-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': I call this one "The Campfire Song [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Song]]". ''(singing)'' Let's gather 'round the campfire and sing our campfire song, our [[SpellingSong C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E-S-O-N-G song]]. And if you don't think that we can't sing it faster, then you're wrong, but it'll help if you just sing along... 
-->'''Patrick''': Bum bum bum! 
-->''(tempo gets higher, Patrick can't keep up)''
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E-S-O-N-G song, C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E-S-O-N-G song, and if you don't think that we can't sing it faster, then you're wrong, but it'll help if you just sing along.
-->'''Patrick''': Sing another song.
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E-S-O-N-G song, Patrick!
-->'''Patrick''': ([[MotorMouth quickly]]) SONG C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E...
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': Squidward! ''({{beat}})'' Good!
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': It'll help... It'll help.. If you just sing along!
-->''([=SpongeBob=] and Patrick smash instruments)''
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]''': OH YEAH!!!!

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* Several from "Pre-Hibernation Week":
** Sandy throwing an exhausted [=SpongeBob=] a fishing pole and pointing to a nearby light aeroplane as she announces "We're going fly fishin'!" - followed by a cutaway to a (live-action) drummer delivering a {{rimshot}}.
** When Sandy has run the rest of the population of Bikini Bottom ragged in a search for [=SpongeBob=], they resort to increasingly desperate attempts to persuade her they have found him:
--->'''Sandy:''' No one's goin' anywhere 'til we find [=SpongeBob!=]
--->'''Muscle fish:''' Uh, wait! ''(grabs the fish standing next to him and holds him up)'' Uh, here he is!
--->'''Sandy:''' That ain't [=SpongeBob!=] [=SpongeBob=] is square!
--->''(The muscle fish squeezes the other fish into a square shape)''
--->'''Square fish:''' ''(in a poor imitation of [=SpongeBob=])'' [[CatchPhrase I'm ready! I'm ready!]]
--->'''Sandy:''' No you ain't!
--->'''Other fish:''' ''(holding up Kelpo box)'' I found [=SquareBob!=]
--->'''Sandy:''' That's just a cereal box! 'Sides, he's yellow!
--->'''Third fish:''' ''(holding up a banana)'' Uh, here he is! Hey, can I go home now?
*** And right before that:
---> '''Fish:''' ''(whispering aside to another fish)'' This is a load of barnacles.
---> '''Sandy:''' I heard that! No one's going anywhere until we find [=SpongeBob!=]
** GOLD TEAM RULES!

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* "Pre-Hibernation Week" has plenty of moments of hilarity:
** Twice, an ordinarily normal-looking fish is revealed to apparently wear Osh-Kosh overalls, a beanie, and a giant lollipop underneath his regular clothes (well, okay, the second time Sandy just ripped up a building from its foundation and revealed the fish in the kiddy clothes, but anyway). One short pause later, the fish responds with "Uhh, ICanExplain..."
** Sandy throws an exhausted [=SpongeBob=] a fishing pole and points to a nearby light aeroplane as she announces "We're going fly fishin'!" - followed by a cutaway to a (live-action) drummer delivering a {{rimshot}}.
** An exhausted [=SpongeBob=] finally escapes Sandy's weeklong adrenaline rush and hides under Patrick's rock, but his clothes are snagged on a piece of coral. When Sandy finds them, she fears the worst and rallies the entire population of Bikini Bottom to search for him.
--->'''Sandy:''' Alpha Team searches uptown, Gold Team searches downtown!\\
''({{beat}})''\\
'''Muscle fish:''' GOLD TEAM RULES!
** And during the search:
--->'''Blue Fish:''' ''(peers into a spout)'' Hey, [=SpongeBob=]! ''(blast of sulfur hits him in the face, charring it black and messing it up)'' Well...at least I still have my personality.

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--->'''Fish covered in poison sea urchins:''' He's not at the poison sea urchin cove.\\
'''Sandy:''' Well look again.\\
'''Fish covered in leeches:''' He's not at the leech farm.\\
'''Sandy:''' Well look again!\\
'''Squidward:''' [[OddNameOut He's not in my thoughts]].\\
'''Sandy:''' Well THINK again!
** When Sandy has run the rest of the population of Bikini Bottom ragged, they resort to increasingly desperate attempts to persuade her they have found [=SpongeBob=]:
--->'''Fish:''' ''(whispering aside to another fish)'' This is a load of barnacles.\\
'''Sandy:''' I heard that! No one's goin' anywhere 'til we find [=SpongeBob!=]\\
'''Muscle fish:''' Uh, wait! ''(grabs the fish standing next to him and holds him up)'' Uh, here he is!\\
'''Sandy:''' That ain't [=SpongeBob!=] [=SpongeBob=] is square!\\
''(The muscle fish squeezes the other fish into a square shape)''\\
'''Square fish:''' ''(in a poor imitation of [=SpongeBob=])'' [[CatchPhrase I'm ready! I'm ready!]]\\
'''Sandy:''' No you ain't!\\
'''Other fish:''' ''(holding up Kelpo box)'' I found [=SquareBob!=]\\
'''Sandy:''' That's just a cereal box! 'Sides, he's yellow!\\
'''Third fish:''' ''(holding up a banana)'' Uh, here he is! Hey, can I go home now?

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* In "Accidents Will Happen", [=SpongeBob=] begins preparing the accident report for Squidward's twisted ankle (for which he is threatening to report Mr. Krabs to the Department of Office Worker Safety unless he caters to his every whim during his recovery):
-->'''[=SpongeBob=]:''' ''(reading clipboard)'' Let's see... "Question 1. Was the accident the result of criminal negligence?"\\
'''Krabs:''' AHHHHH!!\\
'''[=SpongeBob=]:''' Mr. Krabs, what is "criminal negligence"?\\
'''Krabs:''' ''(grabbing the clipboard and laughing nervously)'' [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar It's, uh, what... criminals wear... to bed!]]
** Acting on Krabs' suspicions, [=SpongeBob=] tries to re-create the accident using Patrick in place of Squidward... which involves smashing him over the head repeatedly with the broken shelf that supposedly fell on Squidward. This inevitably leads to a series of {{Non Sequitur Thud}}s from Patrick.
--->'''[=SpongeBob=]:''' This just isn't adding up!\\
'''Patrick:''' ''(covered in bandages and bruises)'' Pudding?\\
''(later, after the OWS representative has arrived)''\\
'''Krabs:''' Oh no!\\
'''Squidward:''' ''(grinning)'' Oh ''yes!''\\
'''Krabs:''' Squidward! After all I've done for you, you called the OWS!\\
'''[=SpongeBob=]:''' ''(entering with an even more heavily-bandaged Patrick)'' He didn't call them Mr. Krabs, we did. I needed help investigating the accident. Right, Patrick?\\
'''Patrick:''' Uh, breakfast... green... [[CallBack Finland.]]

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