Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Minor formatting fix
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Count Charon:''' Professor... Eisner, was it? Why do you keep raising your hand?\\
to:
Changed line(s) 35 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Raphael:''' Hey, Dedue! You're big and buff. Do you wanna be a grappler, too?\\
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added a moment from Chapter 18 of Eagle
Added DiffLines:
** In Chapter 18, the Blue Lions travel to Fhirdiad to witness Dimitri's coronation, and along the way, they have a hearty feast at Count Charon's manor. After her students have finished, the count wonders why Byleth is behaving strangely at the dinner table:
-->'''Count Charon:''' Professor... Eisner, was it? Why do you keep raising your hand?\\
'''Byleth:''' This is what my students do when they have something to say.\\
'''Count Charon:''' Well, then, what do you have to say this time?\\
'''Byleth:''' ''(holding out her empty plate)'' [[BigEater I'd like a fourth helping, please]].
-->'''Count Charon:''' Professor... Eisner, was it? Why do you keep raising your hand?\\
'''Byleth:''' This is what my students do when they have something to say.\\
'''Count Charon:''' Well, then, what do you have to say this time?\\
'''Byleth:''' ''(holding out her empty plate)'' [[BigEater I'd like a fourth helping, please]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 282 (click to see context) from:
'''Skull''': WHAT\\
to:
'''Skull''': WHAT\\[[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs WHAT]]\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 90,91 (click to see context) from:
--> '''Zexion''': L-Listen, Larxene...w-w-we didn't mean to walk in on you...we just...''(Larxene summons her lighting)'' [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere The hell with it - Run, Roxas!]]
** When [[TheBrute Lexaeus]] realizes he got a page, he uppercuts Xaldin in the chin and yells, [[LiveActionTV/DrakeAndJosh "COCK-A-DOODLE-DOO, THE COW SAYS MOO!"]]
** When [[TheBrute Lexaeus]] realizes he got a page, he uppercuts Xaldin in the chin and yells, [[LiveActionTV/DrakeAndJosh "COCK-A-DOODLE-DOO, THE COW SAYS MOO!"]]
to:
--> '''Zexion''': L-Listen, Larxene...w-w-we didn't mean to walk in on you...we just...''(Larxene summons her lighting)'' lightning)'' [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere The hell with it - Run, Roxas!]]
** When [[TheBrute Lexaeus]] realizes he got a page, he uppercuts Xaldin in the chin and yells,[[LiveActionTV/DrakeAndJosh [[Series/DrakeAndJosh "COCK-A-DOODLE-DOO, THE COW SAYS MOO!"]]
** When [[TheBrute Lexaeus]] realizes he got a page, he uppercuts Xaldin in the chin and yells,
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 212 (click to see context) from:
'''Anon''': hot\\
to:
'''Anon''': hot\\[[AmazonChaser hot]]\\
Changed line(s) 214,215 (click to see context) from:
'''Anon''': yes please\\
'''Queen''': ... What??\\
'''Queen''': ... What??\\
to:
'''Anon''': yes please\\
[[BluntYes yes]] [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder please]]\\
'''Queen''': ...What??\\[[BigWhat What]]??\\
'''Queen''': ...
Changed line(s) 219 (click to see context) from:
'''Oracle''': [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E8HurricaneNeddy It's true, but he shouldn't say it.]]
to:
'''Oracle''': [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E8HurricaneNeddy It's true, but he shouldn't say it.]]]]\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 210 (click to see context) from:
** At one point, an argument over whether or not Mona is a cat is resolved by an Anon telling them to respect how Mona identifies himself. Mona expresses his gratitude by naming him "Anon #1", which Mishima then logs him in as. Anon #1 promptly changes the direction of the whole chat by asking if the Phantom Thieves are Persona users, implicitly revealing himself to be one as well.
to:
** At one point, an When the Thieves discuss their weapons
-->'''Queen''': I have a pair of brass knuckles. I was a fist fighter.\\
'''Anon''': hot\\
'''Queen''': Do you want to get smacked?\\
'''Anon''': yes please\\
'''Queen''': ... What??\\
'''Joker''': Ahem.\\
'''Joker''': [[UsefulNotes/MichaelJordan Stop it. Get some help.]]\\
'''Anon''': Joker don't even pretend like u scandalized\\
'''Oracle''': [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E8HurricaneNeddy It's true, but he shouldn't say it.]]
'''Joker''': ORACLE NO\\
'''Joker''': you guys are not helping...
** An argument over whether or not Mona is a cat is resolved by an Anon telling them to respect how Mona identifies himself. Mona expresses his gratitude by naming him "Anon #1",which (as Oracle puts it, "[[Series/FreshOffTheBoat The garbage man is right. Promote him. To Garbage boss]]"). Mishima then logs him in as.as Anon #1, much to his delight. Anon #1 promptly changes the direction of the whole chat by asking if the Phantom Thieves are Persona users, implicitly revealing himself to be one as well.
-->'''Queen''': I have a pair of brass knuckles. I was a fist fighter.\\
'''Anon''': hot\\
'''Queen''': Do you want to get smacked?\\
'''Anon''': yes please\\
'''Queen''': ... What??\\
'''Joker''': Ahem.\\
'''Joker''': [[UsefulNotes/MichaelJordan Stop it. Get some help.]]\\
'''Anon''': Joker don't even pretend like u scandalized\\
'''Oracle''': [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E8HurricaneNeddy It's true, but he shouldn't say it.]]
'''Joker''': ORACLE NO\\
'''Joker''': you guys are not helping...
** An argument over whether or not Mona is a cat is resolved by an Anon telling them to respect how Mona identifies himself. Mona expresses his gratitude by naming him "Anon #1",
Changed line(s) 301,302 (click to see context) from:
--> '''Teddie''': I don’t know. I did a lot of sit-ups beforehand, though.\\
'''Ryuji''': Oh, great… now you’ve got him doing sit-ups on the floor. Nonstop.\\
'''Ryuji''': Oh, great… now you’ve got him doing sit-ups on the floor. Nonstop.\\
to:
'''Yosuke''': We kind of knew that already. It's not like he's that big of a surprise; [[VideoGame/Persona4ArenaUltimax we've met]] [[VideoGame/Persona3 a dog Persona user]].\\
'''Naoto''': Granted, he couldn't talk like Morgana does, but a non-human all the same.\\
'''Morgana''': Excuse you. I identify as a human in all respects save for body.\\
'''Yu''': Respect his identity.\\
'''Morgana''': And that's why you're Anon #1.\\
'''Chie''': Yeah, [[SarcasmMode thanks for that]]. He's been calling himself that.\\
'''Morgana''': Teddie, ''how''?\\
'''Teddie''': I
'''Ryuji''': Oh, great… now
Changed line(s) 304 (click to see context) from:
'''Haru''': I don’t think he’ll be responding or having Joker type for him for a little while. He’ll tucker out eventually, though.
to:
'''Haru''': I don’t think he’ll he'll be responding or having Joker type for him for a little while. He’ll He'll tucker out eventually, though.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 352 (click to see context) from:
'''Ann: LOL\\
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 348 (click to see context) from:
'''Futaba''': i am in a group therapy\\
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30894866/chapters/76286864 Harem Support Group]]'', a groupchat fic involving the various women in Akira's life, takes a few amusing turns, especially after the confidants from outside the party learn that the other girls are the Phantom Thieves.
** When the Thieves explain that not all their targets had Palaces:
-->'''Chihaya''': What constitutes a "minor" heart compared to a major heart?\\
'''Futaba''': I dunno theyre just not as evil\\
'''Chihaya''': They're just not as evil??? Was my cult leader an important one?\\
'''Tae''': Oyamada murdered a child for profit. What was his palace like?\\
'''Sadayo''': Also profiteering from child suffering in my corner, was it two separate palaces? How does it work for an evil couple?\\
'''Makoto''': Respectfully… With no intention to minimise the pain and suffering of your personal circumstances… We have only had to assault five palaces thus far. All of your changes of heart were "Minor".\\
'''Tae''': Damn how fucked up do they have to be for Oyamada to still be "minor"\\
'''Hifumi''': My mum was just a bit controlling, I'd believe she wasn't a criminal mastermind.\\
'''Futaba''': yeah she was super easy to beat\\
'''Hifumi''': I am strangely offended by the thought…\\
'''Futaba''': git gud hifumis mum
** When Futaba opens up about her own Palace and her ongoing struggles with mental illness (including what Sadayo calls "the trauma trifecta", depression, anxiety and PTSD), Tae asks if she wants her to refer her to a therapist.
'''Futaba''': i am in a group therapy\\
'''Tae''': Oh amazing! Operating out of which clinic?\\
'''Ichiko''': Wait for it.\\
'''Hifumi''': I'm waiting.\\
'''Ann: LOL\\
'''Tae''': THIS GROUP CHAT DOESN'T COUNT!\\
'''Sadayo''': There it is.\\
''Ali Baba cannot be therapied so they escape''\\
'''Tae''': I am going to find that gremlin and cure her if it's the last thing I do.
** When the Thieves explain that not all their targets had Palaces:
-->'''Chihaya''': What constitutes a "minor" heart compared to a major heart?\\
'''Futaba''': I dunno theyre just not as evil\\
'''Chihaya''': They're just not as evil??? Was my cult leader an important one?\\
'''Tae''': Oyamada murdered a child for profit. What was his palace like?\\
'''Sadayo''': Also profiteering from child suffering in my corner, was it two separate palaces? How does it work for an evil couple?\\
'''Makoto''': Respectfully… With no intention to minimise the pain and suffering of your personal circumstances… We have only had to assault five palaces thus far. All of your changes of heart were "Minor".\\
'''Tae''': Damn how fucked up do they have to be for Oyamada to still be "minor"\\
'''Hifumi''': My mum was just a bit controlling, I'd believe she wasn't a criminal mastermind.\\
'''Futaba''': yeah she was super easy to beat\\
'''Hifumi''': I am strangely offended by the thought…\\
'''Futaba''': git gud hifumis mum
** When Futaba opens up about her own Palace and her ongoing struggles with mental illness (including what Sadayo calls "the trauma trifecta", depression, anxiety and PTSD), Tae asks if she wants her to refer her to a therapist.
'''Futaba''': i am in a group therapy\\
'''Tae''': Oh amazing! Operating out of which clinic?\\
'''Ichiko''': Wait for it.\\
'''Hifumi''': I'm waiting.\\
'''Ann: LOL\\
'''Tae''': THIS GROUP CHAT DOESN'T COUNT!\\
'''Sadayo''': There it is.\\
''Ali Baba cannot be therapied so they escape''\\
'''Tae''': I am going to find that gremlin and cure her if it's the last thing I do.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 321 (click to see context) from:
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "[[CombinationAttack Pair]] [[SuperScream Sonar".
to:
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "[[CombinationAttack Pair]] [[SuperScream Sonar".Sonar]]".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 321 (click to see context) from:
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "Pair Sonar".
to:
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "Pair "[[CombinationAttack Pair]] [[SuperScream Sonar".
Changed line(s) 325 (click to see context) from:
'''Haru''': They got the [[NoIndoorVoice volume]] right though.\\
to:
'''Haru''': [''giggling''] They got the [[NoIndoorVoice volume]] right though.\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** The first sign Edelgard notices that something is very different about her surroundings when she wakes up after the night of her honeymoon with Byleth is that she's suddenly six years younger and in her old dorm room at the Officers Academy. The second, and much bigger, surprise comes when she meets a younger Hubert, and he invokes the goddess' name when she asks what is going on:
---> '''Hubert(?)''': What is going on here is that the Professor is going to have you disciplined if you are late for class again, Lady Edelgard.\\
'''Edelgard''': ‘Professor?’ We aren’t in class anymore. We haven’t been for years. Now, why don’t we end this charade? I’m sure you’re champing at the bit to get back to Enbarr and begin our campaign against Those Who Slither—\\
'''Hubert(?)''': What in the Goddess’ name are you talking about?\\
'''Edelgard''': ‘The Goddess’ name?’ You’re an ''atheist'', Hubert.\\
'''Hubert(?)''': (shocked) How could you accuse me of something so heinous, Lady Edelgard?
---> '''Hubert(?)''': What is going on here is that the Professor is going to have you disciplined if you are late for class again, Lady Edelgard.\\
'''Edelgard''': ‘Professor?’ We aren’t in class anymore. We haven’t been for years. Now, why don’t we end this charade? I’m sure you’re champing at the bit to get back to Enbarr and begin our campaign against Those Who Slither—\\
'''Hubert(?)''': What in the Goddess’ name are you talking about?\\
'''Edelgard''': ‘The Goddess’ name?’ You’re an ''atheist'', Hubert.\\
'''Hubert(?)''': (shocked) How could you accuse me of something so heinous, Lady Edelgard?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 130 (click to see context) from:
* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900614/1/The-Game-Show The Game Show]]'' features Link on a dating show hosted by Sheik, with [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTwilightPrincess Zelda, Ilia, Midna]], [[TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime Saria, Malon, Ruto and Navi]] competing to date him. One highlight:
to:
* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900614/1/The-Game-Show The Game Show]]'' features Link on a dating show hosted by Sheik, with [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTwilightPrincess Zelda, Ilia, Midna]], [[TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime Saria, Malon, Ruto and Navi]] competing to date him. One highlight:
Added DiffLines:
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20806889 Clueless]]'', in which Malon discovers Link has no idea where babies come from and forces Talon to help her give him TheTalk.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 130,132 (click to see context) from:
* One SoOkayItsAverage ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' fic featuring Link on a dating show had this gem:
-->"Third question! Where would you live with Link?" [...] "6?"
-->"Uh...um...A BOTTLE!" Contestant six [[note]](Navi)[[/note]] blurted. Sheik stood there blinking.
-->"Third question! Where would you live with Link?" [...] "6?"
-->"Uh...um...A BOTTLE!" Contestant six [[note]](Navi)[[/note]] blurted. Sheik stood there blinking.
to:
* One SoOkayItsAverage ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' fic featuring ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900614/1/The-Game-Show The Game Show]]'' features Link on a dating show had this gem:
-->"Thirdhosted by Sheik, with [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTwilightPrincess Zelda, Ilia, Midna]], [[TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime Saria, Malon, Ruto and Navi]] competing to date him. One highlight:
-->'''Sheik''': Third question! Where would you live withLink?" Link? [...] "6?"
-->"Uh...6?\\
'''Contestant Six'''[[note]](Navi)[[/note]]: Uh...um...ABOTTLE!" Contestant six [[note]](Navi)[[/note]] blurted. BOTTLE!\\
Sheik stood there blinking.
-->"Third
-->'''Sheik''': Third question! Where would you live with
-->"Uh...
'''Contestant Six'''[[note]](Navi)[[/note]]: Uh...um...A
Sheik stood there blinking.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 298 (click to see context) from:
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33182872 The Agi Island Players]]'', a parody fic inspired by the ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', episode "[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheEmberIslandPlayers The Ember Island Players]]", in which the characters watch a ''Franchise/SuperSentai''-esque stage show based on the Phantom Thieves' story.
to:
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33182872 The Agi Island Players]]'', a parody fic inspired by the ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' episode "[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheEmberIslandPlayers The Ember Island Players]]", in which the characters watch a ''Franchise/SuperSentai''-esque stage show based on the Phantom Thieves' story.
Changed line(s) 308 (click to see context) from:
'''Futaba''': [''chuckling'']] Looks like it.\\
to:
'''Futaba''': [''chuckling'']] [''chuckling''] Looks like it.\\
Changed line(s) 310 (click to see context) from:
'''Ryuji''' I dunno Makoto. Don't seem too far off.\\
to:
Changed line(s) 319 (click to see context) from:
** Futaba is ''also'' represented by a cheap puppet, calling itself "Goggles." And unlike Ann, she's in no way insulted by her portrayal: "Goggles is living the dream."
to:
** Futaba is ''also'' represented by a cheap puppet, calling itself "Goggles." called "Goggles", and portrayed as a lazy shut-in gamer. And unlike Ann, she's Futaba is in no way insulted by her portrayal: "Goggles is living the dream."dream!"
Changed line(s) 323 (click to see context) from:
** The inevitable reaction to "Prince Detective's" death.
to:
** The inevitable reaction to "Prince Detective's" death. The author admits that this reference was what pushed them to write the story, saying that it fits better here than it did in the episode.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33182872 The Agi Island Players]]'', a parody fic inspired by the ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', episode "[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheEmberIslandPlayers The Ember Island Players]]", in which the characters watch a ''Franchise/SuperSentai''-esque stage show based on the Phantom Thieves' story.
** Makoto reading the flyer:
-->'''Makoto''': "''Heart-change Task Force Phantom Thieves'' is a new production from the Agi Island Players. We have scoured Tokyo for information on the Phantom Thieves. Our sources include interviews with Shujin Academy students and Phan-Site requesters, dream diaries of change-of-heart targets, correspondences with a dark web entrepreneur, and overheard accounts of a surprisingly knowledgeable bleached-haired delinquent in Shibuya." [''DeathGlare''] Ryuji!
** Makoto going overboard on buying merchandise before the show, including two Joker plushies.
** While the characters representing Joker and Skull are named correctly, Panther's is named "Sexy Cat". Ann is not amused. Meanwhile, Morgana is represented by a terrible puppet operated by "Joker", named "Bakeneko".
** The reaction to the [[FightSceneFailure fight]] with Kamoshida:
-->'''Haru''': Oooh, I always wondered how that went down.\\
'''Ann/Morgana/Ryuji''': It's not!
** "Prince Detective" and "Shoulder Pads" are introduced.
-->'''Makoto''': Is... is that me?\\
'''Futaba''': [''chuckling'']] Looks like it.\\
'''Makoto''': They make me seem so stiff and humorless.\\
'''Ryuji''' I dunno Makoto. Don't seem too far off.\\
'''Shoulder Pads''': [''raising a fist before her face''] I will show them my fist of justice!\\
[''Ryuji, Ann, and Futaba all look at Makoto with smug grins. Ren awkwardly looks away.'']
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "Pair Sonar".
-->'''Skull''': Don't underestimate my sonic wave! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! [''The enemy stuntmen mime being pushed back off stage.'']\\
'''Futaba''': Um... that's... That's certainly something...\\
'''Makoto''': [[FacePalm That's not even what sonar means]]...\\
'''Haru''': They got the [[NoIndoorVoice volume]] right though.\\
'''Ryuji''': [[IResembleThatRemark I'm not that loud!]]
** Futaba is ''also'' represented by a cheap puppet, calling itself "Goggles." And unlike Ann, she's in no way insulted by her portrayal: "Goggles is living the dream."
** Sae's Shadow is represented by a mob boss named "Spikey Bra".
-->'''Makoto''': We will never, ever mention this to my sister.\\
'''Ren''': Agreed.
** The inevitable reaction to "Prince Detective's" death.
-->'''Ann''': Did Akechi just... die?\\
'''Ryuji''': You know, it was really unclear.
** Makoto reading the flyer:
-->'''Makoto''': "''Heart-change Task Force Phantom Thieves'' is a new production from the Agi Island Players. We have scoured Tokyo for information on the Phantom Thieves. Our sources include interviews with Shujin Academy students and Phan-Site requesters, dream diaries of change-of-heart targets, correspondences with a dark web entrepreneur, and overheard accounts of a surprisingly knowledgeable bleached-haired delinquent in Shibuya." [''DeathGlare''] Ryuji!
** Makoto going overboard on buying merchandise before the show, including two Joker plushies.
** While the characters representing Joker and Skull are named correctly, Panther's is named "Sexy Cat". Ann is not amused. Meanwhile, Morgana is represented by a terrible puppet operated by "Joker", named "Bakeneko".
** The reaction to the [[FightSceneFailure fight]] with Kamoshida:
-->'''Haru''': Oooh, I always wondered how that went down.\\
'''Ann/Morgana/Ryuji''': It's not!
** "Prince Detective" and "Shoulder Pads" are introduced.
-->'''Makoto''': Is... is that me?\\
'''Futaba''': [''chuckling'']] Looks like it.\\
'''Makoto''': They make me seem so stiff and humorless.\\
'''Ryuji''' I dunno Makoto. Don't seem too far off.\\
'''Shoulder Pads''': [''raising a fist before her face''] I will show them my fist of justice!\\
[''Ryuji, Ann, and Futaba all look at Makoto with smug grins. Ren awkwardly looks away.'']
** The entire "Persona" concept has been mangled into "Pair Sonar".
-->'''Skull''': Don't underestimate my sonic wave! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! [''The enemy stuntmen mime being pushed back off stage.'']\\
'''Futaba''': Um... that's... That's certainly something...\\
'''Makoto''': [[FacePalm That's not even what sonar means]]...\\
'''Haru''': They got the [[NoIndoorVoice volume]] right though.\\
'''Ryuji''': [[IResembleThatRemark I'm not that loud!]]
** Futaba is ''also'' represented by a cheap puppet, calling itself "Goggles." And unlike Ann, she's in no way insulted by her portrayal: "Goggles is living the dream."
** Sae's Shadow is represented by a mob boss named "Spikey Bra".
-->'''Makoto''': We will never, ever mention this to my sister.\\
'''Ren''': Agreed.
** The inevitable reaction to "Prince Detective's" death.
-->'''Ann''': Did Akechi just... die?\\
'''Ryuji''': You know, it was really unclear.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 203 (click to see context) from:
** The Phantom Thieves are then forced to give an explanation about Shadows, Personas, and Joker's Wildcard abilities, which leads to Joker having to admit that he recruited a [[https://megamitensei.fandom.com/wiki/Mara Mara]].
to:
** The Phantom Thieves are then forced to give an explanation about Shadows, Personas, and Joker's Wildcard abilities, which leads to Joker having to admit that [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11180643/chapters/25202256 he recruited a recruited]] one of the [[https://megamitensei.fandom.com/wiki/Mara Mara]].Mara]] they talked about last time.
Changed line(s) 249 (click to see context) from:
** When Futaba then starts a private chat for the two teams to share their experiences,:
to:
** When Futaba then starts a private chat for the two teams to share their experiences,:experiences:
Changed line(s) 253,255 (click to see context) from:
'''PrinceofJunes''': Dude...\\
'''KungFuCop''': I hope you're happy. My fiancé is so proud of himself.\\
'''DetectivePrince''': It's not that good of a title.\\
'''KungFuCop''': I hope you're happy. My fiancé is so proud of himself.\\
'''DetectivePrince''': It's not that good of a title.\\
to:
Changed line(s) 291,292 (click to see context) from:
'''Ren''': Just… don’t question it.\\
to:
'''Ren''': Just… don’t question it.\\
Changed line(s) 297,298 (click to see context) from:
'''Haru''': I don’t think he’ll be responding or having Joker type for him for a little while. He’ll tucker out eventually, though.\\
to:
'''Haru''': I don’t think he’ll be responding or having Joker type for him for a little while. He’ll tucker out eventually, though.\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 265 (click to see context) from:
'''Oracle''': Yeah, there's a ton of fanfiction of us on AO3. A lot of it is porn.\\
to:
'''Oracle''': Yeah, there's a ton of fanfiction of us on AO3.[=AO3=]. A lot of it is porn.\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 143 (click to see context) from:
** Hell, just the fact that [[TokenReligiousTeammate Kate Marsh's]] first morning at Blackwell had her walk in on a half-nude punk girl who openly admitted to dating another girl. You can imagine her parents would start second-guessing the decision to let her attend if they heard about such a thing.
to:
** Hell, just the fact that [[TokenReligiousTeammate Kate Marsh's]] first morning at Blackwell had her walk in on a half-nude punk girl who openly admitted to dating another girl. You can just imagine her parents would start second-guessing the decision to let her attend if once they heard about such a thing.it.
Changed line(s) 146 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Chloe:''' You haven’t shut up since I got back from Seattle!
to:
Changed line(s) 149,151 (click to see context) from:
** As Kate's birthday approaches, Steph - her LoveInterest for the fic - utterly flips out over what to get her. Then when Max and Chloe head over to help, they see firsthand how [[SeriousBusiness seriously]] Steph's taking it:
-->Steph’s room looks different than the last time Chloe visited, mostly because of the large pieces of drawing paper taped up all over the walls. They’re covered with increasingly frantic scribbles in Steph’s hand. ''Holy crap. It looks like she’s either trying to catch a serial killer or IS one''.\\
“Redecorating?” Chloe jokes. “What the hell is all this? ‘Bunny equals treats slash toys slash both?’ Why does that have, like, five question marks after it?”
-->Steph’s room looks different than the last time Chloe visited, mostly because of the large pieces of drawing paper taped up all over the walls. They’re covered with increasingly frantic scribbles in Steph’s hand. ''Holy crap. It looks like she’s either trying to catch a serial killer or IS one''.\\
“Redecorating?” Chloe jokes. “What the hell is all this? ‘Bunny equals treats slash toys slash both?’ Why does that have, like, five question marks after it?”
to:
** As Kate's birthday approaches, Steph - her LoveInterest for the fic - utterly flips out over what to get her. Then when When Max and Chloe head over to her place to help, they see firsthand how [[SeriousBusiness seriously]] Steph's taking it:
-->Steph’s room looks different than the last time Chloe visited, mostly because of theit; she's plastered large pieces sheets of drawing paper taped up all over the walls. They’re walls, all covered with increasingly frantic scribbles in Steph’s hand. ideas for gifts.
--->'''Chloe's thoughts:''' ''Holy crap. It looks like she’s either trying to catch a serial killer or IS one''.\\
“Redecorating?” Chloe jokes. “What the hell is all this? ‘Bunny equals treats slash toys slash both?’ Why does that have, like, five question marks after it?”
-->Steph’s room looks different than the last time Chloe visited, mostly because of the
--->'''Chloe's thoughts:''' ''Holy crap. It looks like she’s either trying to catch a serial killer or IS one''.
“Redecorating?” Chloe jokes. “What the hell is all this? ‘Bunny equals treats slash toys slash both?’ Why does that have, like, five question marks after it?”
Changed line(s) 154 (click to see context) from:
** The sheer fact that [[LovableJock Sandy]] turns into a massive {{Adorkable}} mess when around Max, to the point of going into nervous rambling when trying to ask if she wants a drink, or trying to ask her out on a date. Max even mentally lampshades how it's nice to not be the most awkward person in a conversation for a change.
to:
** The sheer fact that [[LovableJock Sandy]] turns into a massive {{Adorkable}} mess when around whenever she interacts with Max, to the point of going into nervous rambling when trying to ask if she wants a drink, or trying to ask her out on a date. Max even mentally lampshades how it's nice to not be the most awkward person in a conversation for a change.
