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* In her review of "Something in the Eyes" (a bad ''Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia''[=/=]''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'' crossover) has her reaction to the idea that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus.
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* In her review of "Something in the Eyes" (a bad ''Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia''[=/=]''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'' ''Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia''/''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'' crossover) has her reaction to the idea that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus.
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** Made even funnier by the fact that ''[[Disney/{{Fantasia}} A Night on Bald Mountain]]'' is playing in the background!
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** Made even funnier by the fact that ''[[Disney/{{Fantasia}} ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}} A Night on Bald Mountain]]'' is playing in the background!
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Creator/JohnnyDepp or Creator/LeonardoDiCaprio or WallyCox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now."'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh, if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Creator/JohnnyDepp or Creator/LeonardoDiCaprio or WallyCox Creator/WallyCox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now."'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh, if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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** "The {{Maguffin}} you need is on the opposite side of the forest. Also, you should [[TakeThat kill antoine]]."
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** "The {{Maguffin}} MacGuffin you need is on the opposite side of the forest. Also, you should [[TakeThat kill antoine]]."
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** Her response to the [[MarySue protagonist's]] blase reaction to a shocking event. She provides Sally's reaction to Oogie Boogie's death in ''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas'' as a comparison.
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** Her response to the [[MarySue protagonist's]] Mary-Sue-protagonist's blase reaction to a shocking event. She provides Sally's reaction to Oogie Boogie's death in ''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas'' as a comparison.
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* In [[{{Plagiarism}} "Marie"]], she suggests that Frollo's brother might be a zombie, after he inexplicably comes back from the dead. She then gives us this:
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* In [[{{Plagiarism}} [[UsefulNotes/{{Plagiarism}} "Marie"]], she suggests that Frollo's brother might be a zombie, after he inexplicably comes back from the dead. She then gives us this:
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Creator/JohnnyDepp or Creator/LeonardoDeCaprio or WallyCox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now."'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh, if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Creator/JohnnyDepp or Creator/LeonardoDeCaprio Creator/LeonardoDiCaprio or WallyCox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now."'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh, if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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** "I don't recall [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Tails]] being such [[RonTheDeathEater an insufferable little douchebag]] on the show. That was usually [[FrenchJerk Antoine]]." (''cue a picture of Antoine with the caption "If you couldn't tell, [[TheScrappy I hate Antoine"]] under it'')
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** The Critic's first response to Frollo being called a "sex symbol".
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' Maybe I saw the wrong version of this movie. (''shows Frollo'') No this author is just ''on something''...
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' Maybe I saw the wrong version of this movie. (''shows Frollo'') No this author is just ''on something''...
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** Her response to the [[MarySue protagonist's]] blase reaction to a shocking event. She provides Sally's reaction to Oogie Boogie's death in ''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas'' as a comparison.
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' See? A reaction! A look of shock and horror as the Boogie Man is skinned alive before her very eyes! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And she waits a good ten minutes before gettin' it on with Jack Skellington]].
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' See? A reaction! A look of shock and horror as the Boogie Man is skinned alive before her very eyes! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And she waits a good ten minutes before gettin' it on with Jack Skellington]].
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* In [[{{Plagiarism}} "Marie"]], she suggests that Frollo's brother might be a zombie, after he inexplicably comes back from the dead. She then gives us this:
-->'''Zombie!Frollo''': (''to the tune of "Hellfire"'') BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS '''''BRAAAAAAAAAIIIINS!!!'''''
-->'''The Fanfiction Critic''': I would watch that!
-->'''Zombie!Frollo''': (''to the tune of "Hellfire"'') BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS!
-->BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS BRAINS '''''BRAAAAAAAAAIIIINS!!!'''''
-->'''The Fanfiction Critic''': I would watch that!
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** [[ItMakesSenseInContext Furry Cybersex]].
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** "The {{Maguffin}} you need is on the opposite side of the forest. Also, you should [[TakeThat kill antoine]]."
** When Robotnik [[NeverMyFault inexplicably blames Snivelly]] for a missile missing its intended target, we have this:
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' And why is it Snivelly's fault? Well, never mind, everything was sort of [[ButtMonkey his]] fault.
-->''(Shows a screenshot of Robotnik and Snivelly with the subtitle "This fanfiction is bad, Snivelly, and it's all your fault!")''
** When Robotnik [[NeverMyFault inexplicably blames Snivelly]] for a missile missing its intended target, we have this:
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' And why is it Snivelly's fault? Well, never mind, everything was sort of [[ButtMonkey his]] fault.
-->''(Shows a screenshot of Robotnik and Snivelly with the subtitle "This fanfiction is bad, Snivelly, and it's all your fault!")''
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Johnny Depp or Leonardo [=DeCaprio=] or Wally Cox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now"'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Johnny Depp Creator/JohnnyDepp or Leonardo [=DeCaprio=] Creator/LeonardoDeCaprio or Wally Cox WallyCox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now"'') now."'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh Oh, if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
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--> I can see how you'd make that mistake, I frequently get confused too! Like this is my favorite stuffed animal (''holds up Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'') and this is my favorite book (''holds up Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera'') and I don't know ''what'' this is (''holds up a box marked "poison"'') but it is just so yummy! (''eats some of its contents'')
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--> I can see how you'd make that mistake, I frequently get confused too! Like this is my favorite stuffed animal (''holds up Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'') Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone''), and this is my favorite book (''holds up Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera'') Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera''), and I don't know ''what'' this is (''holds up a box marked "poison"'') "poison"''), but it is it's just so yummy! (''eats some of its contents'')
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': Wait, so does that mean that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus too? (''cut to a clip of Jareth, [[MrFanservice being a hottie]]'') [[{{Fangirl}} OH MY GOD I HAVE TO GO TO CHURCH RIGHT NOW!]] (''runs off'')
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': Wait, so does that mean that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus too? (''cut to a clip of Jareth, [[MrFanservice Jareth being a hottie]]'') attractive'') [[{{Fangirl}} OH MY GOD GOD, I HAVE TO GO TO CHURCH RIGHT NOW!]] (''runs off'')
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-->'''Critic''': So...who is "Bookshire"? Because when I googled "bookshire" and "sonic the hedgehog" all I found was this. (''shows a hedgehog with a cast'') [[CutenessOverload Oh no! He's got a little boo-boo on his little hedgehog leg! Ohh...but he's so cute! He's so cute!]] Okay, let's see what else I found...(''shows a hedgehog sticking its tongue out'') [[CutenessOverload OHH! He's sticking out his little tongue! Oh he's a sassy little hedgehog! He's so naughty! He's so naughty!]]
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-->'''Critic''': So...who is "Bookshire"? Because when I googled "bookshire" "Bookshire" and "sonic "Sonic the hedgehog" Hedgehog", all I found was this. (''shows a hedgehog with a cast'') [[CutenessOverload Oh no! He's got a little boo-boo on his little hedgehog leg! Ohh...but he's so cute! He's so cute!]] Okay, let's see what else I found...(''shows a hedgehog sticking its tongue out'') [[CutenessOverload OHH! He's sticking out his little tongue! Oh Oh, he's a sassy little hedgehog! He's so naughty! He's so naughty!]]
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** Made even funnier by the fact that ''[[Disney/{{Fantasia}} A Night on Bald Mountain]]'' is playing in the background!
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* From her review of "Sonic Fights Robotnik":
-->'''Critic''': So...who is "Bookshire"? Because when I googled "bookshire" and "sonic the hedgehog" all I found was this. (''shows a hedgehog with a cast'') [[CutenessOverload Oh no! He's got a little boo-boo on his little hedgehog leg! Ohh...but he's so cute! He's so cute!]] Okay, let's see what else I found...(''shows a hedgehog sticking its tongue out'') [[CutenessOverload OHH! He's sticking out his little tongue! Oh he's a sassy little hedgehog! He's so naughty! He's so naughty!]]
-->'''Critic''': So...who is "Bookshire"? Because when I googled "bookshire" and "sonic the hedgehog" all I found was this. (''shows a hedgehog with a cast'') [[CutenessOverload Oh no! He's got a little boo-boo on his little hedgehog leg! Ohh...but he's so cute! He's so cute!]] Okay, let's see what else I found...(''shows a hedgehog sticking its tongue out'') [[CutenessOverload OHH! He's sticking out his little tongue! Oh he's a sassy little hedgehog! He's so naughty! He's so naughty!]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') Creator/DavidBowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') Creator/DavidBowie Music/DavidBowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') David Bowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') David Bowie Creator/DavidBowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
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* In her review of "Something in the Eyes" (a bad ''Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia''[=/=]''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'' crossover) has her reaction to the idea that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus.
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': Wait, so does that mean that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus too? (''cut to a clip of Jareth, [[MrFanservice being a hottie]]'') [[{{Fangirl}} OH MY GOD I HAVE TO GO TO CHURCH RIGHT NOW!]] (''runs off'')
-->''Later''
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') David Bowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': Wait, so does that mean that Jareth is a metaphor for God/Jesus too? (''cut to a clip of Jareth, [[MrFanservice being a hottie]]'') [[{{Fangirl}} OH MY GOD I HAVE TO GO TO CHURCH RIGHT NOW!]] (''runs off'')
-->''Later''
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': (''extremely disappointed'') David Bowie wasn't at church. [[NoodleIncident And consequently I'm no longer allowed to go back there.]]
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** The following gem from the same episode:
--> "You know about the time travel?! But I thought you loved me!" Yeah, that makes about as much sense as saying "You knew I was allergic to cats?! There's a tree outside!"
** And after she hears about the amount of "sexy Frollo" descriptions.
--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Johnny Depp or Leonardo [=DeCaprio=] or Wally Cox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now"'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
** And later:
--> I can see how you'd make that mistake, I frequently get confused too! Like this is my favorite stuffed animal (''holds up Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'') and this is my favorite book (''holds up Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera'') and I don't know ''what'' this is (''holds up a box marked "poison"'') but it is just so yummy! (''eats some of its contents'')
** Anytime a gross and sexual description of Frollo shows up and the Critic vomits.
--> "You know about the time travel?! But I thought you loved me!" Yeah, that makes about as much sense as saying "You knew I was allergic to cats?! There's a tree outside!"
** And after she hears about the amount of "sexy Frollo" descriptions.
--> I think this author has Frollo confused with someone really, really sexy like Johnny Depp or Leonardo [=DeCaprio=] or Wally Cox (''shows a picture of Wally Cox with the subtitles "You have no idea how jealous I am right now"'') [[{{Fangirl}} Oh if I had a time machine and male genitalia]]...
** And later:
--> I can see how you'd make that mistake, I frequently get confused too! Like this is my favorite stuffed animal (''holds up Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'') and this is my favorite book (''holds up Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera'') and I don't know ''what'' this is (''holds up a box marked "poison"'') but it is just so yummy! (''eats some of its contents'')
** Anytime a gross and sexual description of Frollo shows up and the Critic vomits.
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* The whole discussion with the Fanfiction Devil in part 2 of her review of 'Back to the Frollo'.''Fanfic/BackToTheFrollo''.
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* The whole discussion with the Fanfiction Devil in part 2 of her review of 'Back to the Frollo'.Frollo'.
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