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* Any horror or suspense in Ally's death scene is ruined by the hammy dialogue:
--> ''(Angela shoves Ally into the outhouse)''
--> '''Angela''': GET IN THE TOILET!
--> ''(Angela shoves Ally's head down the hole)''
--> '''Angela''': What's down there? Answer me!
--> '''Ally''': Shit!
--> '''Angela''': That's right, one of your favorite words! Would you mind if I borrowed it for a moment? You've been a shitty friend and a shitty camper. What else is down there? Answer me!
--> '''Ally''': Piss!
--> '''Angela''': You've pissed away your good graces and your god given talent your whole life and turned it into nothing but cynical dirty-mouthed wasted flesh! What else is down there?
--> '''Ally''': I don't know!
--> '''Angela''': Well then I guess you're gonna have to climb in there and find out!
--> ''(Shoves Ally down the hole)''
--> ''(Angela shoves Ally into the outhouse)''
--> '''Angela''': GET IN THE TOILET!
--> ''(Angela shoves Ally's head down the hole)''
--> '''Angela''': What's down there? Answer me!
--> '''Ally''': Shit!
--> '''Angela''': That's right, one of your favorite words! Would you mind if I borrowed it for a moment? You've been a shitty friend and a shitty camper. What else is down there? Answer me!
--> '''Ally''': Piss!
--> '''Angela''': You've pissed away your good graces and your god given talent your whole life and turned it into nothing but cynical dirty-mouthed wasted flesh! What else is down there?
--> '''Ally''': I don't know!
--> '''Angela''': Well then I guess you're gonna have to climb in there and find out!
--> ''(Shoves Ally down the hole)''
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* When the counselors are giving the campers a round of Horror Bowls (you know, peeled grapes are 'eyeballs', pasta are 'guts', etc. etc.) Angela's bowl? Dead teenager's brains.
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* When the counselors are giving the campers playing a round of Horror Bowls with the campers (you know, peeled grapes are 'eyeballs', pasta are is 'guts', etc. etc.) Angela's bowl? Dead teenager's brains.
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* When the Councilor's are giving the campers a round of Horror Bowls (you know, peeled grapes are 'eyeballs', pasta are 'guts', etc. etc.) Angela's bowl? Dead teenager's brains.
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* When the Councilor's counselors are giving the campers a round of Horror Bowls (you know, peeled grapes are 'eyeballs', pasta are 'guts', etc. etc.) Angela's bowl? Dead teenager's brains.
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** Made better by the SarcasticConfession ("Angela, what's really in there?" "Dead teenager's brains.") and the utterly deadpan way in which Angela says it.
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** Made better by the SarcasticConfession SincerityMode ("Angela, what's really in there?" "Dead teenager's brains.") and the utterly deadpan way in which Angela says it.
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** Made better by the SarcasticConfession(Angela, what's really in there? Dead teenager's brains.) and the utterly deadpan way in which Angela says it.
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** Made better by the SarcasticConfession(Angela, SarcasticConfession ("Angela, what's really in there? Dead there?" "Dead teenager's brains.) ") and the utterly deadpan way in which Angela says it.
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** Made better by the SarcasticConfession(Angela, what's really in there? Dead teenager's brains.) and the utterly deadpan way in which Angela says it.
* "What are you looking for, a gun?" "No. A drill."
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* When Angela decides to kill the Texan truck driver, she gives a little sigh of exasperation (as the woman has managed to push pretty much all of her buttons at once) right before she kills her.
* "Let this be a lesson to you. Say no to drugs." Said right before lighting a drug addict on fire.
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* "Let this be a lesson to you. Say no to drugs." Said right before lighting a drug addict on fire.
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