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-->'''Nate''': Charles, I need to borrow your ass stabber.
-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
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-->'''Nate''': Charles, I need to borrow your ass stabber.
-->'''Charlie''':stabber.\\
'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
-->'''Charlie''':
'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
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** Becomes more of a FunnyAneurysmMoment when the flashback sequences come around, and we find the source of his "pride." Not to mention [[spoiler: the effect it ends up having on [[AbortedDeclarationOfLove his relationship with Vaughan]]]].
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** Becomes more of a FunnyAneurysmMoment HarsherInHindsight when the flashback sequences come around, and we find the source of his "pride." Not to mention [[spoiler: the effect it ends up having on [[AbortedDeclarationOfLove his relationship with Vaughan]]]].
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** Becomes more of a Funny-Aneurysm Moment when the flashback sequences come around, and we find the source of his "pride." Not to mention [[spoiler: the effect it ends up having on [[AbortedDeclarationOfLove his relationship with Vaughan]]]].
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** Becomes more of a Funny-Aneurysm Moment FunnyAneurysmMoment when the flashback sequences come around, and we find the source of his "pride." Not to mention [[spoiler: the effect it ends up having on [[AbortedDeclarationOfLove his relationship with Vaughan]]]].
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** Becomes more of a Funny-Aneurysm Moment when the flashback sequences come around, and we find the source of his "pride." Not to mention [[spoiler: the effect it ends up having on [[AbortedDeclarationOfLove his relationship with Vaughan]]]].
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and they both know it, but Nate is still too proud to admit it.
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** Even funnier when you realise realize she's half-right, and they both know it, but Nate is still too proud to admit it.
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and she knows it, but Nate is still too proud to admit it.
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and she knows they both know it, but Nate is still too proud to admit it.
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and she knows it, but Nate is still too proud to admit.
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and she knows it, but Nate is still too proud to admit.admit it.
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** Even funnier when you realise she's half-right, and she knows it, but Nate is still too proud to admit.
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--> '''Nate''': ...I can’t remember ever seeing you cry before today.
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--> '''Nate''': ...I can’t remember ever seeing you cry [[spoiler: cry]] before today.
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* “We’re going to die in this room.” This is Charlie's deadpanned reaction when she realizes that [[spoiler: they're going to have to rely on Jude to get them out of the room they were barricaded in.]]
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** Sissy Boner. Pissy Bonbon.
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** Sissy Boner.
** Pissy Bonbon.
** Pissy Bonbon.
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--> (?) The doctors think you’re an asshole
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--> (?) The doctors think you’re an assholeasshole
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--> '''Nate''': ...I can’t remember ever seeing you cry before today.
--> '''Charlie''': I will ''stab you'' in the ''kidneys''.
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--> '''Nate''': ...I can’t remember ever seeing you cry before today.
--> '''Charlie''': I will ''stab you'' in the ''kidneys''.
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* in chapter 5, Nate and Charlie have a very nsfw conversation about Dr. Nāgá just to piss off the doctors [[spoiler: on the outside of the barricade room.]] The banter is hilarious.
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* in In chapter 5, Nate and Charlie have a very nsfw conversation about Dr. Nāgá just to piss off the doctors [[spoiler: on the outside of the barricade barricaded room.]] The banter is hilarious.
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* Almost every scene with Jude in it could be on this page.
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* Almost every scene with Jude in it could be on this page.page.
* in chapter 5, Nate and Charlie have a very nsfw conversation about Dr. Nāgá just to piss off the doctors [[spoiler: on the outside of the barricade room.]] The banter is hilarious.
--> (?) The doctors think you’re an asshole
* in chapter 5, Nate and Charlie have a very nsfw conversation about Dr. Nāgá just to piss off the doctors [[spoiler: on the outside of the barricade room.]] The banter is hilarious.
--> (?) The doctors think you’re an asshole
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-->'''Nate''': You’re also a little shit.
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-->'''Nate''': You’re also a little shit.shit.
* Almost every scene with Jude in it could be on this page.
* Almost every scene with Jude in it could be on this page.
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-->'''Nate''': Why don’t you do it?
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-->'''Nate''': Why don’t you ''you'' do it?
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** Sissy Boner. Pissy Bonbon.
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** Sissy Boner. Pissy Bonbon.Bonbon.
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-->'''Nate''': Why don’t you do it?
-->'''Sissy''': I’m shy.
-->'''Nate''': You talked to me after seein’ me beat up two people!
-->'''Sissy''': …I’m shy.
-->'''Nate''': You’re also a little shit.
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-->'''Nate''': Why don’t you do it?
-->'''Sissy''': I’m shy.
-->'''Nate''': You talked to me after seein’ me beat up two people!
-->'''Sissy''': …I’m shy.
-->'''Nate''': You’re also a little shit.
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--> (?) Vaughan is annoyed with you
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--> (?) Vaughan is annoyed with youyou
* Both Nate and the text makes fun of Sissy's name.
** Sissy Boner. Pissy Bonbon.
* Both Nate and the text makes fun of Sissy's name.
** Sissy Boner. Pissy Bonbon.
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* When Vaughan offers his hand so Nate can get out of the fountain water, Nate high-fives him instead.
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* When Vaughan offers his hand so Nate can get out of the fountain water, Nate high-fives him instead.instead.
--> (?) Vaughan is annoyed with you
--> (?) Vaughan is annoyed with you
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* Nate telling Vaughan that he's as peaceful as Gandhi’s and Martin Luther King Jr.’s gay love child.
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* Nate telling Vaughan that he's as peaceful as Gandhi’s and Martin Luther King Jr.’s gay love child.child.
* When Vaughan offers his hand so Nate can get out of the fountain water, Nate high-fives him instead.
* When Vaughan offers his hand so Nate can get out of the fountain water, Nate high-fives him instead.
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--> “You change your tune real quick. When we were all at it last night, you were like-” Nate let go of the wheel, took two fingers, and shoved it as far back into his mouth as he could without gagging. “Mmmph ''mmph'' mmmm''mmmph!''”
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--> “You change your tune real quick. When we were all at it last night, you were like-” Nate let go of the wheel, took two fingers, and shoved it as far back into his mouth as he could without gagging. “Mmmph ''mmph'' mmmm''mmmph!''”mmmm''mmmph!''”
* Nate telling Vaughan that he's as peaceful as Gandhi’s and Martin Luther King Jr.’s gay love child.
* Nate telling Vaughan that he's as peaceful as Gandhi’s and Martin Luther King Jr.’s gay love child.
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--> (?) The baby wants Vaughan’s glasses
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--> (?) The baby wants Vaughan’s glassesglasses
* After Nate lies about the reason they need to go to the hospital, the passage that follows is ''golden''.
--> “Two things.” She said. “One, you’re not ''fifty''. You don’t ''need'' that. And two, I highly doubt your hand is going to care that you can’t keep it up.”
--> “Your hand might.” Nate said. Charlie’s unimpressed eyes traveled from his face to his crotch and back to his face again.
--> “You say that like I can hold onto it.” She said.
--> “I know. It’s too big.” Nate’s matter-of-fact response came with a smile.
--> “Too ''big?''” Charlie looked amused and surprised. “In what, white people standards?” She deepened her voice and spoke like she lost fifty IQ points. “''Oh boy, my dick’s a whole inch long!''”
--> “Your dick’s an inch long? No wonder I haven’t seen it.”
--> “Yours isn’t big. Don’t bullshit.”
--> “You change your tune real quick. When we were all at it last night, you were like-” Nate let go of the wheel, took two fingers, and shoved it as far back into his mouth as he could without gagging. “Mmmph ''mmph'' mmmm''mmmph!''”
* After Nate lies about the reason they need to go to the hospital, the passage that follows is ''golden''.
--> “Two things.” She said. “One, you’re not ''fifty''. You don’t ''need'' that. And two, I highly doubt your hand is going to care that you can’t keep it up.”
--> “Your hand might.” Nate said. Charlie’s unimpressed eyes traveled from his face to his crotch and back to his face again.
--> “You say that like I can hold onto it.” She said.
--> “I know. It’s too big.” Nate’s matter-of-fact response came with a smile.
--> “Too ''big?''” Charlie looked amused and surprised. “In what, white people standards?” She deepened her voice and spoke like she lost fifty IQ points. “''Oh boy, my dick’s a whole inch long!''”
--> “Your dick’s an inch long? No wonder I haven’t seen it.”
--> “Yours isn’t big. Don’t bullshit.”
--> “You change your tune real quick. When we were all at it last night, you were like-” Nate let go of the wheel, took two fingers, and shoved it as far back into his mouth as he could without gagging. “Mmmph ''mmph'' mmmm''mmmph!''”
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* Nate's interactions with the baby are sometimes funny.
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* Nate's interactions with the baby are sometimes funny.funny.
* The notifications for the baby.
--> (?) The baby thinks you’re a food dispenser
--> (?) The baby likes Charlie’s hair
--> (?) The baby likes the sound of your voice
--> (?) The baby wants Vaughan’s glasses
* The notifications for the baby.
--> (?) The baby thinks you’re a food dispenser
--> (?) The baby likes Charlie’s hair
--> (?) The baby likes the sound of your voice
--> (?) The baby wants Vaughan’s glasses
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* Charlie constantly referring to Vaughan as Nate's boyfriend.
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* Charlie constantly referring to Vaughan as Nate's boyfriend.boyfriend.
* Nate's interactions with the baby are sometimes funny.
* Nate's interactions with the baby are sometimes funny.
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-->'''Nate''': Sure. I’ll do it all for the low ''low'' price of a free blowjob.
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-->'''Nate''': Sure. I’ll do it all for the low ''low'' price of a free blowjob.blowjob.
* Charlie constantly referring to Vaughan as Nate's boyfriend.
* Charlie constantly referring to Vaughan as Nate's boyfriend.
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-->'''Charlie''': Really. Cuz your dick’s like Play-Doh; fun to play with, not to eat.
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-->'''Charlie''': Really. Cuz your dick’s like Play-Doh; fun to play with, not to eat.eat.
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-->'''Nate''': When this shit blows over, I’ll buy all the cigarettes ya want.
-->'''Charlie''': Really?
-->'''Nate''': Sure. I’ll do it all for the low ''low'' price of a free blowjob.
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-->'''Nate''': When this shit blows over, I’ll buy all the cigarettes ya want.
-->'''Charlie''': Really?
-->'''Nate''': Sure. I’ll do it all for the low ''low'' price of a free blowjob.
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* Not only is this exchange funny, it also has some rather interesting implications too.
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* Not only is this exchange funny, it also has some rather interesting implications too.implications.
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-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
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-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.dick.
* Not only is this exchange funny, it also has some rather interesting implications too.
-->'''Nate''': What? I’d crash into a house for free blowjobs.
-->'''Charlie''': Of course ya would, that’s the only way you’d get one.
-->'''Nate''': Oh really?
-->'''Charlie''': Really. Cuz your dick’s like Play-Doh; fun to play with, not to eat.
* Not only is this exchange funny, it also has some rather interesting implications too.
-->'''Nate''': What? I’d crash into a house for free blowjobs.
-->'''Charlie''': Of course ya would, that’s the only way you’d get one.
-->'''Nate''': Oh really?
-->'''Charlie''': Really. Cuz your dick’s like Play-Doh; fun to play with, not to eat.
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* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him in a very ridiculous manner.
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* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him in a very ridiculous manner.manner.
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-->'''Nate''': Charles, I need to borrow your ass stabber.
-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
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-->'''Nate''': Charles, I need to borrow your ass stabber.
-->'''Charlie''': No. Eat a dick.
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* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him.
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* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him.him in a very ridiculous manner.
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* “I won’t let Charles ripping your balls off forever time.”
* Nate's inability to pronounce Japanese words properly.
** Annie May
** Ah nah tah wah bawkaw desk
* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him.
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* “I won’t let Charles ripping your balls off forever time.”
* Nate's inability to pronounce Japanese words properly.
** Annie May
** Ah nah tah wah bawkaw desk
* When Nate asks the zombie in the first chapter if it wants to go to the police, it responds with shrieking at him.
