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* Diana's first impression of London...it's bad.
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* Diana's reaction upon seeing London for the first time.
-->'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not for everyone...
-->'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not for everyone...
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* Diana's reaction upon seeing the dark, smoky and industrial London for of the first time.
-->'''Diana:'''1910s in contrast with the paradise island she grew up in.
-->'''Steve:''' Welcome to Jolly Ol' London!\\
'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not foreveryone...everybody.
-->'''Diana:'''
-->'''Steve:''' Welcome to Jolly Ol' London!\\
'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not for
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-->'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not for everyone...
-->'''Diana:''' It's hideous!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah, it's not for everyone...
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-->'''Diana''': You're a man!\\
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-->'''Diana''' (''while striking silly poses in front of a mirror''): How can a woman possibly fight in this?
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-->'''Etta''': I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana''': What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta''': I go where he tells me to go and do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana''': Well, where I'm from that's called ''slavery''.\\
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh yes I do. I like her.
'''Diana''': What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta''': I go where he tells me to go and do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana''': Well, where I'm from that's called ''slavery''.\\
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh yes I do. I like her.
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* [[FishOutOfWater Diana draws her sword and shield in public in London.]] She tries to go out of a building and a closing door bumps into the shield, blocking her.
-->'''Steve''': Yup... please put the sword down!\\
'''Etta:''' It doesn't go with the outfit.\\
'''Steve:''' At all.
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'''Diana''': What iss a "secretary"?\\
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'''Diana''': What iss is a "secretary"?\\
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'''Diana''': Well, where I'm from that's called 'slavery'.\\
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'''Diana''': Well, where I'm from that's called 'slavery'.''slavery''.\\
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'''Diana''': What's a "secretary"?\\
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'''Diana''': What's What iss a "secretary"?\\
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'''Diana''': Where I come from that's called 'slavery'.\\
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh I really do.
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh I really do.
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'''Diana''': Where I come Well, where I'm from that's called 'slavery'.\\
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh yes Ireally do.do. I like her.
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh yes I
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'''Diana''': What's a "secretary"?
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'''Diana''': What's a "secretary"? "secretary"?\\
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'''Diana''': Where I come from that's called 'slavery'.
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'''Diana''': Where I come from that's called 'slavery'.\\
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* Diana and Etta meeting.
-->'''Etta''': I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana''': What's a "secretary"?
'''Etta''': I go where he tells me to go and do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana''': Where I come from that's called 'slavery'.
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh I really do.
-->'''Etta''': I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana''': What's a "secretary"?
'''Etta''': I go where he tells me to go and do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana''': Where I come from that's called 'slavery'.
'''Etta''' (''to Steve''): I really like her. Oh I really do.
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* Diana's [[FishOutOfWater baffled reaction]] to the restrictions of a dress:
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* Diana's [[FishOutOfWater baffled reaction]] to the restrictions of a 1910s dress:
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to a bit of fisticuffs should the occasion arise.
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, fight using their "principles", but then grins and says she's not opposed to a bit of fisticuffs fisticuffs, should the occasion arise.arise. And she tops it off with a fighting pose.
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* Etta Candy's introduction:
--> '''Etta:''' It's Etta Candy. I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana:''' What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta:''' I go where he tells me to go and I do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana:''' Well, where I'm from that's called "slavery".\\
'''Etta:''' I really like her.\\
'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
--> '''Etta:''' It's Etta Candy. I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana:''' What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta:''' I go where he tells me to go and I do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana:''' Well, where I'm from that's called "slavery".\\
'''Etta:''' I really like her.\\
'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to fisticuffs should the occasion arise.
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to a bit of fisticuffs should the occasion arise.
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* Diana's baffled reaction to the restrictions of a dress:
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* Diana's [[FishOutOfWater baffled reaction reaction]] to the restrictions of a dress:
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to fisticuffs if she gets an opportunity.
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** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to fisticuffs if she gets an opportunity.should the occasion arise.
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* Steve freaking out over Diana using her brace to shield him from a bullet.
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* Steve freaking out over When Diana using first uses her brace to shield deflect a bullet aimed at Steve, it loses its velocity and harmlessly falls onto Steve's hand, only for him from a bullet.to freak out due to the bullet still being hot.
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-->'''Diana''' (''while striking silly poses in front of a mirror''): How can a woman possibly fight in this?
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-->'''Diana''' (''while striking silly poses in front of a mirror''): How can a woman possibly fight in this?this?
** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to fisticuffs if she gets an opportunity.
** Etta admits that women aren't supposed to fight, but then grins and says she's not opposed to fisticuffs if she gets an opportunity.
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** The would-be assassin looking down at his gun as if something is wrong with it after Diana deflects his shot.
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''Diana]''
* Steve freaking out over Diana using her brace to shield him from a bullet.
* Diana's baffled reaction to the restrictions of a dress:
-->'''Diana''' (''while striking silly poses in front of a mirror''): How can a woman possibly fight in this?
* Steve freaking out over Diana using her brace to shield him from a bullet.
* Diana's baffled reaction to the restrictions of a dress:
-->'''Diana''' (''while striking silly poses in front of a mirror''): How can a woman possibly fight in this?
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* Steve's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were brought to life by Zeus.
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* Steve's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were was brought to life by Zeus.
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-->'''Diana''': You're a man.\\
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-->'''Diana''': You're a man.\\man!\\
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-->'''Diana''': You're a man!\\
'''Steve:''' Yeah ''[{{beat}}]''... don't I look like one?
'''Steve:''' Yeah ''[{{beat}}]''... don't I look like one?
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-->'''Diana''': You're a man!\\
man.\\
'''Steve:'''Yeah ''[{{beat}}]''... don't Yeah. ''[{{beat}}]'' ...do I not look like one?
'''Steve:'''
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'''Steve:''' Yeah ''({{beat}})''... don't I look like one?
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'''Steve:''' Yeah ''({{beat}})''...''[{{beat}}]''... don't I look like one?
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-->'''Steve''': ''({{beat}})''...''[{{beat}}]''... Well that's neat.
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'''Steve:''' Yeah... don't I look like one?
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'''Steve:''' Yeah...Yeah ''({{beat}})''... don't I look like one?
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-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''... Well that's neat.
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-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...''({{beat}})''... Well that's neat.
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'''Steve:''' Yeah... don't I look like one?\\
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'''Steve:''' Yeah... don't I look like one?\\one?
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---> '''Etta:''' It's Etta Candy. I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
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* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana's surprise as she finds him on the beach of Themiscyra (since it's the very definition of LadyLand).
-->'''Diana''': You're a man!
-->'''Diana''': You're a man!
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* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana's surprise as she finds him on the beach of Themiscyra (since it's (which is the very definition of LadyLand).
-->'''Diana''': You're aman!man!\\
-->'''Diana''': You're a
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* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana's surprise as she finds him on the beach of Themiscyra (since it's the very definition of LadyLand).
-->'''Diana''': You're a man!
'''Steve:''' Yeah... don't I look like one?\\
* Steve's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were brought to life by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''... Well that's neat.
-->'''Diana''': You're a man!
'''Steve:''' Yeah... don't I look like one?\\
* Steve's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were brought to life by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''... Well that's neat.
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.Diana]''
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
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'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''Diana]''
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.
* Steve Trevor's reaction to Diana revealing that she and all of the other Amazons were created by Zeus.
-->'''Steve''': ''(long beat)''...Well that's neat.
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* Etta Candy's introduction:
---> '''Etta:''' It's Etta Candy. I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana:''' What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta:''' I go where he tells me to go and I do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana:''' Well, where I'm from that's called "slavery".\\
'''Etta:''' I really like her.\\
'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
---> '''Etta:''' It's Etta Candy. I'm Steve Trevor's secretary.\\
'''Diana:''' What is a "secretary"?\\
'''Etta:''' I go where he tells me to go and I do what he tells me to do.\\
'''Diana:''' Well, where I'm from that's called "slavery".\\
'''Etta:''' I really like her.\\
'''Steve:''' Fantastic. Ladies, after you. ''[they walk off with Etta chattering away over how much she likes Diana]''
