him out of the reach of the Warden]]
* Tommy confesses to murder, with unknown veracity, to force Ray to leave Alcatraz. [[spoiler:Placing him out of the reach of the Warden]]
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* In "Webb Porter," Hauser takes Porter to Lucy's bedside. Porter immediately looks stunned and concerned and follows the other doctor's instructions to help her without question or pause. [[spoilers:And his blood is what wakes her up.]]
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* In "Webb Porter," Hauser takes Porter to Lucy's bedside. Porter immediately looks stunned and concerned and follows the other doctor's instructions to help her without question or pause. [[spoilers:And [[spoiler:And his blood is what wakes her up.]]
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* When Ray visits Tommy in the care unit after he just beat him up earlier, he tell him that he purposely took the job on Alcatraz so [[spoiler: his brother]] wouldn't be alone. What nails the scene is that when Ray's about to walk away, Tommy grabs his hand and squeezes it to say "thank you".
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* When Ray visits Tommy in the care unit after he just beat him up earlier, he tell him that he purposely took the job on Alcatraz so [[spoiler: his brother]] wouldn't be alone. What nails the scene is that when Ray's about to walk away, Tommy grabs his hand and squeezes it to say "thank you".you".
* In "Webb Porter," Hauser takes Porter to Lucy's bedside. Porter immediately looks stunned and concerned and follows the other doctor's instructions to help her without question or pause. [[spoilers:And his blood is what wakes her up.]]
* In general, Lucy's quiet care and support for all of the inmates is rather touching, and she really enjoys trying to heal her patients.
* In "Webb Porter," Hauser takes Porter to Lucy's bedside. Porter immediately looks stunned and concerned and follows the other doctor's instructions to help her without question or pause. [[spoilers:And his blood is what wakes her up.]]
* In general, Lucy's quiet care and support for all of the inmates is rather touching, and she really enjoys trying to heal her patients.
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* When Ray visits Tommy in the care unit after he just beat him up earlier, he tell him that he purposely took the job on Alcatraz so [[spoiler: his brother]] wouldn't be alone.
** what nails the scene is when ray's about to walk away, Tommy grabs his hand and squeezes it to say thank you.
** what nails the scene is when ray's about to walk away, Tommy grabs his hand and squeezes it to say thank you.
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* When Ray visits Tommy in the care unit after he just beat him up earlier, he tell him that he purposely took the job on Alcatraz so [[spoiler: his brother]] wouldn't be alone.
** whatalone. What nails the scene is that when ray's Ray's about to walk away, Tommy grabs his hand and squeezes it to say thank you."thank you".
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ray: You and me are in this together
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* When Ray visits Tommy in the care unit after he just beat him up earlier, he tell him that he purposely took the job on Alcatraz so [[spoiler: his brother]] wouldn't be alone.
ray: You and me are in this together
ray: You and me are in this together
