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* Novalee has three alarms set up in the Wal-Mart, each set up so she can only reach them as she sits up (she is pregnant, after all).
* Novalee keeps a journal of all the things she takes from the Wal-Mart so she can pay it all back later.
* Novalee keeps a journal of all the things she takes from the Wal-Mart so she can pay it all back later.
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* Novalee has three alarms set up in the Wal-Mart, Walmart, each set up so she can only reach them as she sits up (she is pregnant, after all).
* Novalee keeps a journal of all the things she takes from theWal-Mart Walmart so she can pay it all back later.
* Novalee keeps a journal of all the things she takes from the
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--> Lexie: "Didn't he use anything?"
--> Novalee: "...me...?"
--> Novalee: "...me...?"
to:
--> Lexie: "Didn't '''Lexie''': Didn't he use anything?"
anything?
-->Novalee: "...'''Novalee''': ...me...?"?
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--> Forney: "...Things went well?"
--> Novalee: "You bet!"
--> Novalee: "You bet!"
to:
--> Forney: "...'''Forney''': ...Things went well?"
well?
-->Novalee: "You bet!"'''Novalee''': You bet!
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--> Forney: "Why would a man on a Harley steal a woman's pillows?"
--> Novalee: "Because he could, I guess."
--> Novalee: "Because he could, I guess."
to:
--> Forney: "Why '''Forney''': Why would a man on a Harley steal a woman's pillows?"
pillows?
-->Novalee: "Because '''Novalee''': Because he could, I guess."
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--> Ruth: "Jesus Christ, another guitar player. So what's your name?"
--> Willy Jack: "Willy Jack Pickens."
--> Ruth: "You didn't even have to make that up, did you?"
--> Willy Jack: "Willy Jack Pickens."
--> Ruth: "You didn't even have to make that up, did you?"
to:
--> Ruth: "Jesus '''Ruth''': Jesus Christ, another guitar player. So what's your name?"
name?
--> '''Willy Jack''': WillyJack: "Willy Jack Pickens."
Pickens.
-->Ruth: "You '''Ruth''': You didn't even have to make that up, did you?"you?
--> '''Willy Jack''': Willy
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--> Willy: "Spending money?"
--> Ruth: *looks directly at his crotch*
--> Ruth: *looks directly at his crotch*
to:
--> Willy: "Spending money?"
'''Willy''': Spending money?
-->Ruth: *looks '''Ruth''': ''[looks directly at his crotch*crotch]''
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* Novalee is taking the official photo for the local baseball team, which is made up of overweight, middle-aged men. After a second of thought, she decides that tucking in their shirts was a bad idea. The team is more than happy to oblige the change.
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* Novalee is taking the official photo for the local baseball team, which is made up of overweight, middle-aged men. After a second of thought, she decides that tucking in their shirts was a bad idea. The team is more than happy to oblige the change.change.
** Novalee then asks if there's a championship banner or something that should be included, and they admit they're just celebrating that they made it through the season.
** Novalee then asks if there's a championship banner or something that should be included, and they admit they're just celebrating that they made it through the season.
