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'''Ade!Mike:''' Okay, guys, come on. [[TheyJustDidntCare As the one guy said to the other guy when he was getting fed up, I'm getting fed up.]] I want to wash my smalls, and I don’t mean dip my tiddlies in a glass of water. Let's go.\\
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'''Ade!Mike:''' Okay, guys, come on. [[TheyJustDidntCare As the one guy said to the other guy when he was getting fed up, I'm getting fed up.]] up. I want to wash my smalls, and I don’t mean dip my tiddlies in a glass of water. Let's go.\\
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** What makes it funnier? He [[HiddenDepths begins to describe to Mike an episode]] ''[[HypocriticalHumor he actually enjoyed]]'' before complaining that [[EvilCannotComprehendGood "it was gone all so BLOODY nicely!"]], even complaining [[ArsonMurderAndJayWalking how the policeman was nice]]. Cue a policeman [[ThereWasADoor bursting through the front door]].
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-->'''Vicar''': Ashes to ashes-
-->'''Rick''': ''(singing)'' [[Music/DavidBowie Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie...]]
-->'''Vicar''': ''(grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
-->'''Neil''': No, we can't just bury Rik alive.
-->'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil. *{{Beat}}* We better kill him first!
-->'''Rick''': ''(singing)'' [[Music/DavidBowie Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie...]]
-->'''Vicar''': ''(grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
-->'''Neil''': No, we can't just bury Rik alive.
-->'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil. *{{Beat}}* We better kill him first!
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-->'''Vicar''': Ashes to ashes-
-->'''Rick''': ''(singing)''ashes-\\
'''Rick''': ''[singing]'' [[Music/DavidBowie Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie...]]
-->'''Vicar''': ''(grabs]]\\
'''Vicar''': ''[grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the opengrave)'' grave]'' Shut up!
-->'''Rick''':up!\\
'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into agwave!
-->'''Vyvyan''':grave!\\
'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill itin!
-->'''Neil''':in!\\
'''Neil''': No, we can't just buryRik alive.
-->'''Vyvyan''':Rick alive.\\
'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil.*{{Beat}}* ''[{{Beat}}]'' We better kill him first!
-->'''Rick''': ''(singing)''
'''Rick''': ''[singing]'' [[Music/DavidBowie Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie...
-->'''Vicar''': ''(grabs
'''Vicar''': ''[grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open
-->'''Rick''':
'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a
-->'''Vyvyan''':
'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it
-->'''Neil''':
'''Neil''': No, we can't just bury
-->'''Vyvyan''':
'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil.
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-->'''Neil''': No, we can't just bury Rik alive.
-->'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil. *{{Beat}}* We better kill him first!
-->'''Vyvyan''': That's absolutely correct, Neil. *{{Beat}}* We better kill him first!
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* During the flashback:
--> '''Rick''': Neil, the bathroom's free, unlike the country under the Thatcherite junta!
--> '''Rick''': Neil, the bathroom's free, unlike the country under the Thatcherite junta!
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* Vyvyan lighting a Molotov cocktail and saying "It's funny, but being ill makes me lose my usual tolerant and easy-going approach to communal living!" before lobbing it into Rick's bedroom.
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* Vyvyan lighting a Molotov cocktail (having ripped off the sleeve of his pyjamas and saying stuffed into a bottle to make it), commenting, "It's funny, but being ill makes me lose my usual tolerant and easy-going approach to communal living!" before lobbing it into Rick's bedroom.bedroom.
** Made funnier by how he later regrets throwing the Molotov...because it was a waste of almost an entire bottle of vodka.
** Made funnier by how he later regrets throwing the Molotov...because it was a waste of almost an entire bottle of vodka.
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* A moment of {{Literal Minded}}ness from Neil:
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* A Yet another moment of {{Literal Minded}}ness from Neil:
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-->'''Vyvyan''': No! No! NO! We're not watching the bloody Good Life! Bloody bloody bloody! I hate it! [[TastesLikeDiabetes It's so bloody nice!]] Felicity "Treacle" Kendal and Richard "Sugar-Flavored-Snot" Briers! What do they do now? Chocolate bloody Button ads, that's what! They're just a couple of reactionary stereotypes, confirming the myth that everyone in Britain is a lovable, middle-class eccentric - and [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I - HATE - THEM!]]\\
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-->'''Vyvyan''': No! No! NO! We're not watching the bloody Good Life! Bloody bloody bloody! I hate it! [[TastesLikeDiabetes It's so bloody nice!]] Felicity "Treacle" Kendal and Richard "Sugar-Flavored-Snot" Briers! What do they do now? Chocolate bloody Button ads, that's what! They're just a couple of reactionary stereotypes, confirming the myth that everyone in Britain is a lovable, middle-class loveable, [[ATouchOfClassEthnicityAndReligion middle-class]] eccentric - and [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I - HATE - THEM!]]\\
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* When the drunken vicar (played by Monty Python's TerryJones) turns up, we get this gem:
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* When the drunken vicar (played by Monty Python's TerryJones) Creator/MontyPython's Creator/TerryJones) turns up, we get this gem:
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-->'''Rick''':''(singing)''Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie.
-->'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
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-->'''Vicar''':''(Grabs
-->'''Vicar''': ''(grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
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-->'''Rick''':''(singing')'Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie.
-->:'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->:'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->:'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
-->:'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->:'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->:'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
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*When the drunken vicar (played by Monty Python's TerryJones) turns up, we get this gem:
-->'''Vicar''': Ashes to ashes-
-->'''Rick''':''(singing')'Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie.
-->:'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->:'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->:'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
-->'''Vicar''': Ashes to ashes-
-->'''Rick''':''(singing')'Funk to funky, we know Major Tom's a junkie.
-->:'''Vicar''':''(Grabs Rick by the lapels of his blazer and head buts him, knocking him into the open grave)'' Shut up!
-->:'''Rick''': Help! I've fallen into a gwave!
-->:'''Vyvyan''': Brilliant! Let's fill it in!
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* Mike's new room has Music/BuddyHolly in it, trapped in the ceiling by his parachute. Mike plans to get rich off of the songs Holly written based off his new insect diet, only for Holly's parachute to break, causing Holly to plummet to the floor. Mike, unfazed, grabs his guitar, thinking he can make a few bucks off of it.
* Neil sees Mike carrying a bag to the cellar, which he thinks is full of washing, and reminds him of the house's People's Charter: "None of the guys, right, no matter what, like, not even if they've been eaten by wild dogs...[[note]] Vyvyan's addition.[[/note]] shall go to the laundrette without first collecting all the other guys' dirty gear." Mike reminds him of Clause 83: "Except for Mike."
* Neil sees Mike carrying a bag to the cellar, which he thinks is full of washing, and reminds him of the house's People's Charter: "None of the guys, right, no matter what, like, not even if they've been eaten by wild dogs...[[note]] Vyvyan's addition.[[/note]] shall go to the laundrette without first collecting all the other guys' dirty gear." Mike reminds him of Clause 83: "Except for Mike."
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* Mike's new room has {{Music/BuddyHolly}} in it, trapped in the ceiling by his parachute. Mike plans to get rich off of the songs Holly written based off his new insect diet, only for Holly's parachute to break, causing Holly to plummet to the floor. Mike, unfazed, grabs his guitar, thinking he can make a few bucks off of it.
* The house rules:
-->"No member of the house, even if attacked by rabid dogs (Vyvyan's addition), can take their clothes to the Laundromat with taking everyone else's*."
** "* Except for Mike."
* The house rules:
-->"No member of the house, even if attacked by rabid dogs (Vyvyan's addition), can take their clothes to the Laundromat with taking everyone else's*."
** "* Except for Mike."
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* The house rules:
-->"No member of the house, even if attacked by rabid dogs (Vyvyan's addition), can take their clothes to the Laundromat with taking everyone else's*."
** "* Except for Mike."
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** Then their homicidal landlord starts breaking into the room, and Neil suggests that they ''could'', maybe, consider eating '''him''' instead.
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* The character-swap scene. Just switching their clothes (especially with the shortest character taking the tallest character’s role) would have been funny in itself, but the fact that [[StylisticSuck they deliberately play their new characters piss-poorly]] takes the gag up to hilarious.
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* The character-swap scene. Just switching their clothes (especially with the shortest character actor, Christopher Ryan, taking the role of Neil, usually played by the tallest character’s role) actor, Nigel Planer) would have been funny in itself, but the fact that [[StylisticSuck they deliberately play their new characters piss-poorly]] takes the gag up to hilarious.hilarious. The scene also doubles as a CastingGag.
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** It also doubles as a CastingGag.
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** Neil fills up the water jug with his own piss and then it's then thrown at the Footlights team.
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* Neil's letter (written by committee) to his bank manager:
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* Neil's letter (written by committee) to his bank manager:manager. Vyvyan explains that "dear" sounds too much like "Will you go to bed with me?", and "love" means "Come get it like a bitch funky sex machine!" With further input from Mike and Rick, the letter manages to be both straight to the point and completely roundabout at the same time:
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** As well as Vyvyan explaining that "dear" sounds too much like "Will you to go bed with me?" and "love" means "come get it like a bitch funky sex machine!"
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-->'''Ghost:''' No need to get aggressive.
-->'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING! ''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
-->'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING! ''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
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-->'''Ghost:''' No need to get aggressive.
-->'''Rick:'''aggressive.\\
'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING!''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''
-->'''Neil:'''''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''\\
'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
-->'''Rick:'''
'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING!
-->'''Neil:'''
'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
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* Early in the episode, Mike comes into Neil's bedroom where the others have gathered holding a fish. He asks "What's this?" to which Vyvyan replies "A fish, Mike!" He leaves, satisfied. He then comes back soon after and finishes the question "What's this fish doing in my bed." Vyvyan replies, "It's not in your bed, Mike." He then leaves and comes back without the fish. "What's this fish doing in my bed?" The others reply, in unison "''WHAT FISH''?"
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* Early in the episode, Mike comes into Neil's bedroom where the others have gathered holding a fish. He asks "What's this?" to which Vyvyan replies "A fish, Mike!" He leaves, satisfied. He then comes back soon after and finishes the question "What's this fish doing in my bed." Vyvyan replies, "It's not in your bed, Mike." He then leaves and comes back without the fish. "What's this fish doing in my bed?" The others reply, in unison "''WHAT FISH''?"
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* The clueless bank robbery by the lads, which ends up working as Rick inadvertently foils a real robbery and gets the money using a water pistol.
** "I didn't get these from Tesco's, okay!"
** "I didn't get these from Tesco's, okay!"
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* The clueless bank robbery by the lads, which ends up working as Rick inadvertently foils a real robbery and gets the money using a water pistol.
** "Ipistol. The tone is set when Mike distributes the "guns" and suggests the lads don't ask questions about them:
-->'''Mike:''' Let's just say I didn't getthese from them at Tesco's, okay!"okay?\\
'''Neil:''' [[LiteralMinded I didn't get them at Tesco's, okay?]]
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-->'''Mike:''' Let's just say I didn't get
'''Neil:''' [[LiteralMinded I didn't get them at Tesco's, okay?]]
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* This joke based off camera-shaking {{Time Skip}}s:
-->''(the whole basement is wrecked)''
-->'''Rick''': I wished they'd stop doing that.
-->'''Neil''': It's to show the passage of time, Rick.
-->''(Vyvyan gets up and vomits)''
* Mike's new room has {{Music/BuddyHolly}} in it, trapped in the ceiling by his parachute. Mike plans to get rich off of the songs Holly written based off his new insect diet, only for Holly's parachute to break, causing Holly to plummet to the floor. Mike, unfazed, grabs his guitar, thinking he can make a few bucks off of it.
* The house rules:
-->"No member of the house, even if attacked by rabid dogs (Vyvyan's addition), can take their clothes to the Laundromat with taking everyone else's*."
** "* Except for Mike."
-->''(the whole basement is wrecked)''
-->'''Rick''': I wished they'd stop doing that.
-->'''Neil''': It's to show the passage of time, Rick.
-->''(Vyvyan gets up and vomits)''
* Mike's new room has {{Music/BuddyHolly}} in it, trapped in the ceiling by his parachute. Mike plans to get rich off of the songs Holly written based off his new insect diet, only for Holly's parachute to break, causing Holly to plummet to the floor. Mike, unfazed, grabs his guitar, thinking he can make a few bucks off of it.
* The house rules:
-->"No member of the house, even if attacked by rabid dogs (Vyvyan's addition), can take their clothes to the Laundromat with taking everyone else's*."
** "* Except for Mike."
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** Someone made an ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'' version [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdgaUy6b5es here.]]
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* Neil prepares for the explosion of the bomb by reading the "incredibly helpful and informative ''Protect and Survive'' manual" and building a shelter under the kitchen table.[[note]] This episode aired at around the time studies into the effects of nuclear war were conducted which showed that the ''Protect and Survive'' manual's advice would be completely valueless in the event of a real nuclear war, as depicted in ''Film/{{Threads}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/WhenTheWindBlows''.[[/note]]
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* Neil prepares for the explosion of the bomb by reading the "incredibly helpful and informative ''Protect and Survive'' manual" and building a shelter under the kitchen table.[[note]] This episode aired at around the time studies into the effects of nuclear war were conducted which showed that the ''Protect and Survive'' manual's advice would be completely valueless in the event of a real nuclear war, as depicted in ''Film/{{Threads}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/WhenTheWindBlows''.''ComicBook/WhenTheWindBlows''.[[/note]]
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* The first of [[RuleOfThree three appearances]] of the "Have we got a video?" RunningGag:
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* The first of [[RuleOfThree three appearances]] appearance of the "Have we got a video?" RunningGag:
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* The RunningGag reaches its payoff when Neil shows up wearing a dress he found in Rick's room, complete with Rick's name sewn into it, and Neil and Vyvyan decide to call the police.
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* The RunningGag reaches its payoff peak when Neil shows up wearing a dress he found in Rick's room, complete with Rick's name sewn into it, and Neil and Vyvyan decide to call the police.
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* As the flashback ends, the RunningGag finds time for one final appearance:
-->'''Vyvyan:''' ''(ruefully)'' We never did get to watch the video.\\
'''Gravedigger:''' Have you got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(sick to death of the question)'' YES... WE'VE GOT A VID-E-O!\\
'''Gravedigger:''' ''(offended)'' I only asked!
-->'''Vyvyan:''' ''(ruefully)'' We never did get to watch the video.\\
'''Gravedigger:''' Have you got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(sick to death of the question)'' YES... WE'VE GOT A VID-E-O!\\
'''Gravedigger:''' ''(offended)'' I only asked!
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** And even better is his sudden ego deflation immediately afterwards-
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* [[RunningGag "Oh! Have we got a video?"]]
-->'''Vyvyan:''' ''[growing increasingly irritated each time he's asked this]'' Yes! We've got a video!
** Especially when Neil asks him, and Vyvyan responds by smashing Neil's head through the window. Neil then complains, "I don't understand! Does that mean we have one or not?"
-->'''Vyvyan:''' ''[growing increasingly irritated each time he's asked this]'' Yes! We've got a video!
** Especially when Neil asks him, and Vyvyan responds by smashing Neil's head through the window. Neil then complains, "I don't understand! Does that mean we have one or not?"
* The first of [[RuleOfThree three appearances]] of the "Have we got a video?" RunningGag:
-->''(the sound of thumping comes from upstairs as Rick nails boards over what he thinks is Vyvyan's bedroom)''\\
'''Mike:''' What's that thumping?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' That's probably Rick doing a bit of reading. ''(gets bottle out of fridge)'' Maybe a bit of oil will do the trick?\\
'''Mike:''' What, for the video or Rick's bedspread?\\
'''SPG:''' ''(perched on top of the fridge)'' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(impatiently)'' Yes, we've got a video!
* Rick's discovery of the video is preceded by a misunderstanding between himself and Vyvyan:
-->'''Rick:''' VYVYAN! YOU UTTER BASTARD! WHY AREN'T YOU IN YOUR BED!?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' 'Cos I'm not going to bed tonight!\\
'''Rick:''' What do you mean you're not going to bed tonight!? How ''dare'' you not go to bed tonight! I go to all this trouble of boarding you up in your bedroom, and you don't even have the common decency to be in there!\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Don't worry, Rick, it wouldn't have worked anyway!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(sarcastically)'' And why not, ''pray?''\\
'''Vyvyan:''' I swopped rooms with Neil!\\
'''Rick:''' What?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Well, I had to! I was sick all over ''my'' bed.\\
'''Rick:''' You listen here young man. You're going ''straight'' up to Neil's room, you're gonna pull the planks off the door, go into your bedroom, and nail yourself in! And... ''(anger gives way to confusion)'' What do you mean you're not going to bed tonight?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Michael and I are going to indulge in an all-night orgy of sex and violence!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(disgusted)'' What, in the drawing room??\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Yeah! First we're gonna have ''Sex with the Headless Corpse of the Virgin Astronaut''.\\
'''Rick:''' ... won't the carpet get awfully sticky?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(rolls eyes)'' It's a ''video nasty!''\\
'''Rick:''' It's a '''carpet, farty!'''\\
'''Mike:''' The only trouble is, we can't get the bastard to work!\\
'''Rick:''' Well, I'm not surprised, if he's dead!\\
'''Mike:''' Not the ''astronaut'', the video!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(excited)'' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(rolls his eyes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis YES - WE'VE - GOT - A - VID-E-O!]]
-->''(the sound of thumping comes from upstairs as Rick nails boards over what he thinks is Vyvyan's bedroom)''\\
'''Mike:''' What's that thumping?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' That's probably Rick doing a bit of reading. ''(gets bottle out of fridge)'' Maybe a bit of oil will do the trick?\\
'''Mike:''' What, for the video or Rick's bedspread?\\
'''SPG:''' ''(perched on top of the fridge)'' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(impatiently)'' Yes, we've got a video!
* Rick's discovery of the video is preceded by a misunderstanding between himself and Vyvyan:
-->'''Rick:''' VYVYAN! YOU UTTER BASTARD! WHY AREN'T YOU IN YOUR BED!?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' 'Cos I'm not going to bed tonight!\\
'''Rick:''' What do you mean you're not going to bed tonight!? How ''dare'' you not go to bed tonight! I go to all this trouble of boarding you up in your bedroom, and you don't even have the common decency to be in there!\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Don't worry, Rick, it wouldn't have worked anyway!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(sarcastically)'' And why not, ''pray?''\\
'''Vyvyan:''' I swopped rooms with Neil!\\
'''Rick:''' What?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Well, I had to! I was sick all over ''my'' bed.\\
'''Rick:''' You listen here young man. You're going ''straight'' up to Neil's room, you're gonna pull the planks off the door, go into your bedroom, and nail yourself in! And... ''(anger gives way to confusion)'' What do you mean you're not going to bed tonight?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Michael and I are going to indulge in an all-night orgy of sex and violence!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(disgusted)'' What, in the drawing room??\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Yeah! First we're gonna have ''Sex with the Headless Corpse of the Virgin Astronaut''.\\
'''Rick:''' ... won't the carpet get awfully sticky?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(rolls eyes)'' It's a ''video nasty!''\\
'''Rick:''' It's a '''carpet, farty!'''\\
'''Mike:''' The only trouble is, we can't get the bastard to work!\\
'''Rick:''' Well, I'm not surprised, if he's dead!\\
'''Mike:''' Not the ''astronaut'', the video!\\
'''Rick:''' ''(excited)'' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(rolls his eyes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis YES - WE'VE - GOT - A - VID-E-O!]]
* The RunningGag reaches its payoff when Neil shows up wearing a dress he found in Rick's room, complete with Rick's name sewn into it, and Neil and Vyvyan decide to call the police.
-->'''Mike:''' Guys, guys, I hate to say anything negative, but no. If the police come 'round, they'll grab hold of our nasties!\\
'''Neil:''' Ooh! ''(covers his crotch)''\\
'''Mike:''' The ''videos!''\\
'''Neil:''' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(to camera)'' If anyone else asks that question, I'm going to stick their head through the window.\\
'''Neil:''' Vyv? Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Right. Come this way, Neil! ''(he walks across the kitchen, rips the window out of the wall, and carries it over to Neil)'' Sideways on! ''(Neil obliges, and Vyvyan smashes the window over his head)''\\
'''Neil:''' I still don't understand, does that mean we've got one or not?
-->'''Mike:''' Guys, guys, I hate to say anything negative, but no. If the police come 'round, they'll grab hold of our nasties!\\
'''Neil:''' Ooh! ''(covers his crotch)''\\
'''Mike:''' The ''videos!''\\
'''Neil:''' Oh! Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' ''(to camera)'' If anyone else asks that question, I'm going to stick their head through the window.\\
'''Neil:''' Vyv? Have we got a video?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Right. Come this way, Neil! ''(he walks across the kitchen, rips the window out of the wall, and carries it over to Neil)'' Sideways on! ''(Neil obliges, and Vyvyan smashes the window over his head)''\\
'''Neil:''' I still don't understand, does that mean we've got one or not?
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-->'''Rick:''' Mr. Vampire! Don't bite me, I'm howwid, I'm ''covered'' in acne! Eat Neil, he's stwawbewwy flavoured!
* The boys trapping the vampire to the sofa, leading Mike to quip, "Thank goodness for Habitat sofa coffins!"
* The boys trapping the vampire to the sofa, leading Mike to quip, "Thank goodness for Habitat sofa coffins!"
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-->'''Rick:''' Mr. Vampire! Don't bite me, I'm howwid, horrid, I'm ''covered'' in acne! Eat Neil, he's stwawbewwy strawberry flavoured!
* The boys trapping the vampireto in the sofa, leading Mike to quip, "Thank goodness for Habitat sofa coffins!"
* The boys trapping the vampire
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'''Vyvyan:''' There's ''someone'' at the ''door'', Mike!\\
'''Neil:''' [[DuckSeasonRabbitSeason There's ''someone'' at the ''door''... Neil...]]\\
'''Neil:''' [[DuckSeasonRabbitSeason There's ''someone'' at the ''door''... Neil...]]\\
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'''Vyvyan:''' There's ''someone'' at the ''door'', Mike!\\
[[DuckSeasonRabbitSeason Mike!]]\\
'''Neil:'''[[DuckSeasonRabbitSeason There's ''someone'' at the ''door''... [[DuckSeasonRabbitSeason Neil...]]\\
'''Neil:'''
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Again, it\'s not necessary to transcribe Rik Mayall\'s speech impediment phonetically.
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* [[EstablishingCharacterMoment Vyvyan's first entrance]] is priceless - he [[DynamicEntry smashes through the kitchen wall]] carrying a severed leg as the other three are eating dinner. Rick shouts, "Vyvyan, you might have washed youw hands!", prompting Vyv to walk over to the kitchen sink, kick it so that it falls of the wall, and wash his hands in the water flowing through where the tap used to be.
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* [[EstablishingCharacterMoment Vyvyan's first entrance]] is priceless - he [[DynamicEntry smashes through the kitchen wall]] carrying a severed leg as the other three are eating dinner. Rick shouts, "Vyvyan, you might have washed youw your hands!", prompting Vyv to walk over to the kitchen sink, kick it so that it falls of the wall, and wash his hands in the water flowing through where the tap used to be.
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'''Rick''': Yes, Vyvyan, but it was nailed to the ceiling in the living woom!
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'''Rick''': Yes, Vyvyan, but it was nailed to the ceiling in the living woom!room!
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* "Crop-rotation in the 14th Century was considerably more widespread after...John." [[spoiler:"...Lloyd invented the patent crop-rotator."]]
** Rick's previous attempt to complete the above sentence from memory was "after... 1172". Which isn't even ''in'' the 14th Century.
** Rick's previous attempt to complete the above sentence from memory was "after... 1172". Which isn't even ''in'' the 14th Century.
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* "Crop-rotation in the 14th Century was considerably more widespread after...John." [[spoiler:"...Lloyd invented the patent crop-rotator."]]
**"]] Rick's previous attempt to complete the above this sentence from memory was "after... 1172". Which isn't even ''in'' the 14th Century.
**
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'''Rick:''' ''(glares at Vyvyan)'' Well, ''someone's'' got to do it, Vyvyan!
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'''Rick:''' ''(glares at Vyvyan)'' Well, ''someone's'' got to do it, Vyvyan!Vyvyan! It's very easy to sit on your backside, isn't it?\\
'''Vyvyan:''' Not if you haven't got a bottom.
**And even better is his sudden ego deflation immediately afterwards-
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Offscreen]'' Oh no, it's the TV Detector Van!\\
'''Rick:''' ''[Suddenly distraught and in utter panic]'' '''MIKE, YOU BASTARD!''' Why didn't you pay our licence?! I can't go to Prison! ''I'm too pwetty! I'll get waped!''
'''Vyvyan:''' Not if you haven't got a bottom.
**And even better is his sudden ego deflation immediately afterwards-
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Offscreen]'' Oh no, it's the TV Detector Van!\\
'''Rick:''' ''[Suddenly distraught and in utter panic]'' '''MIKE, YOU BASTARD!''' Why didn't you pay our licence?! I can't go to Prison! ''I'm too pwetty! I'll get waped!''
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* Rick's argument with Neil as the ghosts walk by-
-->'''Ghost:''' No need to get aggressive.
-->'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING! ''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
-->'''Ghost:''' No need to get aggressive.
-->'''Rick:''' ''[Hysterically screaming in Neil's face]'' '''I AM NOT! GETTING! ''AGGRESSIIIIIIIIIVE!'''''
-->'''Neil:''' ''[Unflinching]'' You are, Rick. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I can sense it]].
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* Rick reveals his total ignorance of anything to do with women when he finds a tampon in one of the party guests' purses... and thinks it's "a telescope... with a mouse in it!"
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* Rick reveals his total ignorance of anything to do with women when he finds a tampon in one of the party guests' purses... and thinks it's "a telescope... believes "it's a telescope! A telescope with a mouse ''mouse'' in it!"
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* "Some of these bricks explode! ''Brilliant!''"
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* "Some of these bricks explode! ''Brilliant!''"
'''explode!''' ''That's good, innit?!''"
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-->'''Rick:''' Have you turned my bedroom into some kind of roller disco? ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
'''Mike:''' That's uncanny!\\
'''Mike:''' That's uncanny!\\
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-->'''Rick:''' Have Five Pounds to get into my own bedroom?! '''HA!''' What have you done, turned my bedroom it into some kind of roller disco? a Roller Disco?! ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
'''Mike:'''That's uncanny!\\''[Glances at the camera]'' Uncanny!\\
'''Mike:'''
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* Mike, upon learning they have a vampire trapped in the bathroom, comments, "This is actually very serious!" Mike, Rick and Neil all stare right at the camera...then Vyvyan dives past it in the background.
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* Mike, upon learning they have a vampire trapped in the bathroom, comments, "This is actually very serious!" Mike, Rick and Neil all stare right at the camera...then Vyvyan dives past it in photobombs the background.shot making a goofy face.
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** Rick's previous attempt to complete the above sentence from memory was "after... 1172". Which isn't even ''in'' the 14th Century.
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** Then their homicidal landlord starts breaking into the room, and Neil suggests that they ''could'', maybe, consider eating '''him''' instead.
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Same as my last edit to this page. Transcribing Rik Mayall\'s speech impediment using Funetik Aksent spelling just makes his lines needlessly difficult to read.
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* Neil has outlined his plans to hang himself on a gallows that lights joss sticks and plays "Rock Around the Clock" when the trapdoor opens... except that the trapdoor is only a few inches above the floor, so that he doesn't fall far enough to pull the rope taut.
** Rick's reaction when "Rock Around the Clock" begins playing? An annoyed "Well, that's put the went up by a thiwd!"
** Rick's reaction when "Rock Around the Clock" begins playing? An annoyed "Well, that's put the went up by a thiwd!"
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* Neil has outlined his plans to hang himself on a gallows that lights joss sticks and plays "Rock Around the Clock" when the trapdoor opens... except that the trapdoor is only a few inches above the floor, so that he doesn't fall far enough to pull the rope taut.
**taut. Rick's reaction when "Rock Around the Clock" begins playing? An annoyed "Well, that's put the went rent up by a thiwd!"third!"
**
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* One of the teenagers being interviewed for ''[[ShowWithinAShow Nozin' Aroun']]'' complains about not being treated like an adult because he can't drink in pubs right after he sniffs some glue ''onscreen''. His constant bulging eyes makes him look psychotic, adding to the hilarity.
** Made even better by said teenager expressing his annoyance that people think "young adults are ''violent'', right," and lunging at the camera like he's spoiling for a fight as he does.
** Made even better by said teenager expressing his annoyance that people think "young adults are ''violent'', right," and lunging at the camera like he's spoiling for a fight as he does.
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* One of the teenagers being interviewed for ''[[ShowWithinAShow Nozin' Aroun']]'' complains about not being treated like an adult because he can't drink in pubs right after he sniffs some glue ''onscreen''. His constant bulging eyes makes him look psychotic, adding to the hilarity.
**hilarity. Made even better by said teenager expressing his annoyance that people think "young adults are ''violent'', right," and lunging at the camera like he's spoiling for a fight as he does.
**
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'''Rick:''' ... all wight then, ''have'' the bedroom!\\
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'''Rick:''' ... all wight right then, ''have'' the bedroom!\\
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Rik Mayall may have had trouble pronouncing the letter R. That doesn\'t mean transcripts of his lines should be rendered illegible, especially as many of these R/W changes are not pronounced the way they are written. Just leave them as they are.
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-->'''Rick:''' ''(trying to close the door on Vyvyan)'' Vyvyan, this is ''my'' bedwoom!\\
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-->'''Rick:''' ''(trying to close the door on Vyvyan)'' Vyvyan, this is ''my'' bedwoom!\\bedroom!\\
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'''Rick:''' Yes, I was hewe fiwst!\\
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'''Rick:''' Yes, I was hewe fiwst!\\here first!\\
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'''Rick:''' Look, I don't need witnesses, just get off my pwopuhty!\\
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'''Rick:''' Look, I don't need witnesses, just get off my pwopuhty!\\property!\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(runs over, grabs Vyvyan's clothes, kicks out the window glass, and throws the clothes out)'' No they'we not, Vyvyan!\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(runs over, grabs Vyvyan's clothes, kicks out the window glass, and throws the clothes out)'' No they'we they're not, Vyvyan!\\
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'''Rick:''' ... all wight then, ''have'' the bedwoom!\\
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'''Rick:''' ... all wight then, ''have'' the bedwoom!\\bedroom!\\
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'''Rick:''' You said it was youws just now!\\
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'''Rick:''' You said it was youws yours just now!\\
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'''Rick:''' Oh, very clevew.\\
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'''Rick:''' Oh, very clevew.clever.\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(after a pause, shouts after Neil)'' Do you weally think that anyone has evew been the slightest bit intewested in anything you say or do evuh, Neil?! ''(sigh)'' God, fascist. ''(stands up)'' Awe you going to bed, Vyvyan?\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(after a pause, shouts after Neil)'' Do you weally really think that anyone has evew ever been the slightest bit intewested interested in anything you say or do evuh, ever, Neil?! ''(sigh)'' God, fascist. ''(stands up)'' Awe Are you going to bed, Vyvyan?\\
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-->'''Rick:''' Have you turned my bedwoom into some kind of wolluh disco? ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
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-->'''Rick:''' Have you turned my bedwoom bedroom into some kind of wolluh roller disco? ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
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* "You just called me a ''bastawd'' didn't you?"
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* As he is getting changed for bed in Neil's room, into which he has been forced to move by Mike's conversion of his bedroom, Rick declares that he tossed a coin to see which of them gets the bed, and Neil lost. A confused Neil mutters, "Oh, er, okay, Rick," to which Rick responds by rounding on Neil and snarling, "You just called me a ''bastawd'' ''bastard'' didn't you?"
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* The boys scrambling for the train in a parody of the opening sequence of ''Film/AHardDaysNight'', espeically Vyvyan stuffing [[JabbaTableManners an entire doughnut into his mouth]] and FlippingTheBird to a random woman (who promptly starts {{Corpsing}}), and Rick trying to steal a newspaper, only to run back to pay for it when the camera catches him doing it.
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* The boys scrambling for the train in a parody of the opening sequence of ''Film/AHardDaysNight'', espeically especially Vyvyan stuffing [[JabbaTableManners an entire doughnut into his mouth]] and FlippingTheBird to a random [[FlippingTheBird flicking the Vs]] at the woman behind the counter (who promptly starts {{Corpsing}}), and Rick trying to steal a newspaper, only to run back to pay for it when the camera catches him doing it.it. The whole sequence doubles as an [[MomentOfAwesome awesome moment]] due to being soundtracked by Motörhead's immortal [[AwesomeMusic "Ace of Spades"]].
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** Made even better by said teenager expressing his annoyance that people think "young adults are ''violent'', right," and lunging at the camera like he's spoiling for a fight as he does.
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That\'s not what And Thats Terrible means. And Thats Terrible is when characters feel compelled to point out how evil villainous deeds are, as if they weren\'t self-evident.
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'''Mike:''' Yeah, well that's nothing! Neil got so bored he's gone down the garden to kill himself! [[AndThatsTerrible And it's his go!]]
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'''Mike:''' Yeah, well that's nothing! Neil got so bored he's gone down the garden to kill himself! [[AndThatsTerrible And it's his go!]]go!
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'''Rick:''' Look, I don't need witnesses, just get off my pwopewty!\\
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'''Rick:''' Look, I don't need witnesses, just get off my pwopewty!\\pwopuhty!\\
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'''Rick:''' Oh, very clever.\\
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'''Rick:''' Oh, very clever.clevew.\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(after a pause, shouts after Neil)'' Do you really think that anyone has ever been the slightest bit interested in anything you say or do ever, Neil?! ''(sigh)'' God, fascist. ''(stands up)'' Are you going to bed, Vyvyan?\\
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'''Rick:''' ''(after a pause, shouts after Neil)'' Do you really weally think that anyone has ever evew been the slightest bit interested intewested in anything you say or do ever, evuh, Neil?! ''(sigh)'' God, fascist. ''(stands up)'' Are Awe you going to bed, Vyvyan?\\
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-->'''Rick:''' Have you turned my bedroom into some kind of roller disco? ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
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-->'''Rick:''' Have you turned my bedroom bedwoom into some kind of roller wolluh disco? ''[walks past Mike into his bedroom]''\\
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* "You just called me a ''bastard'' didn't you?"
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* "You just called me a ''bastard'' ''bastawd'' didn't you?"