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Removal of What An Idiot potholes
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** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to ''read your story'', have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your badass {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]].
** Also when your badass {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]].
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** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- reason- you decide to allow those same characters to ''read your story'', have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your badass {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to[[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]].loser.
** Also when your badass {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to
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Buxom Is Better has been renamed.
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-->'''Terriermon (to random female stranger)''': ''Hey cute thing, why don't you come here for some fun? [[BuxomIsBetter You can invite your two friends too!]]''
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-->'''Terriermon (to random female stranger)''': ''Hey Hey cute thing, why don't you come here for some fun? [[BuxomIsBetter [[BuxomBeautyStandard You can invite your two friends too!]]''too!]]
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** More like Lucky Bastard, though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]].
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** More like Lucky Bastard, though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome [[BecomeARealBoy a very serious issue with herself]].
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First-person, no-context, general example
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* ''Card-O-Rama'': chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"''. That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its own.
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* ''Card-O-Rama'': chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"''. That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny Funny all on its own.
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* I would list [[spoiler: Chaos]] and Ruki's [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Moments Of Funny]] but it would take up half the site.
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** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]].
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** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], Bastard, though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]].
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Removed per TRS.
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** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]].
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** Also when your BadAss badass {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]].
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-->'''Rika:''' ''What do you mean by…AWW CRAP!''
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-->'''Rika:''' ''What do you mean by…AWW CRAP!''
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* Horny Pauline: all I can say is Poor Takeru...
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* Horny Pauline: all Pauline. All I can say is Poor "Poor Takeru..."
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* Rika ''interrogating'' Henry about Takato's whereabouts is hilarious.
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* Rika ''interrogating'' "interrogating" Henry about Takato's whereabouts is hilarious.
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* 80% of the pre and post chapter [[TheStinger stingers]]- involving the author and the characters discussing the events in the chapter- qualify as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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* 80% of the pre and post chapter [[TheStinger stingers]]- involving the author and the characters discussing ''[[RageAgainstTheAuthor discussing]]'' the events in the chapter- qualify as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.chapter are absolutely ''Hilarious''.
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** There is a reason why that quote is arguably the most memorable line in the entire series
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** There is a reason why that quote is arguably the most memorable line in the entire series series.
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*** ...''I Think?''.
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** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins- so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''freaking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and [[spoiler: Chaos]]'s comments make it that much better.
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** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins- so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''freaking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and [[spoiler: Chaos]]'s comments [[DeadpanSnarker comments]] make it that much better.
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-->'''Terriermon (to random female stranger)''': ''Hey cute thing, why don't you come here for some fun? You can bring your friends too!''
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-->'''Terriermon (to random female stranger)''': ''Hey cute thing, why don't you come here for some fun? [[BuxomIsBetter You can bring invite your two friends too!''too!]]''
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** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins- so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''freaking avatar of lust!''].] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better.
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** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins- so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''freaking avatar of lust!''].] lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's [[spoiler: Chaos]]'s comments make it that much better.
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* Like any respectable GuileHero Takato will often try to bluff his way out of a tough situation. [[RunningGag It NEVER works]]
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* Like any respectable GuileHero GuileHero, Takato will often try to bluff his way out of a tough situation. [[RunningGag It NEVER works]]works]].
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* 80% of the pre and post chapter [[TheStinger Stingers]]- involving the author and the characters discussing the events in the chapter- qualify as a CrowningMomentOfFunny
* ''Card-O-Rama'' chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"'' That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its own
* ''Card-O-Rama'' chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"'' That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its own
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* 80% of the pre and post chapter [[TheStinger Stingers]]- stingers]]- involving the author and the characters discussing the events in the chapter- qualify as a CrowningMomentOfFunny
CrowningMomentOfFunny.
*''Card-O-Rama'' ''Card-O-Rama'': chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"'' face"''. That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its ownown.
*
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** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to ''read your story''. Have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]]
*** Takato's ribs would like to announce their wholehearted agreement
** Finally, it ''really'' hurts when you drop a D-Arc on your foot
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]]
*** Takato's ribs would like to announce their wholehearted agreement
** Finally, it ''really'' hurts when you drop a D-Arc on your foot
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** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to ''read your story''. Have story'', have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a soreloser]]
loser]].
*** Takato's ribs would like to announce their wholeheartedagreement
agreement.
** Finally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking it ''really'' hurts when you drop a D-Arc on yourfootfoot]].
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a VERY, ''VERY'', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore
*** Takato's ribs would like to announce their wholehearted
** Finally, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking it ''really'' hurts when you drop a D-Arc on your
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** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]]
* Rika ''Interrogating'' Henry about Takato's whereabouts is hilarious
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHow Rikapocalypse]]
* Rika ''Interrogating'' Henry about Takato's whereabouts is hilarious
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHow Rikapocalypse]]
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** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]]
herself]].
* Rika''Interrogating'' ''interrogating'' Henry about Takato's whereabouts is hilarious
hilarious.
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHowRikapocalypse]]Rikapocalypse]].
* Rika
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHow
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope '''''[[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]'''''
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
* In ''Theory of Chaos'' chapter 2 Terriermon decides to play matchmaker for Henry. This is how he does it:
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
* In ''Theory of Chaos'' chapter 2 Terriermon decides to play matchmaker for Henry. This is how he does it:
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope '''''[[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]'''''
crack]]'''''.
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadlysins sins- so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking ''freaking avatar of lust!''.]] lust!''].] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
better.
* In ''Theory of Chaos'' chapter2 2, Terriermon decides to play matchmaker for Henry. This is how he does it:
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly
* In ''Theory of Chaos'' chapter
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** this is followed by Henry doing the most ''epic'' OhCrap expression EVER.
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** this This is followed by Henry doing the most ''epic'' OhCrap expression EVER.
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-->'''Henry''': ''I guess... That's the end... Of our plan''
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-->'''Henry''': ''I guess... That's that's the end... Of end...of our plan''
plan...''
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-->'''Takato''': ''You forgot about the ice cream man''
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-->'''Takato''': ''You forgot about the ice cream man''
guy...''
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs '''''[[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]crack]]'''''
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...''I Think?''.
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]
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* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]
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* I would list Chaos and Ruki's [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Moments Of Funny]] but it would take up half the site.
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* I would list Chaos [[spoiler: Chaos]] and Ruki's [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Moments Of Funny]] but it would take up half the site.
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Let's just say you ''won't'' be disappointed...
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Let's just say you ''won't'' '''won't''' be disappointed...
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* ''Card-O-Rama'' chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"'' that title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its own
* One of the many wonderful things about ''Tamers Forever'' is that it is full of valuable life lessons, such as:
** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to read your story. Have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a very, VERY, ''VERY'', '''VERY''', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]]
* One of the many wonderful things about ''Tamers Forever'' is that it is full of valuable life lessons, such as:
** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to read your story. Have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a very, VERY, ''VERY'', '''VERY''', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]]
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* ''Card-O-Rama'' chapter 4 "''When Rika's fist meets Takato's face"'' that That title is a CrowningMomentOfFunny all on its own
* One of the many wonderful things about ''Tamers Forever'' is that it is full of valuable lifelessons, such lessons. Such as:
** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters toread ''read your story.story''. Have a first aid kit ready.
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is avery, VERY, ''VERY'', '''VERY''', '''''VERY''''' bad idea to [[WhatAnIdiot call her a sore loser]]
* One of the many wonderful things about ''Tamers Forever'' is that it is full of valuable life
** If you write a story that puts characters through embarrassing situations and then- [[WhatAnIdiot for whatever reason]]- you decide to allow those same characters to
** Also when your BadAss {{Tsundere}} ActionGirl [[TheRival Rival]] with a HairTriggerTemper and a Competitive Streak The Size Of Jupiter is giving you a hug, it is a
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* Horny Pauline: all I can say is Poor Takeru... ''I Think?''.
** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a tear jerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]]
* Rika's ''Interrogation'' of Henry as to Takato's whereabouts
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of [[ApocalypseHow Rika]]
* Chaos and Ruki are a Crowning Duo Of Funny
* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a tear jerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]]
* Rika's ''Interrogation'' of Henry as to Takato's whereabouts
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of [[ApocalypseHow Rika]]
* Chaos and Ruki are a Crowning Duo Of Funny
* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
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* Horny Pauline: all I can say is Poor Takeru... Takeru...
...''I Think?''.
** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes atear jerker TearJerker when she breaks down in one chapter and reveals that she has [[PinocchioSyndrome a very serious issue with herself]]
*Rika's ''Interrogation'' of Rika ''Interrogating'' Henry as to about Takato's whereabouts
whereabouts is hilarious
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHowRika]]
Rikapocalypse]]
* I would list Chaos andRuki are a Ruki's [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Duo Moments Of Funny
Funny]] but it would take up half the site.
* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
...''I Think?''.
** More like [[FetishFuel Lucky Bastard]], though it becomes a
*
** Not to mention the Seven Signs Of the [[ApocalypseHow
* I would list Chaos and
* The entire premise of ''Theory of Chaos'' is this trope [ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on crack]]
** Basically what happens is [[spoiler: a Doumon bewitches all the tamers except for Takato into becoming the embodiment of each of the seven deadly sins so we now have Rika Nonaka as a ''frieking avatar of lust!''.]] The whole thing is just [[CrossesTheLineTwice so WRONG it's hilarious]], and Ruki and Chaos's comments make it that much better
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-->'''Terriermon(to random female stranger)''': ''Hey cute thing, why don't you come here for some fun? You can bring your friends too!''
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* From ''Silent Sorrow'' chapter 8:
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* From Then there's this priceless bit of dialogue from ''Silent Sorrow'' chapter 8: