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* Sean sniper POV has a silhouette outline of [=McKintyre=] drinking a water bottle...to which [=McKintyre=] perfectly shapes with.
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* Sean Sean's sniper POV has a silhouette outline of [=McKintyre=] drinking out a water bottle...to which [=McKintyre=] perfectly shapes with.with when drinking water.
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Added example(s), Natter
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--->'''Fergus:''' Van Atter\\
'''Van Attar:''' Yeah?\\
'''Fergus:''' Take this blood sample to the lab... and don't go walking around with it all day.\\
'''Van Attar:''' Up yours!\\
'''Fergus:''' ''(about Ryan)'' Get him in the car.\\
'''Ryan Harrison:''' I'm innocent; I've been wrongfully accused.\\
'''Fergus:''' Guilt or innocence, that's not my job. It's my duty to pick up scum-sucking punks like yourself who are accused of a crime. A jury of twelve really stupid people who are easily swayed by rich, fat-cat, slimy lawyers who'll do anything but tell the truth, will sit in judgement of you. '''It's as American as a burrito'''.
'''Van Attar:''' Yeah?\\
'''Fergus:''' Take this blood sample to the lab... and don't go walking around with it all day.\\
'''Van Attar:''' Up yours!\\
'''Fergus:''' ''(about Ryan)'' Get him in the car.\\
'''Ryan Harrison:''' I'm innocent; I've been wrongfully accused.\\
'''Fergus:''' Guilt or innocence, that's not my job. It's my duty to pick up scum-sucking punks like yourself who are accused of a crime. A jury of twelve really stupid people who are easily swayed by rich, fat-cat, slimy lawyers who'll do anything but tell the truth, will sit in judgement of you. '''It's as American as a burrito'''.
to:
--->'''Fergus:''' Van Atter\\
'''Van Attar:''' Yeah?\\
'''Fergus:'''Take this blood sample to the lab... lab – and don't go walking around with it all day.\\
'''Van Attar:''' Upyours!\\
'''Fergus:''' ''(about Ryan)'' Get him in the car.\\
'''Ryan Harrison:''' I'm innocent; I've been wrongfully accused.\\
'''Fergus:''' Guilt or innocence, that's not my job. It's my duty to pick up scum-sucking punks like yourself who are accused of a crime. A jury of twelve really stupid people who are easily swayed by rich, fat-cat, slimy lawyers who'll do anything but tell the truth, will sit in judgement of you. '''It's as American as a burrito'''.yours!
'''Van Attar:''' Yeah?\\
'''Fergus:'''
'''Van Attar:''' Up
'''Fergus:''' ''(about Ryan)'' Get him in the car.\\
'''Ryan Harrison:''' I'm innocent; I've been wrongfully accused.\\
'''Fergus:''' Guilt or innocence, that's not my job. It's my duty to pick up scum-sucking punks like yourself who are accused of a crime. A jury of twelve really stupid people who are easily swayed by rich, fat-cat, slimy lawyers who'll do anything but tell the truth, will sit in judgement of you. '''It's as American as a burrito'''.
** "It's as American as a burrito."
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* During the climactic shootout, Ryan takes a gun from the backpack of a ''random little kid'' who was casually passing by and it contains other weapons like knives, grenades, etc.
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* Sean sniper POV has a silhouette outline of [=McKintyre=] drinking a water bottle...to which [=McKintyre=] perfectly shapes with.
* During the climactic shootout, Ryan takes a gun from the backpack of a ''random little kid'' who was casually passingby and it by. It contains other weapons like knives, grenades, an uzi, grenade, brass knuckles etc.
* During the climactic shootout, Ryan takes a gun from the backpack of a ''random little kid'' who was casually passing
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--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.\\
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--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.Pants-upon-Buttocks.\\
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* Goodhue's reception following the opening concert.
** Ryan confusing a muslim man he accidentally {{Groin Attack}}ed for him praying.
** This bit.
--->'''Lauren:''' I've never missed one of your concerts. Hibbing, however, wasn't at Friday's.\\
'''Hibbing:''' It was a...high colonic.\\
'''Ryan:''' Yes, Jewish holiday. Mazel tov!\\
'''Hibbing:'''' Uh...yes
** Ryan confusing a muslim man he accidentally {{Groin Attack}}ed for him praying.
** This bit.
--->'''Lauren:''' I've never missed one of your concerts. Hibbing, however, wasn't at Friday's.\\
'''Hibbing:''' It was a...high colonic.\\
'''Ryan:''' Yes, Jewish holiday. Mazel tov!\\
'''Hibbing:'''' Uh...yes
* The newscaster interview:
--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.\\
'''Ruth Kimble:''' He's invited you to come to Columbia Heights to make an important speech; a speech that will have terrorists ''peeing their pants''.
* Hibbing cycling through radio stations: "...a lesbian ...oral... used to masturbate... nymphomaniac Siamese twins who cheat with each other's husbands... I'm not having orgasms... these gay guys."
-->'''Goodhue:''' You only wanted me for my connection with ''(pulls out a chalkboard with the words [=McKintyre=], shoreline, terrorists and assassination written on it)''...'' [=McKintyre=]'' and for my acquired ''shoreline'', the perfect place to land a small group of ''terrorists''. This is about ''assassination''.
* Hibbing rapidly trying to open a box of band-aids to put on his ''gunshot wounds''.
* Cass throws a small gun in the bay. It still manages to make a giant splash that reaches all the way up the cliff and drench her.
--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.\\
'''Ruth Kimble:''' He's invited you to come to Columbia Heights to make an important speech; a speech that will have terrorists ''peeing their pants''.
* Hibbing cycling through radio stations: "...a lesbian ...oral... used to masturbate... nymphomaniac Siamese twins who cheat with each other's husbands... I'm not having orgasms... these gay guys."
-->'''Goodhue:''' You only wanted me for my connection with ''(pulls out a chalkboard with the words [=McKintyre=], shoreline, terrorists and assassination written on it)''...'' [=McKintyre=]'' and for my acquired ''shoreline'', the perfect place to land a small group of ''terrorists''. This is about ''assassination''.
* Hibbing rapidly trying to open a box of band-aids to put on his ''gunshot wounds''.
* Cass throws a small gun in the bay. It still manages to make a giant splash that reaches all the way up the cliff and drench her.
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* The newscaster interview:
--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.\\
'''Ruth Kimble:''' He's invited you to come to Columbia Heights to make an important speech; a speech that will have terrorists ''peeing their pants''.
* Hibbing cycling through radio stations: "...a lesbian ...oral... used to masturbate... nymphomaniac Siamese twins who cheat with each other's husbands... I'm not having orgasms... these gay guys."
-->'''Goodhue:''' You only wanted me for my connection with ''(pulls out a chalkboard with the words [=McKintyre=], shoreline, terrorists and assassination written on it)''...'' [=McKintyre=]'' and for my acquired ''shoreline'', the perfect place to land a small group of ''terrorists''. This is about ''assassination''.
* Cass throws a small gun in the bay. It still manages to make a giant splash that reaches all the way up the cliff and drench her.
--> '''[=McKintyre=]:''' Hibbing has been my good friend since our school days at Cherry Pants Upon Buttocks.\\
'''Ruth Kimble:''' He's invited you to come to Columbia Heights to make an important speech; a speech that will have terrorists ''peeing their pants''.
* Hibbing cycling through radio stations: "...a lesbian ...oral... used to masturbate... nymphomaniac Siamese twins who cheat with each other's husbands... I'm not having orgasms... these gay guys."
-->'''Goodhue:''' You only wanted me for my connection with ''(pulls out a chalkboard with the words [=McKintyre=], shoreline, terrorists and assassination written on it)''...'' [=McKintyre=]'' and for my acquired ''shoreline'', the perfect place to land a small group of ''terrorists''. This is about ''assassination''.
* Cass throws a small gun in the bay. It still manages to make a giant splash that reaches all the way up the cliff and drench her.
