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--> '''I hate you and everything you stand for, and want to be you more than anything else in the world.'''
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* When Jade Blossom tricks a kappa into bowing and thereby weakening itself by emptying its head bowl, Sweetie Belle throws a rock at its chin hard enough to knock it over. It gets back up, recharged by the water, and blocks its bowl with a ceramic top, now mad and readying for a fight... at which point the rock Sweetie threw falls out of the air and hits it hard enough to break through the ceramic and knock the kappa out this time. Also a CMOA.
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** And it gets even funnier when Sweetie Belle provides her with roller skates on the fly - easier on the hooves, but now she can't stop!
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** Her One of her guards responding responds to being teased by other guards about the new butterfly logo on their uniforms his uniform by bringing out pictures of Fluttershy from her brief career as a model. Including a lingerie shot. Suddenly they're envied by all He instantly becomes the envy of every other guards instead of ridiculed.guard in the bar.
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* When Fluttershy's family is revealed to all be just like her, Sweetie Belle once again says, "OH COME ON!"ON!"
** And Babs Seed wins the betting pool that everypony had going on how the family would act.
** And Babs Seed wins the betting pool that everypony had going on how the family would act.
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** Cadence does the exact same thing when she senses Shining Armor's ascension.
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** Discord imitating [[Film/EvilDead Ash]] only to make a slight miscalculation:
---> '''Discord''': Alright you primeval screwheads.This is my BROOMSTICK! *broom is promptly destroyed by the vines* Eep!
---> '''Discord''': Alright you primeval screwheads.This is my BROOMSTICK! *broom is promptly destroyed by the vines* Eep!
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* In Chapter 22, Rarity's locator spell, now boosted by alicorn magic, drags her across Neigh Orleans and well into the surrounding swamp. She's not in a good mood afterwards.
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* Chapter 18 has two that stand one. One is that, after [[spoiler:a freshly HeelFaceTurn-ed Sunset Shimmer]] becomes an alicorn, "her squee of delight rang off the crystal walls like windchimes". Second is when afterward, the Royal Sisters are trying to get Shining to remove the cape hiding his baby wings:
-->'''Celestia''': Come on, captain, remove your cape...
-->'''Cadence''': Yeah, come on honey! Take it off! Wooo!
-->'''Celestia''': Come on, captain, remove your cape...
-->'''Cadence''': Yeah, come on honey! Take it off! Wooo!
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-->"Shuddup Henderson or I'll dress you in a schoolgirl outfit and THROW you to them! Now charge!"
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* Celestia calling the Mane Six to fill them in on the Tree of Harmony situation, while Discord and the Royal Guard fight the vines in the background, followed by Celestia casually bringing up everything in the aftermath. Pinkie's response?
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-->"Well, that happened."
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-->'''Fluttershy''': I, um, dub thee the Forest Guard. Arise.
-->'''Snowflake''': ''YEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!''
-->'''Fluttershy''': Meep?!
-->'''Snowflake''': ''YEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!''
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* [[NoIndoorVoice Snowflake]] is the Captain of Fluttershy's Forest Guard. Picture the contrast.
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* "Remember your oath, she frantically thought. No mortal stallions. No mortal stallions. No. No. You can not haz beefcake. Must wait until the Panacea is found. NO MORTAL STALLIONS."
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* Luna explaining that she's getting a bit...tense...after not having sex for a millenium and a half.
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* Rarity's entire reaction to Sweetie Belle's [[MarryThemAll solution]] to the CMC's harem problems with [[CluelessChickMagnet Bishi]], as well as Rarity trying (and failing) to convince her otherwise.
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** There's also the... unfortunate side-effect they discover after casting the spell. While a fully grown unicorn, his pegasus and earth-pony sides have been newly awakened/born... resulting in itty-bitty baby wings.
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* Shining Armor's reaction to the spontaneous alicorn ascending ritual that his sister sprung on him in the middle of the night?
-->"I'M TELLING MOM!"
-->"I'M TELLING MOM!"
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--> Even as barely conscious as [Celestia] was, she knew this was deathly important, a moment that required that she make some profound meaningful statement or other, something ringing of venerable wisdom and cosmic insight. \\
"Ebbeh," she said.
"Ebbeh," she said.
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"GOD HAVE MERCY ON OUR SOULS!" Rarity screamed, eyes starting staring in horror.
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-->"Oh my," Rarity said, flexing her new swan-like pinions. She pirouetted on one hoof, fanning them for best effect. "No need to panic, girls. In fact I think I rather like..." then she glanced over and saw a gleefully grinning Pinkie Pie poking and prodding at her own new wings and unicorn horn.\\
-->"Oh boy oh boy oh boy, does this mean I can do magic now too?"\\
-->"GOD HAVE MERCY ON OUR SOULS!" Rarity screamed, eyes starting in horror.\\
-->"Oh my," Rarity said, flexing her new swan-like pinions. She pirouetted on one hoof, fanning them for best effect. "No need to panic, girls. In fact I think I rather like..." then she glanced over and saw a gleefully grinning Pinkie Pie poking and prodding at her own new wings and unicorn horn.\\
-->"Oh boy oh boy oh boy, does this mean I can do magic now too?"\\
-->"GOD HAVE MERCY ON OUR SOULS!" Rarity screamed, eyes starting in horror.\\
