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* The epilogue.
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* Star [[spoiler:blackmailing "Gustav" into leaving.]]
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* Some of the female members of the Karate Tournament audience find the Monster Arm to be...intriguing to see in action.
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme and what it did to her psyche is truly a sight to behold let's just say it ended with her incoherently babbling at Marco in front of a [[StringTheory conspiracy corkboard]] that takes up a WALL of her room.
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme and what it did to her psyche is truly a sight to behold let's behold. Let's just say it ended with her incoherently babbling at Marco in front of a [[StringTheory conspiracy corkboard]] that takes up a WALL of her room.
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme is truly a sight to behold, including incoherently babbling at Marco in front of a [[StringTheory conspiracy coarkboard]] that takes up a WALL of her room. It got to the point where she was so into the search that she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on Gustav.
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme and what it did to her psyche is truly a sight to behold, including behold let's just say it ended with her incoherently babbling at Marco in front of a [[StringTheory conspiracy coarkboard]] corkboard]] that takes up a WALL of her room. It room.
**It got to the point where she was so into the search that she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on [[spoiler: Gustav.]]
**It got to the point where she was so into the search that she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on [[spoiler: Gustav.]]
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme is truly a sight to behold, up to the point where she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on Gustav.
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme is truly a sight to behold, including incoherently babbling at Marco in front of a [[StringTheory conspiracy coarkboard]] that takes up a WALL of her room. It got to the point where she was so into the search that she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on Gustav.
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* Also, Star taking the time to magic up a seatbelt so she can stay secure [[spoiler: on the ROOF of the Diaz's van! Right before [[MoodWhiplash pounding on the driver side window and screaming about how they're going to die, which they can't hear because they're singing too loud.]]
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* Also, Star taking the time to magic up a seatbelt so she can stay secure [[spoiler: on the ROOF of the Diaz's van! Right before [[MoodWhiplash pounding on the driver side window and screaming about how they're going to die, which they can't hear because they're singing too loud.]] ]]
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* The absurd lengths that Star went to to try and catch [[spoiler: Gustav]] in his scheme is truly a sight to behold, up to the point where she blows off the fact that one of ''Ludo's henchmen'' was spying on her while she was spying on Gustav.
* Also, Star taking the time to magic up a seatbelt so she can stay secure [[spoiler: on the ROOF of the Diaz's van! Right before [[MoodWhiplash pounding on the driver side window and screaming about how they're going to die, which they can't hear because they're singing too loud.]]
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* Who needs Star Butterfly when you've got the Monster Arm? First, it's going to help you destroy your ArchEnemy. Then it'll get the girl you CantSpitItOut around to like you. And then together you'll [[spoiler:SLAUGHTER ALL HUMANS AND FEAST ON THEIR BOWELS!!!]] I mean, uh, WIN THE TOURNAMENT!
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* Marco's first morning with the eponymous Monster Arm. Even as it causes general havoc with its thrashing around he doesn't panic or freak out. His deadpan expression just screams ThisIsGonnaSuck.
* EVERYBODY loves the Monster Arm. Why, some people even want to date it!
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* Star tries to give Marco a makeover with her wand. She ends up blasting him in the face with a ''much'' too powerful beam which scorches most of Marco's hair. Marco's response?
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* Star tries to give Marco a makeover with her wand. She ends up blasting him in the face with a ''much'' too powerful beam which scorches most of Marco's hair. Marco's response?
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* Star tries to give Marco a makeover with her wand. She ends up blasting him in the face with a ''much'' too powerful beam which scorches most of Marco's hair. Marco's response?
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* The St. Olga's goons attempt to make Marco talk via PerpSweating: pointing a desk lamp at his face and turning it on and off over and over, really, really fast.
-->'''Marco:''' (screams in agony) That's really annoying!
-->'''Marco:''' (screams in agony) That's really annoying!
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'''Star:''' (''totally serious'') [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder Yes, that's why I asked.]]
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'''Star:''' (''totally serious'') [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder Yes, that's why I asked.]]]]\\
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* In the intro, Star and Marco run up to a giant worm monster that's just emerged from the ground... then as the lyrics sing "Gonna have a good time!", the monster's eyes light up like disco balls and everyone briefly dances.
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* In the intro, Star and Marco run up to a giant worm monster that's just emerged from the ground... then as the lyrics sing go "Gonna have a good time!", the monster's eyes light up like disco balls and everyone briefly dances.
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** And what Principal Skeeves plans on doing with the chest of jewels he got: "Now I'm off to the ice cream shop. Daddy's getting all 52 flavors!"
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** And what Principal Skeeves plans on doing with the chest of jewels he got: "Now I'm off to the ice cream shop. Daddy's getting all [[ShoutOut 52 flavors!"flavors]]!"
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* Star's fascination with Earth technology... like [[MundaneObjectAmazement light switches and drinking fountains]]. "And you said there was no magic on Earth!"
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* Star's fascination with Earth technology... like [[MundaneObjectAmazement light switches and drinking fountains]]. "And you said there was no magic on Earth!"
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'''Star Butterfly:''' Oops...heh! I thought you wanted a little..."dangaaah".\\
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'''Marco:''' Who... ''are'' you?\\
'''Star Butterfly:''' ♪I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension!♪ ''(forms a rainbow surrounded by adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
'''Star Butterfly:''' ♪I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension!♪ ''(forms a rainbow surrounded by adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
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'''Marco:''' Who... ''are'' you?\\
'''Star Butterfly:''' '''Star:''' ♪I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension!♪ ''(forms a rainbow surrounded by adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
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'''Ludo:''' Well, Buff Fro--HEY! I don't have to tell you ANYTHING!
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* Ludo [[BadBoss nagging his minions]] after Star and Marco kick their butts.
-->'''Ludo:''' You even ''retreat'' like losers!
-->'''Ludo:''' You even ''retreat'' like losers!
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* In the intro, Star and Marco run up to a giant worm monster that's just emerged from the ground... then as the lyrics sing "Gonna have a good time!", the monster's eyes light up like disco balls and everyone briefly dances.
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'''Marco:''' Who...ARE ''are'' you?\\
* Star hemming and hawing over whether or not to chase after Marco and apologize.
-->[[MoodWhiplash Oh No, She Din't!]]
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* "Ah, kids. You have them and then you...wish they weren't around."
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'''Star Butterfly:''' I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension! ''(forms a rainbow surrounded by adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
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'''Star Butterfly:''' I'm ♪I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension! dimension!♪ ''(forms a rainbow surrounded by adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
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** Marco's first look at Star; she's trying to gnaw the water fountain into submission.
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* Hearing that Marco would like a little more danger in his life, Star decides to do the charitable thing and summons a hideous, slavering mutated butterfly. Said mutant then grabs a random student and flies off with him. Neither are heard from again.
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* Hearing that Marco would like a little more danger in his life, Star decides to do the charitable thing and summons mutates a hideous, slavering mutated butterfly.wayward butterfly into a hideous monster. Said mutant then grabs a random student and flies off with him. Neither are heard from again.
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'''Marco:''' Who... ARE you?\\
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'''Marco:''' Who... ARE you?\\
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*** All this while Marco is loitering in front of "Stop & Slurp"'s "NO LOITERING" sign...
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*** All this while Marco is loitering in front of "Stop Stop & Slurp"'s Slurp's "NO LOITERING" sign...
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* Pony Head crashing to the ground with a hilariously light "thump".
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* The Squares re-arranging themselves ''VideoGame/{{Tetris}}''-style.
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* Marco ''[[EvilIsCool bragging]]'' about being taken to the principle's office...and his frustration when he realizes Skeeves just wants him to look after Star because he's such a NiceGuy.
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* Hearing that Marco would like a little more danger in his life, Star decides to do the charitable thing and mutates an innocuous butterfly into summons a hideous, slavering monster.mutated butterfly. Said mutant then grabs a random student and flies off with him. Neither are heard from again.
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'''Star Butterfly:''' Oops... ''(chuckles)'' I thought you wanted a little... "dangaaah".\\
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'''Star Butterfly:''' Oops... ''(chuckles)'' heh! I thought you wanted a little... little..."dangaaah".\\\\
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'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)'' Welp, that brings us to the end of our tour. I'm going home now. ''(walks away awkwardly, then breaks into a run)''\\
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'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)'' Welp, ''(stunned)'' Well, that brings us to the end of our tour. tour! I'm going home now. ''(walks away awkwardly, then breaks into a run)''\\
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* [[DeadpanSnarker "She can't handle it..."]]
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* [[DeadpanSnarker "She can't can't]] [[GilliganCut handle it..."]]
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* The RunningGag that whenever the princess boarding school is brought up, it's always followed by lightming, said character who doesn't want to be sent there screaming, and a shot of them being "sucked" (by a strangely out of place conveyor belt) into said school with the gate closing behind them.
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* The RunningGag that whenever the princess boarding school St. Olga's Reform School for Wayward Princesses is brought up, it's always followed by lightming, lightning, said character who doesn't want to be sent there screaming, and a shot of them being "sucked" (by a strangely out of place conveyor belt) into said school with the gate closing behind them.
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* "[[YourMom Your mother's]] a [[ParentheticalSwearing horse]]!" "[[InsultBackfire Yeah, what about it?]]"
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* "[[YourMom Your mother's]] a [[ParentheticalSwearing horse]]!" ''[[ParentheticalSwearing horse]]''!" "[[InsultBackfire Yeah, what about it?]]"okay, and your point would be?]]"
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** Notice how they've got rings under their eyes when they lower their binoculars. Star's been at it for a while.
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** Notice how they've both the King and Queen have got rings under their eyes when they lower their binoculars. Star's been at it for a while.
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** And what Principal Skeeves plans on doing with the chest of jewels he got; "Now I'm off to the ice cream shop. Daddy's getting all 52 flavors!"
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** And what Principal Skeeves plans on doing with the chest of jewels he got; got: "Now I'm off to the ice cream shop. Daddy's getting all 52 flavors!"flavors!"
* Star's fascination with Earth technology... like [[MundaneObjectAmazement light switches and drinking fountains]]. "And you said there was no magic on Earth!"
* Star's fascination with Earth technology... like [[MundaneObjectAmazement light switches and drinking fountains]]. "And you said there was no magic on Earth!"
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'''Star Butterfly:''' I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension! ''(forms a rainbow with animals crowded, then burned by fire)''\\
'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)'' Welp. That brings us to the end of our tour. I'm going home now. ''(walks away awkwardly, then breaks into a run)''\\
'''Star:''' ''(waves enthusiastically)'' Bye new friend! See ya tomorrow! Bye! Bye new friend! See ya later!
** As Marco is trying to get away from Star, both are oblivious to the fact that the second flaming rainbow she just conjured has set the school on fire. Which is then followed by the sounds of a fire engine.
*** It seems Star has difficulty summoning rainbows that ''don't'' catch fire!
'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)'' Welp. That brings us to the end of our tour. I'm going home now. ''(walks away awkwardly, then breaks into a run)''\\
'''Star:''' ''(waves enthusiastically)'' Bye new friend! See ya tomorrow! Bye! Bye new friend! See ya later!
** As Marco is trying to get away from Star, both are oblivious to the fact that the second flaming rainbow she just conjured has set the school on fire. Which is then followed by the sounds of a fire engine.
*** It seems Star has difficulty summoning rainbows that ''don't'' catch fire!
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'''Star Butterfly:''' I'm a ''maaaaagical'' princess, from another dimension! ''(forms a rainbow with animals crowded, then burned surrounded by fire)''\\
adorable animals, which are scared off when the rainbow bursts into flame)''\\
'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)''Welp. That Welp, that brings us to the end of our tour. I'm going home now. ''(walks away awkwardly, then breaks into a run)''\\
'''Star:''' ''(waves enthusiastically)''Bye Bye, new friend! See ya tomorrow! Bye! Bye Bye, new friend! See ya later!
** As Marco is trying to get away from Star, both are oblivious to the fact that the second flaming rainbow she just conjured has set the school on fire. Which is then followed by the sounds of a fireengine.
***engine. It seems Star has difficulty summoning rainbows that ''don't'' catch fire!
'''Marco:''' ''(Stunned)''
'''Star:''' ''(waves enthusiastically)''
** As Marco is trying to get away from Star, both are oblivious to the fact that the second flaming rainbow she just conjured has set the school on fire. Which is then followed by the sounds of a fire
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'''Random Mother:''' ''(to her small son as they hurry away)'' "Don't make eye contact."
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** "I hate your face! Plus you're ugly!" ''(chuckles)'' "Just kidding. "[[JustJokingJustification Just kidding.]] [[BlatantLies That's a joke!]]"
* When Marco is dangling off the edge of the "Bounce Lounge," the skeleton in the spike-filled pit [[BlackComedyBurst suddenly springs to life and starts chanting "FALL! FALL! FALL!"]]
* "[[YourMom Your mother's]] a [[ParentheticalSwearing horse]]!" "[[InsultBackfire Yeah, what about it?]]"
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