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** A woman shows up in a stars-and-stripes inspired outfit, about to introduce herself. Another woman who seems to know her, wearing the same thing, runs up and accuses her of stealing the idea for the alter-ego.
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** A woman shows up in a stars-and-stripes inspired outfit, about to introduce herself. Another woman who seems to know her, [[DressesTheSame wearing the same thing, runs up and accuses her of stealing the idea for the alter-ego.alter-ego]].
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* The original trio are trying to recruit some extra crime-fighters to take on the Disco Boys. Astoundingly, they find themselves turning down a lot of eager applicants.
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* The original trio are trying to recruit some extra crime-fighters to take on the Disco Boys. Astoundingly, [[EvenBeggarsWontChooseIt they find themselves turning down a lot of eager applicants.applicants]].
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-->'''Vic''': Look, I'm a publicist, not a magician. You want big news, you have to have big fights. A superhero needs a supervillain. And thanks to you, we've got none left.
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-->'''Vic''': Look, I'm a publicist, not a magician. [[ActorAllusion magician.]] You want big news, you have to have big fights. A superhero needs a supervillain. And thanks to you, we've got none left.
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'''Bowler''': Maybe, you wanna put some shorts on, if you feel like fighting any more crime today?
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'''Bowler''': [[PleasePutSomeClothesOn Maybe, you wanna put some shorts on, if you feel like fighting any more crime today?today?]]
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* [[RealityEnsues About the lack of villains]]:
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* [[RealityEnsues About the lack of villains]]: villains]] due to the ''lack'' of a CardboardPrison:
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* About the lack of villains:
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* [[RealityEnsues About the lack of villains: villains]]:
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** "You must lash out with every limb, like the octopus who plays the drums!"
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* Casanova Frankenstein's constant "hipster" talk, especially funny given his accent. "Tonight I am going to do to Champion City what I have done to it's greatest superhero. Und there will still be time to get up, get down und boogie!"
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** When fired at a group of stereotypical gangstas, ''they start battle-rapping''.
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** When fired at a the Not-So-Goodie Mob, played by actual hip-hop group of stereotypical gangstas, [[Music/CeeLoGreen The Goodie Mob]], ''they start battle-rapping''.
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"... We erase crime."
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"... We erase crime."
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** A woman shows up in a stars-and-stripes inspired outfit, about to introduce herself. Another woman who seems to know her, wearing the same thing, runs up and accuses her of stealing the idea for the alter-ego.
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*** Then the entire Frat Boys gang cheers.
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** A great example of ThrowItIn. It wasn't scripted. A crew member had thrown a lighter into the barrel and it exploded.
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--> '''The Bowler:''' I'm gonna check his pulse... ''(She touches Amazing's wrist: his hand falls off)'' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
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--> '''The Bowler:''' I'm gonna check his pulse... ''(She touches Amazing's wrist: wrist lightly: his hand falls snaps off)'' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
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--> '''The Shoveler:''' What do you mean, 'we'? I was standing right over ''here.''
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--> '''The Shoveler:''' What do you mean, 'we'? I was standing right over ''here.''
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--> '''The Bowler:''' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
--> '''Blue Rajah:''' Oh my God. We ''killed'' Captain Amazing.
--> '''Blue Rajah:''' Oh my God. We ''killed'' Captain Amazing.
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--> '''The Bowler:''' I'm gonna check his pulse... ''(She touches Amazing's wrist: his hand falls off)'' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
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* "What do you mean 'we'? I was standing right over here."
** "...I don't think he's gonna pull through."
* The superhero tryout scene.
** "...I don't think he's gonna pull through."
* The superhero tryout scene.
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* "What The main characters break in to save Captain Amazing. He starts giving them directions on how to rescue him. Things take a rather serious downward turn.
--> '''The Bowler:''' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
--> '''Blue Rajah:''' Oh my God. We ''killed'' Captain Amazing.
--> '''The Shoveler:''' What do youmean mean, 'we'? I was standing right over here."
** "...I don't think he's gonna pull through."
''here.''
* Thesuperhero tryout scene.original trio are trying to recruit some extra crime-fighters to take on the Disco Boys. Astoundingly, they find themselves turning down a lot of eager applicants.
--> '''The Bowler:''' ...I don't think he's gonna pull through.
--> '''Blue Rajah:''' Oh my God. We ''killed'' Captain Amazing.
--> '''The Shoveler:''' What do you
** "...I don't think he's gonna pull through."
* The
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* When sneaking into Casanova Frankenstein's place, the group trigger something out in the yard that starts making [[HellIsThatNoise an ominous noise.]] While they're arguing over what kind of death trap it could be...the sprinklers go off.
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* When sneaking into Casanova Frankenstein's place, the group trigger something out in the yard that starts making [[HellIsThatNoise an ominous noise.]] While they're arguing over what kind of death trap it could be... it turns out to be the sprinklers go off.sprinklers.
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* "Eyyy sucka when you gonna tear down dat jeep like I told you to?"
-->'''Roy:''' That 'jeep' is actually an armoured car of some kind; I can't just rip it apart with a crowbar-"
-->'''Sally:''' "Jus' junk it."
-->'''Roy:''' Well maybe if you gave the proper tools, I could-"
-->'''Roy:''' That 'jeep' is actually an armoured car of some kind; I can't just rip it apart with a crowbar-"
-->'''Sally:''' "Jus' junk it."
-->'''Roy:''' Well maybe if you gave the proper tools, I could-"
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* "Eyyy Mr. Furious has a day job at a junkyard. He shows up late ('oh, gee, so I guess all the junk is ruined now.') His boss explains his schedule for the day:
--> '''Sally:''' Eyyy sucka when you gonna tear down dat jeep like I told youto?"
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-->'''Roy:''' That 'jeep' is actually an armoured car of some kind; I can't just rip it apart with acrowbar-"
crowbar-
-->'''Sally:'''"Jus' Jus' junk it."
it.
-->'''Roy:''' Well maybe if you gave the proper tools, Icould-"could-
--> '''Sally:''' Eyyy sucka when you gonna tear down dat jeep like I told you
-->'''Roy:''' That 'jeep' is actually an armoured car of some kind; I can't just rip it apart with a
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-->'''Roy:''' Well maybe if you gave the proper tools, I
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-->'''Sally:''' "I want it ''junked''."
-->'''Roy:''' Okay right now, I'm kinda like a powder-keg, and you're the match. If you tell me to junk it ''one more time''-"
-->'''Sally:'''"JUNK IT NOW! Y'got that?"
-->'''Roy:''' [''crushes the life out of a tension ball''] ''"...that little sucker just saved your life!"''
-->'''Roy:''' Okay right now, I'm kinda like a powder-keg, and you're the match. If you tell me to junk it ''one more time''-"
-->'''Sally:'''"JUNK IT NOW! Y'got that?"
-->'''Roy:''' [''crushes the life out of a tension ball''] ''"...that little sucker just saved your life!"''
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-->'''Sally:''' "I I want it ''junked''."
''junked.''
-->'''Roy:''' Okay right now, I'm kinda like a powder-keg, and you're the match. If you tell me to junk it ''one moretime''-"
-->'''Sally:'''"JUNKtime''-
-->'''Sally:''' JUNK IT NOW! Y'gotthat?"
that?
-->'''Roy:''' [''crushes the life out of a tension ball'']''"...''...that little sucker just saved your life!"''life!''
-->'''Roy:''' Okay right now, I'm kinda like a powder-keg, and you're the match. If you tell me to junk it ''one more
-->'''Sally:'''"JUNK
-->'''Sally:''' JUNK IT NOW! Y'got
-->'''Roy:''' [''crushes the life out of a tension ball'']
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* '''*FWOOSH*''' "Excuse me!"
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* '''*FWOOSH*''' A burning trash can behind the Spleen suffers a small and rather mysterious explosion.
--> '''The Spleen:''' "Excuse me!"
--> '''The Spleen:''' "Excuse me!"
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'''Blue Rajah''': Two hands there, son. ''(Invisible Boy covers himself)''
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'''Blue Rajah''': Two hands there, son. ''(Invisible Boy covers himself)''himself)''\\
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-->''Bowler'': Maybe, you wanna put some shorts on? If you feel like fighting any more crime today?
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'''Everyone Else''': YES.\\
'''Mr. Furious''': ...wow.\\
'''Blue Rajah''': Two hands there, son. ''(Invisible Boy covers himself)''
'''Bowler''': Maybe, you wanna put some shorts
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* When Mr. Furious tries to bail out during the PowerWalk.
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* When Mr. Furious tries to bail out turn around and leave during the PowerWalk.
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* When sneaking into Casanova Frankenstein's place, the group trigger something out in the yard that starts making [[HellIsThatNoise an ominous noise.]] While they're freaking out over what kind of death trap it could be...the sprinklers go off.
* The aftermath of Invisible Boy finally getting to use his powers. [[spoiler: All his clothes fall off.]]
* The aftermath of Invisible Boy finally getting to use his powers. [[spoiler: All his clothes fall off.]]
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* When sneaking into Casanova Frankenstein's place, the group trigger something out in the yard that starts making [[HellIsThatNoise an ominous noise.]] While they're freaking out arguing over what kind of death trap it could be...the sprinklers go off.
* The aftermath of Invisible Boy finally getting to use his powers.[[spoiler: All his His clothes fall off.]]don't turn invisible, so he needed to strip off. Then, naked Invisible Boy turns visible as soon as his team-mates look at him again. Apparently, he's pretty impressive.
-->''Bowler'': Maybe, you wanna put some shorts on? If you feel like fighting any more crime today?
* The aftermath of Invisible Boy finally getting to use his powers.
-->''Bowler'': Maybe, you wanna put some shorts on? If you feel like fighting any more crime today?
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-->'''Sally:''' AHAHAHAHA! Jus' junk it, y'miserable cuss!
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-->'''Sally:''' AHAHAHAHA! Jus' junk it, [[HypocriticalHumor y'miserable cuss!cuss!]]
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* When asked by a reporter what his superpower is, he says in a 'super amount of pain.'
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* When asked by a reporter what his superpower is, he is after the FinalBattle, Mr.Furious says he's in a 'super "super amount of pain.'"
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** "We are number one. Everyone is number two, or lower."
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** "We are number one. Everyone is All others are [[ToiletHumor number two, two]], or lower."
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* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon starts spouting blame toward other people in the vicinity.
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* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon starts spouting blame toward other people in the vicinity.vicinity.
** When fired at a group of stereotypical gangstas, ''they start battle-rapping''.
** When fired at a group of stereotypical gangstas, ''they start battle-rapping''.
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** "You must run like the wolf pack, not the six pack!"
** "We are number one. Everyone is number two, or lower."
** "We are number one. Everyone is number two, or lower."
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* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon start spouting blames to other people in the vicinity.
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* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon start starts spouting blames to blame toward other people in the vicinity.
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** Captain Amazing has sewn-on patches of various brand name logos of his corporate sponsors on his suit.
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** Captain Amazing has sewn-on patches of various brand name logos of his corporate sponsors on his suit.
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** "PMS Avenger. I only work 4 days out of the month. ''You got a problem with that?!''"
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** "PMS Avenger. I only work 4 days out of the a month. ''You got a problem with that?!''"
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-->'''Vic''': Casanova Frankenstein [[NiceJobBreakingItHero is locked in a nut house]]...
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-->'''Vic''': Casanova Frankenstein [[NiceJobBreakingItHero is locked up in a nut house]]...
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-->'''The Spleen:''' Equilateral or isosceles?
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-->'''The Spleen:''' Equilateral or isosceles?isosceles?
* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon start spouting blames to other people in the vicinity.
* The Blame-Thrower is exactly what it sounds like. Anyone fired upon start spouting blames to other people in the vicinity.
