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* After George drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
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* After George drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees coworkers look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
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* There is something adorably silly about the wind sending George's paper smack into Meg's face.
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* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And Meg meets him completely covered by them]].
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* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And when Meg meets him again he's completely covered by them]].
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** This is followed by a case of {{Improbable Aiming Skills}} where one of the paper planes actually makes it into the room but flies past Meg and into the waste-paper bin. Cue {{Headdesk}} from George.
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** This is followed by a case of {{Improbable {{Accidental Aiming Skills}} where one of the paper planes actually makes it into the room but flies past Meg and into the waste-paper bin. Cue {{Headdesk}} from George.
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** This is followed by a case of {{Improbable Aiming Skills}} where one of the paper planes actually makes it into the room but flies past Meg and into the waste-paper bin. Cue {{Headdesk}} from George.
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* After the paperman drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
* During the hero's attempts to catch the girl's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.
* During the hero's attempts to catch the girl's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.
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* After the paperman George drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
* Duringthe hero's George's attempts to catch the girl's Meg's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.
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* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''."
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* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, George, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''.""
* When Meg sees the paper airplane drop into the flowers she's looking at, she does a DoubleTake. The expression on her face is both cute and ''hilarious''.
* When Meg sees the paper airplane drop into the flowers she's looking at, she does a DoubleTake. The expression on her face is both cute and ''hilarious''.
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* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And Meg meets him completely covered by them]].
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* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And Meg meets him completely covered by them]].them]].
* When the paper airplanes [[spoiler:force George onto the train to meet Meg and won't let him get up from his seat]], you can see a mother quietly pull her curious child away as if she's afraid that George is crazy.
* When the paper airplanes [[spoiler:force George onto the train to meet Meg and won't let him get up from his seat]], you can see a mother quietly pull her curious child away as if she's afraid that George is crazy.
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* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''."
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* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''.""
* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And Meg meets him completely covered by them]].
* Everyone's creeped out stares as they see [[spoiler:George surrounded by paper airplanes that have coated his body and are dragging him down the street. And Meg meets him completely covered by them]].
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** The large workman, previously overjoyed, crumples the paper airplane in a huff.
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** The large workman, previously overjoyed, crumples the paper airplane in a huff.huff.
* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''."
* One of the paper planes is flying straight for the window, and hits a flying bird. The camera cuts back to the hero, who has this great incredulous, frustrated expression, probably thinking, "Oh what the ''hell''."
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* During the hero's attempts to catch the girl's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.
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* During the hero's attempts to catch the girl's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.waves.
** The large workman, previously overjoyed, crumples the paper airplane in a huff.
** The large workman, previously overjoyed, crumples the paper airplane in a huff.
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* During the hero's attempts to catch the girl's attention with paper airplanes, one of the planes instead hits a large workman in the window below her. Cue frantic "not aiming for you" waves.
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* After the man uses up his pile of paper to make airplanes, he accidentally topples over the corner of his desk, scaring the other employees. One employee stares awkwardly at him while pulling his own paper pile nearer to himself.
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* After the paperman drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
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* After the paperman drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.them.
* After the man uses up his pile of paper to make airplanes, he accidentally topples over the corner of his desk, scaring the other employees. One employee stares awkwardly at him while pulling his own paper pile nearer to himself.
* After the man uses up his pile of paper to make airplanes, he accidentally topples over the corner of his desk, scaring the other employees. One employee stares awkwardly at him while pulling his own paper pile nearer to himself.
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* After the paperman drops his empty paper tray on the floor with a loud slam, the rest of his employees look at him. One of them holds his papers closer to him to protect them.
