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* *Mute's absolute hypocrisy, where she acts baffled and disgusted at the lesbian relationship, but is visibly leaning in and grinning in anticipation at the log with [[YaoiFangril the gay lovers]] is hilarious.
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* *Mute's absolute hypocrisy, where she acts baffled and disgusted at the lesbian relationship, but is visibly leaning in and grinning in anticipation at the log with [[YaoiFangril [[YaoiFangirl the gay lovers]] is hilarious.
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* *Mute's absolute hypocrisy, where she acts baffled and disgusted at the lesbian relationship, but is visibly leaning in and grinning in anticipation at the log with [[YaoiFangril the gay lovers]] is hilarious.
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* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses to *Mute]] in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in that this girl is serious... she [[FreakOut unleashes a scream lasting]] ''[[FreakOut several dialog boxes]]''.
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* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses confesses to *Mute]] *Mute in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in that this girl is serious... she [[FreakOut unleashes a scream lasting]] ''[[FreakOut several dialog boxes]]''.
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* Borderline Troper Tales, but Chocolate Cake-flavored Vodka ''counts'' as chocolate cake. [[https://imgur.com/BB5CRqV And so he enjoyed Russian chocolate cake!]]
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* Borderline Troper Tales, but Chocolate Cake-flavored Vodka ''counts'' as chocolate cake. [[https://imgur.com/BB5CRqV And so he enjoyed Russian chocolate cake!]]
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* In the harem route, during the "The Death of *Mute" log, Heo Seo-yeong shouts at one of the maids to tell [[spoiler:where President and Chief Councilor Ryu is so they can arrest him.]] The AIs' commentary at this part?
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* In the harem route, during the "The Death of *Mute" log, Heo Seo-yeong shouts at one of the maids to tell [[spoiler:where where President and Chief Councilor Ryu is so they can arrest him.]] him. The AIs' commentary at this part?
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* *Mute being DrivenToSuicide? Not funny. It being hinted by an achievement reading "LOL SPOILERS *MUTE DIES"? [[CrossesTheLineTwice Funny]].
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* The ImageSong [[http://isaacschankler.bandcamp.com/track/its-not-ero-feat-senah-kim It's Not Ero!]], which starts by gleefully telling the listener that the game is "[[TakeThat no]] [[{{Eroge}} ero story]]" and "won't show you smutty [=CGs=]". Especially hilarious as [[VisualNovel/LadykillerInABind the next game by Love]] is an ero story that shows you smutty CGs.
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* The ImageSong [[http://isaacschankler.bandcamp.com/track/its-not-ero-feat-senah-kim It's Not Ero!]], which starts by gleefully telling the listener that the game is "[[TakeThat no]] [[{{Eroge}} ero story]]" and "won't show you smutty [=CGs=]". Especially hilarious as [[VisualNovel/LadykillerInABind the next game by Love]] is an ero story that shows you smutty CGs.[=CGs=].
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* The ImageSong [[http://isaacschankler.bandcamp.com/track/its-not-ero-feat-senah-kim It's Not Ero!]], which starts by gleefully telling the listener that the game is "[[TakeThat no]] [[{{Eroge}} ero story]]" and "won't show you smutty [=CGs=]".
** Especially hilarious as the next game by Love, by her own admission, [[https://twitter.com/christinelove/status/566719157282930688 is going to be an ero story that will show you smutty CGs]].
** Especially hilarious as the next game by Love, by her own admission, [[https://twitter.com/christinelove/status/566719157282930688 is going to be an ero story that will show you smutty CGs]].
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* The ImageSong [[http://isaacschankler.bandcamp.com/track/its-not-ero-feat-senah-kim It's Not Ero!]], which starts by gleefully telling the listener that the game is "[[TakeThat no]] [[{{Eroge}} ero story]]" and "won't show you smutty [=CGs=]".
**[=CGs=]". Especially hilarious as [[VisualNovel/LadykillerInABind the next game by Love, by her own admission, [[https://twitter.com/christinelove/status/566719157282930688 Love]] is going to be an ero story that will show shows you smutty CGs]].CGs.
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'''*Mute''': NO. NO NO NO NO NO NO, DON'T TELL ME ABOUT THIS. I CANNOT HEAR WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY, OKAY?
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'''*Mute''': NO. [[BigNo NO.]] [[RapidFireNo NO NO NO NO NO NO, NO,]] DON'T TELL ME ABOUT THIS. I CANNOT HEAR WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY, OKAY?
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* *Mute ''cannot believe'' that Eun-a had first met her Emperor looking for a OneNightStand.
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* *Mute ''cannot believe'' that Eun-a had first met her Emperor looking for a OneNightStand.one-night stand.
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' Spoiler warning: [[VideoGame/AnalogueAHateStory the future sucked!]]
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' Spoiler warning: [[VideoGame/AnalogueAHateStory [[VisualNovel/AnalogueAHateStory the future sucked!]]
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* [[OldSaveBonus Load the data from]] VisualNovel/AnalogueAHateStory's Harem Ending, which requires the player to "cheat the system" to get.
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* [[OldSaveBonus Load the data from]] VisualNovel/AnalogueAHateStory's ''VisualNovel/AnalogueAHateStory'''s Harem Ending, which requires the player to "cheat the system" to get.get (or maybe actually think like a space detective, as described [[Fridge/AnalogueAHateStory here]]).
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* Heo's security report that spends way too much time fangirling about Mute's updated look, which gets an angry, embarrassed, all-caps rebuke from *Mute that threatens to fire her and replace her position with a potted plant.
** In the Harem Route Mute Version 2 will also ask Hyun-ae if she could be replaced with a potted plant while the pair is reading this log.
** In the Harem Route Mute Version 2 will also ask Hyun-ae if she could be replaced with a potted plant while the pair is reading this log.
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* Heo's security report that spends way too much time fangirling about Mute's Old *Mute's updated look, which gets an angry, embarrassed, all-caps rebuke from *Mute that threatens to fire her and replace her position with a potted plant.
** In the HaremRoute Mute Route, *Mute Version 2 will also ask Hyun-ae *Hyun-ae if she could be replaced with a potted plant while the pair is reading this log.
** In the Harem
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'''Councillor *Mute (Security)''': I get what the benefit would be. Um, it just doesn't offset the cost of, you know, offices on fire.
** In general, every time *Mute talks in the council meetings.
* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses to *Mute]] in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in that the girl is serious... she [[FreakOut unleashes a scream lasting several dialog boxes]].
** In general, every time *Mute talks in the council meetings.
* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses to *Mute]] in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in that the girl is serious... she [[FreakOut unleashes a scream lasting several dialog boxes]].
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'''Councillor *Mute (Security)''': I get what the benefit would be. Um, [[RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic Um,]] it just doesn't offset the cost of, [[RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic you know, know,]] offices on fire.
** In general, every time *Mutetalks opens her mouth in the council meetings.
* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses to *Mute]] in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in thatthe this girl is serious... she [[FreakOut unleashes a scream lasting lasting]] ''[[FreakOut several dialog boxes]].boxes]]''.
** In general, every time *Mute
* When *Hyun-ae [[spoiler:confesses to *Mute]] in the Harem Route, *Mute at first doesn't take *Hyun-ae seriously. But once it finally sinks in that
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* When *Mute interrogates Oh Eun-a's maid on her behavior, the maid comments she's been getting increasingly unhinged:
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* When Old *Mute interrogates interrogated Oh Eun-a's maid on her behavior, the maid comments she's commented that Eun-a has been getting increasingly unhinged:
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' Spoiler warning: the future sucked!
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' Spoiler warning: [[VideoGame/AnalogueAHateStory the future sucked!sucked!]]
* *Mute ''cannot believe'' that Eun-a had first met her Emperor looking for a OneNightStand.
-->'''*Mute''': [[BigWhat WH]][[FlatWhat AT.]] At first, she just wanted the great Emperor Ryu... for his ''cock?!''\\
'''*Hyun-ae''': ...well, if he's anything like his descendant, he's probably--\\
'''*Mute''': NO. NO NO NO NO NO NO, DON'T TELL ME ABOUT THIS. I CANNOT HEAR WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY, OKAY?
-->'''*Mute''': [[BigWhat WH]][[FlatWhat AT.]] At first, she just wanted the great Emperor Ryu... for his ''cock?!''\\
'''*Hyun-ae''': ...well, if he's anything like his descendant, he's probably--\\
'''*Mute''': NO. NO NO NO NO NO NO, DON'T TELL ME ABOUT THIS. I CANNOT HEAR WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY, OKAY?
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* In the harem route, during the "The Death of *Mute" log, Heo Seo-yeong shouts at one of the maids to tell [[spoiler:where President and Chief Councilor Ryu is so they can arrest him.]] The AIs' commentary?
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* In the harem route, during the "The Death of *Mute" log, Heo Seo-yeong shouts at one of the maids to tell [[spoiler:where President and Chief Councilor Ryu is so they can arrest him.]] The AIs' commentary?commentary at this part?
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wasn't it also impossible]] for [[PlayerCharacter him]] to have found that log file they showed to you, in order to get us together, in the first place?\\
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'''*Hyun-ae:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wasn't it also impossible]] for [[PlayerCharacter him]] them]] to have found that log file they showed to you, in order to get us together, in the first place?\\
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* This exchange in the Harem story:
Mute: "But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn't she?"
Hyun-ae: "That isn't..."
Mute: " ...what was that?!"
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "It had better have been nothing!"
Mute: "But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn't she?"
Hyun-ae: "That isn't..."
Mute: " ...what was that?!"
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "It had better have been nothing!"
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* This exchange in the Harem story:
Mute: "ButRoute:
-->'''Mute:''' But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn'tshe?"
Hyun-ae: "Thatshe?\\
'''Hyun-ae:''' That isn't..."
Mute: " ...\\
'''Mute:''' ...what wasthat?!"
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "Itthat?!\\
'''Hyun-ae:''' Nothing!\\
'''Mute:''' It had better have beennothing!"nothing!
Mute: "But
-->'''Mute:''' But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn't
Hyun-ae: "That
'''Hyun-ae:''' That isn't...
Mute: " ...
'''Mute:''' ...what was
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "It
'''Hyun-ae:''' Nothing!\\
'''Mute:''' It had better have been
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* This exchange in the Harem story:
Mute: "But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn't she?"
Hyun-ae: "That isn't..."
Mute: " ...what was that?!"
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "It had better have been nothing!"
Mute: "But Old *Mute started from the same blank slate that I did! The same core directives, the same values! But... like, even still, she's nothing like me. Like, she's... kind of a bitch, isn't she?"
Hyun-ae: "That isn't..."
Mute: " ...what was that?!"
Hyun-ae: "Nothing!"
Mute: "It had better have been nothing!"