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** Also, while there, she gets a Comic book to read in her spare time: A CaptainAmerica comic book. Who would have thought that such a thing would exist in a DC crossover.
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** Also, while there, she gets a Comic book to read in her spare time: A CaptainAmerica ComicBook/CaptainAmerica comic book. Who would have thought that such a thing would exist in a DC crossover.
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* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool's chapter of ''Mare of Steel'', turns Brainiac into a CardCarryingVillain whose [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment evil plan of evil]] is to contaminate the drinking water with extra fat. Supermare stops him because he is evil and evil always loses, and then drinks all the contaminated water with her super-drinking skills and super-metabolism. The short ends with Supermare flying off to stop Silversmith who just stole forty cakes. AndThatsTerrible.
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool's chapter of ''Mare of Steel'', turns Brainiac into a CardCarryingVillain whose [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment evil plan of evil]] is to contaminate the drinking water with extra fat. Supermare stops him because he is evil and evil always loses, and then drinks all the contaminated water with her super-drinking skills and super-metabolism. The short ends with Supermare flying off to stop Silversmith who just stole forty cakes. AndThatsTerrible.
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
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* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': 2: [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool'schapter of ''Mare of Steel'', chapter, turns Brainiac into a CardCarryingVillain whose [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment evil plan of evil]] is to contaminate the drinking water with extra fat. Supermare stops him because he is evil and evil always loses, and then drinks all the contaminated water with her super-drinking skills and super-metabolism. The short ends with Supermare flying off to stop Silversmith who just stole forty cakes. AndThatsTerrible.
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.AndThatsTerrible.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool's
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
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* Diana's first interaction with the mortal realm involves constantly being hounded by civilians, asking her things like "who does your mane", "are those real" and "what's your sign".
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
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[[folder: ''The Princess of Themyscira'']]
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
* Diana's first interaction with the mortal realm involves constantly being hounded by civilians, asking her things like "who does your mane", "are those real" and "what's your sign".
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
[[folder: ''The Princess of Themyscira'']]
* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
* Diana's first interaction with the mortal realm involves constantly being hounded by civilians, asking her things like "who does your mane", "are those real" and "what's your sign".
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
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-->'''Nabu''': When I find somepony that fits that description, I will be more than happy to listen to them.
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-->'''Nabu''': When I find somepony that fits that description, I will be more than happy to listen to them.them.
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[[folder: ''In Brightest Day, In Blackest Night'']]
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
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[[folder: ''In Brightest Day, In Blackest Night'']]
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
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** Rainbow Dash being weirded out by Twilight's connection to the Helm of Nabu, especially when Twilight refers to it as a person.
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** Rainbow Dash being weirded out by Twilight's connection to the Helm of Nabu, especially when Twilight refers to it as a person.person.
* This exchange when Twilight/Nabu confronts Ares:
-->'''Ares''': I am not some mortal to be intimidated, Nabu. I am a god, and you will show respect to those that are your superior.
-->'''Nabu''': When I find somepony that fits that description, I will be more than happy to listen to them.
* This exchange when Twilight/Nabu confronts Ares:
-->'''Ares''': I am not some mortal to be intimidated, Nabu. I am a god, and you will show respect to those that are your superior.
-->'''Nabu''': When I find somepony that fits that description, I will be more than happy to listen to them.
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* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
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* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.Cadence.
* In the side story where Rainbow Dash gets [[GenderBender turned into a colt]] by Red Kryptonite, Thunderlane has to try ''very'' hard not to [[StupidSexyFlanders get turned on by her/him]].
** Rainbow Dash casually commenting that Silversmith apparently makes weekly attempts to kill her, and Thunderlane's confusion at it.
** Rainbow Dash being weirded out by Twilight's connection to the Helm of Nabu, especially when Twilight refers to it as a person.
* In the side story where Rainbow Dash gets [[GenderBender turned into a colt]] by Red Kryptonite, Thunderlane has to try ''very'' hard not to [[StupidSexyFlanders get turned on by her/him]].
** Rainbow Dash casually commenting that Silversmith apparently makes weekly attempts to kill her, and Thunderlane's confusion at it.
** Rainbow Dash being weirded out by Twilight's connection to the Helm of Nabu, especially when Twilight refers to it as a person.
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* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
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* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.right.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
* Twilight's {{Adorkable}} reaction to meeting Diana, having been told all about her by Cadence.
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* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
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* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.action.
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
* Soarin' warns Diana about Ponyville's reputation for weirdness, but she ignores him. Then she meets Lyra, who goes on at length about how she intends to use a lightning storm to power a machine to communicate with other dimensions, in hopes of finding humans and proving their existence. Diana is so freaked out that she excuses herself and practically runs away, admitting to Soarin' that he was right.
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** Also, while there, she gets a Comic book to read in her spare time: A CaptainAmerica comic book. Who would have thought that such a thing would exist in a DC crossover.
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* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, the Lasso of Truth forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
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* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, Hippolyta and the Lasso of Truth is forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
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* Rainbow Dash's reaction to realizing that she actually managed to stop Brainiac and Silversmith's bomb by [[spoiler: ''[[CuttingTheKnot punching it]]'']].
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* Rainbow Dash's reaction to realizing that she actually managed to stop stopped Brainiac and Silversmith's bomb by [[spoiler: ''[[CuttingTheKnot punching it]]'']].
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-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
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-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?well?
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
* How does the ring first announce itself to Shining Armor? By slamming into the back of his head. It later realizes this wasn't the best course of action.
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-->"That... that ''worked''?"
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-->"That... that ''worked''?"''worked''?"
* Diana's first interaction with the mortal realm involves constantly being hounded by civilians, asking her things like "who does your mane", "are those real" and "what's your sign".
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
* Diana's first interaction with the mortal realm involves constantly being hounded by civilians, asking her things like "who does your mane", "are those real" and "what's your sign".
-->'''Diana''': I don't even know what that last one means! Are you all obsessed with signs as well?
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* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.
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* Soarin's reaction to seeing Diana fly for the first time.time.
* Rainbow Dash's reaction to realizing that she actually managed to stop Brainiac and Silversmith's bomb by [[spoiler: ''[[CuttingTheKnot punching it]]'']].
-->"That... that ''worked''?"
* Rainbow Dash's reaction to realizing that she actually managed to stop Brainiac and Silversmith's bomb by [[spoiler: ''[[CuttingTheKnot punching it]]'']].
-->"That... that ''worked''?"
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* When Rainbow Dash's powers first develop, she accidentally shatters one of Applejack's trees. When she's trying to explain this to a [[CassandraTruth skeptical]] Applejack, we get this exchange:
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
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* When Rainbow Dash's powers first develop, she accidentally shatters one of Applejack's trees. When she's trying to explain this to a [[CassandraTruth skeptical]] Applejack, we get this exchange:
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
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-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
* The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]does?]]
*The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
*The GilliganCut in the beginning of Part 2 of ''Mare of Steel'': [[GeneralRipper Steel Wing]] is ranting about how Supermare is away in her secret base plotting Celestia's downfall... cue Rainbow Dash waking up from a nap.
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* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, the Lasso of Truth forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
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* Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, the Lasso of Truth forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.Diana.
* When Rainbow Dash's powers first develop, she accidentally shatters one of Applejack's trees. When she's trying to explain this to a [[CassandraTruth skeptical]] Applejack, we get this exchange:
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
* When Rainbow Dash's powers first develop, she accidentally shatters one of Applejack's trees. When she's trying to explain this to a [[CassandraTruth skeptical]] Applejack, we get this exchange:
-->'''Applejack''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah, 'n I hear Twilight summons up demons from Tartarus to do her laundry.]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint She does?]]
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*While in Seaddle, Rainbow Dash is still getting used to her new superpowers. While trying out her X-Ray vision, she accidentally activates her EyeBeams and ends up blowing up a pot of food the owner of the Bed and Breakfast she is staying at had left out for her.
*''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool's chapter of ''Mare of Steel'', turns Brainiac into a CardCarryingVillain whose [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment evil plan of evil]] is to contaminate the drinking water with extra fat. Supermare stops him because he is evil and evil always loses, and then drinks all the contaminated water with her super-drinking skills and super-metabolism. The short ends with Supermare flying off to stop Silversmith who just stole forty cakes. AndThatsTerrible.
*Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, the Lasso of Truth forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
*''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]]'', a potential April Fool's chapter of ''Mare of Steel'', turns Brainiac into a CardCarryingVillain whose [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment evil plan of evil]] is to contaminate the drinking water with extra fat. Supermare stops him because he is evil and evil always loses, and then drinks all the contaminated water with her super-drinking skills and super-metabolism. The short ends with Supermare flying off to stop Silversmith who just stole forty cakes. AndThatsTerrible.
*Soarin' is being interrogated by Hippolyta, the Lasso of Truth forcing him to tell her everything. When she makes a comment about what else might be going through his mind, he responds with "Dear Celestia, your daughter's got cute flanks". Cue blush from every mare present, especially Diana.
