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* How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's match with Jun, using the exact same footage. But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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* How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's match with Jun, using [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EybYE3jQPDY the exact same footage. footage.]] But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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* She's 16 and only part-times as a waitress, yet she's been able to support herself and her kid brother - which includes covering the costs of his medical treatment, since he's bedridden at the hospital. Exactly what kind of salary is she making? Even with tips + overtime ''and'' a second job, that'd be a pretty tall order. It makes you wonder what her takehome pay would be like, if she didn't [[PerpetualPoverty constantly have to shell it out to bill collectors]] and the hospital.
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* She's 16 and only part-times as a waitress, yet she's been able to support herself and her kid brother - which includes covering the costs of his medical treatment, since he's bedridden at the hospital. Exactly what kind of salary is she making? Even with tips + overtime ''and'' a second job, that'd be a pretty tall order. order, considering [[MinorLivingAlone she's still in highschool.]] It makes you wonder what her takehome pay would be like, if she didn't [[PerpetualPoverty constantly have to shell it out to bill collectors]] and the hospital.
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* How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's Match with Jun, using the exact same footage. But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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* How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's Match match with Jun, using the exact same footage. But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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*How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's Match with Jun, using the exact same footage. But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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*How ''and when'' did it happen? The OVA has to be set prior the events of ''[[VideoGame/AdvancedVariableGeo Advanced V.G. II]]'', since it begins with a flashback to Yuka's Match with Jun, using the exact same footage. But in the game, Miranda's still alive somehow and doesn't die until the waitresses kill her during her escape attempt, near the end. As noted on the work page itself, that's [[AdaptationInducedPlothole a glaring plothole.]]
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She's 16 years old and only part-times as a waitress, yet she's been able to support herself and her kid brother - which includes covering the costs of his medical treatment, since he's bedridden at the hospital. Exactly what kind of salary is she making? Even with tips + overtime ''and'' a second job, that'd be a pretty tall order. It makes you wonder what her takehome pay would be like, if she didn't [[PerpetualPoverty constantly have to shell it out to bill collectors]] and the hospital.
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VG is supposed to be an official tournament and, as such, you'd expect there to be official rules and procedures.
* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousEvilOrganization The Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the official entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
* Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities.
With all of the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue.
* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousEvilOrganization The Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the official entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
* Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities.
With all of the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousEvilOrganization The Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the official entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for
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She's 16 years old and only part-times as a waitress, yet she's been able to support herself and her kid brother - which includes covering the
With all of the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousEvilOrganization the The Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the official entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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With all of the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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With all of the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousCriminalConspiracy [[NebulousEvilOrganization the Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the official entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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With all of that taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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With all of that taking place, the evidence of tampering and criminal activity by the very group sponsoring the precedings, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[NebulousCriminalConspiracy the Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry.entry deadline. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[TheSyndicate the Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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* But, throughout the tournament, [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[TheSyndicate [[NebulousCriminalConspiracy the Jahana Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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* But, throughout the tournament, Damian and the Jahana Group flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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* But, throughout the tournament, Damian [[TheDragon Damian]] and [[TheSyndicate the Jahana Group Group]] flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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With all of this that taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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* Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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VG is supposed to be an official tournament and, as such, you'd expect there to be official rules and procedures. But, throughout the tournament, Damian and the Jahana Group flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
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VG is supposed to be an official tournament and, as such, you'd expect there to be official rules and procedures. But, procedures.
*But, throughout the tournament, Damian and the Jahana Group flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
Then, *Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
*But, throughout the tournament, Damian and the Jahana Group flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
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VG is supposed to be an official tournament and, as such, you'd expect there to be official rules and procedures. But, throughout the tournament, Damian and the Jahana Group flagrantly disregard all of them to manipulate Satomi into entering the competition well past the point of official entry. [[LampshadeHanging A point which Reimi raises,]] herself, when Damian approaches her in an attempt to get Reimi to bend the rules to allow for Satomi's late participation.
Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.
Then, there's the fact that Reimi and the others uncovered [[NotJustATournament the conspiracy going on behind-the-scenes]]; including the cyber drive project and the unsanctioned matches that were taking place to field test Satomi's cyber-enhanced fighting capabilities. With all of this taking place, you'd think it would completely invalidate the outcome of the tournament and mandate that they restart the competition from the beginning. Instead, Reimi let's all of it slide and allows the finals to continue. I don't get it.