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* Section 15: after a failed Dark Eldar assassination attempt Biel-Tan received a cask of Commoraghan wine (unpoisoned even)and a note from Vect himself congratulating them on having such a "exquisitely brutal" mistress as their leader and wished them luck in their war with the Mon'keigh.
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* Section 15: after After a failed Dark Eldar assassination attempt attempt, Biel-Tan received a cask of Commoraghan wine (unpoisoned even)and even) and a note from Vect himself congratulating them on having such a "exquisitely brutal" mistress as their leader and wished them luck in their war with the Mon'keigh.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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Even in a dark story such as [[Fanfic/TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[NightmareFuel hopelessness]] of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
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Even in a dark story such as [[Fanfic/TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[NightmareFuel hopelessness]] of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ramped UpToEleven up to eleven make them stand out all the more.
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[NightmareFuel hopelessness]] of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome [[Fanfic/TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[NightmareFuel hopelessness]] of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or '''‘pretty wurld’''' to the Orks)."
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or '''‘pretty wurld’''' to the Orks).""
* Section 15: after a failed Dark Eldar assassination attempt Biel-Tan received a cask of Commoraghan wine (unpoisoned even)and a note from Vect himself congratulating them on having such a "exquisitely brutal" mistress as their leader and wished them luck in their war with the Mon'keigh.
* Section 15: after a failed Dark Eldar assassination attempt Biel-Tan received a cask of Commoraghan wine (unpoisoned even)and a note from Vect himself congratulating them on having such a "exquisitely brutal" mistress as their leader and wished them luck in their war with the Mon'keigh.
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Nightmare Fuel hasn't had an octane level for YEARS. Also stripping unnnecessary use of italics.
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel hopelessness]] of TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'' '''''‘pretty wurld’''''' ''to the Orks)."''
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'' '''''‘pretty wurld’''''' ''to the Orks)."''
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel [[NightmareFuel hopelessness]] of TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet:''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'' '''''‘pretty wurld’''''' ''to (or '''‘pretty wurld’''' to the Orks)."''"
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet:
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel hopelessness]] of Warhammer40000 ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
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Even in a dark story such as [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel hopelessness]] of Warhammer40000 TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 ramped UpToEleven make them stand out all the more.
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Even in a dark story such as TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome, there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel hopelessness]] of Warhammer40000 turned UpToEleven make them stand out.
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'' '''‘pretty wurld’''' ''to the Orks)."''
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'' '''‘pretty wurld’''' ''to the Orks)."''
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Even in a dark story such as TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome, [[TheShapeOfTheNightmareToCome this one]], there are still a few moments of hilarity. The fact that the whole story is filled with the [[CrapsackWorld ble]][[CosmicHorrorStory ak]], [[DarkerAndEdgier harsh]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel hopelessness]] of Warhammer40000 turned ramped UpToEleven make them stand out.
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or'''''‘pretty wurld’''' '''''‘pretty wurld’''''' ''to the Orks)."''
* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or''
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or ''‘pretty wurld’'' to the Orks)."
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator says the Orks assaulted a maiden world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of the planet: "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] ''"Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron (or ''‘pretty wurld’'' to (or'' '''‘pretty wurld’''' ''to the Orks).""''
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator has this to say.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad of Gork and Mork’, [...] assaulted the maiden world of Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron ''(or ‘pretty wurld’ to the Orks)''.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad of Gork and Mork’, [...] assaulted the maiden world of Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron ''(or ‘pretty wurld’ to the Orks)''.
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, the narrator has this to say.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr,says the supposed ‘dad of Gork and Mork’, [...] Orks assaulted the a maiden world world. The kicker here is where he describes the name of Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] the planet: "Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron ''(or ‘pretty wurld’ (or ''‘pretty wurld’'' to the Orks)''.Orks)."
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr,
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, Kryptmann has this to say.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad of gork and mork’, led his entire warband away from the Octavian system, and the Armaggedon system, and instead assaulted the maiden world of Fourst-K’tikaritix-HeHet mudastiron (or ‘pretty wurld’ to the Orks).
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad of gork and mork’, led his entire warband away from the Octavian system, and the Armaggedon system, and instead assaulted the maiden world of Fourst-K’tikaritix-HeHet mudastiron (or ‘pretty wurld’ to the Orks).
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* On the detail of how the "Webway Waaaagh" started, Kryptmann the narrator has this to say.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad ofgork Gork and mork’, led his entire warband away from the Octavian system, and the Armaggedon system, and instead Mork’, [...] assaulted the maiden world of Fourst-K’tikaritix-HeHet mudastiron (or Fourst-K’tikaritix-[=HeHet=] Mudastiron ''(or ‘pretty wurld’ to the Orks).Orks)''.
--> ... This war boss, upon sensing a call from Waaaghraz Gharr, the supposed ‘dad of