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* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[Series/DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
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* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} stand/[[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[Series/DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
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“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! [[FanFic/RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] Fanfic/{{cupcakes|SergeantSprinkles}} than join you! I’d rather lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! [[FanFic/RainbowFactory [[Fanfic/RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“WHAT?!” panicked the Shadowbolts, transforming back into Nightmare Moon. “HOW COULD THOU POSSBLY HATH PRECIVED THROUGH OUR DESGUISE? WE EVEN DROPPED OUR ACCENT!”
-->“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” she criticized.
-->“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TO OFFER!”
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLY IMAGINE!”
-->“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.”
-->Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINE FATHER!”
-->“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’s impossible!”
-->“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TO TRUE!
-->“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.”
-->Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant it tenfold!”
-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
-->“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” she criticized.
-->“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TO OFFER!”
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLY IMAGINE!”
-->“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.”
-->Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINE FATHER!”
-->“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’s impossible!”
-->“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TO TRUE!
-->“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.”
-->Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant it tenfold!”
-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“WHAT?!” panicked the Shadowbolts, transforming back into Nightmare Moon. “HOW COULD THOU POSSBLY HATH PRECIVED THROUGH OUR DESGUISE? WE EVEN DROPPED OUR ACCENT!”
-->“Well,”ACCENT!”\\
“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” shecriticized.
-->“THEcriticized.\\
“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TOOFFER!”
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOINOFFER!”\\
“Wait, what?”\\
”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLYIMAGINE!”
-->“Um…IMAGINE!”\\
“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.”
-->Nightmare”\\
Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINEFATHER!”
-->“NO!”FATHER!”\\
“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’simpossible!”
-->“SEARCHimpossible!”\\
“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TOTRUE!
-->“ActuallyTRUE!\\
“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.”
-->Nightmare”\\
Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant ittenfold!”
-->“Howtenfold!”\\
“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather[[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory Fluttershy! [[FanFic/RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
-->“Well,”
“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” she
-->“THE
“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TO
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOIN
“Wait, what?”\\
”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLY
-->“Um…
“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.
-->Nightmare
Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINE
-->“NO!”
“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’s
-->“SEARCH
“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TO
-->“Actually
“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.
-->Nightmare
Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant it
-->“How
“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather
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* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
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* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[DoctorWho Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[Series/DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
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-->“[[WebVideo/DragonballAbridged WE ARE AN ADULT!!!]]” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} [[{{FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} [[{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[Fanfic/Cupcakes cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[Fanfic/Pattycakes lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[Fanfic/Cupcakes [{{[FanFic/Cupcakes}} cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[Fanfic/Pattycakes [[{{FanFic/Pattycakes}} lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[fanfic/cupcakes cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[fanfic/pattycakes lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into [[fanfic/cupcakes [[Fanfic/Cupcakes cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[fanfic/pattycakes [[Fanfic/Pattycakes lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into cupcakes than join you! I’d rather lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows! HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into cupcakes [[fanfic/cupcakes cupcakes]] than join you! I’d rather [[fanfic/pattycakes lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! Fluttershy!]] [[RainbowFactory I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows! rainbows!]] HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“WHAT?!” panicked the Shadowbolts, transforming back into Nightmare Moon. “HOW COULD THOU POSSBLY HATH PRECIVED THROUGH OUR DESGUISE? WE EVEN DROPPED OUR ACCENT!”
-->“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” she criticized.
-->“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TO OFFER!”
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLY IMAGINE!”
-->“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.”
-->Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINE FATHER!”
-->“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’s impossible!”
-->“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TO TRUE!
-->“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.”
-->Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant it tenfold!”
-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into cupcakes than join you! I’d rather lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows! HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
-->“WHAT?!” panicked the Shadowbolts, transforming back into Nightmare Moon. “HOW COULD THOU POSSBLY HATH PRECIVED THROUGH OUR DESGUISE? WE EVEN DROPPED OUR ACCENT!”
-->“Well,” said a surprised Rainbow Dash. “I didn’t say that you were Nightmare Moon herself, but c’mon, the ‘Shadowbolts?’ Really? You couldn’t think of a better name?” she criticized.
-->“THE ‘SHADOWBOLTS' WAS A BRILLIANT-NEVERMIND,” the moon princess said as she had another idea. “OUR OFFER STILL STANDTHS TALL AND PROUD, FOR NOW WE HATH EVEN GREATER SPOILS TO OFFER!”
-->“Wait, what?”
-->”JOIN US,” she continued. “AND WE SHALL IMBUE THEE WITH THE SANTANIC POWERS OF DARKNESS, MAKING THEE MORE POWERFUL THAN THOU COULD POSSIBLY IMAGINE!”
-->“Um… how about no?” said Dash. “I’m pretty sure that signing a contract that came from Tartarus would instantly drive me criminally insane.”
-->Nightmare Moon desperately searched her options for another reward that Rainbow Dash would get for joining her. ”JOIN US… FOR WE ART… THINE FATHER!”
-->“NO!” gasped Rainbow Dash. “That’s impossible!”
-->“SEARCH THINE FEELINGS, FOR THOU KNOW IT TO TRUE!
-->“Actually no,” said Dash. “That’s like, literally impossible. I know, I’ve tried to be Scootaloo’s father once, and you don’t even want to know how that turned out.”
-->Nightmare Moon looked at Rainbow Dash for the longest moment. “Look,” the Mare in the Moon said in her indoor voice. “Thou art embarrassing us at this point. What dost thy wish? We will grant it tenfold!”
-->“How many time do I have to say the word NO?!” ranted a very irritated Rainbow Dash. “I’d rather have my wings ripped off and the rest of me baked into cupcakes than join you! I’d rather lobotomize myself and spent the rest of my life being baby-sat by Fluttershy! I’d rather make my living grinding up orphans and making them into rainbows! HAY, I WOULD RATHER SWALLOW EVERY LAST INCH OF PRIDE I HAVE AND DRESS IN BUCKING, CLOP-WORTHY STYLE THAN BOW TO THE LIKES OF YOU!!!!”
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-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”
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-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”DOGGY-STYLE?”
* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
* Trixie's dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/[[{{Transformers}} Autobot/Decepticon]]/[[DoctorWho personal “TARDIS”]]/occasionally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking a bounce house]].
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-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”
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-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”
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-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMITT COMMIT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”DOGGY-STYLE?”
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-->“W-what are you going to do with me?” stuttered Dusk.
-->“Need not worry, young mage,” said Nightmare Moon as she dropped her Royal Canterlot Voice to normal volume. “For we will not kill thee.”
-->“Wait, what? Really?” he said with unexpected hope.
-->“Indeed, for thy delicate features and larger-than-average horn size has earned thee a much more… useful purpose,” she said with a twinkle in her eye. Her horn lit up, and instantly the room was transformed. While the castle still was in crumbling ruins and was covered in moss and vines, brand-new red silk adorned the walls and pillars as Nightmare Moon removed her armor piece by piece in a slow fashion that made Dusk very, very worried on what “useful purpose” the villainess had in store for him. As Dusk felt the cold stone underneath his hooves be replaced with soft fabric, he found he and his enemy were lying upon a luxurious heart-shaped bed, surrounded by scented candles. “Thy first task as our personal royal pet,” Nightmare Moon whispered in his ear, now fully naked. “Is to grant thy princess… pleasure.”
-->“I NEED AN ADULT!!!” Dusk screamed at the top of his lungs while scrambling to escape.
-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMITT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”
-->“W-what are you going to do with me?” stuttered Dusk.
-->“Need not worry, young mage,” said Nightmare Moon as she dropped her Royal Canterlot Voice to normal volume. “For we will not kill thee.”
-->“Wait, what? Really?” he said with unexpected hope.
-->“Indeed, for thy delicate features and larger-than-average horn size has earned thee a much more… useful purpose,” she said with a twinkle in her eye. Her horn lit up, and instantly the room was transformed. While the castle still was in crumbling ruins and was covered in moss and vines, brand-new red silk adorned the walls and pillars as Nightmare Moon removed her armor piece by piece in a slow fashion that made Dusk very, very worried on what “useful purpose” the villainess had in store for him. As Dusk felt the cold stone underneath his hooves be replaced with soft fabric, he found he and his enemy were lying upon a luxurious heart-shaped bed, surrounded by scented candles. “Thy first task as our personal royal pet,” Nightmare Moon whispered in his ear, now fully naked. “Is to grant thy princess… pleasure.”
-->“I NEED AN ADULT!!!” Dusk screamed at the top of his lungs while scrambling to escape.
-->“WE ARE AN ADULT!!!” shouted Nightmare Moon, returning to the Royal Canterlot Voice as she easily caught Dusk with her magical smoke-mane. “NOW, DOST THOU WANT THE TOP, BOTTOM, OR SHALT WE COMMITT THE ACT DOGGY-STYLE?”