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'''Peter:''' Oh? What's she like\\
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'''Peter:''' Oh? What's she like\\like?\\
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-->'''Spiderman:''' (as he is being defenestrated) "The dictionary defines defenestration as the act of throwing a person or thing out a window... Really not my favorite word."
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*Spiderman beginning episode 8 by ''defining defenestration'':
-->'''Spiderman:''' (as he is being defenestrated) "The dictionary defines defenestration as the act of throwing a person or thing out a window... Really not my favorite word."
-->'''Spiderman:''' (as he is being defenestrated) "The dictionary defines defenestration as the act of throwing a person or thing out a window... Really not my favorite word."
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Polishing up.
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** Rhino rampages across the city to get to the Daily Bugle... then politely asks Foswell to hit the elevator button for him. 'Nuff said.
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** Rhino rampages across the city to get to the Daily Bugle...''Daily Bugle''... then politely asks Foswell to hit the elevator button for him. 'Nuff said.
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* In "Destructive Testing," after a rather embarrassing defeat, Sergei Kravinoff goes hunting for Spider-Man -- using his faithful lion to track locations that the webslinger has been to. What follows is a dialogue-less montage of Sergei and the lion's travels. At the Daily Bugle, we see lots of scared employees -- except Jameson, who based on body language, is clearly yelling at the hunter and the lion to get out of his office.
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* In "Destructive Testing," after a rather embarrassing defeat, Sergei Kravinoff goes hunting for Spider-Man -- using his faithful lion to track locations that the webslinger has been to. What follows is a dialogue-less montage of Sergei and the lion's travels. At the Daily Bugle, ''Daily Bugle'', we see lots of scared employees -- except Jameson, who based on body language, is clearly yelling at the hunter and the lion to get out of his office.
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--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...''[camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot]'' Parrot.\\
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--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr... ''[camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot]'' Parrot.\\
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-->'''Spider-Man:''' ...you've had more shots at me than Marko and O'Hirn -- and done about as well!\\
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-->'''Spider-Man:''' ... you've had more shots at me than Marko and O'Hirn -- and done about as well!\\
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--->'''Spider-Man:''' ''[after throwing a traffic cone on Rhino's horn]'' Oh-ho-ho! I got the thing on the thing! What do I win?
--->'''Rhino:''' '''[enraged]'' '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''\\
--->'''Rhino:''' '''[enraged]'' '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''\\
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--->'''Spider-Man:''' ''[after throwing a traffic cone on Rhino's horn]'' Oh-ho-ho! I got the thing on the thing! What do I win?
--->'''Rhino:''' '''[enraged]''win?\\
'''Rhino:''' ''[enraged]'' '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''\\
--->'''Rhino:''' '''[enraged]''
'''Rhino:''' ''[enraged]'' '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''\\
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--->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
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--->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\WALL-CRAWLING]]--\\
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--> '''Spider-Man''': Hey, wall-crawling's my shtick! You start spinning a web, and I'll sue!
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-->'''Rhino:''' ...I hate you. ''So'' much.
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-->'''Rhino:''' ... I hate you. ''So'' much.
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*** Spidey's [[{{Troll}} trolling]] of Rhino in general tends to bring about a lot of funny one liners. For example;
----> '''Spider-Man''': Come one, come all, before your very eyes, the world's largest dehydrated turtle!
----> '''Spider-Man''': Come one, come all, before your very eyes, the world's largest dehydrated turtle!
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*** Spidey's [[{{Troll}} trolling]] of Rhino in general tends to bring about a lot of funny one liners.one-liners. For example;
----> '''Spider-Man''': ---->'''Spider-Man:''' Come one, come all, before your very eyes, the world's largest dehydrated turtle!
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--> '''Aunt May''': I've just been visiting Anna and her niece, Mary Jane. A lovely girl. Oh, Peter, you must meet her!
--> '''Peter''': Oh? What's she like?
--> '''Aunt May''': Oh, she has a wonderful personality!
--> '''Peter''': D:
--> '''Peter''': Oh? What's she like?
--> '''Aunt May''': Oh, she has a wonderful personality!
--> '''Peter''': D:
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--> '''Peter''':
'''Peter:''' Oh? What's she
-->
'''Aunt
--> '''Peter''':
'''Peter:''' D:
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--->'''Goblin:''' ...Oh, don't tell me you like the Master Planner and his ''wonderful personality''! *shudders*
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--->'''Goblin:''' ... Oh, don't tell me you like the Master Planner and his ''wonderful personality''! *shudders*''[shudders]''
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': Now then arachnid, [[AnyLastWords any last words]]?\\
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap "Humina humina humina" comes to mind.]]
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap "Humina humina humina" comes to mind.]]
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': Octopus:''' Now then arachnid, [[AnyLastWords any last words]]?\\
'''Spider-Man''':words]]\\
'''Spider-Man:''' [[OhCrap "Humina humina humina" comes to mind.]]
'''Spider-Man''':
'''Spider-Man:''' [[OhCrap "Humina humina humina" comes to mind.]]
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--->'''Spider-Man''': Only six, huh? What happened, Lizard and Goblin had Knicks tickets?
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-->'''Green Goblin''': You know the old saying: If you can't join 'em, BEAT 'em!
-->'''Spider-Man''': Took the words right outta my mouth. Is that a felony?
-->'''Green Goblin''': I certainly hope so. This little goblin wouldn't be caught dead committing a misdemeanour!
-->'''Spider-Man''': Took the words right outta my mouth. Is that a felony?
-->'''Green Goblin''': I certainly hope so. This little goblin wouldn't be caught dead committing a misdemeanour!
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-->'''Green Goblin''': Goblin:''' You know the old saying: If you can't join 'em, BEAT 'em!
-->'''Spider-Man''':'em!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Took the words right outta my mouth. Is that afelony?
-->'''Green Goblin''':felony?\\
'''Green Goblin:''' I certainly hope so. This little goblin wouldn't be caught dead committing a misdemeanour!
-->'''Spider-Man''':
'''Spider-Man:''' Took the words right outta my mouth. Is that a
-->'''Green Goblin''':
'''Green Goblin:''' I certainly hope so. This little goblin wouldn't be caught dead committing a misdemeanour!
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--> '''Spidey:''' Look, Doc, have you thought this through? The next Spider-Man who finds you under a pile of debris might view this as a cautionary tale.
--> '''Doc Ock''': (while repeatedly slamming Spidey around) [[PunctuatedPounding Glib! Does not! Equate! With clever! Spider-Man!]]
--> '''Spidey:''' Yeah, well, the ratio of arms-to-sanity hasn't exactly been established either.
--> '''Doc Ock:''' Do you ever ''SHUT UP''?!
--> '''Spidey:''' Sorry, no. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall My fans expect a certain amount of quippage in every battle]].
--> '''Doc Ock''': (while repeatedly slamming Spidey around) [[PunctuatedPounding Glib! Does not! Equate! With clever! Spider-Man!]]
--> '''Spidey:''' Yeah, well, the ratio of arms-to-sanity hasn't exactly been established either.
--> '''Doc Ock:''' Do you ever ''SHUT UP''?!
--> '''Spidey:''' Sorry, no. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall My fans expect a certain amount of quippage in every battle]].
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-->
'''Doc
-->
'''Spidey:''' Yeah, well, the ratio of arms-to-sanity hasn't exactly been established
-->
'''Doc Ock:''' Do you ever ''SHUT
-->
'''Spidey:''' Sorry, no. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall My fans expect a certain amount of quippage in every battle]].
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--> (After Green Goblin suggests that he and Spider-Man team-up and rule NYC together).
--> '''Spidey:''' Are we talking Manhattan or all five? Nah. Sorry, I make it a rule not to partner with anyone green. Or, you know, psychotic.
--> '''Spidey:''' Are we talking Manhattan or all five? Nah. Sorry, I make it a rule not to partner with anyone green. Or, you know, psychotic.
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'''Spidey:''' Are we talking Manhattan or all five? Nah. Sorry, I make it a rule not to partner with anyone green. Or, you know, psychotic.
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--> '''Jonah:''' Robbie, scratch that headline, (mumbles) give the credit to Spider-Man. TO SPIDER-MAN, CONFOUND IT! But fire Parker, the kid never showed up! [[BigWhat WHAT]]?! What do you mean, he just ''e-mailed'' photos?!
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-->'''Bernard:''' (''greeting everyone'') Mr. Osborn, Master Harry... Spider-Man.
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-->'''Bernard:''' (''greeting everyone'') ''[greeting everyone]'' Mr. Osborn, Master Harry... Spider-Man.
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-->'''Spidey:''' There she is! And with [[JerkJock Flash]]. Ew! Well, at least Flash isn't evil... well, at least he's not possessed by an evil symbiote.
-->'''*beat*'''
-->'''Spidey:''' (''with suspicion''} At least not as far as I know...
-->'''*beat*'''
-->'''Spidey:''' (''with suspicion''} At least not as far as I know...
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-->'''Spidey:''' There she is! And with [[JerkJock Flash]]. Ew! Well, at least Flash isn't evil... well, at least he's not possessed by an evil symbiote.
-->'''*beat*'''
-->'''Spidey:''' (''with suspicion''}symbiote.\\
''[Beat]''\\
'''Spidey:''' ''[with suspicion]'' At least not as far as I know...
-->'''*beat*'''
-->'''Spidey:''' (''with suspicion''}
''[Beat]''\\
'''Spidey:''' ''[with suspicion]'' At least not as far as I know...
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* In "Destructive Testing," after a rather embarrassing defeat, Sergei Kravinoff goes hunting for Spider-Man - using his faithful lion to track locations that the webslinger has been to. What follows is a dialogue-less montage of Sergei and the lion's travels. At the Daily Bugle, we see lots of scared employees - except Jameson, who based on body language, is clearly yelling at the hunter and the lion to get out of his office.
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* In "Destructive Testing," after a rather embarrassing defeat, Sergei Kravinoff goes hunting for Spider-Man - -- using his faithful lion to track locations that the webslinger has been to. What follows is a dialogue-less montage of Sergei and the lion's travels. At the Daily Bugle, we see lots of scared employees - -- except Jameson, who based on body language, is clearly yelling at the hunter and the lion to get out of his office.
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--> '''Peter:''' Boss, I'd like a word...
--> '''Jonah:''' How 'bout "scram?" Or two words, "scram kid." Or seventeen! "Get out of my office in two-point-three seconds or I'll staple you to a flagpole!"
--> ''[Beat]''
--> '''Peter:''' ...H-how did you count so... never mind.
--> '''Jonah:''' How 'bout "scram?" Or two words, "scram kid." Or seventeen! "Get out of my office in two-point-three seconds or I'll staple you to a flagpole!"
--> ''[Beat]''
--> '''Peter:''' ...H-how did you count so... never mind.
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-->
'''Jonah:''' How 'bout "scram?" Or two words, "scram kid." Or seventeen! "Get out of my office in two-point-three seconds or I'll staple you to a
--> ''[Beat]''
--> '''Peter:''' ...
''[Beat]''\\
'''Peter:''' ... H-how did you count so... never mind.
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---> '''Jonah:''' Soon he'll be caught, jailed, and run out of town!
---> '''Peter:''' (muttering as he stalks off) How can he be jailed ''and'' run out of town?
---> '''Peter:''' (muttering as he stalks off) How can he be jailed ''and'' run out of town?
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--->
'''Peter:'''
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-->'''Rhino:''' ''(groggily)'' I swear I'll crush you! Promised Big Man I'd crush you! Crush you... crush you... crush you...\\
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-->'''Rhino:''' ''(groggily)'' ''[groggily]'' I swear I'll crush you! Promised Big Man I'd crush you! Crush you... crush you... crush you...\\
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'''Rhino:''' ''(whining childishly)'' [[NonSequiturThud Mama, do I have to go to school?]]
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'''Rhino:''' ''(whining childishly)'' ''[whining childishly]'' [[NonSequiturThud Mama, do I have to go to school?]]
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--> '''Tombstone:''' I really should start locking those windows.
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-->"Aw man, my money!"
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-->"Awww, my big score!"
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--> '''Flash:''' She's, like, totally immune to The Flash!
--> '''Peter:''' 'Cause she's got a brain?
--> '''Flash:''' Exactly!
--> '''Peter:''' 'Cause she's got a brain?
--> '''Flash:''' Exactly!
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-->
'''Peter:''' 'Cause she's got a
-->
'''Flash:''' Exactly!
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--->'''Flash:''' You need to make sure I don't say nothin' to make Sha Shan think I'm stupid.
--->'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship? ''Sailed''.
--->'''Flash:''' ''Shuddup!''
--->'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship? ''Sailed''.
--->'''Flash:''' ''Shuddup!''
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--->'''Flash:''' You need to make sure I don't say nothin' to make Sha Shan think I'm stupid.
--->'''Peter:'''stupid.\\
'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship?''Sailed''.
--->'''Flash:'''''Sailed''.\\
'''Flash:''' ''Shuddup!''
--->'''Peter:'''
'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship?
--->'''Flash:'''
'''Flash:''' ''Shuddup!''
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--> '''Spider-Man:''' Is there anyone in here?
--> '''Voice:''' Get lost!
--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...''(camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot)'' Parrot.
--> '''Parrot:''' Get lost! RAWK! Get lost! RAWK! Get lost!
--> '''Voice:''' Get lost!
--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...''(camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot)'' Parrot.
--> '''Parrot:''' Get lost! RAWK! Get lost! RAWK! Get lost!
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-->
'''Voice:''' Get lost!
--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...
-->
'''Parrot:''' Get lost! RAWK! Get lost! RAWK! Get lost!
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-->'''Jameson''': I'm giddy like a schoolgirl!
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--->'''Jameson''': He did it! My boy did it... HEY, HEY! I'm not paying you bums to watch television! Get me a new layout in seventeen seconds OR YOU'RE ALL FIRED!!!
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-->'''Spider-Man''': ...you've had more shots at me than Marko and O'Hirn - and done about as well!
-->'''Shocker''': Them boys are ''punks''. This is my ''profession''!
-->'''Spider-Man''': You do this for a living? With that accent, [[BriefAccentImitation Ah wuz thinkin' ro-de-o clown!]]
-->'''Shocker''': Don't you '''mock me''', boy!
-->'''Spider-Man''': Hey, I mock. [[ItsWhatIDo I'm a mocker]]. Also a puller, a tugger, a yanker...
-->'''Shocker''': Them boys are ''punks''. This is my ''profession''!
-->'''Spider-Man''': You do this for a living? With that accent, [[BriefAccentImitation Ah wuz thinkin' ro-de-o clown!]]
-->'''Shocker''': Don't you '''mock me''', boy!
-->'''Spider-Man''': Hey, I mock. [[ItsWhatIDo I'm a mocker]]. Also a puller, a tugger, a yanker...
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-->'''Shocker''':
'''Shocker:''' Them boys are ''punks''. This is my
-->'''Spider-Man''':
'''Spider-Man:''' You do this for a living? With that accent, [[BriefAccentImitation Ah wuz thinkin' ro-de-o
-->'''Shocker''':
'''Shocker:''' Don't you '''mock me''',
-->'''Spider-Man''':
'''Spider-Man:''' Hey, I mock. [[ItsWhatIDo I'm a mocker]]. Also a puller, a tugger, a yanker...
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--->'''Spider-Man''': (After throwing a traffic cone on Rhino's horn) Oh-ho-ho! I got the thing on the thing! What do I win?
--->'''Rhino''': (enraged) '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''
--->'''Spider-Man''': I win ''me''?! That makes no sense.
--->'''Rhino''': (enraged) '''[[YouExclamation YOU!]]'''
--->'''Spider-Man''': I win ''me''?! That makes no sense.
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--->'''Spider-Man''':
'''Spider-Man:''' I win ''me''?! That makes no sense.
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'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' ''(sigh)'' I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' ''(sigh)'' I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
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'''Electro:''' ... [[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets ''[gets webbed up)'' up]'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:'''''(sigh)'' ''[sigh]'' I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture ''[Vulture shows up)''\\up]''\\
'''Spider-Man:'''
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-->'''Spider-Man''': I know I'll regret this, but...you wanna partner up to destroy it?
-->'''Rhino''': (''bursts out into jolly laughter, followed by a beat'') Okay.
-->'''Rhino''': (''bursts out into jolly laughter, followed by a beat'') Okay.
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-->'''Rhino''': (''bursts
'''Rhino:''' ''[bursts out into jolly laughter, followed by a
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--->'''Spider-Man''' What, no high-fives, no kumbayas?! I am shocked, ''[[SarcasmMode shocked]]'', I tell you!
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--> '''Sandman''': I've had bad experiences with cats.
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-->'''Jonah with CrossPoppingVeins''': TO RAISE MY BLOOD-PRESSURE!
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-->'''Jonah''': Woah, I thought I was just making an excuse!
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--->'''Jonah''': ZIP IT! PEOPLE ARE TRYING TO HEAR!
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-->'''Electro:''' "Without a cure, I'm not Max Dillon! I'm...what did you call me?"
-->'''Spider-Man:''' "...Lightning butt?"
-->'''Electro:''' "No! Not that!"
-->'''Spider-Man:''' "...Lightning butt?"
-->'''Electro:''' "No! Not that!"
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-->'''Electro:''' "Without Without a cure, I'm not Max Dillon! I'm...I'm... what did you call me?"
-->'''Spider-Man:''' "...me?\\
'''Spider-Man:''' ... Lightningbutt?"
-->'''Electro:''' "No!butt?\\
'''Electro:''' No! Notthat!"that!
-->'''Spider-Man:''' "...
'''Spider-Man:''' ... Lightning
-->'''Electro:''' "No!
'''Electro:''' No! Not
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-->'''Spider-Man''': So, [[InsaneTrollLogic you'll rob the piggy bank, but won't touch the cookie jar?]] [[SarcasmMode You must qualify for nephew-of-the-year.]] Twisted division.
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.''
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--->'''Spider-Man''': Only six, huh? What happened, Lizard and Goblin had Nix tickets?
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--->'''Spider-Man''': Only six, huh? What happened, Lizard and Goblin had Nix Knicks tickets?
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--> '''Doc Ock''': (while repeatedly slamming Spidey around) [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Glib! Does not! Equate! With clever! Spider-Man!]]
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--> '''Doc Ock''': (while repeatedly slamming Spidey around) [[PunctuatedForEmphasis [[PunctuatedPounding Glib! Does not! Equate! With clever! Spider-Man!]]
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--->'''Flash:''' ''Shuddup!''
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--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...[camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot] Parrot.
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--> '''Spider-Man:''' I'm afraid I can't do that Mr...[camera ''(camera pans to reveal the source of the voice to be a caged parrot] parrot)'' Parrot.
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--->'''Spider-Man''': (After throwing a traffic cone on Rhino's horn) Hey! I got the thing on the thing! What do I win?
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--->'''Spider-Man''': (After throwing a traffic cone on Rhino's horn) Hey! Oh-ho-ho! I got the thing on the thing! What do I win?
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'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
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'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! mouth! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
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'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
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'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* ''(sigh)'' I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
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* When Flash lands the role of Bottom in the school production of ''Theatre/AMidsummerNightsDream'', Sha Shan imagines him with a donkey head, then tells him [[StealthInsult he won't need much time to prepare]].
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* When Flash lands the role of Nick Bottom in the school production of ''Theatre/AMidsummerNightsDream'', Sha Shan imagines him with a donkey head, then tells him [[StealthInsult he won't need much time to prepare]].
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** And earlier, when he is whining to Joan during the performance, another attendee, [[TheVoiceless Hobie Brown]], turns around to shush him.
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** And earlier, when he is whining to Joan during the performance, another attendee, [[TheVoiceless Hobie Brown]], turns around to silently shush him.
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.''
* [[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”]]
* [[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”]]
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.''
* [[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”]]''
* [[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”]]
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* [[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”))
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.''
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.''''
*[[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”))
*[[RunningGag Doc Ock’s coffee mug reads]] [[CardCarryingVillain “EVIL GENIUS”))
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--> '''Doc Ock:''' Do you ever ''SHUT UP''?!?
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--> '''Doc Ock:''' Do you ever ''SHUT UP''?!?UP''?!
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--> '''Jonah:''' Robbie, scratch that headline, (mumbles) give the credit to Spider-Man. TO SPIDER-MAN, CONFOUND IT! But fire Parker, the kid never showed up! [[BigWhat WHAT]]!? What do you mean, he just ''e-mailed'' photos!?
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--> '''Jonah:''' Robbie, scratch that headline, (mumbles) give the credit to Spider-Man. TO SPIDER-MAN, CONFOUND IT! But fire Parker, the kid never showed up! [[BigWhat WHAT]]!? WHAT]]?! What do you mean, he just ''e-mailed'' photos!?photos?!
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'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
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'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Beechi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Beaky? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhatWhat!?]]What?!]]
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': Now then arachnid,[[AnyLastWords any last words]]?\\
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': Now then arachnid,[[AnyLastWords arachnid, [[AnyLastWords any last words]]?\\
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any last words]], arachnid?\\
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any Now then arachnid,[[AnyLastWords any last words]], arachnid?\\words]]?\\
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.'''
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--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.'''''
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** Then in the course of beating them up, Spidey gets each of the robbers in the face with a pie.
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** Then in the course of beating them up, Spidey gets each of the robbers in the face with a pie.pie.
* Ned Lee interviewing several of the supporting cast to figure out if Peter Parker is Spider-Man in “Identity Crisis”.
** The Connors initially deny it, [[ExplainExplainOhCrap only to realize that it would explain a few things and then end the interview then and there]].
** Flash is incredulous that Puny Parker is Spider-Man and proclaims that anyone can dress up as a Spider-Man. One GilliganCut later and Flash is dressed up in a Spider-Man costume.
** Then there’s Norman Osborn’s interview.
--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.'''
* Ned Lee interviewing several of the supporting cast to figure out if Peter Parker is Spider-Man in “Identity Crisis”.
** The Connors initially deny it, [[ExplainExplainOhCrap only to realize that it would explain a few things and then end the interview then and there]].
** Flash is incredulous that Puny Parker is Spider-Man and proclaims that anyone can dress up as a Spider-Man. One GilliganCut later and Flash is dressed up in a Spider-Man costume.
** Then there’s Norman Osborn’s interview.
--> '''Norman:''' ''(sits silently for several seconds, obviously thinking about it)'' ... ''No.'''
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--->"Awww, my big score!"
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* After Spidey first beats Rhino via overheating him, we get this hilarious bit of DeliriousMisidentification.
-->'''Rhino:''' ''(groggily)'' I swear I'll crush you! Promised Big Man I'd crush you! Crush you... crush you... crush you...\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Are we losing it a bit, Alexander?\\
'''Rhino:''' Only Mama calls me Alexander! You're not my Mama! Not my Mama... Mama...\\
'''Spider-Man:''' [[LampshadeHanging Yes, I think we are.]]\\
'''Rhino:''' ''(whining childishly)'' [[NonSequiturThud Mama, do I have to go to school?]]
-->'''Rhino:''' ''(groggily)'' I swear I'll crush you! Promised Big Man I'd crush you! Crush you... crush you... crush you...\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Are we losing it a bit, Alexander?\\
'''Rhino:''' Only Mama calls me Alexander! You're not my Mama! Not my Mama... Mama...\\
'''Spider-Man:''' [[LampshadeHanging Yes, I think we are.]]\\
'''Rhino:''' ''(whining childishly)'' [[NonSequiturThud Mama, do I have to go to school?]]
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--->'''Spider-Man''': ...you've had more shots at me than Marko and O'Hirn - and done about as well!
--->'''Shocker''': Them boys are ''punks''. This is my ''profession''!
--->'''Spider-Man''': You do this for a living? With that accent, [[BriefAccentImitation Ah wuz thinkin' ro-de-o clown!]]
--->'''Shocker''': Don't you '''mock me''', boy!
--->'''Spider-Man''': Hey, I mock. [[ItsWhatIDo I'm a mocker]]. Also a puller, a tugger, a yanker...
--->'''Shocker''': Them boys are ''punks''. This is my ''profession''!
--->'''Spider-Man''': You do this for a living? With that accent, [[BriefAccentImitation Ah wuz thinkin' ro-de-o clown!]]
--->'''Shocker''': Don't you '''mock me''', boy!
--->'''Spider-Man''': Hey, I mock. [[ItsWhatIDo I'm a mocker]]. Also a puller, a tugger, a yanker...
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--> '''Spider-Man''': Come one, come all, before your very eyes, the world's largest dehydrated turtle!
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-->'''Goblin:''' ...Oh, don't tell me you like the Master Planner and his ''wonderful personality''! *shudders*
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--> '''Jonah:''' Soon he'll be caught, jailed, and run out of town!
--> '''Peter:''' (muttering as he stalks off) How can he be jailed ''and'' run out of town?
--> '''Peter:''' (muttering as he stalks off) How can he be jailed ''and'' run out of town?
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-->'''Flash:''' You need to make sure I don't say nothin' to make Sha Shan think I'm stupid.
-->'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship? ''Sailed''.
-->'''Peter:''' Uh, dude? Ship? ''Sailed''.
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-->'''Jameson''': He did it! My boy did it... HEY, HEY! I'm not paying you bums to watch television! Get me a new layout in seventeen seconds OR YOU'RE ALL FIRED!!!
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-->'''Spider-Man''' What, no high-fives, no kumbayas?! I am shocked, ''[[SarcasmMode shocked]]'', I tell you!
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-->'''Jonah''': ZIP IT! PEOPLE ARE TRYING TO HEAR!
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-->"Woah, I thought I was just making an excuse!"
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-->'''Electro:''' "No! Not that!"
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-->'''Electro:''' "No! Not that!"that!"
* In the opening of "Natural Selection", a group of robbers breaks into a bakery, and the leader instructs his cronies to take the money from the cash register but to NOT eat anything, as the owner is his great-aunt. Spidey pops in to comment on those priorities.
-->'''Spider-Man''': So, [[InsaneTrollLogic you'll rob the piggy bank, but won't touch the cookie jar?]] [[SarcasmMode You must qualify for nephew-of-the-year.]] Twisted division.
** Then in the course of beating them up, Spidey gets each of the robbers in the face with a pie.
* In the opening of "Natural Selection", a group of robbers breaks into a bakery, and the leader instructs his cronies to take the money from the cash register but to NOT eat anything, as the owner is his great-aunt. Spidey pops in to comment on those priorities.
-->'''Spider-Man''': So, [[InsaneTrollLogic you'll rob the piggy bank, but won't touch the cookie jar?]] [[SarcasmMode You must qualify for nephew-of-the-year.]] Twisted division.
** Then in the course of beating them up, Spidey gets each of the robbers in the face with a pie.
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-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
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'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap "Humina human humina" comes to mind.]]
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'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap "Humina human humina humina" comes to mind.]]
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* Spidey's reaction to being face with the Sinister Six deserves a mention.
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* Spidey's reaction to being face faced with the Sinister Six deserves a mention.
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any last words, Arachnid?]]\\
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap Humina humina humina comes to mind.]]
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap Humina humina humina comes to mind.]]
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-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any last words, Arachnid?]]\\
words]], arachnid?\\
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrapHumina humina humina "Humina human humina" comes to mind.]]
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap
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* Spidey's reaction to being face with the Sinister Six deserves a mention.
-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any last words, Arachnid?]]\\
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap Humina humina humina comes to mind.]]
** Immediately followed by this:
--->'''Spider-Man''': Only six, huh? What happened, Lizard and Goblin had Nix tickets?
-->'''Doctor Octopus''': [[AnyLastWords Any last words, Arachnid?]]\\
'''Spider-Man''': [[OhCrap Humina humina humina comes to mind.]]
** Immediately followed by this:
--->'''Spider-Man''': Only six, huh? What happened, Lizard and Goblin had Nix tickets?
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* Peter having to fight Electro and Vulture after scalding his tongue on hot cocoa, until it heals. It winds up giving him ElmuhFuddSyndwome.
-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
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-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
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-->'''Rhino:''' (completely deadpan) I hate you. So much.
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* Peter having to fight Electro and Vulture after scalding his tongue on hot cocoa, until it heals. It winds up giving him ElmuhFuddSyndwome.
-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
-->'''Electro:''' SHOW YOURSELF, [[CurseCutShort YOU WALL-CRAWLING]]-\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Now, now, wathh the mouthh! Thewwa thildwen pwesenn. [[labelnote:translation]] Now, now, watch the mouth! [[ThinkOfTheChildren There are children present.]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Electro:''' ...[[FlatWhat What?]] ''(gets webbed up)'' Ugh!\\
'''Spider-Man:''' *sigh* I burhned my tonghh, okay?\\
''(Vulture shows up)''\\
'''Spider-Man:''' Reetthi? Ith thewwa wevolving doow ah tha pwithin? [[labelnote:translation]] [[CardboardPrison Really? Is there a revolving door at that prison?]] [[/labelnote]]\\
'''Vulture:''' [[BigWhat What!?]]
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