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* Anna uses her mental powers to show Adam what Magda's long-dead children look like. Adam uses his skills as an artist to paint their portrait, giving Magda the chance to see their faces again and finally show Matthias his lost siblings.
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* Anna uses her mental powers to show Adam what Magda's long-dead children look like. Adam uses his skills as an artist to paint their portrait, giving Magda the chance to see their faces again and finally show Matthias his lost siblings.siblings.
!! Beneath
* Viktor loves his daughter the first moment he lays eyes on her
* The dragon-built walls in Viktor's mind come down the moment he hears his daughter's cry for help
* Luis giving Katya the charm bracelet, becoming the first person to really accept this little monster as she is.
!! The White Wolf
* When Stephan gets trapped in the land of the dead, it's Patrick's spirit that comes and helps him out.
!! Beneath
* Viktor loves his daughter the first moment he lays eyes on her
* The dragon-built walls in Viktor's mind come down the moment he hears his daughter's cry for help
* Luis giving Katya the charm bracelet, becoming the first person to really accept this little monster as she is.
!! The White Wolf
* When Stephan gets trapped in the land of the dead, it's Patrick's spirit that comes and helps him out.
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* Khait refers to Bridget as his best friend
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!! Storm's Mercy
* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
* After bonding with Adele, Greg, and Natalya, Yalathanil is unwilling to allow random humans to be injured.
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice everything to protect her, and Mbaba's feelings toward him have overtones of maternal. [[spoiler: The maternal aspect takes on another facet when it is revealed that rather than simply being the youngest dragon, Jormun is only half dragon. Mbaba may actually be his mother figure]]
* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
* After bonding with Adele, Greg, and Natalya, Yalathanil is unwilling to allow random humans to be injured.
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice everything to protect her, and Mbaba's feelings toward him have overtones of maternal. [[spoiler: The maternal aspect takes on another facet when it is revealed that rather than simply being the youngest dragon, Jormun is only half dragon. Mbaba may actually be his mother figure]]
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!! Storm's Mercy
* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
* After bonding with Adele, Greg, and Natalya, Yalathanil is unwilling to allow random humans to be injured.
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice everything to protect her, and Mbaba's feelings toward him have overtones of maternal. [[spoiler: The maternal aspect takes on another facet when it is revealed that rather than simply being the youngest dragon, Jormun is only half dragon. Mbaba may actually be his mother figure]]
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* After bonding
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice
* The Wu family includes Stasya in their family hugs
* Anna uses her mental powers to show Adam what Magda's long-dead children look like. Adam uses his skills as an artist to paint their portrait, giving Magda the chance to see their faces again and
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* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
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* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.interest.
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice everything to protect her, and Mbaba's feelings toward him have overtones of maternal. [[spoiler: The maternal aspect takes on another facet when it is revealed that rather than simply being the youngest dragon, Jormun is only half dragon. Mbaba may actually be his mother figure]]
* The relationship between Jormun and Mbaba has shades of this. Jormun is quite clearly ready to sacrifice everything to protect her, and Mbaba's feelings toward him have overtones of maternal. [[spoiler: The maternal aspect takes on another facet when it is revealed that rather than simply being the youngest dragon, Jormun is only half dragon. Mbaba may actually be his mother figure]]
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* Matthias tucking Anna into bed with her stuffed animals. He even kisses her goodnight and cuts her pills in half for her.
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* Matthias tucking Anna into bed with her stuffed animals. He even kisses her goodnight and cuts her pills in half for her.
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* Adam and Lidia are reunited, and Adam gets some desperately needed hugs.
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* Laura starts calling Michaels 'Dad'.
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* Laura starts calling Michaels 'Dad'. The bond is enough that Khait picks up on it supernaturally.
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* Khait acknowledges that Michaels is also a brother to Gabriel, and rather than be jealous decides that means he and Michaels are going to be friends.
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* Gabriel, Laura, and Ted don't hesitate a moment to go rescue Michaels, and Gabriel explicitly refers to Michaels as 'his brother'.
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* Laura starts calling Michaels 'Dad'.
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* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
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* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.her.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
* Adele tells Jormun YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre. The World Serpent is clearly touched by the words, and repays that small kindness with interest.
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* Khait, a demon, meets Gabriel, an angel. They hug.
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* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
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* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a familyfamily
* After bonding with Adele, Greg, and Natalya, Yalathanil is unwilling to allow random humans to be injured.
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
* After bonding with Adele, Greg, and Natalya, Yalathanil is unwilling to allow random humans to be injured.
* When it's revealed that Adele is in a sniper's crosshairs both Greg and Yalathanil immediately step in front of her.
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* Magda starts to be the least bit threatening toward Bridget. Khait teleports her to the middle of the Sahara desert without batting an eye.
* How utterly thrilled both Ash and Laura are to hear Adam's voice. It's not lost on Adam either.
* How utterly thrilled both Ash and Laura are to hear Adam's voice. It's not lost on Adam either.
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* Michaels doesn't hesitate to let Erilon into his head, stating he trusts her and she is one of them.
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* Adam is clearly a BenevolentBoss, and he and the werewolf he beat up to take over the pack have become good friends.
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* Adam is clearly a BenevolentBoss, and he and the werewolf he beat up to take over the pack have become good friends.friends.
!! Storm's Mercy
* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
!! Storm's Mercy
* Despite not being blood related, Adele, Greg, and Natalya clearly care about each other as a family
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* Adam tells Patrick and Stasya about the talisman. Without missing a beat they start planning how to get it away from Wren and set him free.
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!!Wren
* Though Patrick is clearly wowed by Adam's abilities, his initial reaction isn't to fanboy how awesome Adam is, but to offer him words of comfort and sympathy.
* The relationship that develops between Stasya and Adam. They call each other MamaBear and Baby Bear
* Adam tells Patrick and Stasya about the talisman. Without missing a beat they start planning how to get it away from Wren and set him free.
* Though Patrick is clearly wowed by Adam's abilities, his initial reaction isn't to fanboy how awesome Adam is, but to offer him words of comfort and sympathy.
* The relationship that develops between Stasya and Adam. They call each other MamaBear and Baby Bear
* Adam tells Patrick and Stasya about the talisman. Without missing a beat they start planning how to get it away from Wren and set him free.
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* Laura getting Adam to open up a little
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!!Ash
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* Michaels letting Laura move in with him and being her big brother and surrogate father.
* Matthias comes back for Daniel and Anna, and acknowledging that Daniel is his much needed morality chain
* Matthias comes back for Daniel and Anna, and acknowledging that Daniel is his much needed morality chain
* Stephan and Magda sacrificing their careers to help Ash, even before they've actually had a chance to get to know him.
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* Adam helping Ash keep it together and then aiding his escape
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
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!!Gabriel
*Adam helping Ash keep it together Michaels letting Laura move in with him and then aiding his escape
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.being her big brother and surrogate father.
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* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
!!Daniel
* Matthias comes back for Daniel and Anna, and acknowledging that Daniel is his much needed morality chain
* How far Daniel is willing to go to keep his little sister safe
!!Hunting
* Adam helping Ash keep it together and then aiding his escape
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya.
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* Stephan and Magda sacrificing their careers to help Ash, even before they've actually had a chance to get to know him.
!!San Francisco
!! The Signal
* Stasya protects and looks after Adam's family
* Stasya protects and looks after Adam's family
!! Truth and Shadows
!! Archaeology 101
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* Bridget turns down what is arguably the job of a lifetime because she wants to protect Khait
* Khait resists the ring's magic, even though the effort nearly kills him, to avoid killing Abigail and Bridget
!! Primitive
* Khait resists the ring's magic, even though the effort nearly kills him, to avoid killing Abigail and Bridget
!! Primitive
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* He's definitely a villain, but Guerin's love for his son is clearly genuine
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* He's definitely a villain, but Guerin's love for his son is clearly genuinegenuine
* Jormun's fury at Guerin's attempt to brainwash Christophe
!! War
* Professor Kravitz refuses to assist the party until Laura tells him the purpose of the mission is to save Adam. The professor is then all in.
* Ash is still struggling with his issues and trying to find a way to contribute to the group rather than being TheLoad. He can't use a gun because of his issues. So Gabriel starts teaching him to use a sword.
* Adam is clearly a BenevolentBoss, and he and the werewolf he beat up to take over the pack have become good friends.
* Jormun's fury at Guerin's attempt to brainwash Christophe
!! War
* Professor Kravitz refuses to assist the party until Laura tells him the purpose of the mission is to save Adam. The professor is then all in.
* Ash is still struggling with his issues and trying to find a way to contribute to the group rather than being TheLoad. He can't use a gun because of his issues. So Gabriel starts teaching him to use a sword.
* Adam is clearly a BenevolentBoss, and he and the werewolf he beat up to take over the pack have become good friends.
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* All Gabriel knows about Adam is that Ash and Laura like him. He offers to let Adam take him prisoner and turn him over to the Cabal to give Gabriel a chance to get the talisman away from Wren, and returns Patrick's watch to Adam. It's clear their encounter did a lot to pull Adam back from the DespairEventHorizon
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* All Gabriel knows about Adam is that Ash and Laura like him. He offers to let Adam take him prisoner and turn him over to the Cabal to give Gabriel a chance to get the talisman away from Wren, and returns Patrick's watch to Adam. It's clear their encounter did a lot to pull Adam back from the
* Despite the fact that Adam has kidnapped and threatened Professor Kravitz, the professor still takes the time to comfort Adam and reassure him with some good advice
* Ryuu Ishi personally ensuring the Wu family is safe
* Ryuu acting as a mentor to Coraline
* The apparently genuine friendship and respect between Lidia and Ryuu
* Tobias asking Zeke to marry him.
* Tobias taking Zeke and his mother out to celebrate Zeke's first patent.
* Despite the history between them, Zeke and Tobias help each other out after meeting for the first time since high school
* Abigail coming by to cheer up Bridget after a bad breakup
* Doubles with nightmare fuel, but Khait being willing to help a little girl murder her abusive stepfather because she gave him ice cream
* Lykos comforts Christophe and apologizes to him after they learn Guerin killed the men Christophe tried to save
* Lykos taking Christophe to see wolf cubs
* He's definitely a villain, but Guerin's love for his son is clearly genuine
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* Gabriel's super-powered alter ego still recognizes and obeys Ted.
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* Gabriel's super-powered alter ego still recognizes and obeys Ted.Ted.
* All Gabriel knows about Adam is that Ash and Laura like him. He offers to let Adam take him prisoner and turn him over to the Cabal to give Gabriel a chance to get the talisman away from Wren, and returns Patrick's watch to Adam. It's clear their encounter did a lot to pull Adam back from the DespairEventHorizon
* All Gabriel knows about Adam is that Ash and Laura like him. He offers to let Adam take him prisoner and turn him over to the Cabal to give Gabriel a chance to get the talisman away from Wren, and returns Patrick's watch to Adam. It's clear their encounter did a lot to pull Adam back from the DespairEventHorizon
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* Michaels letting Laura move in with him and being her big brother and surrogate father
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* Michaels letting Laura move in with him and being her big brother and surrogate fatherfather.
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* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
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* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.family.
* Erilon informs Gabriel that the amount of energy she'll have to take from him to heal Laura will likely kill him. Gabriel doesn't hesitate a moment before telling her to do it anyway.
* Adam tells Patrick and Stasya about the talisman. Without missing a beat they start planning how to get it away from Wren and set him free.
* Stephan and Magda sacrificing their careers to help Ash, even before they've actually had a chance to get to know him.
* Gabriel's super-powered alter ego still recognizes and obeys Ted.
* Erilon informs Gabriel that the amount of energy she'll have to take from him to heal Laura will likely kill him. Gabriel doesn't hesitate a moment before telling her to do it anyway.
* Adam tells Patrick and Stasya about the talisman. Without missing a beat they start planning how to get it away from Wren and set him free.
* Stephan and Magda sacrificing their careers to help Ash, even before they've actually had a chance to get to know him.
* Gabriel's super-powered alter ego still recognizes and obeys Ted.
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* Adam helping Ash keep it together and then aiding his escapeescape
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
* Adam fights off mind control to protect Stasya. Stasya repays this by saving his family.
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* The under the bed family snuggle
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* Matthias tucking Anna into bed with her stuffed animals. He even kisses her goodnight and cuts her pills in half for her.
* Adam helping Ash keep it together and then aiding his escape
* Matthias tucking Anna into bed with her stuffed animals. He even kisses her goodnight and cuts her pills in half for her.
* Adam helping Ash keep it together and then aiding his escape
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* Stephan learning Magda is a werewolf. It doesn't matter to him because she's still his partner and his best friend
* Michaels letting Laura move in with him and being her big brother and surrogate father
* Matthias comes back for Daniel and Anna, and acknowledging that Daniel is his much needed morality chain
* The under the bed family snuggle
* Stephan learning Magda is a werewolf. It doesn't matter to him because she's still his partner and his best friend
* Michaels letting Laura move in with him and being her big brother and surrogate father
* Matthias comes back for Daniel and Anna, and acknowledging that Daniel is his much needed morality chain
* The under the bed family snuggle
