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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way, followed by a dunk in clean water to clean her up. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way, followed by a dunk in clean water to clean her up.wash the mud off. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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* Zecora [[OohMeAccentsSlipping dropping her fake accent]] like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
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* Zecora [[OohMeAccentsSlipping dropping her fake accent]] like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
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--> '''Celestia''': ''{{Beat}}'' "So how did it taste?"
-->'''Darth Vulcan''': "I dunno, [[BuffySpeak snakey]]-[[TastesLikeChicken chickeny]]. Look, are you going to interrupt a lot?"
--> '''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
-->'''Darth Vulcan''': "I dunno, [[BuffySpeak snakey]]-[[TastesLikeChicken chickeny]]. Look, are you going to interrupt a lot?"
--> '''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
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--> '''Celestia''': '''Celestia:''' ''{{Beat}}'' "So how did it taste?"
-->'''DarthVulcan''': Vulcan:''' "I dunno, [[BuffySpeak snakey]]-[[TastesLikeChicken chickeny]]. Look, are you going to interrupt a lot?"
-->'''Celestia''': '''Celestia:''' "Never mind. Continue."
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* The Diamond Dogs must have learned from Ted during the battle for the Everfree Castle, as their heads are about crotch level against [[spoiler:Sombra]]'s minions.
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* The Diamond Dogs must have learned from Ted during the battle for the Everfree Castle, as their heads are about [[GroinAttack crotch level level]] against [[spoiler:Sombra]]'s minions.
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-->'''Heart Root:''' "You wanted my farm so bad? Well, [[PrecisionFStrike y'bitch]], [[PreAssKickingOneLiner here it is!]]"
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--> ''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
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--> ''Celestia''': '''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
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* Zecora dropping her fake accent like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
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* Zecora [[OohMeAccentsSlipping dropping her fake accent accent]] like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.ScaryImpracticalArmor.
* After freaking out at Darth Vulcan casually mentioning that he had killed, cooked, and ''ate'' a [[TakenForGranite Cockatrice]], we receive this little exchange.
--> '''Celestia''': ''{{Beat}}'' "So how did it taste?"
-->'''Darth Vulcan''': "I dunno, [[BuffySpeak snakey]]-[[TastesLikeChicken chickeny]]. Look, are you going to interrupt a lot?"
--> ''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
* After freaking out at Darth Vulcan casually mentioning that he had killed, cooked, and ''ate'' a [[TakenForGranite Cockatrice]], we receive this little exchange.
--> '''Celestia''': ''{{Beat}}'' "So how did it taste?"
-->'''Darth Vulcan''': "I dunno, [[BuffySpeak snakey]]-[[TastesLikeChicken chickeny]]. Look, are you going to interrupt a lot?"
--> ''Celestia''': "Never mind. Continue."
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* Due to the weirdness of Changeling mating habits, Chrysalis becomes hopelessly enamored with Vulcan. His reactions are ''priceless''. In-Universe, Princess Luna finds out and starts laughing uncontrollably.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.Riverdance.
* A pirate tries to [[MuggingTheMonster mug Vulcan]]. Both Vulcan and Dodger lampshade how stupid this is, even before it goes as badly as you'd expect for the mugger in question.
* A pirate tries to [[MuggingTheMonster mug Vulcan]]. Both Vulcan and Dodger lampshade how stupid this is, even before it goes as badly as you'd expect for the mugger in question.
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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way.way, followed by a dunk in clean water to clean her up. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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Ted trying to drown her isn't funny.
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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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* Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
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* A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.
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* A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.department, and the whole "nobility takes precedence" thing. The events leading to it are kinda grim, but no one can deny that the result is hilarious.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.Riverdance.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
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* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.Riverdance.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.
* When Darth Vulcan tricks Luna into invading his dreams instead of Artful Dodger's, he blasts her with every cringeworthy and horrifying internet meme he can remember, including 2 Girls 1 Cup... when she finally escapes, she finds Celestia standing by her bed, offering her some comfort food-- a large bowl of chocolate ice cream. The next instant Luna is in the bathroom, puking so hard her foot nearly pops out her mouth.
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* The Diamond Dogs must have learned from Ted during the battle for the Everfree Castle, as their heads are about crotch level against [[Sombra]]'s minions.
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* The Diamond Dogs must have learned from Ted during the battle for the Everfree Castle, as their heads are about crotch level against [[Sombra]]'s [[spoiler:Sombra]]'s minions.
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* The Diamond Dogs must have learned from Ted during the battle for the Everfree Castle, as their heads are about crotch level against [[Sombra]]'s minions.
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* Chrysalis and [[spoiler: Sombra]] throwing insults at each other, while Vulcan watches on.
--> '''[[spoiler: Sombra]]''': Cockroach!
--> '''Chrysalis''': Relic!
--> '''[[spoiler: Sombra]]''': Pompous nag!
--> '''Chrysalis''': Gas bag!
--> '''Vulcan''' (thinking): I dunno. Maybe they used to date.
--> '''[[spoiler: Sombra]]''': Cockroach!
--> '''Chrysalis''': Relic!
--> '''[[spoiler: Sombra]]''': Pompous nag!
--> '''Chrysalis''': Gas bag!
--> '''Vulcan''' (thinking): I dunno. Maybe they used to date.
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* Runt getting caught in one the Castle's traps, and the ensuing conversation.
--> '''Vulcan''': Are you injured?
--> '''Runt''': Don't think so.
--> '''Vulcan''': Don't think so?
--> '''Runt''': Can't see, Dread Master. Can't see! Everything dark!
--> '''Vulcan''': Runt?
--> '''Runt''': Yes?
--> '''Vulcan''': Try opening your eyes.
--> '''Runt''': Oh, that better.
--> '''Vulcan''': Are you injured?
--> '''Runt''': Don't think so.
--> '''Vulcan''': Don't think so?
--> '''Runt''': Can't see, Dread Master. Can't see! Everything dark!
--> '''Vulcan''': Runt?
--> '''Runt''': Yes?
--> '''Vulcan''': Try opening your eyes.
--> '''Runt''': Oh, that better.
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* During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].
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* During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].arse]].
* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
* Dodger and his run-in with the aptly-titled "Nope Spider" swarm is comedy gold; especially when he falls into a fetlock-deep carpet of them and inadvertently invents Riverdance.
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** Zecora dropping her fake accent like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
** Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
** The Diamond Dogs rescuing Ted results in Canterlot Castle sliding down the mountainside and ending up in a lake, where it stays for the rest of the fic.
** A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.
** During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].
** Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
** The Diamond Dogs rescuing Ted results in Canterlot Castle sliding down the mountainside and ending up in a lake, where it stays for the rest of the fic.
** A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.
** During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].
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* Vulcan expressing his opinion that with all the "girly cutesy pootsy crap", it's surprising their leader doesn't fart glitter.
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* Vulcan expressing his opinion that with all the "girly cutesy pootsy crap", it's surprising their leader doesn't fart glitter.glitter.
** Zecora dropping her fake accent like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
** Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
** The Diamond Dogs rescuing Ted results in Canterlot Castle sliding down the mountainside and ending up in a lake, where it stays for the rest of the fic.
** A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.
** During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].
** Zecora dropping her fake accent like a hot rock when Ted shows up in his ScaryImpracticalArmor.
** Diamond Tiara's HumiliationConga. She becomes a [[DraggedByTheCollar literal]] [[TheDragAlong Drag Along]], getting [[CoveredInGunge dunked in a bog]] along the way. Ted's idea of giving her a bath is to nearly drown her for being whiny. Then comes [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood the Diamond Dog parenting]], getting dropped in a privy, ''another'' traumatic bath, and being put in a gunny sack hanging on the wall of a butcher's shop. She shuts up after that.
** The Diamond Dogs rescuing Ted results in Canterlot Castle sliding down the mountainside and ending up in a lake, where it stays for the rest of the fic.
** A disgruntled unicorn farmer ''throwing his house'' at Celestia because he got screwed by the tax department.
** During a demonstration of animal care to the Changelings (so they can harvest their pets' love for them), Angel Bunny decides to bite Vulcan on the arm - his reaction is to drop-kick the rabbit into the forest so hard that Fluttershy has to pull his tail [[AssShove out of his arse]].
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* Vulcan expressing his opinion that with all the "girly cutesy pootsy crap", it's surprising their leader doesn't fart glitter.
