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* Lucia's reaction to finding out Dede took her brother's ashes.
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* Lucia's reaction to finding out Dede Dedee took her brother's ashes.
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* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a restaurant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
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* Dede Dedee ordering a Long-island iced tea at a restaurant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
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--> '''Dede:''' ''[in a lot of pain, very sarcastically]'' Yeah, lucky me!
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--> '''Dede:''' '''Dedee:''' ''[in a lot of pain, very sarcastically]'' Yeah, lucky me!
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* Dede trolling the audience into thinking she has died. ''Twice''.
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* Dede Dedee trolling the audience into thinking she has died. ''Twice''.
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* When Matt suggests marrying, Dede says she doesn't think they should rush into it.
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* When Matt suggests marrying, Dede Dedee says she doesn't think they should rush into it.
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* Lucia also suggests an abortion, which Dede reminds her off when Lucia tells her that smoking is bad for the baby.
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* Lucia also suggests an abortion, which Dede Dedee reminds her off when Lucia tells her that smoking is bad for the baby.
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* Lucia admitting that she doesn't understand the human appetite for sex:
-->'''Lucia''': I would rather have a back rub. It lasts longer, and there's no fluids.
-->'''Lucia''': I would rather have a back rub. It lasts longer, and there's no fluids.
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--> Lucia: "Oh, great, she's probably trying to smoke them!"
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--> Bill: *''in awe''* "You're having a baby!"
--> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
--> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
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--> Bill: *''in awe''* "You're '''Bill:''' ''[in awe]'' You're having a baby!"
baby!
-->Dede: *''in '''Dede:''' ''[in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, sarcastically]'' Yeah, lucky me!"me!
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** Lucia also suggests an abortion, which Dede reminds her off when Lucia tells her that smoking is bad for the baby.
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---> Lucia: "Oh, great, she's probably trying to smoke them!"
* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a resturant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a resturant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
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* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a
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---> Bill: *''in awe''* "You're having a baby!"
---> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
---> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
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* Lucia berates Matt for the affair since he's supposed to be gay. He responds that he's bisexual...
--> "I went to a Bar Mitzvah once! That doesn't make me Jewish!"
* Dede trolling the audience into thinking she has died. ''Twice''.
--> "I'm the fucking ''narrator'', guys."
* When Matt suggests marrying, Dede says she doesn't think they should rush into it.
--> '''Lucia:''' No, but bring another life into the world? That's whim time.
** Lucia also suggests an abortion, which Dede reminds her off when Lucia tells her that smoking is bad for the baby.
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*Lucia's reaction to finding out Dede took her brother's ashes.
---> Lucia: "Oh, great, she's probably trying to smoke them!"
* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a resturant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
* During the birth scene, this moment happens:
---> Bill: *''in awe''* "You're having a baby!"
---> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
---> Lucia: "Oh, great, she's probably trying to smoke them!"
* Dede ordering a Long-island iced tea at a resturant. When rebuked, since she's pregnant, she responds, "This kid owes its ''life'' to Long-island iced tea, if you get what I mean."
* During the birth scene, this moment happens:
---> Bill: *''in awe''* "You're having a baby!"
---> Dede: *''in a lot of pain, very sarcastically''* "Yeah, lucky me!"
