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* The Literature/PrideAndPrejudice shout outs. The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel (''Pride and Extreme Prejudice'') is now dedicated to him.
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* The Literature/PrideAndPrejudice ''Literature/PrideAndPrejudice'' shout outs. The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel (''Pride and Extreme Prejudice'') is now dedicated to him.
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* The Literature/PrideAndPrejudice shout outs. The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel [[spoiler:''Pride and Extreme Prejudice'']] is now dedicated to him.
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* The Literature/PrideAndPrejudice shout outs. The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel [[spoiler:''Pride (''Pride and Extreme Prejudice'']] Prejudice'') is now dedicated to him.
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** The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel [[spoiler: Pride and Extreme Prejudice]] is now dedicated to him.
** The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel [[spoiler: Pride and Extreme Prejudice]] is now dedicated to him.
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* The Literature/PrideAndPrejudice shout outs.
**outs. The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that Jane's novel [[spoiler: Pride [[spoiler:''Pride and Extreme Prejudice]] Prejudice'']] is now dedicated to him.
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--> "Dad! I know how to milk a goat, Dad! You have to pull its tits, Dad, they're all wiggly!"
* The titles of the children's books. "The World of Poo", "Melvin and the Enormous Boil", or "The Boy Who Didn't Know How To Pick His Own Scabs" among others.
* The titles of the children's books. "The World of Poo", "Melvin and the Enormous Boil", or "The Boy Who Didn't Know How To Pick His Own Scabs" among others.
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* The titles of the children's books. "The World of Poo", "Melvin and the Enormous Boil", or "The Boy Who Didn't Know How
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* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely true.
** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.
* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely true.
** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.
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* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely
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* The ''Wonderful Fanny'' (already a source of double entendres: "by then we should be able to see the ''Fanny''", etc.) gets [[{{Malaproper}} malapropismed]] by Vetinari [[NotSoAboveItAll of all people]] as the ''Enormous Fanny''. When corrected, he's implied to be embarrassed and/or trying not to laugh; "he did not exactly meet Vimes's gaze".
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* The ''Wonderful Fanny'' (already a source of double entendres: "by then we should be able to see the ''Fanny''", etc.) gets [[{{Malaproper}} malapropismed]] by Vetinari [[NotSoAboveItAll of all people]] as the ''Enormous Fanny''. When corrected, he's implied to be embarrassed and/or trying not to laugh; "he did not exactly meet Vimes's gaze".gaze".
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** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.
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** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.about.
* The ''Wonderful Fanny'' (already a source of double entendres: "by then we should be able to see the ''Fanny''", etc.) gets [[{{Malaproper}} malapropismed]] by Vetinari [[NotSoAboveItAll of all people]] as the ''Enormous Fanny''. When corrected, he's implied to be embarrassed and/or trying not to laugh; "he did not exactly meet Vimes's gaze".
* The ''Wonderful Fanny'' (already a source of double entendres: "by then we should be able to see the ''Fanny''", etc.) gets [[{{Malaproper}} malapropismed]] by Vetinari [[NotSoAboveItAll of all people]] as the ''Enormous Fanny''. When corrected, he's implied to be embarrassed and/or trying not to laugh; "he did not exactly meet Vimes's gaze".
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** As most husbands will tell you, this is TruthInTelevision.
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* The titles of the children's books. "The World of Poo", "Melvin and the Enormous Boil", or "The Boy Who Didn't Know How To Pick His Own Scabs" among others.
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* Young Sam's continuing obsession with poo.
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** As most husbands will tell you, this is TruthInTelevision.
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* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely true.true.
** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.
** And in at least one language, that footnote has a translator's footnote stating that this must be true, since Mr. Pratchett knows what he's talking about.
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* Young Sam learns to milk a goat.
--> "Dad! I know how to milk a goat, Dad! You have to pull its tits, Dad, they're all wiggly!"
--> "Dad! I know how to milk a goat, Dad! You have to pull its tits, Dad, they're all wiggly!"
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-->''...because even when he thought he had won, it would later turn out, due to some magic unavailable to husbands, that he had been misinformed.''''
* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely true.
* Vimes uneasily reflecting that he had always thought of authors as people who just lounged around in their dressing gowns all day, drinking champagne, and a footnote asserts that this is, of course, completely true.
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** The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that the novel Pride and Extreme Prejudice is now dedicated to him.
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** The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that the Jane's novel [[spoiler: Pride and Extreme Prejudice Prejudice]] is now dedicated to him.
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* The explanation of the rules of crocket, which takes so long that (metaphorically presumably, but with Pratchett you never know), the universe ages and ends, a new universe is born, life evolves, a new Sam Vimes exists, and he's there just in time to hear the end.
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* The explanation of the rules of crocket, which takes so long that (metaphorically presumably, but with Pratchett you never know), the universe ages and ends, a new universe is born, life evolves, a new Sam Vimes exists, and he's there just in time to hear the end.end.
* Early on, the explanation of why Vimes never argued with Sybil:
-->''...because even when he thought he had won, it would later turn out, due to some magic unavailable to husbands, that he had been misinformed.''
* Early on, the explanation of why Vimes never argued with Sybil:
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* The explanation of the rules of crocket, which takes so long that (metaphorically presumably, but with Pratchett you never know), the universe ages and ends, a new universe is born, life evolves, a new Sam Vimes exists, and he's there just in time to hear the end.
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** The best part being that in the epilogue, Sam is surprised to find that the novel Pride and Extreme Prejudice is now dedicated to him.
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* The bathroom in Ramkin Hall, where the decorator had gone rather overboard with Faun motifs. As Sybil said, use of the bathroom when she was a child rather ensured that she wouldn't be shocked in later life.
* The bathroom in Ramkin Hall, where the decorator had gone rather overboard with Faun motifs. As Sybil said, use of the bathroom when she was a child rather ensured that she wouldn't be shocked in later life.
