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* During the "Uncle Blobb's Amazing Carnival" song, Zidgel gets ''really'' excited upon seeing one of the rides.
--> '''The crowd''': Uncle Blobb's amazing carnival-
--> '''Zidgel''': [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK, THE BOUNCE AND SPIN!]]
--> '''The crowd''': Hopefully this will be a great ride at the carnival-
--> '''Zidgel''': (shaking Midgel like a little kid while Midgel just looks completely disinterested) LET'S ALL GO CLIMB IN!!
--> '''The crowd''': Uncle Blobb's amazing carnival-
--> '''Zidgel''': [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK, THE BOUNCE AND SPIN!]]
--> '''The crowd''': Hopefully this will be a great ride at the carnival-
--> '''Zidgel''': (shaking Midgel like a little kid while Midgel just looks completely disinterested) LET'S ALL GO CLIMB IN!!
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* Zidgel fooling the crew into thinking the behavior modifier malfunctioned by pretending be brainwashed.
-->'''Zidgel''': TakeMeToYourLeader...
* To test if the behavior modifier worked on Midgel, Fidgel pretends to fall down and asks Midgel to give him a hand. Midgel responds by doing a slow sarcastic clap.
* Zidgel claiming that they've all become "[[BlatantLies the picture of caring for each other]]"... all while he just stares at himself in the mirror and Midgel plays a video game instead of paying attention to what's ahead of him while piloting the ship.
-->'''Zidgel''': TakeMeToYourLeader...
* To test if the behavior modifier worked on Midgel, Fidgel pretends to fall down and asks Midgel to give him a hand. Midgel responds by doing a slow sarcastic clap.
* Zidgel claiming that they've all become "[[BlatantLies the picture of caring for each other]]"... all while he just stares at himself in the mirror and Midgel plays a video game instead of paying attention to what's ahead of him while piloting the ship.
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* Speaking of the rising heat, it's gotten so hot on the planet that they had to cancel their recent ice-sculpting contest.
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* Speaking of the rising heat, it's gotten so hot on the planet that they had to cancel their recent ice-sculpting ice-{{sculpt|ures}}ing contest.
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'''Ice-Sculptor:''' It was a swan... It was... beautiful...
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* When the inhabitants told the penguins that they didn't call them about the cutting-in-line and in fact called them about the rising heat around the planet, the penguins do notice that it's getting hot like a sauna, or a barbecue... or someone [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs barbecuing in a sauna!]] And when Midgel turns on the satellite view, his monitor first shows two men that are, what else, barbecuing in a sauna.
* Speaking of the rising heat, it's gotten so hot on the planet that they had to cancel their recent ice-sculpting contest.
--> '''Ice-Sculpting Announcer:''' And this... would've been the winning entry!\\
''[Announcer gets out from the camera view, now showing a contestant weeping over a bowl of melted ice.]''\\
'''Ice-Sculptor:''' It was a swan... It was... beautiful...
* Speaking of the rising heat, it's gotten so hot on the planet that they had to cancel their recent ice-sculpting contest.
--> '''Ice-Sculpting Announcer:''' And this... would've been the winning entry!\\
''[Announcer gets out from the camera view, now showing a contestant weeping over a bowl of melted ice.]''\\
'''Ice-Sculptor:''' It was a swan... It was... beautiful...
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* The fact that Planet Wait-Your-Turn's president is named [[MeaningfulName President Noimthepresident]], the fact that he was the one who started the whole mess, and the fact that [[LaserGuidedKarma he ends up hurtling through space as a result of his actions]].
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* Zidgel using BING as a hairstylist. One of the styles that shows up is [[spoiler:Grandmum's curly blue hair]] and ultimately he just sticks with his normal haircut.
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* Zidgel using BING as a hairstylist. One of the styles that shows up is [[spoiler:Grandmum's Grandmum's curly blue hair]] hair and ultimately he just sticks with his normal haircut.
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* Jason gets a letter from Trevor, who's having a blast at Space Camp.
-->'''Michelle:''' Personally, I never understood why a bunch of kids would wait in line just to get nauseous.\\
'''Grandmum:''' Well, come along, ducks! We'll all read our mail over some [[CordonBleughChef delicious prune trifle!]]\\
''(Michelle winces at the thought)''\\
'''Jason:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, here you can get nauseous without the wait.]]
-->'''Michelle:''' Personally, I never understood why a bunch of kids would wait in line just to get nauseous.\\
'''Grandmum:''' Well, come along, ducks! We'll all read our mail over some [[CordonBleughChef delicious prune trifle!]]\\
''(Michelle winces at the thought)''\\
'''Jason:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, here you can get nauseous without the wait.]]
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* At the near end, the Rockhopper crew watches of slideshow of Zidgel saving the day with his valiant efforts, such as playing a video game, covering his ears when the alarm went off, and holding a bottle of shampoo.
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* At the near end, Immediately afterwards, the Rockhopper crew watches of a slideshow of Zidgel saving the day with his valiant "valiant" efforts, such as playing a video game, covering his ears when the alarm went off, and holding a bottle of shampoo.
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* Zidgel complaining about a certain carnival ride.
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* Zidgel complaining about a certain carnival the spinning teacup ride.
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* While investigating Uncle Blob's plans, Jason and Fidgel climb over a wall, then look up to see Kevin has somehow gotten on top of the wall in the few seconds it took for the two of them to get down.
-->'''Jason:''' How'd ''he'' get up there?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} For a big man, he's got a great vertical.]]
-->'''Jason:''' How'd ''he'' get up there?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} For a big man, he's got a great vertical.]]
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* While investigating Uncle Blobb's plans, Jason and Fidgel climb over a wall, then look up to see Kevin has somehow gotten on top of the wall in the few seconds it took for the two of them to get down.
-->'''Jason:''' How'd ''he'' get up there?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} For a big man, he's got a great vertical.]]
* After Zidgel voices his complaint to Bizmoff the Amazing Juggler, even after being turned into a seed of discontent, he keeps on complaining about the lack of fun he's add at the carnival. It keeps going throughout the rest of the scene, to top it off.
-->'''Bizmoff:''' Hi-yah, kid! Did you have fun at the carnival today?
-->'''Zidgel:''' No sir, I can't say that I have. In fact, I would have to say that my time here was un-fun! I came here to have fun and I don't recall a fun feeling anywhere at any point all day! And frankly, I don't care who I may offend with my opinions at this point!
-->'''Jason:''' How'd ''he'' get up there?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} For a big man, he's got a great vertical.]]
* After Zidgel voices his complaint to Bizmoff the Amazing Juggler, even after being turned into a seed of discontent, he keeps on complaining about the lack of fun he's add at the carnival. It keeps going throughout the rest of the scene, to top it off.
-->'''Bizmoff:''' Hi-yah, kid! Did you have fun at the carnival today?
-->'''Zidgel:''' No sir, I can't say that I have. In fact, I would have to say that my time here was un-fun! I came here to have fun and I don't recall a fun feeling anywhere at any point all day! And frankly, I don't care who I may offend with my opinions at this point!
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--> '''Kevin:''' Sorry, I only got Icky Gooey Slab of Slop.\\
'''Wordsworth:''' It's not the same...\\
'''Wordsworth:''' It's not the same...\\
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--> '''Kevin:''' Sorry, I only got Sorry. How about an Icky Gooey Slab of Slop.\\
Slop?\\
'''Wordsworth:''' It's not thesame...same.\\
'''Wordsworth:''' It's not the
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-->'''Jason:''' How'd he get up there so fast?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} Well, for a big fellow, he's got an impressive vertical.]]
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} Well, for a big fellow, he's got an impressive vertical.]]
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-->'''Jason:''' How'd he ''he'' get up there so fast?
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-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}}Well, for For a big fellow, man, he's got an impressive a great vertical.]]
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}}
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* Grandmum making jelly donuts at the start...which are revealed to be filled with ''eel jelly''. Michelle wordlessly puts the donut she was about to eat back on the tray.
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-->'''Zidgel:''' Thanks, I...needed that. ''(a small fire lights back up and Kevin sprays Zidgel with the extinguisher point blank; Zidgel just stares at him in exasperation with his hair thrown back from the spray)''
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* While investigating Uncle Blob's plans, Jason and Fidgel climb over a wall, then look up to see Kevin has somehow gotten on top of the wall in the few seconds it took for the two of them to get down.
-->'''Jason:''' How'd he get up there so fast?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} Well, for a big fellow, he's got an impressive vertical.]]
-->'''Jason:''' How'd he get up there so fast?
-->'''Fidgel:''' [[{{Acrofatic}} Well, for a big fellow, he's got an impressive vertical.]]
